第第頁(yè)人教版（2024）八年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)期末復(fù)習(xí)：書面表達(dá)預(yù)測(cè)練習(xí)題匯編書面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)失誤：1．審題不清2．拼寫錯(cuò)誤3．語(yǔ)言不地道4．詞性概念薄弱5．名詞單復(fù)數(shù)問(wèn)題出錯(cuò)6．缺少動(dòng)詞7．介詞冠詞等限定詞把握不住8．指人的各種代詞混淆不清9．句子不完整10．謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞不突出，主謂概念模糊11．時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的搭配錯(cuò)誤12．信息采納不全13．綜合性錯(cuò)誤14．面對(duì)半開(kāi)放或全開(kāi)放式試題，思路狹窄書面表達(dá)寫作步驟1、審題：（四審）審內(nèi)容（確定話題）、審時(shí)態(tài)（時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤-3分）、審人稱、審格式（確定文體）2、確定句子結(jié)構(gòu)。將句子結(jié)構(gòu)寫在要點(diǎn)后，3、將主語(yǔ)（代詞）寫在要點(diǎn)中恰當(dāng)?shù)奈恢?；避免遺漏主語(yǔ)。4、將需要用的動(dòng)詞或動(dòng)短寫在要點(diǎn)處，避免遺漏謂語(yǔ)。5、將時(shí)間或地點(diǎn)用箭頭按英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣標(biāo)注順序；避免中式英語(yǔ)。6、開(kāi)始草稿7、檢查修改8、工整抄寫（要點(diǎn)是否遺漏，字?jǐn)?shù)，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致、習(xí)慣用法、冠詞用法、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫等）書面表達(dá)預(yù)測(cè)練習(xí)題1．新的一年即將到來(lái)，每個(gè)人都有自己的新年規(guī)劃。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以MyNewYear’sResolutions為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，闡述你的新年計(jì)劃。寫作提示：1.健康方面：每天運(yùn)動(dòng)、吃健康食物；2.旅行方面：規(guī)劃想去的地方（或待在家）并說(shuō)明原因；3.學(xué)習(xí)方面：努力學(xué)英語(yǔ)、多讀書；4.生活方面：幫父母做家務(wù)、培養(yǎng)一個(gè)愛(ài)好（如畫畫、唱歌等）。寫作要求：1.內(nèi)容須包含所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫、內(nèi)容充實(shí)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等個(gè)人信息；3.詞數(shù)控制在80詞左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．雖然和他人相處不是一件容易的事情，但是只要與他人真心相待，我們就會(huì)得到收獲。根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，以“Waystogetalongwithothers”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要求：1.應(yīng)包含思維導(dǎo)圖提示中的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展；2.詞數(shù)100左右；3.標(biāo)題，首段已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。WaystoGetAlongwithOthersEveryonehasfriendsinlife.Andstudentshaveclassmatesatschool.Howcanyougetalongwiththem?Thefollowingwaysmayhelpyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．時(shí)間過(guò)得真快，寒假就要開(kāi)始了。為了使同學(xué)們度過(guò)一個(gè)文明健康且安全有意義的假期，你們班將舉行一次主題班會(huì)來(lái)討論這個(gè)話題，請(qǐng)你寫一篇發(fā)言稿，說(shuō)出自己的想法和建議。要點(diǎn)提示如下：1.遵守交通規(guī)則，不闖紅燈，戴頭盔；

2.吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品；3.體育活動(dòng)時(shí)，不要弄傷自己；

4.制訂學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃，認(rèn)真完成作業(yè)；參考詞匯：規(guī)則rule

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頭盔(helmet)

垃圾食品(junkfood)要求：(1)詞數(shù)：70詞左右；(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearfriends,Thewinterholidayiscoming!Howshallwespendthewinterholiday?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopewewillhaveameaningfulandsafeholiday.4．假如你是哈爾濱的中學(xué)生張新，收到了你在深圳中學(xué)就讀的筆友James的來(lái)信，他在信中詢問(wèn)了你的寒假計(jì)劃。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封回信，并邀請(qǐng)他在寒假期間來(lái)哈爾濱游玩。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.幫父母做家務(wù)活；2.參觀科技博物館；3.制定下學(xué)期計(jì)劃。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語(yǔ)言精練、表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。DearJames,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,ZhangXin5．假如你是Tom，是一位在四川交流學(xué)習(xí)的美國(guó)學(xué)生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你在美國(guó)的祖母寫一封信介紹你的一位好朋友David和你在一起生活的情況。要點(diǎn)：1．David和你一樣高，但比你更外向、更風(fēng)趣；2．你們都喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，每周鍛煉三四次；3．都喜歡看動(dòng)作電影。但David還喜歡看新聞，他認(rèn)為從中可以弄清楚世界各地正在發(fā)生什么；4．