1、2010高考英語二輪專題復習系列課件 pdf轉word 108書面表達運用策略 2英語高考書面表達運用策略to be with us!to be with us!3 國家教育部于2000年提出了修改中學課程標準的意見，其指導思想是：一個宗旨（素質教育）、二個重點（創(chuàng)新精神和實踐能力）、三個面向（面向未來、面向國際、面向競爭）。同時提出了英語素質教育的目的和內(nèi)容：激發(fā)和培養(yǎng)學習興趣，幫助學生樹立自信心，形成有效的學習策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學習策略，養(yǎng)成良好的學習習慣、掌握一定的語言知識和基本技能，建立初步的語感，獲得基本的語言運用能力，開發(fā)智力、培養(yǎng)觀察、記憶、思維、想象、創(chuàng)造能力，了解文化差異，增強

2、世界意識，為學生的發(fā)展和終身學習打下良好的基礎。在如此背景下進行的本研究項目的意義在于既符合國家對中學外語教學所提的要求和目標，也將寫的訓練貫穿于日常教學活動的全過程，寓寫于聽說讀等諸方面的訓練中，從而使學生達到真正全面提高寫的能力的目的。同時對中學外語教師指導學生如何寫好英語作文也極具參考價值和幫助作用。前 言4 目前國內(nèi)就中學生英語寫作課題尚缺乏較完整、系統(tǒng)和科學的研究，更勿論提出有份量乃至權威的實驗報告，用以指導我國學生的英語寫作。而隨著我國經(jīng)濟與國際接軌及加入世貿(mào)組織后，英文寫作的重要性正在日益凸現(xiàn)，我們知道，語言交際，就是傳遞和接受信息。傳遞信息就是說和寫，接受信息就是聽和讀。聽和說

3、是口頭交際，讀和寫是書面交際，我們不僅要聽懂別人說的、看懂別人寫的，而且還要自己能說，且要說得地道，寫得洋氣，這樣才算是真正實現(xiàn)了用英語進行交際的目的。英語的聽說讀寫四者密不可分，相互滲透，互為基礎，又呈螺旋式提高。寫的能力要在聽說讀的基礎上培養(yǎng)和提高，而寫的訓練又能進一步提高聽說讀的能力，因此，今后有關中學生英文寫作的研究將會越來越引起重視，并將進一步深化、細化。 中文和英文畢竟是兩種不同的語言，差異很大。我們在寫英文的時候經(jīng)常會出一些錯誤，一部分是最基本的語法錯誤，這里我們把英文寫作中常犯的錯誤列出一部分，以引起我們的注意。另一部分是由于東西方文化的差異所帶來的不同思維方式所造成的。 寫作

4、研究的現(xiàn)狀和發(fā)展趨勢5第一章 高考作文評析一、 1989年全國高校招生統(tǒng)一考試 英語書面表達6（一）題目要求一個國際青年參觀團正在訪問我國某城市，你負責安排他們的參觀活動。請起草一份通知，準備向參觀團成員宣讀。通知必須用一段話說明以下幾點： 1.參觀日期：7月22日，星期六。 時間：早餐后8點出發(fā)。午餐在參觀地吃。下午回來。 2.參觀內(nèi)容：分四組，每組參觀一個地方：工廠、學校、農(nóng)場或醫(yī)院。 3.歡迎每人參加一組活動。請選擇好參觀地點，并在今晚9點前到服務臺(the Service Desk)簽名。 7滿分作文：Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your atten

5、tion, please? Welcome to our city! Im very glad to tell you our trip plans. There are four choices, including factories, schools, farms, and hospitals. Its up to you to decide which group you have interest. Were supposed to get going at 8 oclock tomorrow morning right after breakfast, and you dont h

6、ave to take any food with you since lunch will be served at the site. Please make sure the place that you feel like going and sign up at the service desk before 9 p.m.! Thank you!8其它可用于本篇作文的好句子：1. You will be put into four groups.2. We have four trip plans for you to choose from.3. You are supposed

