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雅思考試寫作總 Task2——議..........................................................................................................................Task2題型介 Task2評(píng)分標(biāo) Task2寫作步 同意與否題 題目分析+構(gòu) 范文解 典型結(jié) 開頭段寫 主體段寫 主體段拓 結(jié)尾段寫 雙方題 題目分析+構(gòu) 范文解 典型結(jié) 駁斥反方觀 己方觀點(diǎn)論 利弊比較題 題目分析+典型結(jié) 原因方案題 題目分析+構(gòu) 范文解析+典型結(jié) 開頭段寫 原因分 解決方案+結(jié)尾段寫 Task1圖表作 Task1圖表類 Task1寫作要 Task1寫作步 Task1評(píng)分標(biāo) 如何根據(jù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)寫 餅狀 餅狀 多個(gè)餅狀 柱狀 柱狀圖(1)圖形分 柱狀圖(1)寫作分 柱狀圖(2)圖形分 柱狀圖(2)寫作分 表格 表格圖圖形分 表格圖寫作分 流程 流程圖圖形分 流程圖寫作分 地圖 地圖題圖形分 地圖題寫作分 雅思考試寫作總Task2——議Task2Thereisatendencythatnewsreportsinthemediafocusonproblemsandemergenciesratherthanpositivedevelopments,whichisharmfultotheindividualandtosociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor ernmentsshouldgivefinancialsupporttoartprojectssuchastheatersandmuseums,whileotherssuggestthatthemoneyshouldbespentonhealthcareandeducation.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownInthefuture,therewillbeahigherproportionofelderlypeoplethanyoungerpeopleinmanyDoyouthinktheadvantagesoutweightheInmostcitiesandtowns,thehighvolumesofroadtraffichave eaproblem.Whatarethecausesofthatand tionscouldbetakentosolvethisTask2評(píng)分標(biāo)TaskCoherenceand7Addressesallpartsofthe throughouttheresponsePresents,extendsandsupportsmainideas informationandideasUsesarangeofcohesivedevicesappropriayPresentsaclearcentraltopicwithineachparagraphLexicalandAccuracy7UsesasufficientrangeofvocabularytoallowsomeflexibilityandprecisionUseslesscommonlexicalitemswithsomeawarenessofstyleandcollocationOccasionalUsesavarietyofcomplexProducesfrequenterror-freeHasgoodcontrolofgrammarandpunctuationTask2勾雙方構(gòu)確定結(jié)題目分析(1)Thereisatendencythatnewsreportsinthemediafocusonproblemsandemergenciesratherthanpositivedevelopment,whichisharmfultotheindividualandtosociety.Towhatextentdoyouagreeor (2012-04-14雙方構(gòu) 社會(huì)問題/緊急情況有害引起對(duì)社會(huì)發(fā)展失去 社會(huì)問題/緊急情況有益發(fā)現(xiàn)問題才能范文賞TrafficandhousingproblemsinmajorcitieswouldbesolvedbymovingbigfactoriesandtheiremployeestotheDoyouagreeorInmajorcities,problemswithtransportationandlivingconditionsareproblemsmostpeoplehavetofaceeveryday.Somepeopleholdthattheprincipalreasonfortheseproblemslieswiththebigcompaniesandfactorieslocatedinthecityproper.Theybelievethatthesecompanies,factoriesandeventheiremployeesshouldbemovedtothecountryside.Thisisnotasatisfactorysolution,Likeanyoneelse,peopleengagedbybigcompaniesandfactoriesdocausesometrafficjamsiftheydrivecarsontheirwaytoandfromwork,andsomeofthemalsohavedifficultyfindinganidealhousetodwellin.Greatasthenumberofsuchemployeesis,theyonlyconstituteasmallproportionoftheentirepopulation,whichconsistsofmorepeoplelivinginthecitiesandworkinginothersectors,suchassmallfirmsandschools.Inconsequence,movingthoseinbigcompaniesandfactoriestothecountrysidemayeasethetransportationandlivingconditionstoacertainextent,butitwillnotleadtoaradicalchangeofthealready-existingsituation.Moreover,therealcauseoftrafficandhousingproblemsisthattheinfrastructureatthemomentcannotmeetthedemandoftherapiddevelopmentofthecities.Movingcompaniesandemployeesoutonlybringsaboutatemporarysolution,butdoesnotaffectalong-lastingcure.Policiesshouldbemadetoallowmoreroads,overpasses,andskyscrrstobebuiltsoasto modatetheincreasingnumberofautomobilesandcitizens.Inconclusion,actionstoimplementtheimprovementofthecurrenttrafficandhousingproblemsshouldawaittheparticipationofernments,bigandsmallcompaniesandfactories,andpeoplefromallwalksofliferatherthanthatofasmallproportionof同意與否題題目分析+構(gòu)題目分ernmentsshouldgivefinancialsupporttoartprojectssuchastheatersandmuseums,whileotherssuggestthatthemoneyshouldbespentonhealthcareandeducation.