上周六你們一起去參觀了成都科學(xué)博物館，并拍了許多照片；5．今晚，你們計(jì)劃去南山電影院看電影，因?yàn)槟抢镉凶钍孢m的座位和最好的服務(wù)要求：1．語(yǔ)言流暢，條理清晰，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2．卷面干凈整潔，80詞左右。DearGrandma,How’sitgoingwithyou?NowI’mstudyinginSichuan,China.Ihaveagoodfriend,David.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,Tom6．歌曲中：“友誼是一道光，如此美妙，照亮你我想要的未來(lái)……”。進(jìn)入初中以來(lái)，你也結(jié)交了不少的朋友。你們學(xué)校?？谶M(jìn)行關(guān)于同學(xué)之間友誼的征文比賽活動(dòng)。假如你是初二年級(jí)的學(xué)生LiHua，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中提供的信息，寫一篇短文介紹你和你的最好朋友Tom，并談?wù)勀銓?duì)友誼的看法。人物不同點(diǎn)相同點(diǎn)LiHua喜歡看新聞，在學(xué)校身高最高；1.喜歡跑步和爬山；2.學(xué)習(xí)努力：各門學(xué)科都取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)；3.喜歡閱讀，經(jīng)常周末一起去圖書館；4.打算長(zhǎng)大了想當(dāng)老師，希望幫助更多山里孩子實(shí)現(xiàn)他們的夢(mèng)想。Tom更加外向，有更多的朋友；你對(duì)友誼的看法：……注意：1.詞數(shù)：80~100詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.嚴(yán)禁使用與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名、班級(jí)等信息。MyBestFriendandIGoodmorning,everyone.MynameisLiHua.IamastudentinGrade8.IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmybestfriendTomandme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．新年快到了，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)制定一份新年計(jì)劃，勉勵(lì)自己在新的一年中得到更好的成長(zhǎng)。要點(diǎn)：1.花更多時(shí)間鍛煉，計(jì)劃每周鍛煉三至五次；2.吃更健康的食物，保持身體健康；3.空余時(shí)間參觀博物館，學(xué)習(xí)更多的知識(shí)；4.交更多的朋友，在學(xué)習(xí)上互相幫助；5.學(xué)習(xí)彈鋼琴，讓業(yè)余生活更加多彩。提示詞：業(yè)余生活：sparetimeactivities要求：1）詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2）所寫內(nèi)容必須包括要點(diǎn)中所提供的信息，并可作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。3）不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。MyNewYear’sResolutionsIwanttoimprovemyselfnextyear.IwillmakesomeNewYear’sresolutionstofulfillmydreams.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假如你是LiHua，你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社團(tuán)正組織“我和我的好朋友”征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格，描述你和你的好朋友，積極參加投稿活動(dòng)。注意：1.85詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得透露考生真實(shí)身份信息。基本信息LiHuaWangTao(男)外貌、性格更強(qiáng)壯，更安靜更高，更外向習(xí)慣、喜好喜歡看書，拉小提琴，喜歡吃巧克力喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，吃蔬菜，生活方式更健康新年愿望認(rèn)識(shí)新朋友自我提高，學(xué)習(xí)一門外語(yǔ)職業(yè)理想想當(dāng)醫(yī)生，學(xué)習(xí)醫(yī)學(xué)想當(dāng)老師，學(xué)習(xí)教育(學(xué))Hi,everyone.MynameisLiHua.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．在班會(huì)上介紹自己的好朋友Tom。1.生活方式：每周鍛煉兩次；吃健康食品2.愛(ài)好與特長(zhǎng)：愛(ài)看新聞節(jié)目；喜歡彈吉他，有音樂(lè)天賦3.與你比較：更擅長(zhǎng)于打籃球；學(xué)習(xí)更努力；都喜歡游泳4.夢(mèng)想：當(dāng)一名籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員；希望生活環(huán)境越來(lái)越好要求：80個(gè)單詞左右；包含已給信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；文章條理清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確；文中不能出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和所在學(xué)校。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假如Jim是你最好的朋友，請(qǐng)以“MyBestFriend”為題，從以下幾個(gè)方面向大家介紹他。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：外貌和性格在我們班個(gè)子最高，比我外向……學(xué)習(xí)努力學(xué)習(xí)以取得更好的成績(jī)生活習(xí)慣喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，每周鍛煉兩次；飲食健康……興趣愛(ài)好喜歡旅行等要求：1.必須包含所給信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.70詞左右，題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyBestFriend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．請(qǐng)以“MyLifeInTheFuture”為題，根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。提示：1.我的未來(lái)生活會(huì)是怎樣？會(huì)是多姿多彩和有意義的；2.假如你要成為一名醫(yī)生，相信會(huì)給病人們帶來(lái)健康和快樂(lè)；或者你要成為一名教師，相信會(huì)給學(xué)生們帶來(lái)豐富的知識(shí)；或者你要成為……3.