1、選校網(wǎng) 高考頻道 專業(yè)大全 歷年分?jǐn)?shù)線 上萬張大學(xué)圖片 大學(xué)視頻 院校庫2008高考英語寫作必備如果你曾經(jīng)為英語作文日日傷心以淚洗面，如果你曾經(jīng)面對作文題目苦思冥想頭腦里天馬行空卻不知如何動筆，如果你看到發(fā)下來的卷子上英語作文上犯的一些小錯誤后感到痛心疾首大呼懊惱，那么這套流程對你來說應(yīng)該有一定參考價值。 第一步，審題。拿到題目后，手中拿鉛筆，手腦眼嘴并用，開始審題?？搭}目的要求是什么，要點是什么，特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李華，還是隨便一個名字？ 要議論文還是記敘文？對分幾段寫有無要求？等等。諸如此類的硬性要求信息，都最好用鉛筆劃下來，以免出錯，也許你一開始會記得，可隨著時間的流逝，你會不會

2、因緊張而遺忘這些信息呢？還是小心為妙。邊看最好邊張嘴默讀，這樣就不會遺漏或忽略任何一個字了。第二步，草稿。有的同學(xué)怕出錯，全文都打草稿再謄寫，我姑且認(rèn)為不太可取，畢竟考場時間寶貴，即使我有四十分鐘時間寫作文也不敢貿(mào)然這么做，更何況考場時我們留給作文的時間往往一再被壓縮。有的同學(xué)不打草稿，我認(rèn)為更不太可取。一來容易出錯，二來邊寫邊想思維不連貫，即使思維連貫也無法審詞酌句，展現(xiàn)自己最好的一面，容易后悔。草稿怎么打？1.結(jié)構(gòu)就是你打算分幾段寫，每段都寫什么？哪段轉(zhuǎn)哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有譜的。2.關(guān)鍵詞：結(jié)構(gòu)擬定后，迅速在草稿紙上寫下自己這篇作文可能用到的一些關(guān)鍵詞。包括一些漂亮的詞和自己可能會

3、忘記的詞。主要是動詞和名詞。譬如一省作文題： 假設(shè)你的名字是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)招募志愿者。你希望成為志愿者。申請信的格式已經(jīng)寫好了，你直接寫內(nèi)容就可以。你的個人情況：年齡性別學(xué)歷，個人條件。英語好，愛好體育，擅長交際，樂于助人。承諾提供最佳服務(wù)。關(guān)鍵詞就是學(xué)歷、愛好、擅長、樂于、承諾，和你對這篇作文初步構(gòu)思時想到的一些詞。先把這些詞（指詞的英文表達(dá)）寫在紙上。有一些詞的拼寫，譬如學(xué)歷，可能你本身就記得不是特別清楚，這時一定要在開始寫作文前先把它寫下來，以免一會因干擾而遺忘?？赡芸吹铰斆鬟@個關(guān)鍵詞時，你最初寫下的往往是clever，再仔細(xì)想想，你是不是又想到了smart

4、,deligient好多詞，挑個漂亮和合適的用吧。再比如轉(zhuǎn)折，你寫了but，這會再想想，是不是又有一堆表示轉(zhuǎn)折的詞在你腦里打轉(zhuǎn)呢？挑一個吧。千萬別用but.3.句式：詞寫下來了，其實你構(gòu)建這篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它們蓋成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陳述句把它們在頭腦中過一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陳述句改成問句？能不能用上一個雙重否定句？能不能用一個主語從句套定語從句的長句？能不能用一個插入語？等等。把你高中三年的英語積累展示出來。在草稿紙上同樣標(biāo)注。三正式寫。這樣的草稿打完后，就要快快寫了。注意，英語作文的卷面簡直太重要了，一定要把字寫整齊，寫大。沒有把握的詞和句

5、子不用。別忘了遵守你最初用鉛筆劃下的題目的規(guī)定。四檢查。注意，最最重要的一步來了。盡管很小心，可是我們寫英語作文還是會犯下很多錯誤。單詞拼寫的，大小寫的，等等。這些錯誤會極大破壞我們在閱卷老師心目中的形象，一定要堅決誓死消滅。即使時間再緊，請務(wù)必留下12分鐘檢查作文的時間，消除隱性錯誤。需要說明的是，英語的開頭和結(jié)尾是最關(guān)鍵的，尤其是開頭。基本上，不跑題，遵守題目要求，一個漂亮的開頭，一個還過得去的結(jié)尾，2-3個高級詞匯，1-2個漂亮的句子，加上整齊的字跡，作文的分就不會低了哦。所以，精心為你的作文想個漂亮的開頭吧。3Za英語作文網(wǎng)2007高考英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 1. 本題總分為25分，按5個檔