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.(2012-05-雙方構(gòu)Supportart有助于文化和思想的Supporthealthcareand人們最基本的需范文解Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownAsaresultofconstantmediaattention,sportsprofessionalsinmycountryhaveestarsandcelebrities,andthoseatthetoparepaidhugesalaries.Justlikestars,theyliveextravagantlifestyleswithhugehousesandManypeoplefindtheirrewardsunfair,especiallywhencomparingthesesupersalarieswiththoseoftopsurgeonsorresearchscientists,orevenleadingpoliticianswhohavetheresponsibilityoferningthecountry.However,sportssalariesarenotdeterminedbyconsideringthecontributiontosocietya makes,orthelevelofresponsibilityheorsheholds.Instead,theyreflectthepublicpopularityofsportingeneralandthelevelofpublicsupportthatsuccessfulstarscangenerate.Sothenotionof‘fairness’isnottheissue.Thosewhofeelthatsportsstars’salariesarejustifiedmightarguethatthenumberofprofessionalswithrealtalentisveryfew,andthemoneyisarecognitionoftheskillsanddedicationrsonneedstobesuccessful.Competitionisconstantandaplayeristestedeverytimetheyperformintheirrelativelyshortcareer.Thepressurefromthemediaisintenseandthereislittleprivacyoutofthespotlight.Soallofthesefactorsmayjustifythehugeearnings.ally,Ithinkthattheamountofmoneysuchsportsstarsmakeismorejustifiedthanthehugeearningsofmoviestars,butatthesametime,itindicatesthatoursocietyplacesmorevalueonsportthanonmoreessentialprofessionsandachievements.典型結(jié)典型結(jié)構(gòu)——同意與開頭段寫Inmajorcities,problemswithtransportationandlivingconditionsareproblemsmostpeoplehavetofaceeveryday.Somepeopleholdthattheprincipalreasonfortheseproblemslieswiththebigcompaniesandfactorieslocatedinthecityproper.Theybelievethatthesecompanies,factoriesandeventheiremployeesshouldbemovedtothecountryside.Thisisnotasatisfactorysolution,話題引入+主要觀點(diǎn)+作者觀Acriticismoftenheardthesedaysisthatthesubjectstaughtinschoolstendtobetooacademic,andcontribuittletopreparingayoung forthereal-lifetasks.Theysayth ademicsubjectsarerootedinthepast,andarenotusefulforsolvingmodernproblems.Idisagreewiththispointofviewforthree話題引入+主要觀點(diǎn)+作者觀開頭簡單的背景介紹引入話雙方對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)或一方主要觀開頭Thereisatendencythatnewsreportsinthemediafocusonproblemsandemergenciesratherthanpositivedevelopment,whichisharmfultotheindividualandtosociety.Formanypeople,newsisaregularpartoflife,buttoday,itisimportanttonotethatcontentofdifferentnewsincludingnational,local,politicsandtrafficnewstendstobefullofnegativeinformationinsteadofpositiveprogress.Ithasbeenarguedthatnewsreportsaboutsocialproblemsandemergenciesshouldbeminimizedorevenrestricted.Iagreeonthissuggestionbasedonthefollowing主體段寫Fromthetimetheyarelittlegirls,femaleslearnaboutwithdollsandlaterperhapswithyoungerbrothersandsisters,girlsaregiventheroleofcareer.Girlsseetheirmothersinthesamerolesandsoitisnaturalthattheyidentifythisasafemaleactivity.Boys,incontrast,learncompetitiverolefarremovedfromwhatitmeanstonurture.Whileboysmaydreamofadventures,girlsconditioningmeanstheytendtoseethefutureintermsofraisingfamilies.Inaddition,weneedn’tdirectlyassociateclotheswithourculturalChina’sgloriouscivilizationcanbeillustratedinmanydifferentways,andsomeofthemarevanishing.Forexample,inordertimes,theSpringFestivalwasalways paniedbythesoundoffirecrackers.Butnow,manycitieshavebannedthem.Tradition,includingclothing,ischanging.