7、to be in any of the four groups.4. There are four choices. Its up to you to decide which one is yours.5. Choose a place which you may feel like visiting.6. Well get going at 8 oclock tomorrow morning right after breakfast.7. The trip is scheduled for a whole day, so Im afraid well have lunch on site

8、.8. In addition, you dont have to take any food with you, since lunch will be served at the place you will be visiting.9. Always stay with your guide, just to be on the safe side.10. To make sure that the visits are well planned, we need you to sign up for your trip by 9:00 P.M.11. Thank you for lis

9、tening.904年浙江省高考英語卷書面表達解析一、題目 假設你是李越,你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說,他和他的一些同學正在學中文,請你推薦兩本學中文的詞典，根據(jù)下表提供的信息,請你給他寫一封回信.10 不少教師認為本案起點比較低，尖子生發(fā)揮水平的空間比較少，連“初中畢業(yè)生”都可以“應付”。但是評卷結果卻讓人大跌眼鏡：該題的全省平均得分只有12.58分，滿分（25分）者更是鳳毛麟角。二、寫作解析11、這種英漢、漢英的方式使得學生能更方便地查找參照詞。、這本字典實際上是“雙向”字典：一半是英漢，一半是漢英，分別擁有20,000個漢字和18,000英語單詞。、這本字典大約有10,000字。、英漢

10、部分的英語單詞后面都有相對應的漢語。、所有的漢字都有英語翻譯，這些翻譯有助于更精確地理解漢字。、盡管沒有小本的新華字典那樣容易攜帶，英漢/漢英字典還是更受學生們的歡迎。、對于常見的單詞來說，它還含有充足的例子。、它提供了大量的用法注解。三、語句使用建議129、它有相當多的例句和注解。10、由于其易用和全面，我也經(jīng)常使用這本字典。11、我向所有中文學習者推薦這本字典。12、因為它擁有其他字典不曾擁有的東西，所以我說它很有用。13、平均三個中國人就有一個擁有這本字典。14、總體上說，它特別有用，是本很有價值的字典。15、與其他字典相比，這本字典十分有用。16、總而言之，要選漢語字典，這是最好的選擇

11、之一。131、The English-Chinese, Chinese-English format makes it convenient for students to cross-reference words.2、This dictionary is actually a two-way dictionary: one half is English/Chinese and the other half is Chinese/English, containing some 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words.3、This dic

12、tionary has roughly 10,000 words.4、The E/C section has the English word followed by the Chinese equivalent.5、All Chinese characters are followed by English translation, which helps you understand the characters more accurately.6、While not as portable as the smaller XD, the E/C C/E was more warmly we

13、lcomed by my students.7、For common words it also includes efficient examples.8、It provides lots of usage notes.14 9、It has a good number of example sentences with necessary usage notes.10、I use this dictionary a lot due to its ease of use and its completeness.11、I highly recommend this dictionary fo

14、r all learners of mandarin Chinese language.12、I have found this dictionary to be very helpful because it has what many Chinese dictionaries do not have.13、On average, one in three Chinese own a copy of the dictionary.14、Overall, it is extremely useful and a good value.15、This dictionary is incredib

15、ly useful comparing to other ones. 16、In short, its one of your best options for a Chinese dictionary.151、高考范文Dear Steve, Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese. Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries. The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary is r

16、eally a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced

17、 learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive, costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan. Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. (111 words)四、范文欣賞162、考場高分范文Dear Steve, Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about how to choose a dictionary

18、 for learning Chinese. Here I strongly recommend you the following two which may be useful to you. One of them is the English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary, which will cost you 52 yuan. It contains some 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. As it has lots of examples showing how to use

19、 the words, it will be much valuable for the beginners like you. The other one, Xinhua Dictionary, which charges you only 11 yuan and has a collection of 10,000 Chinese words. It is the most commonly used one in China. If you need my help with your Chinese please write to me. (120 words)173、教師范文Dear

