2009年小作文DearEditors,Asalocalstudentwhohaslongbeenreadingyournewspaperwithgreatinterest,Iamconcernedaboutthewideuseofdisposableplasticbagsinourcity.Iwouldliketorenderseveralsuggestionsasfollowstoreversethesituation.Ononehand,measuresmustbetakentoprohibitandreducetheuseofplasticbagsinourlife.Ontheotherhand,rejectionofthedisposablebagsandadoptionoftherecycledonesshouldberewarded.Lastbutnottheleast,fashionableandbeautifulsubstitutions,suchaspaperbagsandclothbags,shouldbedeveloped.Ihopeyoucancallonthepublictoboycotttheplasticbags.Onlyinthiswaycouldthe''whitepollution"beeliminated.TrulyYours,Liming2008年小作文DearBob,I'mwritingtoapologizeformyforgetfulnesstoreturnthemusicCDtoyouwhenIleftCanada.SohurriedwasIthatIpackedeverythinginmyluggagewithoutexaminingthoroughly.HadIbeenmorecautiousthen,Iwouldn'thavemadesuchastupidmistake.Nowsomethingmustbedonetocompensateformycarelessness.IcouldeitherposttheCDtoyoubyexpressorpayforyourlossatareasonableprice.Pleaseletmeknowwhichsolutionyouprefer.Again,Iwouldextendmysincereapologytoyouandhopeyoucouldacceptit.FaithfullyYours,LiMing1998年大作文Theinformationwegetfromthepictureaboveisthatahenpromisestolayeggswhichareroundwithoutangelsandcorners,andhaveshells,eggwhitesandeggyellows.Funnyandoddasthecartoonis,whatitremindsusisaphenomenonthatvaincommitmentshavebeenpervasiveinourlife.Administrationdepartmentssweartoactfairlyandlegallywithoutcorruption;hospitalsanddoctorsguaranteetocuretheillpatientlyandheartilywithoutmaltreat;merchantsandentrepreneursassuretosellgenuinecommoditiespolitelyandenthusiasticallywithoutrudenessanddeceiving.Allthesecommitmentscanbeheardalmosteverywhereinthisancientland.However,theyarenothingbutordinaryobligationsandduties,andtheyshouldnotbehighlyvaluedasnobleandcivilized.Wearesituatedinasocietyofthemarketeconomycharacterizedbyfiercecompetition.Anyonewhoisdishonestwillbediscardedandrejectedeventually.Anoldsayingshouldbekeptinourmind,thatis,honestyisthebestpolicy.評(píng)語(yǔ)：語(yǔ)言表達(dá)流暢，自然。2001年大作文Undoubtedly,loveisthenoblestemotionofmankind,whichdistinguishesusfromotheranimalsandsustainsusthroughoutthefierceevolution.Justasthepictureconcernedpointsout,lovecanbecomparedtoalamp,whichshinesbrighterwherethereisdarker.Wearelivinginasocietyfullofloveandmutualhelp.Inthepastyears,thesouthernpeopleamongthedisastroussnowstormhadbeenmovedbythekindnessfrompeoplenationwide;theSichuanProvincehadwitnessedenormoushelpfromacrosstheworldafterthetragicearthquake;theBeijingcityhadbeentouchedbytheselflessassistancefromthevolunteersfromtheOlympicGames.Allthesefactsillustratethemeaningoflovefromvariousaspects,thatis,loveisgreatestwhereitisneededmost.Therefore,weshouldalwaysbereadytohelpotherswhoareintrouble,nomatterwhethertheyarefamilymembersorcompletelystrangers.Onlybythisway,canwemaketheworldabetterplace.評(píng)語(yǔ)：文章層次清晰，邏輯嚴(yán)密。2002年大作文Asisd印ictedinthepictureabove,anAmericangirl,dressedinChinesetraditionalcostumeofminoritygroup,smileshappilyandbrilliantly.Theaccessories,suchasribbons,jewelryandnecklaces,addorientalcharmtoherlovelyappearance.Conspicuously,itisthephotothatstressestheimportanceoftheculturalcommunication.Initslonghistoryspanningover5,000years,magnificentcivilizationandexcellentculturearecultivatedintheprosperouslandofourcountry.Withthereformandopening-up,theChinesetraditionalcultureisintroducedtotheworldandwe,Chinesepeople,alsohavethechancetolearntheoutstandingculturefromothercountries.Culturalexchangeshavebeenpromotingmutualunderstandingamongcountriesandenhancingharmoniousrelationshipontheearth.Itismyviewthatourconventionalcultureshouldberegardedasourtreasuresandresources,anditshouldbewellpreservedandcarefullystudied.Plus,othersplendidculturesshouldbeabsorbedtodevelopourownones.Moreimportantly,suchinternationalactivitiesastheOlympicGamesandtheWorldExposhouldbeheldconstantlytoimproveculturalcommunication.