主體段拓IndividualsaremorelikelytobepessimisticwhentheyfrequentlyreceivenegativeNewsreportconcerningemergencyandseveresocialproblemswillinevitablygiverisetopanicandnegativeattitude;becausetheyareanxiousaboutthepossibilitiesthatsimilareventsmayappeararoundthem,whichhaveharmfuleffectsontheirnormallife.Forexample,whencitizenssawthousandsofcrocodilesleavetheirheadsawaythewater,theyconcernaboutthepossibilityofearthquakesratherthanenjoyingtheirvacation,duetoarecentreportaboutminorearthquakeinnewsprograms.結(jié)尾段寫結(jié)尾段——重申觀點(diǎn)+簡單總Allinall/tosumToeliminatepossibleandunnecessarypaniccausedandaddressthedeficiencyofpositiveattitudetowardsfuturedevelopment,evisionandradioprogramsshouldlaymoreemphasisonspreadinggood雙方題題目分析+構(gòu)題目分Inthefuture,therewillbeahigherproportionofelderlypeoplethanyoungerpeopleinmanycountries.Doyouthinktheadvantagesoutweighthe范文解典型結(jié) 典型結(jié)構(gòu)—雙駁斥反方觀駁斥反方觀點(diǎn)的方駁斥反方觀點(diǎn)舉Manypeople ernmentbudgetshouldbeallocatedtoEverybodyneedssomebeautyintheirlife,butnoteveryonecanaffordaPicassoorapieceofmusic,so ernmentsshouldprovidemoneyformuseumsorconcerthallstoHowever,artprojectsaremorelikelytoattracttheinvestmentoftheprivatesectorsandartistsshouldrealizeifthereisademandfortheirmusicorsculpture,thentheywillbewealthy.Therefore,financialsupportsfromernmentsseemunnecessaryandshouldbeputintomoreimportantprojects.己方觀點(diǎn)論己方觀點(diǎn)論證舉ernmentinterferenceineducationandmedicalservicesishighlyProvidingsufficienteducationopportunitiesandeliminatingilliteracyclowcitizenstohuntajobandearnregular e,therebyimprovingtheirstandardoflivingandshakingoffpoverty.Foracountryasawhole,educationislinkedtoskilledworkforceandtohighproductivity,affectingbothprosperityandstability.Inaddition,accesstohealthcareisabasichumanrightandameasuretoensureadecentstandardofliving.Peoplefeelassuredlivingandworkinginacountrywheretheycanbegivenmedicalservicewhenunemployed,sick,injuredorretired,soofferingtheneedypeoplewithaffordablemedicalserviceisthefulfillmentoftheernment’sresponsibilitytoitsmembersandcanmakeernmentwintheloyaltyofcitizens.利弊比較題題目分析+典型結(jié) 典型結(jié)構(gòu)—利弊比題目分析(4)Alargenumberofyoungpeoplecannotfindajobwhentheyleaveuniversity.Whatarethemaincausesofthisproblem?Givesomemeasurestohelpreduce (2012-08-對(duì)勞動(dòng)力市場不夠了解,解決方法擺正態(tài)范文賞Nowadaysweareproducingmoreandmorerubbish.Whydoyouthinkthisishappening?What ernmentsdotohelpreducetheamountofrubbishIthinkitistruethatinalmosteverycountrytodayeachhouseholdandfamilyproducesalargeamountofwasteeveryweek.Mostofthisrubbishcomesfromthepackagingfromthethingswebuy,suchasprocessedfood.Butevenifwebuyfreshfoodwithoutpackaging,westillproducerubbishfromtheplasticbagsusedeverywheretocarryshophome.Thereasonwhywehavesomuchpackagingisthatweconsumesomuoreonadailybasisthanfamiliesdidinthepast.Convenienceisalsoveryimportantinmodernlife,sowebuypackagedorcannedfoodthatwecanbetransportedfromlongdistancesandstoreduntilweneedit,inthesupermarket,andthenathome.However,Ithinktheamountofwasteproducedisalsoaresultofourtendencytousesomethingonceandthrowitaway.Wefetthateventhechestplasticbaghasusedupvaluableresourcesandenergytoproduce.Wealsofetthatitisasourceofpollutionanddifficulttodisposeof.Ithink,therefore,thaternmentsneedtoraisethisawarenessinthegeneralpublic.Childrencanbeeducatedaboutenvironmentalissuesatschool,butadultsneedtotakeactions.ernmentscanencouragesuchactionbyputtingtaxesonpackaging,suchasplasticbags,byprovidingrecyclingservicesandbyfininghouseholdsandshopsthatdonotattempttorecycletheirwaste.Withthepoliticalwill,sueasurescouldreallyreducetheamountofrubbishweproduce.Certainlynobodywantstosee usedupandourplanetpoisonedbywaste.