1、2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltestingPPT教學(xué)課件2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesti第一段Antibiotics, insulin, organ transplantation, HIV treatments and heart-bypass surgeriesit reads like an A to Z of medical progress. But the major progress has something in common: they were all developed and tested by using anima

2、ls. Actually, animals are used for research in a variety of settings. Whether or not humans should use animals for testing purposes, however, is a controversial topic.1. 主題句？2. 主題句能不能引領(lǐng)全文？概要寫作要有一句話統(tǒng)領(lǐng)全文！3. 類似的段落以前概要寫作遇到過嗎？第一段Antibiotics, insulin, organEverybody has different opinions about punishing

3、children.1. People hold various views towards punishing children.(同義替換)2. 語料庫積累Opinions/views on sth are divided.Opinions/views on sth differ among people.Opinions/views on sth vary from person to personMixed opinions/views exist on.得出：Opinions on punishing children vary from person to person.Everyb

4、ody has different opinio類似2概要寫作：Psychological Experiments in Animals Despite the value of research with animal participants, the use of animals in psychological research is highly controversial. For example, some critics believe that animals have rights no less significant than those of humans, and

5、that because animals are unable to agree to participation in studies, their use is not moral. Others object to the use of animals on methodological (方法論的) grounds, saying it is impossible to generalize from finding on nonhuman species to humans.要點(diǎn)：The use of animals in psychological experiments has

6、caused a lot of discussion and disagreement in the public.類似2概要寫作：Psychological Experim類似3浙江新高考考試說明概要寫作Getting rid of dirt, inthe opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.要點(diǎn)：1. People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.2. People hold

7、different views towards dirt on our skin.（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）類似3浙江新高考考試說明概要寫作Getting rid由以上三個例子可得本段要點(diǎn)可以表達(dá)為Opinions on the use of animals in testing purposes are divided.或 Whether animals should be used for testing purposes c

8、auses a lot of discussion.或People hold different views towards the use of animals in testing purposes.類似的要點(diǎn)句還可以這樣改寫：1. It is controversial whether animals should be used for testing purposes.2. Different arguments arise about whether animals should be used for testing purposes.由以上三個例子可得本段要點(diǎn)可以表達(dá)為Opin

9、ions on 第二段Animal testing allows researchers to develop new medicine and treatments, advancing the field of medicine and improving the health of society. For example, many drugs used to treat or prevent cancer, HIV, diabetes, etc, have resulted from tests performed on animals. Many advocators of ani

10、mal testing support the practice for this reason, even if they do not support testing, cosmetics or other non-essential substances on animals. No one chooses to use animals where there in no need. In fact, animal research has contributed to 70 percent of Nobel prizes for physiology or medicine.1. 有沒

11、有主題句？2. 主題句后面的For example 需要概括嗎？ examples and details 大膽舍去！（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）第二段Animal testing allows resea由此可得本段要點(diǎn)Animal testing causes the medical development and the improvement of humans health.（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫

12、作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）由此可得本段要點(diǎn)Animal testing causes所以要點(diǎn)句可以改寫為1. Animal testing contributes a great deal to the medical development and the improvement of humans health.2. Animal testing is the contributing factor why medicine develops and humans heal

13、th improves a lot.3. On account of animal testing, new medicine is developed and humans health condition is promoted.4. Animal testing makes it possible to develop new medicine and promote humans health.（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）所

14、以要點(diǎn)句可以改寫為1. Animal testing co第三段Animal testing also enables scientists and researchers to test the safety of medicine and other substances with which humans have regular contact. Drugs, for example, may create significant risks to humans, so testing themon animals first gives researchers a chance to

15、 determine their safety before human trials are performed. While scientists understand the differences between humans and animals, the similarities are considered significant enough to produce relevant data that they can then apply to humans. This, animal testing reduces harm to humans and saves liv

16、es, not only because the exposure to risky substances is minimized, but because some new medicine and treatments have positive effects on humans overall quality of life.1. 開頭第一句是不是要點(diǎn)句？能不能概括整段內(nèi)容？2. 本段的要點(diǎn)句是哪一句？3. 最后一句話這么長，如何縮寫？ 用介詞短語替換從句的形式，可以縮短句子。（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）

17、2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）第三段Animal testing also enables由此可得要點(diǎn)句Animal testing reduces harm to humans and saves lives by minimizing the exposure to risky substances and using some new medicine改寫要點(diǎn)句1. Animal testing lessens harm to humans and even saves lives by reducing the risk of us

18、ing medicine and other substances.2. Animal testing lessens harm to humans and even protects humans lives by lowering the risk of using medicine and other substances.3. Animal testing lessens harm to humans and even protects humans lives by ridding people of the risk of using medicine and other subs

19、tances.（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）由此可得要點(diǎn)句Animal testing reduces 第四段However, a significant number of animals are harmed or die as a result of experiments and testing. Unfortunately, many of the substances used on animal subjects nev

20、er receive approval for human use or consumption. Those who oppose animal testing consider this a very important point, because saving humans from suffering is no excuse for the death of laboratory animals. 1. 有沒有要點(diǎn)句？2. 由never receive approval 與 oppose可知，另一要點(diǎn)元素為“oppose animal testing”3. 將以上要點(diǎn)元素整合成要點(diǎn)

21、句。（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）第四段However, a significant numb由此可得要點(diǎn)句Some people oppose animal testing because a significant number of animals are harmed or die as a result of experiments and testing.需要restate的語言有oppose：a significant

22、number of：harm or die：as a result of：（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）由此可得要點(diǎn)句Some people oppose anioppose：復(fù)習(xí)觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度類語料庫（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）oppose：復(fù)習(xí)觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度類語料庫（教學(xué)提綱）20

23、21屆高考a significant number of：a large number of；a large quantity of；a great many；an enormous number ofharm or die：cause harm to; be harmful to；cause death; as a result of：becasue of; due to; on account of; as a consequence of （教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作an

24、imaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）a significant number of：（教學(xué)提綱）因此要點(diǎn)句可以改寫成Some people are against animal testing because it causes harm even death to an enormous number of animals due to experiments and testing.或Some people are opposed to animal testing because experiments and testing cause harm even death to a large quantity of animals.（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）（教學(xué)提綱）2021屆高考英語高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)概要寫作animaltesting獲獎?wù)n件（免費(fèi)下載）因此要點(diǎn)句可以改寫成Some people are agai文章結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：Topic sentence連接詞：Obviously; First of all;第二段：one benefit of animal testing連接詞：in addition;