1、專四寫作輔導(dǎo) Instructor: 崔羅強(qiáng)Week 1第一節(jié) 寫作要求及評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（一）測試要求(a) 要求根據(jù)所出的題目和列出的寫作提綱或圖表、數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)表等(也附有寫作提綱)寫一篇200詞左右的短文。能做到內(nèi)容切題、完整、條理清楚，文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語法正確，語言通順恰當(dāng)?？荚嚂r(shí)間35分鐘。(b) 寫便條：要求根據(jù)提示寫大約50-60詞的通知、便條、請貼等。要求格式正確，語言得體?？荚嚂r(shí)間10分鐘。（二）題型：本部分為主觀試題，分兩節(jié)：SectionA和SectionB。Section A：作文(Composition)本節(jié)是作文，題目主要屬于記敘文、說明文或議論文的范圍。Section B：寫

2、便條(Note-writing)本節(jié)是寫便條。 測試目的：按照教學(xué)大綱的要求測試學(xué)生在基礎(chǔ)階段末期用英語書面表達(dá)思想的能力。（三）評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(a) 作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)1. 本題滿分為15分。 2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等：15分、14-12分、11-9分、8-6分及5-3分。 15分文章內(nèi)容切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，行文通順流暢；論證嚴(yán)密，論據(jù)充分，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤。 14-12分文章內(nèi)容切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，語言比較通順連貫，只有極少量語法錯(cuò)誤。 11-9分文章內(nèi)容基本切題。尚能表達(dá)中心思想，但說理不夠清楚，文字連貫不夠好；有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。 8-6分基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。語言錯(cuò)誤多。 5-3分文章條

3、理不清，語言缺乏連貫，句子錯(cuò)誤很多，或語言雖通順流暢但完全偏題。(b) 便條寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)與樣卷1 評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)根據(jù)2004年新版考試大綱，便條滿分為10分，從格式、內(nèi)容、語言以及語言得體性四方面進(jìn)行評分。2010年專業(yè)四級(jí)便條寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分構(gòu)成分值要求扣分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 日期 2右上角，April 22nd, 2007/22 April, 2007/Apr. 22, 2007/22/4/2007/4/22/2007/April 22nd/Apr. 22/凡不符合上述正確格式要求均扣1分。結(jié)束語和謙稱在同一行，人名沒寫或用xx 表示扣1分，最多扣2分 稱呼在日期下一行左側(cè)，Dear Jimmy,/Dear

4、Jimmy:/Jimmy: 結(jié)尾右下方，Truly yours,/Yours truly,/Yours sincerely,/Sincerely yours,/Yours,內(nèi)容 3涵蓋invited + declining+ explaining 少1點(diǎn)扣1分，最多3項(xiàng)內(nèi)容扣3分語言 4語法、詞法正確嚴(yán)重語法、詞法錯(cuò)誤扣1分，一個(gè)句子或同類錯(cuò)誤扣1分，拼寫等小錯(cuò)誤2個(gè)扣1分，最多扣4分語言得體性 1總分在8分以上考慮加此分總字?jǐn)?shù)50-60字（包括三部分格式）少于40或多于80字扣1分日期、稱呼、結(jié)尾全左對齊也可：如：April 22,2007Dear Jimmy,I haveSincerely

5、 yours,Sally（四） 樣卷分析Section B Note-writingWrite on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invita

6、tion and explaining why.Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.(9 pts)April 22nd, 2007Dear Jimmy,Its very kind of you to invite me to join the universitys swimming club. I am most grateful to be asked. However, Ive already joined a basketball club. You know I li

7、ke playing basketball very much. I am afraid I do not have enough time to take part in two sports. I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying swimming with you. Good luck to your club. Yours, Mike (7 pts)22 April, 2007Dear Jimmy,Thank you for yo

8、ur inviting me to participating in the universitys swimming club. But I regret to tell you that Im not able to join you, since I found myself more interested in the basketball club. I hope you will not be angry to me. Yours, Mike (5 pts)Dear Jimmy,Sorry! I couldnt take part in your university swimmi

9、ng club, because I more like football. I have to decline your invitation. What a pity! I am sure you will not be angry at me, because you are always my best friend.Sorry again! Yours, TomApril 22, 2007(3pts)Hello, Jimmy:Im shy to tell you I like other sport. So I dont take part in you club. You may

