新課標(biāo)（RJ）新課標(biāo)（RJ）1人教版初中英語參賽課件：第01篇話題寫作07快樂成長2話題寫作（七）快樂成長第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理話題寫作（七）第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理3【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題主要包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。涉及的要點(diǎn)：1.成長體驗(yàn)及感悟;2.成長煩惱與困惑;3.關(guān)于更好地成長的方法與建議?！驹掝}點(diǎn)睛】話題主要包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。4你的初中生活即將結(jié)束。此時(shí)此刻,正是回顧過去,展望未來之際。請寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀銓Τ踔腥陮W(xué)習(xí)生活的感受和對高中生活的向往。短文須包括如下要點(diǎn)：(1)師生關(guān)系;(2)學(xué)業(yè)成就;(3)生活樂趣;(4)感受初中;(5)向往高中。典例分析你的初中生活即將結(jié)束。此時(shí)此刻,正是回顧過去,展望未來之5[注意](1)語言通順,要點(diǎn)齊全,意思連貫,條理清楚;(2)詞數(shù)：100左右。

[注意]6【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉：主題是回顧初中生活,展望高中生活。文章有兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：(1)回顧初中生活;(2)展望高中生活。2.確定時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。3.確定人稱：第一人稱。【思路點(diǎn)撥】7【寫作架構(gòu)】【寫作架構(gòu)】8【基礎(chǔ)寫作】Ⅰ.寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補(bǔ)全下列各句。)1.我甚至一度進(jìn)入我們班的前三名。(getinto;thetop)Ieven

inourclassonce.

2.我已經(jīng)在常規(guī)課程上取得了巨大進(jìn)步。(makeprogress)I've

inregularacademicclasses.

3.我也喜歡做其他的事情,包括參加各種俱樂部。(including)Ialsoenjoymyselfindoingotherthings,

.

gotintothetopthreemadehugeprogressincludingjoiningvariousclubs【基礎(chǔ)寫作】gotintothetopthreema9Ⅱ.句子升格(按括號中的要求改寫句子。)1.They'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.It'squiteunbelievable.(用形式主語it改寫句子)

2.Theyhelpedmemakehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.(用withone'shelp改寫句子)

It'squiteunbelievablethatthey'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Withtheirgreathelp,I'vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.Ⅱ.句子升格(按括號中的要求改寫句子。)It'squit103.Myseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.(用Ibelieve改寫句子)

Ibelievethatmyseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.3.Myseniorhighschoolwill11【連句成文】

I'llgraduatefrommyjuniorschool.Atthemomentoflookingbackatthethreeyearsandlookingforwardtotheseniorhighschoollife,manywordshavecometomymind.

Thefirsttopopintomymindaremyteachers.It'squiteunbelievablethatthey'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Franklyspeaking,wearemorethanteacherstostudents,butfriends,Isuppose.Withtheirgreathelp,I'vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.What'smore,Ievengotintothetopthreeinourclassonce.Besidesstudy,Ialsoenjoy【連句成文】12myselfindoingotherthings,includingjoiningvariousclubs,doingsportswithmyniceclassmatesandthestaff.However,thosegoldendaysfulloflaughterandtearsaregone.

Inaword,myjuniorschoollifeisanunforgettableexperience.AndIbelievemyseniorhighschoollifewillbemoremeaningful.myselfindoingotherthings,13【參考諺語】1.Timeflies.時(shí)光易逝。2.AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大路通羅馬。3.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無難事,只要肯登攀。4.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。拓展積累【參考諺語】拓展積累14【亮點(diǎn)句型】導(dǎo)入主題句1.Asweknow,therearemanywaystorealizeourdreams.2.Everycoinhastwosides.Thereisnotonlysadnessbutalsohappinessinourlife.Butwhatshouldwedotohaveahappylife?3.Thereisnodoubtthateveryonehastofacedifficultiesinhislife.Weshouldtreattheminaproperway.4.Peoplealwayssaythatlifecan'tgoonwellallthetimebecausewewillmeetallkindsofdifficulties.【亮點(diǎn)句型】15文章發(fā)展、過渡句1.Firstofall,weneedtorealizethatdifficultyisapartoflifeandweshouldgetusedtoit.2.Next,weshouldbepositivetofindoutwaystodealwiththedifficultieswemeet.3.Ontheotherhand,weshouldfindthehappinessaroundusbyheart.4.What'smore,weshouldbelieveinourselves.文章發(fā)展、過渡句16文章結(jié)尾句1.Nomatterwhatwesuffer,weshouldstillbelievethattheharvestaftertheeffortisbeyondourexpectation.2.Nomatterwhatyoudo,themostimportantthingistoenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.3.Thepleasurewegetmakesusproud.4.Inmyopinion,whenwefacethedifficulttime,weshouldconsideritasatestforusandwhenwegetthroughit,wewillgainvaluableexperience.文章結(jié)尾句17AWriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“There'sAlwaysHope”.(以“常懷希望”為題,寫一篇不少于60詞的短文)。面臨困惑的時(shí)候,經(jīng)歷變化的時(shí)候,感覺挫敗的時(shí)候,遭遇逆境的時(shí)候……來自內(nèi)心的堅(jiān)持、他人的幫助、社會(huì)的關(guān)愛和科技的發(fā)展等,總能讓人常懷希望。請選取一個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕睦斫?可結(jié)合自身或他人的經(jīng)歷)。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練18Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)getoutofdifficulty

