1、雅思英語 寫作篇PPT 編寫：胡宇斌CMA Training Centre 圖表題 寫作WSkills RITING溫故知新圖表5種類型表格 Table線圖(直線/曲線) Line graph柱狀圖(條形圖) Bar chart餅圖 Pie chart流程圖 Process diagram Learn the new while reviewing the old 線圖 寫作WSkills RITING第 三 講線圖主體段寫作要點 理解主題,比較差異; 看清趨勢,找出極點; 若有交叉,點出說明。 P226 例題12 注： （可寫的地方。） 圖表中最高點和最低點都要單獨說明。 曲線的連續(xù)變化需要

2、說明。 對圖表中多條曲線的交叉點進行對比。 考題多為雙曲線和三曲線（ The graph compares） 對單曲線的準確描寫是基礎（The graph shows） 復習WSkills riting1、主體段表示時間推移的短語有哪些？問題： 表示時間推移的短語（熟記）：At first, (=initially)Then,After that,From this point onwards,Finally (=eventually)（不要老是使用 at 6 oclock, at 8 oclock來開始一個句子。)復習WSkills riting2、主體段表示趨勢的動詞有哪些？ 上升-下降-

3、不變-波動(見 P215, P218 趨勢圖）問題： 表示趨勢的短語-動詞（熟記）：數(shù)字趨勢動詞1.上升趨勢: rise, go up, 2.下降趨勢: fall, sink, drop, dip, reduce, go down3.保持不變: remain steady, show no/little change4.波動: fluctuate趨勢動詞替換1.上升趨勢: increase, grow, climb, ascend ( jump, surge, soar, shoot up ) 2.下降趨勢: decline, decrease, descend ( plunge, slump

4、)3.保持不變: level off/out at, hover at, stabilize at, reach a plateau at復習WSkills riting3、主體段表示趨勢的形容詞/副詞有哪些？ 速度快-速度慢-幅度大-幅度小問題： 表示趨勢的短語-形容詞（熟記）：1.速度快: sharp, rapid, dramatic, drastic2.速度慢: gradual, slow, steady, gentle3.幅度大: significant, substantial, marked4.幅度小: slight, modest, moderate注意: 以上加 ly 均為副詞

5、。 表示分別的副詞是 respectively。復習WSkills riting4、主體段表示趨勢的其他動詞有哪些？最高點-最低點-達到多少-占多少-預測多少 -問題： 表示趨勢的短語-其它（熟記）：1.最高點: peak at, reach the highest point at, 2.最低點: bottom out at, reach the bottom at, the lowest point at3.達到多少（量）: reach, arrive at, amount to, hit, stand at4.預測（會有）多少: predict, expect, forecast 句型為

6、： A is predicted/ expected/forecasted to reach線圖主體段寫作 認真閱讀P226主體段范文。 總結表示升降、平穩(wěn)、波動以及最高點和最低點的句型。 注意數(shù)據(jù)的表達，放置的位置。回顧使用過的句型描述上升 The period between 10 oclock and 12 oclock saw a slight growth in the number of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday. The next two hours experiences/ wit

7、nesses/ saw a sharp rise again, with 6 pm arriving at 380 people. ( 在哪段時間。）回顧使用過的句型描述下降 From this point onwards, the number plunges to only 100 from 2 pm to 4 pm. After 6 pm, the number falls again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8 pm. ( 從哪兒/何時起。）回顧使用過的句型描述不變 At first at 6 am the number of peop

8、le at the station stands at only 100. Numbers in the following two hours level off at just under 300 people. 站上哪點。 在哪個時間段保持不變?；仡櫴褂眠^的句型描述波動 As we can see from the line graph, the number of people using this station fluctuates over these 16 hours. The period from 8 pm to 10 pm sees a slight rise, but

9、finally the number of people declines again from 180 at 9 pm to 135 at 10 pm.回顧使用過的句型描述最高點 Then, the number shoots up over the next two hours, peaking at 400 at 8 am. The next two hours experiences a sharp rise again, with 6 pm arriving at 380 people.回顧使用過的句型描述最低點 After that, the number declines rap

10、idly for two hours, bottoming out at 180 at 10 am. From this point onwards, the number plunges to only 100 from 2 pm to 4 pm. After 6 pm, the number falls again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8 pm.line chart/curve diagram 主體段模版:The line chart compares the rate of _. It can be clearly seen that

11、 _. Male smokers . In contrast, female smokers . To conclude, we can see that_. A comparison of shows that while . A comparative study of shows that while .引用數(shù)據(jù)方法WSkills RITING句子寫作鞏固你知道嗎？WSkills riting圖表主體段寫作，第一句話是主題句，支持句介紹數(shù)據(jù)時要詳盡。請看例句： 圖表引用數(shù)據(jù)句型：1. The number picked up in June, rocketing by almost 50

