1、高考書(shū)面表達(dá)之申請(qǐng)信Dear Mr. Smith, Ive read your advertisement for an assistant teacher. I am so interested in this position that I am writing to apply for the job. Now I would like to introduce myself to you. I am outgoing, energetic, and responsible; Besides, I love working with children and I am always an

2、 good helper to my teachers. And most importantly, I can speak fluent English, which enables me to communicate freely and effectively with students. So I would be pleased to be an assistant teacher.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 命

3、題解析1.試題情況：5年8套新課標(biāo)卷的考試情況如下。體裁：通常是書(shū)信或郵件（英語(yǔ)報(bào)，雜志，club)題材：與考生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活密切相關(guān)。命題形式：通常是中文要點(diǎn)式提綱，只有2014年卷I例外，是英文廣告文字圖片。2.范文情況：通過(guò)分析5年高考，結(jié)論如下。范文長(zhǎng)度：平均106個(gè)詞，其中最短的97詞，最長(zhǎng)的113詞。因此，寫作中既不能無(wú)話可寫，又不能盲目拓展。拓展的要點(diǎn)要緊扣主題、結(jié)合文體和根據(jù)常識(shí)進(jìn)行必要的拓展。在平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練中最好不要超過(guò)120個(gè)詞，因按評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，嚴(yán)格來(lái)說(shuō)，少于80個(gè)詞和超過(guò)120個(gè)詞是要從總分中扣2分的，切記。范文句數(shù)：平均8.6句，其中最少的7句，最長(zhǎng)的10句。Writing

4、Tips：1.要注意字?jǐn)?shù)的限制，要簡(jiǎn)潔，不要冗長(zhǎng)。2.建議寫10-11行，不要超過(guò)12行。 3.要提高書(shū)寫的整潔和美觀，進(jìn)一步規(guī)范作文的格式和書(shū)寫字母的大小和間隙。寫作句型：在高考寫作中最高頻句型是什么句型？1.簡(jiǎn)單句的5個(gè)基本句型，其在8篇范文占60%，平均每篇5個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句。2.并列句：平均每篇1.4句( and, but, not onlybut also)3.主從復(fù)合句：平均每篇有2.6個(gè)從句。其實(shí)主要是賓語(yǔ)從句，其次是狀語(yǔ)從句與定語(yǔ)從句。*一篇作文：簡(jiǎn)單句約5句，并列句12句，含從句的復(fù)合句23句。提倡：小、巧、精。三段十句作文法申請(qǐng)信應(yīng)該用到哪些詞句? 回到范文。背誦下列常用句型：(2

5、mins)1.Ive read /learned from the newspaper that 2.I am writing to apply for the job.3.I would like to introduce myself to (I am good at /I can I have a good command of I like/am fond of )4.Thank you for and I am looking forward to5.I would be grateful if you could范文中文章結(jié)構(gòu)?1.書(shū)信類型？2. 圍繞什么寫？3. 三個(gè)層次：開(kāi)頭：

6、1-2句表達(dá)中間：36個(gè)介紹結(jié)尾1-2句表達(dá) 4.人稱、時(shí)態(tài)？ 5.過(guò)渡詞？體驗(yàn)高考真題-2012年全國(guó)一/新課標(biāo)卷 假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)(the Internet)上得知一個(gè)國(guó)際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營(yíng)，歡迎各國(guó)學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。內(nèi)容主要包括:1.自我介紹(包括英語(yǔ)能力); 2.參加意圖(介紹中國(guó)、了解其他國(guó)家); 3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫; 3.郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好.Dear Sir or Madam,_ Regards, Li Hua審題：文體格式？主體人稱？主體時(shí)態(tài)？?jī)?nèi)容要點(diǎn)？只有3點(diǎn)

7、嗎？還要加上哪些要點(diǎn)？過(guò)渡詞：可能用到的連接詞【寫作過(guò)程】 1 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成句 第一段：自我介紹+寫信目的，表示興趣(即介紹參加意圖)第二段：表明參加意圖第三段：希望獲準(zhǔn)參加并期待回復(fù)。第一段：自我介紹+寫信目的，表示興趣(即介紹參加意圖)我是李華，是一名來(lái)自中國(guó)的中學(xué)生。我從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上獲知你們將在新加坡（Singapore）舉辦夏令營(yíng)，我對(duì)此很感興趣。第二段：表明參加意圖 我知道你們歡迎各國(guó)學(xué)生參加，所以我想要參加。 我已經(jīng)學(xué)了10年英語(yǔ)，我的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)很流利。 另外，我可以介紹有關(guān)中國(guó)文化給其他國(guó)家的學(xué)生，也了解他們國(guó)家的文化。第三段：希望獲準(zhǔn)參加并期待回復(fù)。我希望我將能被接受成為夏令營(yíng)的一

8、成員。期待你的回復(fù)。漢譯英：_官方范文Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning

9、English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their cultures as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua優(yōu)秀范文Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hu

10、a, a boy of seventeen, a middle school student from China. I learn from the Internet that you are organizing a summer camp in Singapore, which welcomes students from all over the world. As a senior high school student, I am very interested in the camp and eager to participate. General acknowledgement is very good of my personality and the knowledge capabilities. I have been learning English for more than 10 years, and I can communicate with people in fluent English. Meanwhile, I regard this camp as a golden opportunity for me to introduce my motherland, China, to my oversea