評(píng)析：本文意思清楚，用詞豐富。人生哲理型模板1特征：圖畫(huà)不具體，需要引申適用于批判丑惡現(xiàn)象。第一段，引用名言1句，名言可編造。描述圖畫(huà)3句，(描述若只有2句，則加1句套話)ToparaphraseanillustriouscoachNolimitation,nofreedom".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,ayoungadultisblowingaballoonsymbolizingfreedom.Withtheever-inflatingballoon,hecansoarinthesky.Whentheballoonfliestoitspeakandexplodes,hefallstothegroundheavily.(Itisthebalancebetweenlimitationandfreedomthatshouldbekeptinourminds.)第二段,套話2句，用themore...themore...,舉例到更廣泛現(xiàn)象2句，套話總結(jié)1句。Thepictureeasilygetsusinsightintothefactthatthemorefreedomwehaveaccessto,themoreattentionweshouldpayinourwordsandbehaviors.Thistruthisself-evidenttoeveryone,butnoteveryonewouldputitintopractice.Inthecontemporarysociety,alargenumberofnetizensaremakingfulluseoftheInternetwithoutbeingcautiousandprudent.Somerumorsarefabricatedandconveyedonthenet.Falsemessagesandirresponsibleremarksareleftatwillontheforumorbbs.SuchtrendhascontaminatedtheInternetanditshouldberestrictedurgently.第三段，套話3句。Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobecenteredonthisproblem.Asacollegestudent,Ishoulddoallinmypowertostrikeabalancebetweenfreedomandlimitation.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanmakeitifwemakecombinedefforts.下：Toparaphraseanillustriouscoach,"Nolimitation,nofreedom".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,ayoungadultisblowingaballoonsymbolizingfreedom.Withtheever-inflatingballoon,hecansoarinthesky.Whentheballoonfliestoitspeakandexplodes,hefallstothegroundheavily.Thepictureeasilygetsusinsightintothefactthatthemorefreedomwehaveaccessto,themoreattentionweshouldpayinourwordsandbehaviors.Thistruthisself-evidenttoeveryone,butnoteveryonewouldputitintopractice.Inthecontemporarysociety,alargenumberofnetizensaremakingfulluseoftheInternetwithoutbeingcautiousandprudent.Somerumorsarefabricatedandconveyedonthenet.Falsemessagesandirresponsibleremarksareleftatwillontheforumorbbs.SuchtrendhascontaminatedtheInternetanditshouldberestrictedurgently.Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobecenteredonthisproblem.Asacollegestudent,Ishoulddoallinmypowertostrikeabalancebetweenfreedomandlimitation.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanmakeitifwemakecombinedefforts.人生哲理型模板2特征：圖畫(huà)不具體，需要引申適用于鼓舞上進(jìn)現(xiàn)象。第一段，引用名言1句，名言可編造。描述圖畫(huà)2句。ToparaphrasePhilJackson,anillustriousandlegendarybasketballcoach,"Self-satisfactiongoesbeforefailure".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,anindividualwithlittlelearningsaysNototheknowledgepot.Insharpcontrast,theotheronewithmuchknowledgewelcomesthepotandsaysthatheisingreatneed.第二段，套話2句，舉例1句，強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)構(gòu)1句，套話總結(jié)2句。