10、ask : why? Not because other reasons, I interested more in pingpong and it is more cheaper. I think, except me, more people will support you. Tony第二節(jié) 實(shí)用寫作模板I.致歉歷年考題：(2007)Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other spo

11、rts. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why.范文： April 22nd, 2007Dear Jimmy,Its very kind of you to invite me to join the universitys swimming club. I am most grateful to be asked. However, Ive already joined a basketball club. You know I like playing basketball very much. Im a

12、fraid I do not have enough time to take part in two sports. I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying swimming with you. Good luck to your club. Yours, Kevin(2001) Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor

13、 Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting.范文： May 15, 2001Dear Professor Wang, I am terribly sorry that I missed the appointment with you. Yesterday, my grandma suddenly went ill, and my parents were not in,

14、so I had to take her to hospital. When I got to your office, it was too late, and you had already left. Please forgive me.I know youre busy these days, but I wonder if you could agree to meet me at 2oclock on Friday afternoon. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours truly, Kevin道歉模板 題目分析：1. 因未

15、能赴約而道歉Dear Miss Nancy, Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday, owing to the fact that my little son was suddenly taken ill early that day. Hoping to see you soon. Truly yours, Kevin2、因未能及時(shí)還書致歉Unable to return borrowed book on time Dear Kate， Exc

16、use me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest. I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when my cousin came to see me. Never having seen the book, She was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer. However,

17、I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner. Thanking you again for the loan. Sincerely yours, KevinUseful expressions:1). I must apologize for.2). I am very /really/extremely/awfully/terribly sorry about3). I h

18、ope you know how sorry I am not to be with you4). Much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because5). I really regret that I cannot.II.邀請信歷年考題：(2005)You have got 2 tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band /orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing brief

19、ly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you.范文：May 15, 2005Dear Mike,Ive got 2 tickets for a concert given by a famous pop band at our University Hall at 7 oclock this Saturday evening. I know pop music is your favorite, so Id like to invite you to take the convert with me. I believe youll e

20、njoy it. Please call me as soon as possible.Yours sincerely, Kevin邀請模板 題目分析：Dear Jane, We have four tickets for a famous film shown at Guangming Cinema, The Longest Day, Friday, the ninth. Willyou join us? Well be looking for you at eight sharp Friday night in front of the cinema, so dont disappoint

21、 us! Warmest regards. Useful expressions:1). I am pleased to invite you to2). Is there any chance of your coming?3). I was wondering if you could come4). We sincerely/faithfully hope you can attend5). I would be very happy if you could comeIII. 咨詢歷年考題：(2006) You have got to know that your classmate,

22、 Michael, is organizing a week-end excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and asking for information on two details to the excursion.范文： April 23rd, 2006Dear Michael, Im glad to learn that youre organizing a weeke

23、nd excursion for the class. I definitely want to go. Have you come up with where we go and how? Please let me know more details about it as soon as possible. What if we get together some time this evening to talk about it? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Kevin（2002）You have heard th

24、at your friend , Jack , wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.范文： May 15, 2002Dear Jack,Glad to learn that you wish to sell your walkman. As luck would have it. I want to buy a walkman to study English.

25、I wonder if you could give me a description of the condition of your walkman. Id like to spend no more than 150 Yuan on it. What do you think of it?咨詢模板 Useful expressions:1). I would appreciate very much if you can provide me with some suggestions on2). I would be grateful if you would be so kind a

26、s to provide me with certain details about3). I have read on the notice board that4). I just want to know specifically about5). I am eager to knowIV. 建議歷年考題：（2009）Lily, your roommate, is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. You saw an ad for a private English tutor for a school

27、boy. Write her a note , telling her what the job is and strongly recommending it to her.范文： April 18th, 2009Dear Lily,I happened to see an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy, and I think this information is useful for you. For you told me that you wanted to take a part-time job in the co

28、ming summer vacation. Tutoring a schoolboy is interesting, and of course you will be paid. Anyway, you will become a competent tutor, for you are excellent. I think you should accept it immediately.Yours sincerely, Kevin(2008) Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language n

29、ewspaper. And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper.范文： April 20th, 2008Dear Jane, I heard by chance that you are going to subscribe an English-language newspaper. Therefore, I would like to strongly recommend

30、 Sparks Weekly to you. Firstly, its contents renew every week with various aspects of latest information and knowledge. Secondly, it is learning-oriented and can do a lot of help for your study with a lot of exercises. I really think it is very suitable for you.Yours, Kevin(2000) Youve read on the n