原因方案題題目分析+構(gòu)范文解析+典型結(jié) 典型結(jié)構(gòu)—原因方開頭段寫開頭Theyoungadults’unemploymentisatroublingissuepreoccupyingmanyernmentsacrosstheworld.Agrowingnumberofuniversitygraduatescomplainaboutthedifficultiesinjobhunting.Apartfromeconomicrecession,therearesomeotherforcesthatfostertheconsistencyofyoungadults’unemployment.Thisessaywillpresentanoverallviewofthesecausesandfeasible原因分原因分析寫法舉Themaincauseofrisingunemploymentamonguniversitygraduatesistheirdeficiencyofworkexperienceandqualifications.Afterleavingcollege,youngjobseekersgenerallyhavelittlepracticalexperience.Besides,mostoftheknowledgetheyhaveacquiredisfromtext,whichisnotsatisfactorilyconsistentwithteralpracticeintheworkplace.Thisweaknesscanbefatalatatimewhenthemarkethasastrongpreferenceonskilledandexperiencedapplicants,whoarereadytofillvacancieswithoutrequiringanyjobSecondly,youngadultsknowlittleofthesituationofthelabourmarket.解決方案+結(jié)尾段寫解決方案寫法舉Tacklingthisproblemrequiresthecommitmentofbothsocietyandyoungsters ernmentcanprovideemployerswithtaxationincentivesforrecruitingyoungLow-costcourses,especiallyjobtrainingcourses,shouldbemadeavailablefortheyoungunemployed.Consultancyservicescanbeprovidedfreeofcharge,givingyoungstersinstructiononjob-seekingandhelthemmakeproperadjustmentfromuniversitytowork.結(jié)尾Assuggestedabove,thisisacomplexproblem,andlackofworkexperienceandinappropriateattitudestowardemploymentaretwomainreasonsthataccountforyoungsters’unemployment.However,Iamconvincedthatthestepsmentionedabovewouldbehelpful.Task1圖表作Task1圖表類Task1Summarizetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.內(nèi)容概括——整體趨勢,大小關(guān)Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.Task1Task7Presentsaclearoverviewofmaintrends,differencesorClearlypresentsandhighlightskey6PresentsanoverviewwithinformationappropriayPresentsandadequayhighlightskey5Recountsdetailmechanicallywithnoclearoverview;theremaybenodatatosupportthedescriptionPresents,butinadequaycoverskeyTask1評(píng)分標(biāo)如何根據(jù)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)寫ThegraphbelowshowstheconsumptionoffishandsomedifferentkindsofmeatinaEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.Thegraphillustrateschangesintheamountsofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedper perweek.Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarties(around150grams),whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams)However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximay100gramsand55gramsrespectively.Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50grams,soalthoughitremainedtheleastpopularfood,consumptionlevelswerethemostTheconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.By2004ithadsoaredtoalmost250gramsperOverall,thegraphshowshowtheconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.餅狀60%的錢被用來交房租60%ofmoneyisspentonThereis60%ofmoneyspentonThepercentageofmoneyspentonrentisaboutMoneyspentonrentaccountsfor60%ofoccupy,constitute,takeup,makeAccordingtothepiechart,morethanhalfofelectricityisusedforheatingroomsandwater(52.5%).Inmarkedcontrast,thepercentageofelectricityconsumedinovens,kettlesandwashingmachinesisonly17.5%,andtheelectricityusedforlighting,TVandradioaccountsfor15%collectively,whichisequaltotheconsumptionofotherhouseholddevices(vacuumcleaners,foodmixersandelectrictools).