6、次給分。 【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】 第五檔(很好)；(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 2. 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點。 3. 應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。 4. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致；具備較強(qiáng)的語言運用能力。 5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 6. 完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 第四檔(好)：(16-20分) 1. 完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。 3. 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。 4. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)

7、構(gòu)或詞匯所致。 5. 應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 6. 達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 第三檔(適當(dāng))：(11-15分) 1. 基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 2. 雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容。 3. 應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求。4. 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。5. 應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內(nèi)容連貫。 6. 整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。 第二檔(較差)：(6-10分) 1. 未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容。 3. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限。4. 有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的

8、錯誤，影響了對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容缺少連貫性。 6. 信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。第一檔(差)：(1-5分)1. 未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。2. 明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。3. 語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項目有限。 4. 較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內(nèi)容的理解。 5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。 6. 信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。 不得分：（0分） 未能傳達(dá)給讀者仟何信息：內(nèi)容太少，無法評判；寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清2. 評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔

9、次，最后給分。3. 詞數(shù)少于 80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。4. 評分時，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。5. 拼寫與標(biāo)點符號是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個方面，評分時，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞匯用法均可接受。 6. 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個檔次。 7. 內(nèi)容要點可用不同方式表達(dá)，對緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。參考范文1隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)吧在人們生活中扮演了重要的角色。越來越多的人，特別是學(xué)生，愿意到網(wǎng)吧去，他們沉迷于在網(wǎng)吧玩電子游戲、結(jié)交壞朋友以及和莢眉聊天。一些學(xué)生常常在網(wǎng)吧玩到深夜，這些會導(dǎo)

10、致學(xué)生的健康和學(xué)習(xí)問題?，F(xiàn)在北京市已關(guān)閉了一些網(wǎng)吧，但是，一些學(xué)生乘車到郊區(qū)的網(wǎng)吧去玩。    慶幸的是，越來越多的家長和學(xué)校已經(jīng)意識到這點。最近，遼寧省錦州市六千多名學(xué)生保證遠(yuǎn)離網(wǎng)吧。學(xué)生擺脫掉這種壞習(xí)慣是非常必要的。 Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students. It has become quite commom to go there. They waste too much precious time on playing video

11、 games in the net bar. As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies. Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected. Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing. But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to

12、 play.      Fortunately,  more and more parents and schools have realized it. Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province. Most students are making full use of their time and devoting the

13、mselves to their studies. It is a good thing.2. 張東是我最好的朋友。他是上學(xué)期來我們班的，他是個男孩。我們兩個人都擅長英語，因此我們經(jīng)常在課余時間用英語聊天。放學(xué)后，我們經(jīng)常在操場上踢足球。他跑得特別快，我追不上他。他是個優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生，他不但各科功課好而且很友善、謙虛。他喜歡流行音樂，也喜歡古典音樂。    他家有三口人，他是獨生子。父親是個醫(yī)生，母親是個京劇演員。盡管張東家境比較富裕，但是他的穿著卻十分樸素。他有一個夢想，就是將來當(dāng)個律師。    這就是我的朋友，一個聰明、友好的男孩。老

14、師和同學(xué)們都喜歡他。Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last semester. He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an e

15、xcellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.     There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Th

16、ough Zhang Dong's family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. He has a dream which is to be a lawyer.     Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.3.我們的學(xué)校，武漢和平中學(xué)，位于武漢市的中央。學(xué)校剛剛建立，規(guī)模適當(dāng)。校園長2百米，寬1百米，四面環(huán)繞著樹木。當(dāng)你進(jìn)入前門時，一個具有各種自然風(fēng)

17、景的巨大花園在歡迎你。左邊是圖書館，館內(nèi)藏書10萬多冊。右邊為實驗樓。校園的正中央是長150米的教學(xué)樓。該樓共四層，兩頭為教師辦公室。站在教學(xué)樓樓頂，你能看到樓前有一個花園，樓后右側(cè)是一個大操場，課后同學(xué)們經(jīng)常在這做運動。左邊是可容納500人的食堂。這就是我們的學(xué)校，一座美麗的學(xué)校。      Our school, Wuhan Heping Middle School, is in the center of Wuhan city. The school yard is two hundred meters long,  one h

18、undred meters wide, and is surrounded by trees. It is 20, 000 square meters in area.     When you walk into the school yard, you will see a wide road in front of you. On your left, you will see the school library in which there are more than 100, 000 books. On your right is the e

19、xperiment building, Walk ahead,and you will see a beautiful garden in front of you. When you go through it,there stands the teaching building: It has four floors with the teachers' of offices at either end of each floor. Behind it, there stands the dining-room on the left side. To the right lies