give…ahandneverlosehope

Thefollowingisforreference19One

possible

version:There'sAlwaysHopeHopeisalwaysthere,inourhearts.Justkeepitinmindandwe'llachieveallourdreamsoneday.WhenIwasinGrade7,Ialwaysdidverybadlyinmaths.AndIevengotsevenpointsinamathstest.Thatmademefeelverysad.Iwantedtogiveitupatthattime,butmyparentsandmyteachertriedtoencourageme.Theysaidtome,“Neverlosehope!Webelieveyou'llbecomethetopstudentlaterifyoudoyourbesttostudymaths.”Ifollowedtheiradvice,andIputmyheartintomathsallthetime.Finally,Isucceeded!NowadaysI'mconfidentinallmysubjects.Forme,thekeytosuccessissimplebutpowerful—there'salwayshope.Onepossibleversion:20B

[2019·北京改編]自律,即自我約束,是自我提升的一種途徑,有助于我們成長,促使我們不斷前行。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“自律”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪?qiáng)自律意識,你做過什么,以及這樣做給你帶來的好處。[要求](1)詞數(shù)：不少于50詞(文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(2)所給提示詞僅供選用;(3)請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。B[2019·北京改編]21[提示詞語]self-disciplined(自律的),plan,goal,habit,improve[提示問題]·Whatdidyoudotobeself-disciplined?

·Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromdoingso?

Self-disciplineplaysanimportantroleinourlife.

[提示詞語]self-disciplined(自律的),p22One

possible

version:

Self-disciplineplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Itmakesmeabetterstudentatschoolandabetterchildathome.Iusedtofollowallkindsofrulesandhandinthetasksappointedontimeatschool.AndIcouldnotonlyrespectallmyteachersbutalsogetonwellwithmyclassmates.Athome,Iwasabletobalancehouseworkandhomework.Iusuallymadeaplaninadvancetomakeiteasiertoachievemygoal.Afterfinishingallthetasks,Idevelopedthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.Insociety,Isparednoefforttoimprovemyselfallthetime.Onepossibleversion:23

Ihavebenefitedalotfrombeingself-disciplined.Firstofall,Ihavehadmanygoodhabits,whichmakesmylifeeasierandmoreregular.Secondly,mylifeandmystudyhavebeenofhighefficiencysothatalotoftimehasbeensaved.Thirdly,beingself-disciplinedhaspreparedmeforabetterandbrighterfuture.Inthefuture,Iwillcontinuetobeaself-disciplinedperson.Ihavebenefitedalotfrom24新課標(biāo)（RJ）新課標(biāo)（RJ）25人教版初中英語參賽課件：第01篇話題寫作07快樂成長26話題寫作（七）快樂成長第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理話題寫作（七）第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理27【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題主要包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。涉及的要點(diǎn)：1.成長體驗(yàn)及感悟;2.成長煩惱與困惑;3.關(guān)于更好地成長的方法與建議?！驹掝}點(diǎn)睛】話題主要包括成長過程、成長煩惱及成長感悟等。28你的初中生活即將結(jié)束。此時(shí)此刻,正是回顧過去,展望未來之際。請寫一篇英語短文,談?wù)勀銓Τ踔腥陮W(xué)習(xí)生活的感受和對高中生活的向往。短文須包括如下要點(diǎn)：(1)師生關(guān)系;(2)學(xué)業(yè)成就;(3)生活樂趣;(4)感受初中;(5)向往高中。典例分析你的初中生活即將結(jié)束。此時(shí)此刻,正是回顧過去,展望未來之29[注意](1)語言通順,要點(diǎn)齊全,意思連貫,條理清楚;(2)詞數(shù)：100左右。

[注意]30【思路點(diǎn)撥】1.要點(diǎn)提煉：主題是回顧初中生活,展望高中生活。文章有兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)：(1)回顧初中生活;(2)展望高中生活。2.確定時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。3.確定人稱：第一人稱。【思路點(diǎn)撥】31【寫作架構(gòu)】【寫作架構(gòu)】32【基礎(chǔ)寫作】Ⅰ.寫主干句(根據(jù)所給提示補(bǔ)全下列各句。)1.我甚至一度進(jìn)入我們班的前三名。(getinto;thetop)Ieven

inourclassonce.

2.我已經(jīng)在常規(guī)課程上取得了巨大進(jìn)步。(makeprogress)I've

inregularacademicclasses.