20、 Steve, Very glad to have received your letter, saying that you and your classmates are learning English. I wish you good luck with your efforts in Chinese learning. In your letter you also ask what Chinese dictionaries to use. Here are the two that I highly recommend. An ideal tool for study, the E

21、nglish-Chinese & ChineseEnglish dictionary collects 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words. Abundant examples illustrate how and when a word can be used. As a must-have reference for beginners, the dictionary is worth the price, 52 yuan. The Xinhua Dictionary, consisting of 10,000 Chinese wor

22、ds, has been the most influential Chinese-only dictionary available. The dictionary is relatively small, easy to carry and affordable, costing only 11 yuan. If you have further questions, let me know. (128 words)18 普通高校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試大綱中英語學科書面表達的“評分標準”中指出，評分時，應該注意“應用詞匯和語法結構的數(shù)量、上下文的連貫性和語言的得體性”；最高檔次的給分要求中還要求

23、考生能夠“應用較多的語法結構和詞匯；盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞匯，具備較強的語言用用能力；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊”等等。這些要求在上述三篇范文中，尤其是最后兩篇范文中，都有較好的體現(xiàn)。五、范文評析19 范文中能夠通過從屬連詞（第2篇）、非限制性定語從句（第2篇）、同位語（第3篇）和現(xiàn)在分詞短語（第1、3篇）等語法結構來構建長句，使多個要點能夠在一個句子中得以表達，從而使意義更為連貫、文章更為流暢。本案的并列信息比較多，如價格、擁有詞匯量等，但是上面提到的多種語法結構的運用，使文章擺脫了內(nèi)容上的乏味，變得很耐讀. 范文中也體現(xiàn)了較強的詞匯運用能力。在“考場高分范文”中，c

24、ontain、charge、a collection of等的正確運用，無疑為文章增色不少；而“教師范文”中的用詞亦有可圈可點之處，通過efforts、collect、abundant、illustrate、consist of、influential、available、relatively等詞，彰顯了作者的詞匯量，這與評分標準中的要求也是相吻合的。2005年浙江卷英語書面表達一、題目（滿分30分）你的英國朋友正在做一個課題：世界各地的生日慶祝方式。他請你介紹中國學生過生日的方式。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文：（一）通常方式：1. 生日聚會 2. 生日禮物 3. 生日祝福（二）我認為更有意義的

25、慶祝方式和理由詞數(shù)：100-12021二、高考范文Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or

26、a cake to show their love for their children. Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in ones life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents i

27、n return for their love. (105 words)22三、考場優(yōu)秀作文In China, the most common way to celebrate a birthday is to hold a birthday party. The birthday person usually invites some classmates and other relatives to the party in which his family members and friends will get together and have a good time. A big

28、cake with candles on it is often seen and the birthday song is sung on the occasion. People who are invited will bring gifts as well as their bet wishes.However, I think there is another way to make a birthday celebration more meaningful, to do a good deed for mothers. We can help them cooking or cl

29、eaning. Although this wont help them much, we at least show our love for them. (119 words)23四、教師范文In China birthday parties are important social gatherings where friends and relatives would bring gifts to the child having their birthday. Birthday cards with warm words of good wishes are often sent.

30、A feast is usually given to the guests and noodles, extra-long to symbolize long life, are served in honor of the birthday child. Although these traditions have been practiced for generations, people can create birthday traditions of their own, which I think should focus on thanksgiving rather than

31、consumption. Children should set aside some time thinking what they are thankful for and what they can do in return. One alternative is to help wash the dishes at night or do other chores for their mothers because it is their mothers birth day. (124 words)24五、可用于本題的一些好句子Birthday parties are always a

32、mong the highlights of each year for Chinese students.A lot of people are invited including neighbors, friends and co-workers even if they dont have kids around the birthday childs age.Adults congratulate children on becoming a year older by presenting them with red envelopes that contain Lucky Mone

33、y. 25When boys or girls turn 10, they have a huge party. On the day we have a family dinner with lots of invited guests. It does not seem like a birthday without noodles.The celebration includes noodles representing long life.The birthday child wears entirely new clothes to mark the occasion.One of

