1、寫作技巧點撥系列(七) 精研提綱材料, 輕松駕馭提綱作文,【典例導練】 (2014唐山模擬)作為一名高三學生的你, 明年即將畢業(yè)?，F在校報征稿, 請根據以下要點寫一篇英語短文, 談談你對高三生活的體會和建議。 1. 對老師與家長的關愛表示感謝; 2. 向與自己發(fā)生過矛盾的同學表達歉意; 3. 努力學習, 實現人生夢想; 4. 對學弟、學妹的建議。,【寫作指導】 . 常用句式 (1)as. . . (2)It wont be long before. . . (3)without. . . (4)Firstly. . . Secondly. . . Finally. . .,. 黃金模板 第一段

2、: 簡述寫這篇文章的用意 High school is always considered as the most cherished period of ones life(人生值得紀念). As a Senior 3 student, it wont be long before I graduate(即將畢業(yè)). Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.,第二段: 梳理提綱要點, 表達謝意、歉意和感悟 Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those

3、 standing by me all the way_. . . Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates_. . . Above all, . . . Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains. ”_ 第三段: 對他人的希望 Finally I hope_,謝意,歉意,感悟,希望,【審題謀篇】信息全而不漏,【佳句錘煉】詞句精而高級 1. 作為一名高三學生，不久就畢業(yè)了，現在我有很多事情與 同學們分享。 (一般表達)Im a student in Senior 3 and Il

4、l graduate soon. Now, I have a lot of things and Ill share with my fellow students. (介詞短語+固定句式+不定式作定語)_ a Senior 3 student, _I graduate. Now, I have much _ _ my fellow students.,As,it wont be long before,to share,with,2. 首先，我想向那些一直支持我，給我?guī)椭完P愛的老師、 父母、朋友表示感謝。如果沒有他們的幫助和建議，我的 生活就會與現在不一樣。 (一般表達)At the be

5、ginning, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those who are standing by me all the way, teachers, parents, including friends. If there were no their help and advice, my life would be different. (過渡語+分詞作定語+虛擬語氣)_, I would like to show my appreciation of help from _by me all the way, teac

6、hers, parents, and _. _ _, my life would be different.,Firstly,those standing,friends included,Without,their help and advice,3. 其次，到了向我傷害或誤解過的同學道歉的時間了。交流 和微笑充當友誼的橋梁。 (一般表達)Then, its high time that I should say sorry to my classmates. I hurt or misunderstood them. Communication and smiles are used as

7、 bridges to friendship. (過渡語+固定句式+定語從句)_, _say sorry to my classmates _ I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles _bridges to friendship.,Secondly,its high time to,whom,act as,4. 尤其重要的是，我已經下定決心努力學習，因為我相信， 努力學習是成功的鑰匙，正如古代諺語說的“不勞無獲”。 (一般表達)Importantly, Ive decided to make every effort to study

8、. I believe hard work is the key to success, like the old saying, “No pains, no gains. ” (過渡語+高級詞匯+原因狀語從句)_ _ to make every effort to study, _ I believe hard work is the key to success. _, “No pains, no gains. ”,Above all, Ive made up my,mind,for,Just as the old saying goes,【連句成篇】過渡巧而自然 High school

9、is always considered as the most cherished period of ones life. As a Senior 3 student, it wont be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.,Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends incl

10、uded. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to my classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key

11、 to success. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains. ” Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.,【命題專家如是說】 提綱作文解題關鍵 提綱作文是高考試題中最常見的書面表達命題方式之一，通常會以中文、英文、中文+英文、文字+表格、文字+圖片等不同的形式給出要點，并要求考生根據所列要點組織語言，將所列要點完整、清晰地表達出來。需注意以下幾點： 1. 仔細研讀題目。確定所寫文章的主題、人稱、大致寫作內容及主要采用的時態(tài)等。,2. 分析整合要點。對所給要點進行分析及重新整合，并適當進行細節(jié)擴展。重新整合信息是為了將信息分為若干部分，劃分依據是要點間的邏輯關系和相似性等。 3. 確定