Thespritofdissatisfactionconsistsoftheveryforcethatpropelledhumancivilizationforwardinthelongjourneyofknowledgepursuing.Stimulatedbythethirstforknowledgefromwithinandchallengedbytheharshnessoftheenvironmentfromwithout,manhasevolvedfromthemostprimitivetothemostadvanced.TakeEinstein,arenownedphysicistintheworld,aswhat'sgoingon.Itishisnever-contentattitudethatmakeshimadistinguishedscientistfromamiddleschoolteacher.Thereisalwaysathornyroadpavedwithsweatsbehindasuccessfulman.Modestyseemstobetheferryboat,bywhichwecancrosstheturbulentwavesoflife,andreachtheshoreofsuccess.第三段，套話3句，替換主題詞。Aboveall,what'sthedrivingforceoftheconstructionoftheknowledgefield?Amodestanddissatisfactoryattitude,onmypersonallevel,isofsupremeimportance.Brimmingwithmodestyandthirst,wecaneffortlesslypaintourlifemorecolorful.ToparaphrasePhilJackson,anillustriousandlegendarybasketballcoach,"Self-satisfactiongoesbeforefailure".Justasrealisticallymirroredintoday'sportrayal,anindividualwithlittlelearningsaysNototheknowledgepot.Insharpcontrast,theotheronewithmuchknowledgewelcomesthepotandsaysthatheisingreatneed.Thespritofdissatisfactionconsistsoftheveryforcethatpropelledhumancivilizationforwardinthelongjourneyofknowledgepursuing.Stimulatedbythethirstforknowledgefromwithinandchallengedbytheharshnessoftheenvironmentfromwithout,manhasevolvedfromthemostprimitivetothemostadvanced,lakeEinstein,arenownedphysicistintheworld,aswhat'sgoingon.Itishisnever-contentattitudethatmakeshimadistinguishedscientistfromamiddleschoolteacher.Thereisalwaysathornyroadpavedwithsweatsbehindasuccessfulman.Modestyseemstobetheferryboat,bywhichwecancrosstheturbulentwavesoflife,andreachtheshoreofsuccess.Aboveall,what'sthedrivingforceoftheconstructionoftheknowledgefield?Amodestanddissatisfactoryattitude,onmypersonallevel,isofsupremeimportance.Brimmingwithmodestyandthirst,wecaneffortlesslypaintourlifemorecolorful.社會(huì)現(xiàn)象型模板1特征：圖畫(huà)具體，都是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，基本都可以歸結(jié)到社會(huì)核心價(jià)值觀的喪失。第一段，套話1句。描述圖畫(huà)2句。Apicturejumpsintooursightwhenwetakealookatthetestpaper.Inthiscartoon,agoodnumberoffolkssittinginfrontofthecomputerareconnectedbyaspiderwebsymbolizingtheInternet.Withtheworldwideweb,theycantalkwithpeopleacrosstheearth,buttheyevenhavenointeresttosayhellototheirfriendsadjoiningtothem.第二段，套話3句，舉例說(shuō)明1句，套話總結(jié)2句或3句。Conspicuously,thepicturepresentedherecarriesmoremeaningsbehindthesurface.ItmirrorsatrendragingacrosstheChineselandscape:ahostofwebaddictionhasfounditswayintoourlivesandhasthepotentialtobecomeincreasinglyprevalent.FartoomanyindividualshavespentmuchtimeontheInternetintheirdailylives,neglectingnormalactivitieswiththeirfamilies,workmatesorfriends.Acoupleofdrivingforcesarebehindthetrend.Tonameonlyone,thenet-wormsarelosingthebalancebetweenthecyberworldandtherealone,becausethesocietydoesnotplaceahighvalueoneducation./asanancientlandenjoyingasplendidcivilizationspanningover5,000years,Chinaiswitnessingthelossofsometraditionalcorevalues,becausewedonotplaceahighvalueonmoraleducation.第三段，套話2句。Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobefocusedonthisproblem.