1、一輪復習改錯題型訓練（二）1短文改錯Last weekend, our classmates accompanied by our English teacher go to visit the West Hill Park. That was the fine day, which made us relaxing. When we arrived at the park in the morning, our teachers asked us to appreciate the beautiful scenery. We noticed that some leaves had turn

2、ed yellow and that some still remained in green. The whole park looked just as a great painting. Some students began to take photos in order keep the moment for ever. We walked, sang some songs and laughed happy. We always lose ourselves in studying, forget to eye the beauty of nature in person. I d

3、o wish that their school could organize more activities like this in the future.2短文改錯Dear Eric,My school is holding an activity to help a school in the poor area, which not only help the students there enrich their lives but also enables us to feel the joy of sharing and appreciate it what we have b

4、y helping others. Here is that we can do. First, we can donate our using books, clothes, basketballs, electronic products and so on to them. Second, we can write letters to them regular to share opinions and make friend with them. In addition, invite them to our homes to spend holidays is a good way

5、, where may give them some unforgettable experiences. You are all welcome to join in the activity do what you can to make the better world for us all!Yours,Li Hua3短文改錯Hi, Jane, It had been almost half a year since I came to my new school. I think I should share with you one of the problem I have bee

6、n facing. As I told you last time, I have made three good friends here. We usual hang out together after school. Weve been spending a lot of time singing in KTV. It has really cost me too many money. I also think it is a time-wasting activity! In fact, I dont want go anymore, but Im afraid Ill loss

7、the friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to us? Please help with me and give me some advice. Yours, Grace 4短文改錯It was quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, reading the Sunday newspaper and expected a couple of hours of peace. Then I hear a loud knock

8、 on the door. I saw about twelve lady wearing their Sunday clothes. She said, “Well, we hoped we were not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady said, “Well, your husband is very kind to invite us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must be mad.” I asked for them to come into the

9、house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they could have gone to the house on the another side of the street. 5 短文改錯As we all know, the father of hybrid riceYuan Longping cultivated hybrid rice and fed millions of people all over

10、 world. He was one of the greatest scientist in China. Unluckily, he pass away at the age of 91, on May 22,2021. His dream was that he could enjoy the shade on the hybrid rice. However, her dream will always inspire many people. There is no doubt that dream is very much important. As for myself, I w

11、ould like to become a usefully person like Yuan Longping which did valuable contribution. What I can do is that I will study hardly and learn lots of knowledge. I hope I can achieve my dream one day but I will never give up my dream no matter how difficult it is.6短文改錯Dear Bob,I studied in your schoo

12、l for six month a couple of years ago. Im very grateful to your help during my study in the US. Without your help, my English couldnt have improved so rapid and I couldnt have been enjoyed my life there so much. Do you know why everything is going with Mr Smith? I failed to get in touch with him aft

13、er I leave America. Ill be very thankful if you can offer me his e-mail address.I remember that you are very interesting in Chinese culture. Im very glad to invite you to China during the Spring Festival enjoy our culture. Im sure it will be a unforgettable trip. Ill be happy if you can accept my in

14、vitation.Im looking forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li Hua答案：1Last weekend, our classmates accompanied by our English teacher gowent to visit the West Hill Park. That was thea fine day, which made us relaxingrelaxed. When we arrived at the park in the morning, our teachersteacher asked us to app

15、reciate the beautiful scenery. We noticed that some leaves had turned yellow and that some still remained in green. The whole park looked just aslike a great painting. Some students began to take photos in order to keep the moment for ever. We walked, sang some songs and laughed happy2Dear Eric,My s

16、chool is holding an activity to help a school in the poor area, which not only helphelpsHere is thatwhat we can do. First, we can donate our usingused books, clothes, basketballs, electronic products and so on to them. Second, we can write letters to them regularregularly to share opinions and make

17、friendfriends with them. In addition, You are all welcome to join in the activity to do what you can to make theaYours,Li Hua3Hi, Jane, It hadhas been almost half a year since I came to my new school. I think I should share with you one of the problemAs I told you last time, I have made three good f

18、riends here. We usualusually hang out together after school. Weve been spending a lot of time singing in KTV. It has really cost me too manymuch money. I also think it is a time-wasting activity! In fact, I dont want to go anymore, but Im afraid Ill losslose the friendship. HowWhat do you think I sh

19、ould do? If you Please help with me and give me some advice. Yours, Grace4It was a quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, reading the Sunday newspaper and expectedexpecting a couple of hours of peace. Then I hearheard a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladyladies wearing thei

20、r Sunday clothes. SheThey said, “Well, we hoped we were not late, sobut it is not easy to find your house.”O(jiān)ne lady said, “Well, your husband is very kind to invite us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must be mad.” I asked for them to come into the house and they sat down and started talking

21、happy5As we all know, the father of hybrid riceYuan Longping cultivated hybrid rice and fed millions of people all over the world. He was one of the greatest scientistscientists in China. Unluckily, he passpassed away at the age of 91, on May 22,2021. His dream was that he could enjoy the shade onunder the hybrid rice. However, herhis dream will always inspire many people. There is no doubt that drea