在我閑暇時(shí)間會(huì)和家人在一起，我們將一起旅游、做運(yùn)動(dòng)……也會(huì)盡我可能多讀書去提升自己；4.我相信我的夢(mèng)想一定會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)因?yàn)椤螅?.短文須包含以上提示中的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)100詞左右，語(yǔ)意連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；MyLifeInTheFuture____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．夢(mèng)想是一盞燈，給我們指引方向；夢(mèng)想是一支筆，助我們描繪未來(lái)藍(lán)圖。Teens英文報(bào)刊開(kāi)辟了專欄“MyDreamLife”，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇關(guān)于你的夢(mèng)想生活的文章，向該欄目投稿。要求：1.需全面反映圖文信息，可做適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)80詞左右。MyDreamLife___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案1．范文：MyNewYear’sResolutionsThenewyeariscomingandIhavesomeresolutions.First,forhealth,Iwillexerciseeverydayandeatmorehealthyfood.Second,fortravel,Iplantostayathomeandreadaboutotherplaces,becauseit’ssafeandrelaxing.Third,forstudy,IwillworkharderonEnglishandreadmorebooks.Fourth,forlife,Iwillhelpmyparentswithhouseworkandlearntodraw.

IhopeIcansticktomyplansandmakethenewyearabetteryear.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要使用一般將來(lái)時(shí)；③提示：需圍繞健康、旅行、學(xué)習(xí)、生活四個(gè)方面制定計(jì)劃，可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，語(yǔ)言積極連貫，體現(xiàn)個(gè)人規(guī)劃。[寫作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)明新年將至并引出計(jì)劃；第二步，用序數(shù)詞分四個(gè)方面說(shuō)明具體計(jì)劃；第三步，在旅行計(jì)劃中說(shuō)明原因（安全、放松）；第四步，總結(jié)表達(dá)堅(jiān)持計(jì)劃、迎接更好一年的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①resolutions決心/計(jì)劃②healthyfood健康食物③workharderon更努力學(xué)習(xí)④sticktomyplans堅(jiān)持我的計(jì)劃[高分句型]①First,forhealth,Iwillexerciseeverydayandeatmorehealthyfood.(for引出方面，并列將來(lái)時(shí)謂語(yǔ))②Iplantostayathomeandreadaboutotherplaces,becauseit’ssafeandrelaxing.(plantodo結(jié)構(gòu)，because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)③IhopeIcansticktomyplansandmakethenewyearabetteryear.(hope后接賓語(yǔ)從句，并列謂語(yǔ))2．例文：WaystoGetAlongwithOthersEveryonehasfriendsinlife.Andstudentshaveclassmatesatschool.Howcanyougetalongwiththem?Thefollowingwaysmayhelpyou.Firstofall,weshouldrespectothers.Everybodyhastheirownwaytodothings,soweshouldunderstandandtalkwitheachother.Second,weshouldcareforeachother.Inthisway,wecanfeeleachother’swarmth.Third,weshouldbekindtoothersandoffernecessaryhelptothosewhoareinneed.Fourth,weshouldn’targueaboutsmallthings.What’smore,whenwemeetwithdifficulties,weshouldsolveproblemstogether.Inaword,weshouldtreatothersinanhonestway.Onlyinthesewayscanwegetalongwellwithothers.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已通過(guò)思維導(dǎo)圖給出，需涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)并適當(dāng)拓展，保證內(nèi)容完整且邏輯清晰。[寫作步驟]第一步：開(kāi)頭已給出，為下文介紹相處方法做鋪墊；第二步：結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖要點(diǎn)，分點(diǎn)闡述與他人相處的具體做法，可補(bǔ)充簡(jiǎn)單理由或例子；第三步：總結(jié)全文，強(qiáng)調(diào)真誠(chéng)相處的重要性，升華主題。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①respectothers尊重他人②inneed在困難中③getalongwellwith與……和睦相處[高分句型]①Third,weshouldbekindtoothersandoffernecessaryhelptothosewhoareinneed.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)②Onlyinthesewayscanwegetalongwellwithothers.(運(yùn)用了only的半倒裝句)3．例文Dearfriends,

Thewinterholidayiscoming!Howshallwespendthewinterholiday?Tohavearelaxingandsafeandhealthyholiday,weshouldfollowsomerules.First,obeytrafficrules:neverrunredlightsandalwayswearhelmets.Second,eathealthyfoodinsteadofjunkfood.Third,duringsports,becarefultoavoidinjuries.Fourth,makeastudyplanandfinishhomeworkontime.Bydoingthese,wecanenjoyameaningfulholiday.