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanturnbackthiseviltideifwemakecombinedefforts Apicturejumpsintooursightwhenwetakealookatthetestpaper.Inthiscartoon,agoodnumberoffolkssittinginfrontofthecomputerareconnectedbyaspiderwebsymbolizingtheInternet.Withtheworldwideweb,theycantalkwithpeopleacrosstheearth,buttheyevenhavenointeresttosayhellototheirfriendsadjoiningtothem.Conspicuously,thepicturepresentedherecarriesmoremeaningsbehindthesurface.ItmirrorsatrendragingacrosstheChineselandscape:ahostofwebaddictionhasfounditswayintoourlivesandhasthepotentialtobecomeincreasinglyprevalent.FartoomanyindividualshavespentmuchtimeontheInternetintheirdailylives,neglectingnormalactivitieswiththeirfamilies,workmatesorfriends.Acoupleofdrivingforcesarebehindthetrend.Tonameonlyone,thenet-wormsarelosingthebalancebetweenthecyberworldandtherealone,becausethesocietydoesnotplaceahighvalueoneducation.Onmypersonallevel,promptattentionissupposedtobefocusedonthisproblem.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanturnbackthiseviltideifwe2010作文回憶版Apicturejumpsintooursightwhenwetakealookatthetestpaper.Inthiscartoon,apotfilledwithdeliciousandnutritiousfoodisboiling.ThevarietyoffoodsymbolizingtheChineseKongfu,post-modernization,Einstein,Sheakspearandwhat'sgoingon,reflecttheculturalexchangeincontemporarysociety.Differentkindsofcultureconsiststheveryforcethatpropelledhumancivilizationforwardinthelongjourneyofhistory.Stimulatedbythethirstforvariouscultureandchallengedbytheharshnessofenvironment,manhasevolvedfromthemostprimitivetothemostadvanced.Asanancientlandspanningof5,000years,Chinahaswitnessedtheculturalharmonywiththeminority.Withthereformandopening-up,ourcountryhasexperiencedtheculturalcommunicationthroughouttheglobe.Inthisprocess,excellentcultureisstudiedandfeudalcultureisrejected.TheChineseculturehasbecomethemostexcellentandoutstandingintheworld.Onmypersonallevel,suchactivitiesasBeijingOlympicGamesandShanghaiInternationalExposhouldbeheldconstantlytoenhancemutualculturalunderstandingandcommunication.Itisinmyfirmbeliefthatwecanmakeitifwemakecombinedefforts.宏偉的開(kāi)頭：不要老說(shuō)ASwecansee或asisdescribed,開(kāi)頭要有震懾力，whetheryouarealionoralamp,youmustsprinttosurvive_（可以改成：強(qiáng)者或弱者都要努力去成功）或Nothingcanmorecontributetomakeamanstrongerthanhasalwaysanemenyinhisview!再如Tobeornottobe:thatisaquestion.ThisoldShakespeare'spuzzlementmaybeobvirousinthispicture.（Tobeornottobe可以換成任意的動(dòng)作行為，這一句可是任何一個(gè)英語(yǔ)老師的專業(yè)必修課，應(yīng)該是大三時(shí)要詳細(xì)分析的莎士比亞的文章，看到這句90%的老師都會(huì)回憶過(guò)去，感到無(wú)比親切，想起那時(shí)的愛(ài)情神馬的……）反正大家覺(jué)得哪句與眾不同又切題就好，上來(lái)一棍子把老師打暈二、描寫(xiě)圖畫(huà)三、引出問(wèn)題四、舉例證明五、解決措施六、展望未來(lái)這六個(gè)部分可以組成一切文章，只需要每一個(gè)部分背5個(gè)好句子，中間加上簡(jiǎn)單句連接一下，就可以在25分鐘內(nèi)搞出一篇有地道口味的文章。而且不會(huì)擔(dān)心字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，不用擔(dān)心結(jié)構(gòu)不好。在這里我不是反對(duì)背誦，只是背誦會(huì)束縛思維，想要背上原題等于做夢(mèng)，看到題目時(shí)，如果自己沒(méi)有背過(guò)，就會(huì)一下子蒙了，而且還會(huì)局限在“火鍋”這樣的干擾詞匯上遲遲動(dòng)不了手。任何作**只需要把寓意說(shuō)明，加上自己的觀點(diǎn)就可以，不要局限在模擬題的撰寫(xiě)者上,文章是你自己的，Ifyoudon'tlike.changeit!現(xiàn)在是沖刺，尤其不能信押題和背誦，而是把屬于你自己的模板練好，切實(shí)搞好30句，行文的時(shí)候抽出6句，一篇行云流水的文章因運(yùn)而生！！’30是個(gè)句子比150篇要好的多吧，而且很多模擬文章結(jié)構(gòu)上都是兩頭小，中間大，改卷子是肯定會(huì)漏掉中間的內(nèi)容，所以我的作文大概3段都是70字左右，按情況微調(diào)下，我不敢說(shuō)比誰(shuí)寫(xiě)的好，因?yàn)槲抑粚?xiě)簡(jiǎn)單句來(lái)過(guò)渡……長(zhǎng)的、漂亮的句子都是從真題里摳的，這樣拼起來(lái)……我想也不會(huì)有人說(shuō)我寫(xiě)的不好吧！個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)，不喜歡的也不要拍磚了，留著時(shí)間背你的模板吧，我是草根，我很頑強(qiáng)，我的理念就是：感動(dòng)老師是外刊作者的事，我的任務(wù)是安排他們與改卷子的見(jiàn)面不知道有沒(méi)有發(fā)過(guò)，錯(cuò)略看?下覺(jué)得不錯(cuò)，直接粘給大家看看，大家還有什么可以補(bǔ)充最好也都寫(xiě)出來(lái)，share一下哈。。。