1、Writing,By 魏麗娟,I cant make friends,I cant sleep!,How to become clever?,we need advice!,read & compare,What makes a composition good?,H: handwriting C: content L: language S: structure,HCLS 原則,Mr. Worried,Mr. Helpful,A person called Worried wrote a letter to you. Can you guess what worried him?,Dear

2、Mr.Helpful, Im a high school student and Im in trouble. I used to be crazy about English, but now I have some difficulty with English, especially with oral English . You know I want to take part in English talent competition in the future, maybe in my university, so I want to prepare it from now on.

3、 I wonder how I can speak like a native speaker. I do want to be one of the top ten and go to a world-famous university. But my oral English is not good enough. What should I do? Worried,請你仔細閱讀所給英文信,然后給Worried同學寫一封回信.要求包含以下內(nèi)容： 1.寫信目的 2.你的建議和理由(至少兩條) 3.你的期望 要求：可適當增加細節(jié)詞數(shù)100左右.,審題,建議信,一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時,Para.

4、1 (beginning),Para.3 (ending),Para.2 (body),structure of an advice letter,intention,advice,reasons,expectation,outline?,列提綱并遣詞造句,建議信經(jīng)典套用句型,閃亮篇首句 1.I know you have trouble in. after reading your letter. 2.Im writing to offer you some advice on/about 3. Im glad to give you some suggestions. 4.Its my p

5、leasure to offer you some advice on. 出彩篇中句 1.Firstly, why not.?By doing this, . 2.Besides/whats more/in addition, you should. That way,. 3.Last but not least, it would be a good idea to. 精彩篇尾句 1.I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful. I hope you will find these suggestions useful. .,writing t

6、ime (about 10min),連句成篇&修改潤色,make commentsusing HCSL,Reference model（范文賞析）,Dear Worried, I have received your letter and Im glad to give you some suggestions. First of all, dont be disappointed and just believe in yourself. In order to speak well, you must learn to read and listen much, which will co

7、ntribute to building your vocabulary and help to better your English speaking.,Besides, youd better wacth some wonderful American or Bristish TV shows, where you can enjoy many real English and pick up some very useful expressions. Last but not the least, its necessary to practise speaking as often as possible,for practice makes perfect. Follow your dream and youll find success is just around the corner! I hope you