Ihopewewillhaveameaningfulandsafeholiday.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為發(fā)言稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已明確給出，全文圍繞提示要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)，簡(jiǎn)潔明了地補(bǔ)充了具體行為細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，先引出話題，點(diǎn)明寒假即將到來(lái)；第二步，再按照提示的四個(gè)要點(diǎn)，依次闡述假期應(yīng)遵守的規(guī)則；第三步，最后總結(jié)遵循這些規(guī)則的意義，呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①winterholiday寒假②followtherules遵守規(guī)則[高分句型]①Tohavearelaxingandsafeandhealthyholiday,weshouldfollowsomerules.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）②First,obeytrafficrules:neverrunredlightsandalwayswearhelmets.Second,eathealthyfoodinsteadofjunkfood.Third,duringsports,becarefultoavoidinjuries.Fourth,makeastudyplanandfinishhomeworkontime.（用序數(shù)詞羅列4條并列的建議）4．例文DearJames,Thankyouforyourletter.I’mhappytosharemywintervacationplans.First,Iwillhelpmyparentswithhousework,suchascleaningandcooking.Second,IplantovisittheScienceandTechnologyMuseumtoexplorenewinventions.Third,I’llmakeastudyplanforthenewsemestertoimprovemygrades.Moreover,I’vedecidedtostartpaintingasanewhobby,allowingmetorelaxandexpressmyselfcreatively.Also,IinviteyoutocometoHarbin!Wecanenjoytheicesculpturesandsnowactivitieshere.Itwillbefun.Pleasewritebacksoon.Yours,ZhangXin【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹寒假計(jì)劃。第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，幫父母做家務(wù)活；參觀科技博物館；制定下學(xué)期計(jì)劃。第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①makeastudyplan制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃②decidetodosth決定做某事③invitesbtodosth邀請(qǐng)某人做某事[高分句型]①Third,I’llmakeastudyplanforthenewsemestertoimprovemygrades.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）②Wecanenjoytheicesculpturesandsnowactivitieshere.（and并列連詞）5．例文DearGrandma,How’sitgoingwithyou?NowI’mstudyinginSichuan,China.Ihaveagoodfriend,David.Heisastallasme,butmoreoutgoingandfunnier.Webothlikesportsandexercisethreeorfourtimesaweek.Wealsoenjoywatchingactionmovies.However,Davidalsolikeswatchingnewsbecausehethinksithelpshimknowwhat’shappeningaroundtheworld.LastSaturday,wevisitedtheChengduScienceMuseumandtookmanyphotos.Tonight,weplantogotoNanshanCinematowatchamoviebecauseithasthemostcomfortableseatsandthebestservice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,Tom【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開(kāi)頭，介紹David的性格和愛(ài)好；第二步，闡述兩人的共同愛(ài)好：喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)、愛(ài)看動(dòng)作電影，同時(shí)補(bǔ)充David喜歡看新聞的特點(diǎn)及原因；第三步，敘述過(guò)去的活動(dòng)和未來(lái)的計(jì)劃；第四步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①as...as和……一樣②aroundtheworld全世界③plantodosth.計(jì)劃做某事[高分句型]①However,Davidalsolikeswatchingnewsbecausehethinksithelpshimknowwhat’shappeningaroundtheworld.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）6．例文MyBestFriendandIGoodmorning,everyone.MynameisLiHua.IamastudentinGrade8.IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmybestfriendTomandme.IenjoywatchingnewsandI’mthetallestinschool,whileTomismoreoutgoingandhasmorefriends.Butwealsohavesomesimilarities.Bothofusloverunningandclimbingmountains.Westudyhardandachieveexcellentgradesinallsubjects.Also,welikereadingandoftengotothelibraryonweekends.Interestingly,wesharethesamedream:tobecometeachersinthefuturetohelpchildreninmountainsachievetheirdreams.Ibelievefriendshipislikelight.Itnotonlybrightensourlivesbutalsoguidesustowardabetterfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：需覆蓋表格中所有對(duì)比點(diǎn)（差異點(diǎn)+共同點(diǎn)），補(bǔ)充友誼看法，詞數(shù)80-100。