1、英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題,勸服性議論文,勸說(shuō)性的書(shū)信寫(xiě)作文體分析 勸說(shuō)性的書(shū)信寫(xiě)作目的是向某個(gè)組織或個(gè)人提出勸說(shuō)性的建議的一種應(yīng)用文體。先提出建議，隨后給出充足的理由勸說(shuō)對(duì)方接受你的建議，提出的理由要合情合理，用詞要恰當(dāng)，既要委婉禮貌，又要有說(shuō)服力?；窘Y(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容 首先點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信的目的是提勸說(shuō)性的建議，然后講清楚建議的事項(xiàng)、理由、具體建議和措施，最后再一次提出希望，禮貌結(jié)束全文。,確定題材 勸服,給出建議 確定結(jié)構(gòu) 第一段：說(shuō)明目的，講清楚要建議的事項(xiàng) 第二段：給出理由 第三段：提出希望 確定要點(diǎn) 1.有利于查找資料 2.瀏覽新聞，了解信息 3.作為高中生，我們正形成我們的判斷力 確定時(shí)態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) 確定

2、人稱(chēng) 第一人稱(chēng)為主,實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練 假如你是小明，學(xué)校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)和教師因?yàn)閾?dān)心同學(xué)們?yōu)g覽不健康 的網(wǎng)站，關(guān)閉了教室內(nèi)電腦的網(wǎng)絡(luò)瀏覽功能，你們感到很難過(guò)。 請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信，勸說(shuō)校長(zhǎng)同意開(kāi)通教室內(nèi)的網(wǎng)絡(luò)。 事由：教室的電腦不能上網(wǎng)，建議學(xué)校開(kāi)通網(wǎng)絡(luò)。 原因： 1.有利于查找資料； 2. 瀏覽新聞，了解信息； 3.作為高中生，我們正在形成自己的判斷力 注意： 1. 信中要包括以上所有內(nèi)容； 2. 詞數(shù)：120左右； 3. 信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),Dear Headmaster, Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in

3、 the classroom. . Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Xiaoming,Dear Headmaster, Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom. In our life and study, surfing the Internet is become more and more universal. At the meanwhile, many illegal net begin show some unhealthy news,

4、 which will be harmful to students body and soul. In order to protect us against being polluted by bad information , you forbid us using computers. But, using the computer also have some advantages. Firstly, it can help us refer to the data.,Secondly, it also makes us go through the news and realize

5、 information. Whats more, as high school students, we also have ourselves judgement. We can control ourselves. Now the question is wheather you give us the chance. Im looing forward to your reply. Yours, Xiao Ming,Dear Headmaster, Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classro

6、om.We know you want to protect us against being affected by unhealthy information which may be harmful to students body and soul. However,every coin has two sides.With science and technology developing rapidly, surfing the Internet is becoming more and more commom and can bring us advantages. Firstl

7、y, it can help us search for useful datas we cant find in books .,Secondly, with Internet available, we can have access to going through some news and get to know the current events. Whats more, as high school students, we are developing the ability to distinguish/tell right from wrong and we can co

8、ntrol ourselves. Now the question is whether you would like to give us the chance. Im looing forward to your reply. Yours, Xiao Ming,1.覆蓋了所有的要點(diǎn) 2. 應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯 3. 有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使全 文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,詞匯,句型 , 語(yǔ)法多樣化,要點(diǎn)全,連 接 詞,如何算是一篇好文章？,寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)： 1. 要注意英文書(shū)信的格式，兼顧文化差異，同時(shí)要注意避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤； 2. 第一和第三部分注重簡(jiǎn)練，而第二部分作為信函的主體，要注重

9、條理和說(shuō)服力； 3. 要注意提高自己語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的層級(jí)，嘗試使用較高級(jí)別的詞匯、句型或結(jié)構(gòu)。,【常用表達(dá)】 引入： I am writing to . I hope that . That is to say . As far as I am concerned . In my opinion . Personally .,闡述： Here are my reasons. First of all, I think it would be better if . Second, . Third, . Moreover . Whats more . However . Instead . Here

10、Id like to give my advice on . I would like to suggest that . If I were you, I would .,總結(jié)： In short . All things considered . To sum up . In brief . Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.,常用句型 1.Im writing to persuade you to. 2.First of all, I think it would be better if

11、. 3.Here Id like to give my advice on . / I would like to suggest that. 4. If I were you, I would. 5. I strongly hope that you can 6. In my opinion, you should 7.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision. 8. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.,黃金模板

12、Dear _, Im writing to persuade you to _. First of all, I think it would be better if _. Secondly, _. Last but not least, _. I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision. Looking forward to your quick reply. Yours, Li Hua,范文欣賞 Dear Headmaster, Im writing to persua

13、de you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom. We know youre afraid that we may be exposed to unhealthy websites. Actually every coin has two sides. We still think that surfing the Internet can bring us much more advantages.,First of all, I think it would be better if we can surf the Internet,

14、 because there is a wide range of learning resources on the Internet. We should make good use of it. Furthermore, we can broaden our horizons by reading various news online. Last but not least, as high school students, we are building up our sense of judgment. Given chances, we are sure that we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites.,I do hope you can take my sugge