34、the best-received gifts is the red envelope of money.Like British students, the majority of Chinese children celebrate birthdays with a cake topped with lighted candles. When the cake is set before the guest of honor, he or she is supposed to make a wish, without telling anyone what it is. 26A cake

35、is made, and candles are put on top based on how old the person is. At the end of the happy birthday song, the birthday person blows out the candles and all guests applaud or cheer. The birthday child can choose where to eat out that night.The kids are taken out to their desired place where they can

36、 buy anything they want within a certain price range. I think we should create our own traditions, making birthday celebration more special and unique. The birthday person gets presents but also must give one present to the entire family.We can visit the hospital where we were born.Instead of giving

37、 money as a gift, parents can buy their children books.Each year a different theme should be chosen for the birthday.27六、評價與指導1. 英語書面表達的題型從過去詳細的中文提綱，慢慢演化為簡潔的圖畫列表，到今天某一話題下的自由表達，走過了20多年的道路。本年度的書面表達半開放的命題方式，既是對新課程理念的響應，也是20多年探索的最新選擇，應該說這一步并非是試探或偶然，而是走得非常堅決。282開放或半開放的作文模式，寫作容易落入俗套，因此這種題型要挑戰(zhàn)我們過去英語作文只關注語言

38、表達的狹隘思維，轉而更多地去關注新的主意甚至是立意?！敖處煼段摹敝械腷ecause it is their mothers birth day一句，就是很好的“主意（理由）”，是尋常作文中不易發(fā)現(xiàn)的亮點。如果能夠提出新鮮的主意，如We can visit the hospital where we were born等，相信可以贏得更多的贊賞分。然而新鮮的主意，并非能天上掉得下來，而是要仰仗大量的閱讀和輸入。越開放的作文題目，越要求平時有大量的閱讀經(jīng)歷。課堂上積極回應教師的brainstorming、mind map等任務，認真傾聽同學發(fā)言也不無裨益。293. 開放或半開放的作文模式，題干通常

39、比較簡潔，因此要更加注意審題。在本例中，同學們比較容易忽略“更有意義”、“理由”等信息。忽略前者，容易導致思想內(nèi)容不夠積極。比如有同學說：We can play tricks on the birthday person，或者：kissing is the best way because it doesnt cost much，就有調侃的意味，不夠恰當。忽略后者，容易導致文章內(nèi)容不夠充實，比如有同學說We should say thanks to our parents and give them presents instead，接著就嘎然而止，缺乏了細致性和豐富性。3006年浙江卷英語書

40、面表達一 題目當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇電影，有人喜歡讀原著。請你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：看電影：省時、有趣、易懂讀原著：細節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美我的看法及理由注意：1.詞數(shù)100-120，文章題目和開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。 2. 參考詞匯：original work或book in the original（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to r

41、ead the book in the original.31二 高考范文 Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to f

42、ollow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reason for it. I think I can stay at

43、home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.32三 考場優(yōu)秀作文 Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to r

44、ead the book in the original. Compared with reading the original work, they think, seeing the film requires less time, which no doubt is an outstanding advantage in this crazily rounding society. Seeing the film is also much more fun and helps understanding. Others, however, prefer reading the origi

45、nal work. Thats because the work has more details of the story. Also, the beautiful language in the work has great appeal for the readers. I prefer reading the original work. In my opinion, books lead us to think, while seeing the film makes us lazy. Besides, reading the original work can also impro

46、ve our reading skills.33四 教師范文 Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. In their opinion, the film is much more interesting and easier to understand than the book. Whats more, to see the film saves us much time to kn

47、ow about the whole story. Howerver, some others hold a different view. They think that they can get much more details of the story from the original work. Meanwhile, the beautiful language in the book is also a great feast for their mind. As for me, I prefer to see the film. Thats because I like to

48、see the carefully designed scenes of the story. Besides, I can enjoy some beautiful music at the same time, which is especially important to a music lover like me!34五 可用于本文的一些好句子The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Thats because we can more easily understand the story

