1、2019-11-27 1 議論文題型分類大全 搞定這一步，穩(wěn)穩(wěn)上 6.5分！ 新浪微博：杜仕明-學(xué)為貴 2019-11-27 2019-11-27 Two Questions=Report 1. 原因分析原因分析+ 解決方案解決方案 2. 原因分析原因分析+ 有何影響有何影響 3. 原因分析原因分析+ 隨機(jī)隨機(jī)(鬼才知道會(huì)問什么鬼才知道會(huì)問什么 ) 4. 造成的問題造成的問題+ 解決方案解決方案-特別注意特別注意 你有可能遇到其中任何一種組合 2019-11-27 2019-11-27 2 Two Questions=Report 注意區(qū)分這兩個(gè)問題，經(jīng)常導(dǎo)致注意區(qū)分這兩個(gè)問題，經(jīng)常導(dǎo)致TR低

2、分 What do you think are the causes? What problems does it cause? 2019-11-27 2019-11-27 分析原因的原則 1. 不能只局限在中國不能只局限在中國 ； 2. 客觀的出發(fā)點(diǎn)客觀的出發(fā)點(diǎn)(要有證據(jù)，別感慨要有證據(jù)，別感慨 )； 3. 如果有比較級如果有比較級，要通過年代對比找到原因，要通過年代對比找到原因 (至關(guān)重要至關(guān)重要)； 1. The first reason for the shortage of younger teachers is that a teaching job pays poorly. 2.

3、 The first reason why cycling is no longer popular is that people today have much more choices for transportation. 3. In addition, the increase in the amount of rubbish is also a result of people using more disposable products. 4. It is true that poor health of the general population is associated w

4、ith peoples bad eating habits. 2019-11-27 用來寫原因的topic sentences 2019-11-27 3 1. 直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出 (考察改寫能力考察改寫能力) + 承上啟下承上啟下(可以只預(yù)告可以只預(yù)告 第一個(gè)問題第一個(gè)問題/也可以兩個(gè)都預(yù)告也可以兩個(gè)都預(yù)告 ) 2. 第一個(gè)原因分析第一個(gè)原因分析 。(idea-support) 3. Another cause is that , 第二個(gè)原因分析第二個(gè)原因分析 。(idea-support) 4. (因?yàn)橐驗(yàn)楹車?yán)重很嚴(yán)重/因?yàn)橐驗(yàn)樽瞿呈潞苤匾瞿呈潞苤匾?

5、so measures should be taken to . 解決方案解決方案 1 + (so that)結(jié)果結(jié)果 解決方案解決方案2 + (In this way,) 結(jié)果結(jié)果 5. 總結(jié)重復(fù)原因總結(jié)重復(fù)原因/解決方案解決方案 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (原因+解決方案版本) 2019-11-27 范文-1 Task 2： Fewer and fewer people choose to ride bicycles when going outside. What do you think are the causes? What can be done to en

6、courage people to cycle? 2019-11-27 Owning a bicycle and using it frequently seems to be much less popular today. I believe that the growth in the size of cities and the advanced modern transport system are the main reasons for this. The government should take steps to change this situation. The fir

7、st reason why riding bicycles is no longer popular is that cities have been growing bigger. This means that the distance between home and destinations has become much farther. If people keep the habit of cycling, then they will find it really time-consuming and energy-consuming. When they finally ge

8、t to the school or office, they will probably feel exhausted and can hardly concentrate on their work or study. 范文-1 2019-11-27 4 2019-11-27 Another cause is that a greater variety of means of transport are available to daily commuters today. In the past, riding a bicycle was the main choice for man

9、y people to go to work or for fun. Today, however, people living in cities and towns can have a wider range of choices, including more bus lines, taxies and even the Uber service. Any of these is more efficient and comfortable than cycling and therefore this traditional way of transport has been los

10、ing popularity. It is undeniable that riding a bike is beneficial for both the individual and society, so measures should be taken to entice and encourage people to be more active in this choice. Firstly, the government could build special lanes for cyclists, so that they can ride safely and quickly