20、 the playground where the students often play football. This is our school, a beautiful one. 4. 最近，你班同學(xué)開展了一場討論，討論的主題是：Wealth and Health請根據(jù)下表提供的信息寫一篇100字左右的短文，介紹一下討論的情況。（文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。）一些人認(rèn)為Wealth另一些人認(rèn)為Health有錢就有了一切。想辦法多多賺錢。健康更重要。要愛惜身體。個人觀點：更看重健康。身體不好，再多的錢也無濟(jì)于事。Which is more important, wealth or h

21、ealth? Different people have different opinions. Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing. In order to accumulate more money they can do anything. However, other people regard health as more important. Once health is lost, it is no us

22、e having a lot of money.As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more. Everybody wants to live a happy life. So they try their best to earn money which they can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they

23、 be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless. In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy. So, just do our best and keep fit.5. 今年八月，我參加了在山東省煙臺市舉行的英語夏令營活動。來自全國各地一百多名中學(xué)生和三十多名英語教育專家參加了這次活動。每個營員都必須用英語彼此交流，我們所有的人都很高興、激動。另外，夏令營也舉辦了許多活動，例如第二后全國中學(xué)生辯論會和第三后中學(xué)生英語

24、講演比賽。我們還參觀了許多名勝。但是最令我們難忘的是英語晚會，一些同學(xué)唱英文歌曲，另外一些人跳舞。我們都學(xué)到了不少知識，包括怎樣學(xué)習(xí)英語、與他人交流和幫助他This August, I took part in an English summer camp which was held in the city of Yantai, Shandong Province. More than one hundred middle school students from all over the country and over thirty experts in English teaching

25、 took part in the camp, too. Every member should communicate with each other in English. All of us were very happy and excited in the camp. In addition,  many activities were held in the camp such as, the Second Annual National Debate for Middle School Students and the Third National English Sp

26、eech Competition for Middle School Students. We visited many places of interest. But what impressed us most was the English party. Some were singing in English and others were dancing. We learnt a great deal, including how to study English, communicate with each other and help other people. I want t

27、o take part in it next year. 6. 12月25日的圣誕節(jié)是西方國家最重要的節(jié)日。我和媽媽在美國的時候，曾應(yīng)媽媽的一位朋友邀請，去一個美國家庭過圣誕節(jié)。在去他家的途中，我們?yōu)槊绹笥奄I了一些禮物。    我們到時，他們已為家人及客人們準(zhǔn)備了各種各樣的禮物，有圣誕蠟燭、蛋糕、卡片、小玩具和餅干等。圣誕樹放在燈火通明的客廳的一角，實在是太莢了。這一切給我們留下了深刻的印象。我們吃了一頓大餐。飯后，他們給我們講了一些圣誕節(jié)的故事，我們知道了圣誕節(jié)與上帝有關(guān)。我們午夜時分才上床睡覺。盡管我們知道圣誕老人不是真的，但還是等待著白胡子的圣誕老人為我們

28、送來禮物。第二天早晨我們收到了許多漂亮的禮物。    這個圣誕節(jié)實在太令人難以忘懷了。我不僅過得很愉快，還了解了外國文化。Christmas is the most important festival in the western world. It falls on December 25th. When my mother and I stayed in America, we were invited by one of my mother's friends to have Christmas with an American family. W

29、e bought some presents for our American friends on our way to their house.     They had prepared different kinds of gifts for their family and guests when we got to their house, such as Christmas candles, cakes, cards, little toys, biscuits and so on. A Christmas tree was placed

30、in the comer of the brilliant hall. How beautiful it was! We were impressed by these. We had a big meal.  After dinner, they told us some interesting stories about Christmas. We learned that Christmas had something to do with God. We went to bed at midnight. Though we knew the Santa Claus was n

31、ot true, we were still waiting for the Santa Claus with white beard to bring us presents. And we received many beautiful presents the next morning.     This Christmas was really unforgettable. Not only did I have a good time, but also I knew something about foreign culture.7. 武漢第

32、三制藥廠(Medical nant)研制了一種新藥，藥品已被外商訂購。制藥廠請你為該廠產(chǎn)品寫一份說明書，請根據(jù)提示完成。1本藥品為中藥，對心臟病療效顯著。2。用量：每日三次，一次兩粒(pi11)；發(fā)病時可加服12粒。可長期服用。3服藥后如感身體不適請停服。小孩和孕婦(Pregnant)禁服。4本藥品應(yīng)放在陰涼干燥處。5使用本藥品還應(yīng)嚴(yán)格聽從醫(yī)生的指導(dǎo)。注意：1說明書必須包括以上所有要點，但不要逐條翻譯。 2詞數(shù)100左右。 8. A New Kind of MedicineWuhan No.3 Medical Plant has invented a new kind of medicine.