49、through the film.Some others hold a different view. Some others dont share the same opinion.Personally, I agree with the second view.As for me, I would rather read the original book than see the film.In my opinion, reading the original book is much better than seeing the film.35I can stay at home, r

50、eading quietly in a situation of my own.I will be able to see the carefully designed scenes as well as to enjoy some beautiful music.The original work tells more detailed information of the story and is well written in beautiful language.Whats more, I will be able to better understand the authors id

51、eas.In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.I think to see the film has many more advantages over to read the book in the original.36六 評價與指導1. 06年書面表達延續(xù)了05年的半開放的模式，但在表達的形式上還是有跡可循的。作文的內(nèi)容是關于看書還是看電影的兩種不同意見的對比以及作者的看法和理由，這一形式的書面表達在前些年的高考中曾多次出現(xiàn)。因此，文章可以分成三個段落，脈絡十分清晰，

52、便于學生的組織。372. 本例書面表達的題干也延續(xù)了05年的特點，語言簡潔。所以審題環(huán)節(jié)至關重要。平時應引導學生學會在簡潔的語言中捕捉隱含的信息，以進行合乎英語習慣的表達。如若不然，則很容易出現(xiàn)錯誤。如有學生的文章中出現(xiàn)有Film requires less time的句子，就是沒有分清被比較的是看書和看電影。也正是因為題干簡潔，文章很容易被寫得過于簡單而沒有文采，進而不能達到所要求的字數(shù)。如第一部分就有學生寫成了Seeing film saves time , and is very interesting and easy understanding.這需要平時的用心體會和練習。383.段

53、落間和段落中的銜接過渡在這種形式的文章中顯得比較重要。而很多學生在一些具有關聯(lián)意義的詞匯的選擇上存在困難。如有學生將while錯用為副詞，將第二部分的開頭表達成While some others prefer reading the original work。也有學生在第一部分中用above all來表示看電影的第一個優(yōu)點Above all, seeing the film saves much time。39一、故事或人物介紹 第二章 美國學生習作賞析40My Mum My mum is 36 and she goes to adultschool. She works at home b

54、y cleaning, cooking ect. Her full name is Robyn Tracie Ball. She has brown hair and brown eyes, and she usually wears shorts and a t-shirt unless we are going out, then she wears either a dress or a skirt and blouse. Her personality is nice, she is kind to everyone and only yells if she has too. She

55、 is generous and often uses up her spair time with me or other family members. Mum never puts herself first, she always puts others in front of her, when they need her help or are sick or generally need her time. If she had to go to school when either David (my brother) or Im sick she always misses

56、school and takes care of us. Another way she puts others first is in money. Mum usually buys me or David clothes or shoes instead of buying herself things. She hardly ever buys herself new clothes or shoes unless theyre desperately needed. Overall I think Mum is a great person!, and I love her very

57、much!41二、事件 1 TerrorismOne Tuesday, I woke up, got dressed and had my breakfast. I went to school, thinking it would be just another boring day, but I saw that the classes were not lined up. Everyone was crowded inside. Why? Did you hear the news? Dani, my friend, asked. What news? I responded. Abou

58、t the World Trade Center. I did not know what the World Trade Center was, and I am still not too familiar with it. I tried acting as if I knew what he was talking about. What happened? I asked. It got bombed, said Dani. Isnt it sad? Yeah, I said, still not knowing what he was talking about. When the

59、 bell rang everybody went into the library. The principal talked to the classes about the attacks. Then everybody went to their normal class. Mine was P.E. Before I knew it, school was canceled for the rest of the day. I was pretty sad when I got to know more about the news. But I didnt understand w

60、hy my school closed. I thought that school was a safe place to be. (182 words) 42三、地點或情況介紹 1Mall of AmericaWhen we arrived in Blaine, we headed straight to Mall of America. It was the biggest mall I have ever seen in my life. It must be twenty times the size of Oak View, I thought! We were really hi