11、. In addition, monetary rewards should be provided to people who ride their bicycles more often. In this way, more people would have the incentive to use this old-fashioned way to commute. 范文-1 2019-11-27 In conclusion, the development of modern cities has led to a decreasing number of people travel

12、ing by bicycle. I believe that measures mentioned above could effectively reverse this situation. 范文-1 2019-11-27 范文-2分析 Task 2： A lot of young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating from high school. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to teach them this import

13、ant skill? 2019-11-27 5 2019-11-27 范文-2分析 這篇文章的兩個(gè)原因?qū)懗闪艘粋€(gè)段落，因?yàn)楦髯哉归_比較少。這篇文章的兩個(gè)原因?qū)懗闪艘粋€(gè)段落，因?yàn)楦髯哉归_比較少。 為了保持段落平衡，合成一段比分開寫更合理為了保持段落平衡，合成一段比分開寫更合理 Many young people are leaving school without a basic and vital understanding of how personal finances ought to be managed in the adult world. This lack of knowled

14、ge is due to a lack of life experience and limited education which can be solved in two simple ways. One main reason why so many young people are unable to manage their own finances upon finishing high school is that they have been living along with their parents for free. As a result, they have nev

15、er needed to earn a salary or save their money in order to pay bills. Another cause is that schools do not factor personal financial management into their curriculum. Schools focus instead on classic subjects, such as maths, geography, history and languages, which means important life skills are not

16、 being taught. Both teachers and parents are failing to prepare young people for the real world. 2019-11-27 范文-2分析 There are two options for solving young peoples inability to manage personal finances. Firstly, parents should spend time with their children teaching them how money is earned, budgeted

17、 and used for either savings or expenses. One simple step could be for parents to start by teaching young children how to manage their pocket money and, as their child grows up, expand into more serious household expenses. Secondly, schools should incorporate life skills into their curriculum for fi

18、nal year students. In this way, children will be able to learn in a supportive environment how their finances need to be budgeted and managed to avoid debt problems later in life. In conclusion, young people lack financial management skills due to the negligence of parents and schools, which can onl

19、y be solved if both take more responsibility for equipping school leavers with the right skills. 2019-11-27 范文-2分析 2019-11-27 6 1. 政府-至關(guān)重要(收稅/花錢/頒布法律)； . The government could impose higher taxes on so that . . What the government should do is to invest in./financially support./spend money doing . Th

20、e government ought to require .to . 2. 家長 3. 學(xué)校 4. 公司 5. authorities 2019-11-27 解決方案-切實(shí)可行 1. 直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出 (擴(kuò)充或者縮減原題 ) + 承上啟下(最好兩個(gè)問題都預(yù)告 ) 2. One of the reasons is that 第一個(gè)原因分析。 (idea-support) 3. In addition, 第二個(gè)原因分析。 (idea-support) 4. 過渡句-To my knowledge, there are 完全取決于你自己 (好/壞/雖然.但是.) 5. 總結(jié)(重復(fù)原因/

21、影響) 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (原因+有何影響版本) 2019-11-27 Task 2 An increasing number of people are changing careers during working life. What do you think are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development for society？ 2019-11-27 7 In the past, many people used to stay in the same job

22、for their lifetime. Today, however, job hopping has become the new normal, which, from my point of view, is due to a combination of reasons and seems to have significant negative effects on society. One main reason for more people changing careers is the increase in their job choices. With the devel

23、opment of economy and technology, there are a great number of new occupations which are believed to be more appealing. In China, for example, an increasing number of white-collars with repetitive daily routines have switched from working in the office to starting their own business on the internet.