[寫作步驟]第一步，用2句話對(duì)比差異；第二步，用4句話列舉共同點(diǎn)（運(yùn)動(dòng)、學(xué)習(xí)、閱讀、理想），用also,interestingly自然銜接；第三步，用比喻句表達(dá)友誼觀點(diǎn)，并總結(jié)友誼的意義。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①achieveexcellentgrades取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)②sharethesamedream擁有共同夢(mèng)想③brightensourlives照亮生活[高分句型]①Interestingly,wesharethesamedream:tobecometeachersinthefuturetohelpchildreninmountainsachievetheirdreams.(運(yùn)用不定式短語(yǔ)作目的狀語(yǔ)說(shuō)明理想的意義)②Itnotonlybrightensourlivesbutalsoguidesustowardabetterfuture.(運(yùn)用notonly...butalso...并列結(jié)構(gòu)強(qiáng)調(diào)友誼雙重作用)7．例文：MyNewYear’sResolutionsIwanttoimprovemyselfnextyear.IwillmakesomeNewYear’sresolutionstofulfillmydreams.First,Iwillspendmoretimeexercising,planningtodoitthreetofivetimesweekly.Second,Iwilleathealthierfoodtokeepmybodystrong.Third,inmysparetime,Iwillvisitmuseumstogainknowledge.Fourth,Iwanttomakemorefriendssowecanhelpeachotherwithstudies.Finally,Iwilllearntoplaythepianotomakemysparetimeactivitiesmorecolorful.Ibelievetheseresolutionswillhelpmegrowbetter.【詳解】【總體分析】①題材：材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來(lái)時(shí)。③提示：覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)(鍛煉、健康飲食、參觀博物館、交友、學(xué)鋼琴)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮(如添加理由和結(jié)尾決心)?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步：用開(kāi)頭句引出總體意圖，簡(jiǎn)要過(guò)渡到計(jì)劃列表。第二步：用連接詞(如First,Second等)逐一列出5個(gè)計(jì)劃，覆蓋題干要點(diǎn)并添加簡(jiǎn)單理由。第三步：結(jié)尾總結(jié)好處，表達(dá)積極決心?！玖咙c(diǎn)詞匯】①exercising鍛煉②healthier更健康的③knowledge知識(shí)【高分句型】①Fourth,Iwanttomakemorefriendssowecanhelpeachotherwithstudies.(so引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句)②Ibelievetheseresolutionswillhelpmegrowbetter.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)8．例文Hi,everyone.MynameisLiHua.WangTaoismyfriend.I’mstrongerandquieterwhileheistallerandmoreoutgoingandhealthier—Iofteneatchocolate.Ilikereadingandplayingtheviolin.Helikessportsandeatingvegetables.Mynewyear’sresolutionistomakenewfriendsandhehopestolearnaforeignlanguageandimprovehimself.Iwanttobeadoctorandhewantstobeateacher.SoIfocusonmedicineandheislearningsubjectsabouteducation.Wewishtohaveabrighterfuture.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，不得遺漏，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步：開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，介紹自己與朋友王濤；第二步：詳細(xì)描述兩人在外貌、性格、習(xí)慣、喜好、新年愿望及職業(yè)理想之間的差別；第三步：書寫結(jié)尾，表達(dá)祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①moreoutgoing更外向②makenewfriends交新朋友③improvehimself自我提升④abrighterfuture更光明的未來(lái)[高分句型]①Iwanttobeadoctorandhewantstobeateacher.(并列句)9．例文MybestfriendTomisahealthyandtalentedperson.Heexercisestwiceaweekandenjoyshealthyfoods.Inhisfreetime,helikeswatchingthenewsandplayingtheguitar,inwhichheshowsgreattalent.Comparedwithme,heisbetteratbasketballandstudiesharder,thoughwebothsharethesamehobby—swimming.Tomdreamsofbecomingabasketballplayeroneday.Healsohopesourlivingenvironmentwillkeepgettingbetter.IadmireTomandfeelluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.【詳解】[總體分析]①