12、0% .2. There was a marked improvement in July with the number of visitors surging 400% .3. The period between May and September saw a steady growth in the number of visitors from 70,000 to 140,000 .4. The gradual rise in visitor numbers from 30,000 to approximately 45,000 in the first four months wa

13、s followed by a sharper increase in May.如何統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)WSkills ritingThere 表達-1：從早上6點到8點看電視的人數(shù)有個小小的增長,由3%到7%。如何統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)WSkills ritingThere was a slight rise in the number of TV audiences from about 3% at 6:00 am to about 7% at 8 am.表達-1：從早上6點到8點看電視的人數(shù)有個小小的增長,由3%到7%。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingThe percentage 表達-2：百分率一直大幅

14、下滑，到早上8點最低降到約45%。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingThe percentage declined substantially until 8:00 am, bottoming out at about 45%.表達-2：百分率一直大幅下滑，到早上8點最低降到約45%。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingThe next .表達-3：接下來的兩個小時，數(shù)字又巨幅攀升，中午時分最高達到280。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingThe next two hours witnessed a dramatic rise in the number again, with

15、 the number reaching 280 at midday.表達-3：接下來的兩個小時，數(shù)字又巨幅攀升，中午時分最高達到280。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingHowever, .表達-4：然而在一天其他的時間，聽收音機的百分比要比看電視的百分比低很多。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingHowever, for the rest of the day, the percentage of radio was much lower than that of TV.表達-4：然而在一天其他的時間，聽收音機的百分比要比看電視的百分比低很多。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills riti

16、ngThe price .表達-5：價格在1994年急劇下挫，不過很快恢復到了原來水平，最后沖上新的高點。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingThe price plunged dramatically in 1994, but then it regained its previous level, before soaring to a new peak.表達-5：價格在1994年急劇下挫，不過很快恢復到了原來水平，最后沖上新的高點。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingIn spite of .表達-6：盡管價格波動很大，但趨勢明顯向上。統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù)句型WSkills ritingIn

17、 spite of the sharp fluctuations in the price, the trend was obviously upwards.表達-6：盡管價格波動很大，但趨勢明顯向上。 線圖主體段練習P222 例題9 圖一 怎樣改寫首段?The graph shows how the amount of water used world wide changed between 1900 to 2000.本題如果是一個圖：主體段可以寫三段（一個元素寫一段），也可寫兩段（類似的合起來寫）。如有兩個圖，本圖就只寫一段，如下： 參考范文： Throughout the centur

18、y, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes, and this increased dramatically from about 500 km3 to around 3,000 km3 in the year 2000.（介紹農(nóng)業(yè)用水情況-最高值）Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. （工業(yè)和家庭用水情況-相似值）

19、From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1,000 km3, while domestic use rose more slowly to only 800 km3, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture. （工業(yè)和家庭,與農(nóng)業(yè)相比較） 線圖主體段課后練習P221 例題8 怎樣改寫首段? （見 P221) ( 先口頭用漢語描述。） 1、寫幾段？ 2、怎么寫？原文-開首段WSkills riting【修改】The three curves g

20、iven in the line graph show us the percentage of the aged people 65 and above in Japan, Sweden and USA from 1940 to 2040. These curves indicate us the percentage of the people above 65 in some countries during the period from 1940 to 2040. We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.原

21、文 主體段-1WSkills ritingThe proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9% to 10%), after which there is a sudden rise to 15% in 1980s. After that, the percentage began to fall gradually until 2020, the number at that time is estimately 14%. The next seve

22、ral years will see a increase to about 17%, and then rocket to 23% in the last 10 years.修改 主體段-1WSkills ritingThe proportion of aged population in USA increased slowly from 1940 to 1960 (from 9% to 10%). Then there was a sudden rise to 15% in 1980. After that, the percentage began to fall gradually

23、until 2020（14%）. The next 20 years can be seen a drastic increase, rocketing to 23% in the year 2040.原文 主體段-2WSkills ritingThe trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA, it (代什么？串句。) began at 7% in 1940, a bit less than that of USA, and increased to 9% until 1962. Then, just like the change of USA,

24、the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15% in 1980s. Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until 2010 and reach 20%,(有嗎？看錯圖啦！) which is much higher than the USA at same time. (不準確) In the last 10 years, elder Swedes increa

25、sed rapidly after a 10 year decline, (看錯圖啦！)and will (主語是啥？)peak at 26%.修改 主體段-2WSkills ritingThe trend of Sweden，at first，is similar to that of USA. With its starting percentage at 7% in 1940, a bit less than that of USA, it increased to 14% in 1980. Then, unlike the downward trend of USA, the Swed

