1、,welcome,1,Writing By Zhang Hui,2,What makes a good essay?,. Discussion,3,感知典型范例,4,感知典型范例,詞匯層面1,adj. 聰明的、腦筋好的 clever wise smart bright intelligent,5,感知典型范例,詞匯層面2,adj. 令人驚奇的 surprising amazing astonishing,exactly used and advanced words 準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用詞匯并使用高級詞匯,6,(notuntil) He_come here _yesterday afternoon. 2.

2、 Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 3. It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here.,感知典型范例,句型層面1,advanced sentence patterns 使用高級句型,no grammatical mistakes 沒有語法錯誤,He came here yesterday afternoon.,他昨天下午來的。,didnt until,7,感知典型范例,段落層面,I think, for us children, we should often go

3、home and stay together with our parents though we are busy. Our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live happily. We can build a harmonious society only when all of us care for the aged.,As far as I am concerned, for us children, we should often go home and s

4、tay together with our parents however busy we are. Whats more, our society should organize all kinds of activities for the seniors to help them live a happy life. Only when all of us care for the aged can we build a harmonious society,proper link words 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 various sentence patterns 用較豐富的句式,8,感知

5、典型范例,篇章層面1,卷面不整潔; 涂改較多;語言錯誤多;層次不清; 得 8 分,9,感知典型范例,篇章層面2,字?jǐn)?shù)不夠或未能傳達(dá)讀者任何信息，不得分。,10,poor,篇章層面3,excellent,neat and clean 卷面整潔 well organized 結(jié)構(gòu)合理 the content is complet內(nèi)容要完整,11,Conclusion: What makes a good essay?,1. neat and clean 卷面整潔 2. complete content 內(nèi)容完整 3. well organized 結(jié)構(gòu)合理 4. exactly used and

6、advanced words 準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用詞匯并使用高級詞匯 5. proper linking words 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞 6. various sentence patterns 用較豐富的 句式,12,假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明： 李明：高個子，戴眼鏡 航班號：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30,.Pre-writing (2013全國卷),13,注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3.開頭語和介紹語已為你寫好。 Dear Peter, How

7、are you doing? _ _ _ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,14,.Pre-writing (team work),Task 1: Decide the person and tense,Task 2: Decide the structure,Task 3: Write down the key words and sentence patterns,15,Task 1: person(人稱) tense （時態(tài)）,The first person,The present and the future tense,Per

8、son:,Tense:,16,Dear Peter, How are you doing? _ _ _ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,Task 2: Decide the structure,17,假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫。同時詢問他 是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明： 李明：高個子，戴眼鏡 航班號：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30,Task 2:Decide the structure,告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，,帶去他想要的那幅中國畫。,同時詢

9、問他,是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明： 李明：高個子，戴眼鏡 航班號：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30,18,假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明： 李明：高個子，戴眼鏡 航班號：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30,Task 3: write down the key words,開會，,帶去,中國畫。,接機(jī)。,航班號,到達(dá),戴眼鏡,19,a. to have a meeting/ conference b. bring sb. sth. c. Chinese painting d.

10、 do me a favor e. pick him up f. flight number g. arrive at h. wear glasses ,Task 3: the key words,20,Task 3: Sentence patterns,Im writing to tell you that Id like you to Would you please ? I wonder if you can ? ,21,必要的連接詞 表示遞進(jìn)：besides, as well, in addition 表示比較：just like, in the same way, on the co

11、ntrary 表示因果：so that , since, in order to/that 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)： above all, without any doubt 表示總結(jié)：in a word, in short, in conclusion,22,.while-writing(15mins) Please write down the letter in 15 minutes. You can use the following structure.,23,Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that_ _, and_.

12、Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please_ _? Thank you in advance!_ is CA985, and_ 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is_. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua,24,. post-writing,Revise your compositions in pairs. Then, make evaluations for him or her.,25,26,Presentation,27,Dear Peter,

13、How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before. Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to theU.S.? Thank you in advance! His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive a t 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wea