33、 It is very good for heart trouble (disease). It should be taken three times a clay and two pills once. It can also be taken one or two more pills if needed. This kind of medicine can be used for a long time. Its dangerous for children and the pregnant. They mustn't take this medicine. If you ar

34、e not feeling well after taking the medicine, you should stop taking it. This medicine should be kept in a cool and dry place. It's better to follow the doctor's advice before taking it.9.給編輯的一封信尊敬的編輯：最近我們班就北京動物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)展開了熱烈的討論。一部分同學(xué)同意遷出，他們說大量的游客來此參觀將造成交通阻塞；他們還說，動物園一旦遷出，動物們在郊區(qū)將會有更廣闊的活動空間和更好的

35、生活條件。然而，一部分同學(xué)反對遷出。他們說，北京動物園自1906年建立以來已有100年的歷史，在國內(nèi)外享有盛譽，不應(yīng)當(dāng)遷出。而且，遷出會造成一些動物的死亡。北京動物園是否應(yīng)遷出市區(qū)，這是北京人必須作出的一個大的決定。您真誠的朋友 李華To EditorDear editor,Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city. Some of my classmates are in favour of the move. T

36、hey say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and i

37、s well-known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is.What's more, moving may cause the death of some animals.To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing. Yours truly, Li Hua10. 你是李華。當(dāng)聞知某合資賓館招收10名女服務(wù)員后，便寫信與飯店外方經(jīng)理聯(lián)系求職。求職信應(yīng)包括下表中所列全部內(nèi)容。姓名李華性別女年齡20文化程度

38、高中畢業(yè)住址深圳市深南路48號婚否未婚健康狀況良好個人簡歷612歲 在第一小學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)1218歲 在深圳中學(xué)上學(xué)1820歲 在建筑工地干活20歲至今 在郵政局當(dāng)郵遞員愛好及特 長上學(xué)期間學(xué)習(xí)了六年英語，中學(xué)畢業(yè)后一直不間斷學(xué)習(xí)英語，現(xiàn)在英語口語和打字都很熟練。喜歡唱歌和跳舞。2004年曾獲深圳市業(yè)余歌手比賽一等獎。Dear Mr Margaret, Im glad to know that ten waitresses are needed in your hotel. Id like to be one of them. Im a Chinese girl of twenty. Im singl

39、e and healthy. I started school when I was six. I studied in No. 1 Primary School. At the age of eleven, I went Shenzhen Middle school for learning. After graduation in 2003 I began to work on a constructions site as an ordinary worker, I became a postwoman when I was twenty. I had learned English f

40、or 6 years at school, and have kept on learning it since I left school. Now I can speak good English and type well. I enjoy singing and dancing. Last year I won the first prize in the competition for the spare time singers in the city. Could you let me have a position in your hotel？ Looking forward

41、to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua11.請根據(jù)下列四幅圖畫用英語寫篇故事，以參加?？h(huán)保征文。注意：1. 故事須包括所有圖畫的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使故事連貫；2. 圖中學(xué)生為李華；3. 詞數(shù)：100左右。參考詞匯：寫生 draw from nature 畫板 drawing board 斧 axeLi Hua is a primary school student and he enjoys drawing very much. One day, he went to the small woods not far from town to dr

42、aw from nature, carrying a drawing board. He was glad to find a tree living although the rest had been cut down. “Let me start work at once,” he thought and began to set up his board.Just then a strong young man came with a big axe and got down to cutting the tree. Soon he cut it down and pulled it

43、away. When Li Hua got ready and turned back to draw, he found the tree had disappeared. “Dear me! Where on earth is the tree?” Li Hua wondered, very disappointedly.12.觀察下列圖表，請以“Changes in the Ownership of House”為題，為校報寫一篇短文。 注意：短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容： 1、根據(jù)圖示描述該市住房產(chǎn)權(quán)的變化 2、分析產(chǎn)生這些變化的原因3、說明這些變化對個人和社會產(chǎn)生的影響Ownership of

44、 Houses in a Big City in China As can be seen from the chart, ownership of houses in a big city in China changed in the past ten years. In 1995, 75 percent of the houses were state-owned. Five years later, the rate of state-owned houses to private ones was 3 to 2. But from then on, the ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far 80 percent of houses have been private. What caused the changes? There might have been two main reasons. First, from 1995 up to now, the people's living standards have been improving. Most of them can affor