24、2019-11-27 Another cause of career move is the continuously rising living cost in most countries around the world. As the price for almost everything has been soaring, there is enormous financial pressure imposed on adults who want to provide their families with high quality of life, which drives th

25、em to seek better paying jobs. One of the most effective ways to achieve their financial ambition is believed to hop from one company to another. Although it may be rewarding for the individual to change jobs, there will be several undesirable outcomes for society. Firstly, as more people consider s

26、witching their careers, there is likely to be a waste of money and time spent on the training of new employees, which as a result will negatively affect the profitability and productivity of companies. In addition, job hopping may also cause a burden to the government, because people between jobs ma

27、y be dependent on the financial assistance provided by public funds, which will lead to insufficient investment in more important services, such as education and health care. 2019-11-27 2019-11-27 試著自己寫個(gè)結(jié)尾段試著自己寫個(gè)結(jié)尾段 2019-11-27 8 1. 直接改寫原題，不需要背景引出 (擴(kuò)充或者縮減原題 ) + 承上啟下(我 認(rèn)為這會(huì)導(dǎo)致的問題，他們能夠被解決 ) 2. 第一個(gè)問題擴(kuò)展 (

28、idea-support) 3. In addition, 第二個(gè)問題擴(kuò)展。(idea-support) 4. 針對這兩個(gè)問題提出解決方案 5. 總結(jié)(問題 + 解決) 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (問題+解決方案版本) 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (問題+解決方案版本) Task2： A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this diffe

29、rence cause? How might these problems be reduced? There has been a significant rise in living standards of people in many countries, such as better education quality and smaller income disparity. However, it seems that such improvements are mostly enjoyed by urban dwellers rather than those living i

30、n the countryside, which, in my opinion, will result in many undesirable outcomes for both cities and rural areas. 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (問題+解決方案版本) 2019-11-27 9 As urban lives keep becoming increasingly appealing, a large number of people will be drawn to cities either in search of more employmen

31、t opportunities or seeking superior health care. This will definitely pose tremendous pressure on both locals and newcomers of big cities, such as rising living costs, frustrating traffic congestion, and intense competition for jobs. 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (問題+解決方案版本) As for rural areas, the proble

32、ms caused are also significant. To be specific, there will be a severe shortage of labour force working in the agricultural industry, with too many people migrating from villages to towns and cities. As a result, farming land would be left uncultivated and crop yields would significantly decline, po

33、ssibly followed by a rise in food prices nationwide. 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (問題+解決方案版本) I think, therefore, that measures should be taken to narrow the gap of life quality between urban and rural areas. Firstly, tax reduction and exemption could be a possible solution to the problem of labour drain

34、. In other words, both individuals and businesses will choose to stay if there is such a favorable (preferential) policy. Secondly, the government could also make people willing to stay where they were born and grew up by improving local living conditions, such as budgeting more money towards educat

35、ion and health services. In conclusion, the problems caused by the disparity between cities and villages are concerning people of both places. They can only be solved if the government takes more responsibility for closing the gap. 2019-11-27 report類型的核心段 (問題+解決方案版本) 2019-11-27 10 2019-11-27 Report

36、類型的第一段一般不需要背景句，題目中類型的第一段一般不需要背景句，題目中 的現(xiàn)象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接開始改寫的現(xiàn)象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接開始改寫 的工作就可以了。的工作就可以了。 2019-11-27 report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語 ) 1) In many countries schools have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the causes? What solutions do you suggest? Poor student behavior seems

37、 to be an increasingly widespread problem in many countries. I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. Parents and schools should be responsible for solving this problem. （提前總結(jié)型過渡 :預(yù)告了原因和解決） 2019-11-27 report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語 ) 2). Children and teenagers are committing more c

38、rimes than before. What do you think are the causes? How should they be punished? The number of crimes committed by children and teenagers has been increasing. I think that there could be several reasons why this is happening and that the younger criminals should be punished depending on what they h

39、ave done. （空話型過渡） 2019-11-27 11 2019-11-27 report類型的介紹段(從原文里找到新的主語 ) 3). Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? Formal educational qualifications are believed to be more important than life experiences and personality traits when a company is recruiting new staffs. This cr