3.我也喜歡做其他的事情,包括參加各種俱樂部。(including)Ialsoenjoymyselfindoingotherthings,

.

gotintothetopthreemadehugeprogressincludingjoiningvariousclubs【基礎(chǔ)寫作】gotintothetopthreema33Ⅱ.句子升格(按括號中的要求改寫句子。)1.They'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.It'squiteunbelievable.(用形式主語it改寫句子)

2.Theyhelpedmemakehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.(用withone'shelp改寫句子)

It'squiteunbelievablethatthey'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Withtheirgreathelp,I'vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.Ⅱ.句子升格(按括號中的要求改寫句子。)It'squit343.Myseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.(用Ibelieve改寫句子)

Ibelievethatmyseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.3.Myseniorhighschoolwill35【連句成文】

I'llgraduatefrommyjuniorschool.Atthemomentoflookingbackatthethreeyearsandlookingforwardtotheseniorhighschoollife,manywordshavecometomymind.

Thefirsttopopintomymindaremyteachers.It'squiteunbelievablethatthey'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Franklyspeaking,wearemorethanteacherstostudents,butfriends,Isuppose.Withtheirgreathelp,I'vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.What'smore,Ievengotintothetopthreeinourclassonce.Besidesstudy,Ialsoenjoy【連句成文】36myselfindoingotherthings,includingjoiningvariousclubs,doingsportswithmyniceclassmatesandthestaff.However,thosegoldendaysfulloflaughterandtearsaregone.

Inaword,myjuniorschoollifeisanunforgettableexperience.AndIbelievemyseniorhighschoollifewillbemoremeaningful.myselfindoingotherthings,37【參考諺語】1.Timeflies.時(shí)光易逝。2.AllroadsleadtoRome.條條大路通羅馬。3.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無難事,只要肯登攀。4.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。拓展積累【參考諺語】拓展積累38【亮點(diǎn)句型】導(dǎo)入主題句1.Asweknow,therearemanywaystorealizeourdreams.2.Everycoinhastwosides.Thereisnotonlysadnessbutalsohappinessinourlife.Butwhatshouldwedotohaveahappylife?3.Thereisnodoubtthateveryonehastofacedifficultiesinhislife.Weshouldtreattheminaproperway.4.Peoplealwayssaythatlifecan'tgoonwellallthetimebecausewewillmeetallkindsofdifficulties.【亮點(diǎn)句型】39文章發(fā)展、過渡句1.Firstofall,weneedtorealizethatdifficultyisapartoflifeandweshouldgetusedtoit.2.Next,weshouldbepositivetofindoutwaystodealwiththedifficultieswemeet.3.Ontheotherhand,weshouldfindthehappinessaroundusbyheart.4.What'smore,weshouldbelieveinourselves.文章發(fā)展、過渡句40文章結(jié)尾句1.Nomatterwhatwesuffer,weshouldstillbelievethattheharvestaftertheeffortisbeyondourexpectation.2.Nomatterwhatyoudo,themostimportantthingistoenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.3.Thepleasurewegetmakesusproud.4.Inmyopinion,whenwefacethedifficulttime,weshouldconsideritasatestforusandwhenwegetthroughit,wewillgainvaluableexperience.文章結(jié)尾句41AWriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“There'sAlwaysHope”.(以“常懷希望”為題,寫一篇不少于60詞的短文)。面臨困惑的時(shí)候,經(jīng)歷變化的時(shí)候,感覺挫敗的時(shí)候,遭遇逆境的時(shí)候……來自內(nèi)心的堅(jiān)持、他人的幫助、社會(huì)的關(guān)愛和科技的發(fā)展等,總能讓人常懷希望。請選取一個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕睦斫?可結(jié)合自身或他人的經(jīng)歷)。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練A實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練42Thefollowingisforreferenceonly.(以下表達(dá)僅供參考)getoutofdifficulty

give…ahandneverlosehope

Thefollowingisforreference43One

possible

version:There'sAlwaysHopeHopeisalwaysthere,inourhearts.Justkeepitinmindandwe'llachieveallourdreamsoneday.WhenIwasinGrade7,Ialwaysdidverybadlyinmaths.AndIevengotsevenpointsinamathstest.Thatmademefeelverysad.Iwantedtogiveitupatthattime,butmyparentsandmyteachertriedtoencourageme.Theysaidtome,“Neverlosehope!Webelieveyou'llbecomethetopstudentlaterifyoudoyourbesttostudymaths.”Ifollowedtheiradvice,andIputmyheartintomathsallthetime.Finally,Isucceeded!NowadaysI'mconfidentinallmysubjects.Forme,thekeytosuccessissimplebutpowerful—there'salwayshope.Onepossibleversion:44B

[2019·北京改編]自律,即自我約束,是自我提升的一種途徑,有助于我們成長,促使我們不斷前行。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“自律”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,請用英語寫一篇短文投稿,談?wù)劄榱嗽鰪?qiáng)自律意識,你做過什么,以及這樣做給你帶來的好處。[要求](1)詞數(shù)：不少于50詞(文中已給出內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(2)所給提示詞僅供選用;(3)請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。B[2019·北京改編]45[提示詞語]self-disciplined(自律的),plan,goal,habit,improve[提示問題]·Whatdi