31、otice board that the university library is looking for a part-time library assistant who can work at weekends. You think that your classmate, George, is a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a note, telling him what you know about the vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for an interview

32、.范文： May 15, 2000Dear George, Ive learned from the notice board that the university is looking for a part-time library assistant. Its a weekend job. I think its suitable for you since you are free at weekends. It will be a good experience for your future job application and it pays well. I hope you

33、will take the interview and may you succeed. Yours sincerely, Kevin建議模板 V.留言歷年考題：(2010) Your good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of the-term party. Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to help him. You have to be specific about how you can help him.范文： April

34、17th, 2010Dear John,I happen to learn that you were throwing an end-of the-term party next week. Thats really a fascinating idea and Ive been expecting that for months. I have some balloons and ribbons at hand and I can help you decorate the room. As for the music for the party, I have almost a hund

35、red CDs, so you can drop by when you have time and get those you like. Yours sincerely, Kevin留言模板 題目分析：Lynn, Professor Wang wishes to see you this afternoon to talk about your thesis. You are requested to see him in his office at 4:00 p.m. Your mother called at 9:00 a.m. and said that she will not b

36、e able to come to see you tomorrow because she has to attend a meeting. Yours faithfully, LauraUseful expressions:1). Im happy to inform you that2). Would you do me a favor by3). A wishes to see you.4). Come to me whenever you have difficulties with5). If you would like to , pleaseVI.慰問歷年考題：（2004）Yo

37、ur friend , Jane , has failed in the final exam, and is feeling very unhappy about it. Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.范文： May 15, 2004Dear Jane, Im very sorry to hear that youve failed in the final exam and you are falling into a deep depression. I wish you could step ou

38、t of it soon. Lets look forward, and the important thing now is to make good preparation for the next exam. I believe you will succeed. Yours faithfully, Kevin慰問模板 題目分析Dear Lily，I was sorry to learn that you were not successful in the examination. I feel you ought not to be unduly distressed at the

39、result. You are still eligible to sit again for the exam and I am confident that this time next year, I shall be sending a letter, not of sympathy, but of congratulation. My kindest regards and best wishes.Sincerely Yours,LindaUseful expressions:1). Our deepest sympathy is with you.2). Our hearts ar

40、e saddened by your loss.3). We wish to express our sympathy in your loss and to let you know that our thoughts are with you.4). I would like to express my sorrow atVII.祝賀歷年考題：（2003）Your friend Clare has invited you to her house warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a

41、note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to her.范文： May 15, 2003Dear Clare, Congratulation on your moving into a new house and thanks a lot for your invitation to your house warming party this weekend. But I am so sorry to tell you that Ive to go to Beijing for business

42、 from this Wednesday to next Tuesday. What a pity for missing this party! But I sincerely hope you will enjoy the party.Sincerely Yours,Kevin祝賀模板 題目分析：Larry, Hearty congratulations on your marriage. Best wishes for a long and happy married life to you both. Would you like to come to dinner at my apa

43、rtment on Sunday? My husband and I have prepared a special gift for you. Do come to find out the big surprise. LauraUseful expressions:1). Congratulations on your success/achievements!2). Heartiest congratulations upon your 3). Please allow me to congratulate you on.4). Please allow me to extend my

44、hearty congratulations to you.5). I want to congratulate you with all my heart.VIII.致謝致謝模板 題目分析Shanshan,It was very kind of you to take so mush trouble to find me the book written by Lu Xun. Please accept my warmest thanks. I should be very happy to return your help and invite you to dinner at my ap

45、artment on Sunday. Please call me if you come. LindaUseful expressions:1).Many thanks for your2). Please accept my sincere appreciation for3). I am truly grateful to you for4). It was very nice/good/thoughtful5). I am most/extremely grateful toyou for your help.IX.請求請求模板 題目分析Dear Lynn,We are thinkin

46、g to hold a meeting to discuss the problem of electricity shortage of our factory on 15 September. Would you please prepare a presentation on the possible solutions of the problem? Please call me if you are ready to make the presentation. Many thanks! Song YunUseful expressions:1).Im sorry to troubl

47、e, but nobody would come into my mind to help me except you.2). I would greatly appreciate it if you could help me.3). I would be very grateful if you could send me .4). We wonder if you could let us have .?5). Could you let me know something about it?X. 約會(huì)約會(huì)模板 題目分析 June 11, 2007You, as head of the company, are planning to hold a general meeting of the whole staff. You want