1、大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)測(cè)試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),作文題滿分為15分。 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。 2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 5分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 8分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文章尚連貫，但語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。,大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)測(cè)試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),11分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 14分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 字?jǐn)?shù)不夠扣分。（各段已給出的主題句均不得計(jì)入） 段落不夠扣分。,0分白卷，作文與題目毫不相關(guān)，或只有

2、幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想。 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)檔次（如8分）相似，即定為（8分）；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或劣于該檔次，則可加一分（9分）或減一分（7分），但不得加減半分。字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分： 8189詞：扣1分；7180詞：扣2分；6170詞：扣3分；5160詞：扣 4分；50以下詞：扣5分。,經(jīng)原國(guó)家教委批準(zhǔn)，四、六級(jí)考試已從1997年6月份起采用“作文最低分”制計(jì)算成績(jī)，其中足見(jiàn)國(guó)家對(duì)提高大學(xué)英語(yǔ)寫作能力的重視程度。按規(guī)定，考生作文若為0分，無(wú)論其總分是否高于60分，均作不及格處理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，報(bào)導(dǎo)成績(jī)時(shí)，需從總分中減去6分，再加上實(shí)得作文分。也就

3、是說(shuō)，要從總分中減去實(shí)得作文分與6分之間的差額部分。,評(píng)分樣卷 (1),Women in the Modern World,Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in govener also. They lead other people comtral,

4、and make out plans. There are many women scientist also. They event new things to improve our life.,評(píng)分樣卷 (1),With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did ever

5、y how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They have the right of speaking of idea, discussion things with her husband, do what she wants to do.,評(píng)分樣卷 (1),In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. We also should re

6、alize, womens likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but the chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. Im sure, the liberation of women would be increased.,5分,基本切題，表達(dá)不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。,評(píng)分樣卷（2）,Women are playing an

7、increasing important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of keeping the house or looking after the children. Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams have won the worlds champion such as Chinese

8、Womens Volleyball Team.,評(píng)分樣卷（2）,With the changes in their social role, womans position in the family has been improved as well. Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places. Husbands and wife are equal now. They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.,評(píng)分樣卷（2）,In spite of

9、these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Also in some places, women are considered being “things” belong to men. They have little chance to find jobs. They dont get equal pay for equal job. This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themsel

10、ves.,11分,切題，思想表達(dá)清楚，連貫。有個(gè)別句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)誤及少量其他語(yǔ)言方面的錯(cuò)誤,評(píng)分樣卷（3）,Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before. For example, some women are not secretary in the office, instead , the

11、y become manager of a company.,評(píng)分樣卷（3）,With the changes in their social role, womans position in the family has been improved as well. In the world today, more and more women have their own jobs. They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband. With the economic situation i

12、mproved, their family position is improving.,評(píng)分樣卷（3）,In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do some works or do some shopping. They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a compa

13、ny.,8分,基本切題，思想表達(dá)尚清楚，基本連貫，有個(gè)別嚴(yán)重的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤及用詞不當(dāng)，但可以理解。,評(píng)分樣卷（4）,Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.

14、 Women are no longer looked down upon by society.,評(píng)分樣卷（4）,With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other. Also, you can h

15、ardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.,評(píng)分樣卷（4）,In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard

16、 women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meeting dominated by men. Thats really the problems we should solve immediately.,14分,切題，文章通順，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。句法有一定變化，用詞適當(dāng)。有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)，但不影響理解。,檢查語(yǔ)法,1. 動(dòng)詞 時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)是否正確 2. 名詞 單數(shù)、復(fù)數(shù)、可數(shù)、不可數(shù)，專有名詞大小寫 3. 主謂一致 分清主句和從句，使各自的主謂一致 4. 形容詞、副詞 用法是否正確

17、，比較級(jí)與最高級(jí)是否得當(dāng) 5. 介詞、連詞 搭配是否正確 6. 其他關(guān)聯(lián)詞 用法是否正確 7. 單詞拼寫 8. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),九句話模板,1. 引導(dǎo)句（套入標(biāo)題）,2. 主題句,3. 展開(kāi)句（簡(jiǎn)單描述）,4. 主題句（提出論點(diǎn)）,5.6.7.,論據(jù)1論據(jù)2論據(jù)3,8. 總結(jié)句（概括全文）,9. 結(jié)束句（重復(fù)主題,第一段,第二段,第三段,Class work,套用九句話模板,Stop Smoking,（1）吸煙的問(wèn)題越來(lái)越受到人們的關(guān)注 （2）吸煙的害處 （3）你的想法,Model,(1) There has never been an agreement as to the issue of sm

18、oking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to health.,Model,(4) The harm of smoking can be seen from the following. (5) First, it can cause cancer. (6) Second, it pollutes the environment. (7) Third,

19、 it causes great waste of money.,Model,(8) In short, smoking does great harm to health. (9) Effective measures should be taken to stop smoking.,Model ( developed one ),(1) There has never been an agreement as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question, and some even write to the government calling for policies to stop smoking. (3) They have realized that smoking does great har