26、en proportion continued to climb, until it reached 15% in 2000 and 17% in 2020. Afterwards, the Sweden curve soared, peaking at 24% in 2040.原文 主體段-3WSkills ritingJapanese saw a consistant（堅實的；可靠的) decrease form 5% in 1940 to 3% in 1960, and kept this level for 25 years. (如何算的？) Then began to rise gr

27、adually to 10% until 2030 (不確切) prospectively (adv.可能；潛在；預期). A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years (？) which will lead the percentage to 25%. Finally, the proportion of Japanese will end at (？) 27% in 2040. (畫不出圖來。)修改 主體段-3WSkills ritingJapan curve saw a slight decrease form 5% in

28、1940 to 3% in 1960, and remained stable until 1980. Then, the proportion began to pick up, reaching 5% in 2000, and 8% in 2020. After that, there is a dramatic rise in the next 20 years, leading the percentage to 27% in 2040. ( 能出畫圖。)參考： This chart illustrates the percentage of elder people aged 65

29、and more in three countries, namely Japan, Sweden and USA from a period of 100 years (1940- 2040). It indicates that by 2040, the senior will reach to approximately 20-28% in all these three countries.In 1940, the percentage of the senior people aged 65 or more stood at 5% in Japan,7% in Sweden and

30、9% in USA, respectively. Both the proportion of the aged population in the western countries increased (Sweden from 6% to 14%, and USA from 9% to15%) after 40 years, while that in Japan decreased ( from 5% to 3% ). However, the USA proportion, unlike that of Sweden, which kept consistent upward clim

31、b to 24%, showed a downward trend afterwards, and remained this trend until 2020 before it surged to 21% in 2040. As for Japan, it had a slight increase, regaining its 5% in 2000, and jumping to 8% in 2020, and finally rocketing to 28% in 2040.Its predicted that the percentage of population aged 65

32、and over in all these three countries will ascend dramatically after the year 2020, especially in 2030 and 2040. And the proportion of Japan will climb straightly from 8% to 25% in 20 years between 2020 and 2040.參考： These curves indicate us the percentage of the people above 65 in some countries dur

33、ing the period from 1940 to 2040. We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.The proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9% to 10%), after which there is a sudden rise to 15% in 1980s. After that, the percentage began to fall gradua

34、lly until 2020, the number at that time is estimately 14%. The next several years will see a increase to about 17%, and then rocket to 23% in the last 10 years.The trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA, it began at 7% in 1940, a bit less than that of USA, and increased to 9% until 1962. Then, ju

35、st like the change of USA, the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15% in 1980s. Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until 2010 and reach 20%, which is much higher than the USA at same time. In the last 10 years, elder Sw

36、edes increased rapidly after a 10 year decline, and will peak at 26%.Japanese saw a consistant decrease form 5% in 1940 to 3% in 1960, and kept this level for 25 years. Then began to rise gradually to 10% until 2030 prospectively. A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years which will lea

37、d the percentage to 25%. Finally, the proportion of Japanese will end at 27% in 2040.To a sum, all the 3 countries keep the up rising trend ganerally. But the proportion of Japanese will take the lead finally, though it began with a very low level. After all, these These curves indicate us the perce

38、ntage of the people above 65 in some countries during the period from 1940 to 2040. We can draw some conclusions from certain evident patterns.The proportion of population aged above 65 in USA were increasing slowly from 1940 to 1962(from 9% to 10%), after which there is a sudden rise to 15% in 1980

39、s. After that, the percentage began to fall gradually until 2020, the number at that time is estimately 14%. The next several years will see a increase to about 17%, and then rocket to 23% in the last 10 years.The trend in Sweden is similar to that of USA, it began at 7% in 1940, a bit less than tha

40、t of USA, and increased to 9% until 1962. Then, just like the change of USA, the proportion climbed more fast and plateaued at 15% in 1980s. Yes theres a little difference from the States that the curve sores after a short period gradual decline until 2010 and reach 20%, which is much higher than th

41、e USA at same time. In the last 10 years, elder Swedes increased rapidly after a 10 year decline, and will peak at 26%.Japanese saw a consistant decrease form 5% in 1940 to 3% in 1960, and kept this level for 25 years. Then began to rise gradually to 10% until 2030 prospectively. A dramatically rising will be seen in the next 2 years which will lead the percentage to 25%. Finally, the proportion of Japanese will end at 27% in 2040.To a sum, all the 3 countries keep the up rising trend ganerally. But the proportion of Japanese will take the lead finally, though