如何做比 (倍數(shù))AismorethanTheeyesofTomarebiggerthanAistwiceasmany/muchasB.Thenumberoffemaleswastwiceasmanyasthatofmalesin羅列數(shù)據(jù)+轉(zhuǎn)折連多個(gè)餅狀A(yù)ccordingtothecharts,threetreatingmethodsaregenerallyappliedinbothKoreaandSweden.Specifically,nearly70%ofdangerouswasteisrecycledinRepublicofKorea,landfillisthemostwidelyusedtreatmentforhazardoustrashinSwedenThepercentageofwasteproductswhichareincineratedinSwedenisabouttwiceaslargeasthatinKorea(20%and9%respectively).Obviously,bothUnitedKingdomandSwedenaredependentonlandfillinthedisposalofhazardousproducts,whereastheproportionofwasterecyclingisthehighestinKorea.柱狀圖(1)圖形分Thegraphshowsthatthereisagradualdecreaseinstudyforcareerreasonswithage.(總趨勢)Nearly80%ofstudentsunder26years,studyfortheircareer.Thispercentagegraduallydeclinesby10-20%everydecade.(起點(diǎn)+變化情況)Only40%of40-49yroldsand18%ofover49yroldsarestudyingforcareerreasonsinlateadulthood.(特殊點(diǎn)+終點(diǎn))Conversely,thegraphalsoshowsthatstudystemmingfrominterestincreaseswithage.(總趨勢)Thereareonly10%ofunder26yroldsstudyingoutofinterest.Thepercentageincreasesslowlytillthebeginningofthefourthdecade,andincreasesdramaticallyinlateadulthood.(起點(diǎn)+變化情況)Nearlysamberof40-49yroldsstudyforcareerandinterest.特殊點(diǎn)However70%ofover49yroldsstudyforinterestincomparisonto18%studyingforcareerreasonsinthatagegroup.(終點(diǎn))柱狀圖(1)寫作分Thesecondgraphshowsthatemployersupportis um(approximay60%)fortheunder26yrstudents.Itdropsrapidlyto32%uptothethirddecadeoflife,andthenincreasesinlateadulthooduptoabout44%Itisunclearwhetheremployersupportisonlyforcareer-focusedstudy,butthehighestlevelisforthosestudentswhomainlystudyforcareerpurposes.Thechartbelowshowsthedifferentlevelsofpost-schoolqualificationsinAustraliaandtheproportionofmenandwomenwhoheldthemin1999柱狀圖(2)圖形分Thechartgivesinformationaboutpost-schoolqualificationsintermsofthedifferentlevelsoffurthereducationreachedbymenandwomeninAustraliain1999.WecanseeimmediaythatthereweresubstantialdifferencesintheproportionofandwomenatdifferentThebiggestgenderdifferenceisatthelowestpost-schoollevel,where90%ofthosewhoheldaskilledvocationaldiplomaweremen,comparedwithonly10%ofwomen.Bycontrast,morewomenheldundergraduatediploma(70%)andmarginallymorewomenreacheddegreelevel(55%).Atthehigherlevelsofeducation,menwithpostgraduatediplomasclearlyoutnumberedtheirfemalecounterparts(70%and30%,respectively),andalsoconstituted60%ofMaster’sThuswecanseethatmorementhanwomenholdqualificationsatthelowerandhigherlevelsofeducations,whilemorewomenreachundergraduatediplomalevelthanmen.TderdifferenceissmallestatthelevelofBachelor’s柱狀圖(2)寫作分ThebarchartshowswhattheUKstudentsdidaftergraduation(excludingfull-timeemployment)in2008.表格圖圖形Thetablebelowgivesinformationabouttheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsix表格圖寫作Thetableshowsthedetailsregardingtheundergroundrailwaysystemsinsixcities.Londonhastheoldestundergroundrailwaysystemsamongthesixcities.Itwasopenedintheyear1863,anditisalready140yearsold.ThetubeinParisisthesecondoldest,andithasservedcitizenssince1900.ThiswasthenfollowedbytheopeningoftherailwaysystemsinTokyo,WashingtonDCandKyoto.LosAngelesdidnotconstructundergroundsystemsuntiltheyear2001.Intermsofthesizeoftherailwaysystems,London,forcertain,hasthelargestundergroundrailwaysystems.Ithas394kilometersofrouteintotal,whichisnearlytwiceaslargeasthesysteminParis.Kyoto,incontrast,hasthesmallestsystem.Itonlyhas11kilometersofroute,whichismorethan30timeslessthanthatofLondon.Interestingly,Tokyo,whichonly

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