1、經(jīng)濟(jì)：economicglobalization（經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化）,sustainabledevelopment（可持續(xù)發(fā)展），unfaircompetition（不正當(dāng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)），crackdownonfakecommodities（打假），boom（繁榮），fiercecompetition（激烈競(jìng)爭(zhēng)），creditcrisis（信用危機(jī)），stabilizeprices（穩(wěn)定物價(jià)）2、文化：greatandprofound（博大精深的），integrationandinteraction（融合交匯），crash（碰撞）,charming（極具魅力的），splendid（壯麗輝煌的），Englishfever（英語(yǔ)熱）3、環(huán)保：environment-friendly（生態(tài)型的，環(huán)保的），threatofglobalwarming（全球變暖的威脅），promotefundamentalshiftsintheeconomicsystemandmodeofeconomicgrowth（促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)體制和經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)方式的轉(zhuǎn)變），curbenvironmentalpollution/bringthepollutionundercontrol（治理環(huán)境污桀,developrenewableresources（開(kāi)發(fā)可再生資源），alow-carboneconomy（低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)）4、科技:scienceandtechnology（科學(xué)技術(shù)），web-addiction（沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)，computercrime（電腦犯罪），e-commerce（電子商務(wù)），virtuallife（虛擬生活），informationera（信息時(shí)代），cyberromance（網(wǎng)戀），surftheInternet（網(wǎng)上沖浪）5、就業(yè):applicant（申請(qǐng)人），positionavailable/vacantposition（空缺職位），competent（能勝任的），bequalifiedfor（合格的），proficiency（熟練程度），jobarrangementandbenefit（工作待遇和福利），promotion（晉升），gender-biased（性別歧視的），appearance-biased（相貌歧視的）6、大學(xué)生活/教育：cultivate（培養(yǎng)），furtherone^sstudy（深造），qualityeducation（素質(zhì)教育），fosterabilities（培養(yǎng)能力），relievetheburdenonstudents（減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)），beoccupiedwithsomuchschoolwork（忙于功課）placeemphasison（以…為重心），comprehensive（全面的，廣泛的），practicalcapability（實(shí)際能力），duck-stuffing（填鴨式）7、社會(huì)現(xiàn)象：enlightening（富有啟發(fā)的），causealarmandattention（引起了警惕和重視），setgoodexamplefor（為…樹(shù)立榜樣），dedicate（做貢獻(xiàn)）,takeaction（采取行動(dòng)），ensureimplementingactivities（確保執(zhí)行）,vulnerable（易誘惑的，易受影響的），besupposedto（應(yīng)該）8、人物特征、情感描寫(xiě)：strong-minded（堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的），industrious（勤奮的），promising（有前途的），dynamic（有生氣的），responsible（有責(zé)任心的），influential（有影響力的），profound（淵博精深的）,devoted（忠實(shí)的，投入的），warm-hearted（熱心的）第二篇：句型，詞組搭配.隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的繁榮withtheboomingoftheeconomy.隨著人民生活水平的顯著提高withtheremarkableimprovementofpeople，slivingstandard.先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)advancedscienceandtechnology.為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钤鎏砹饲槿ddmuchspice/flavortoourdailylife.人們普遍認(rèn)為Itiscommonlybelievedthat….我同意前者（后者）觀點(diǎn)Igivemyvotetotheformer/latteropinion..引起了廣泛的公眾關(guān)注Sth.hasarousedwidepublicconcern./Sthhasdrawngreatpublicattention..利遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于弊Theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages..開(kāi)闊眼界widenone,shorizon/broadenone'svision.考慮到諸多因素takemanyfactorsintoconsideration.從另一個(gè)角度f(wàn)romanotherperspective.致力于/投身于becommitted/devotedto….日益激烈的社會(huì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)theincreasinglykeensocialcompetition.…有其自身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)…h(huán)asitsownmeritsanddemerits/prosandcons.對(duì)…有害doharmto/beharmfulto/bedetrimentalto.交流思想/情感/信息exchangeideas/emotions/information.跟上…的最新發(fā)展keeppacewith/keepabreastwiththelatestdevelopmentof???.…的健康發(fā)展thehealthydevelopmentof….把時(shí)間和精力放在…上focusone'stimeandenergyon….導(dǎo)致很多問(wèn)題giveriseto/leadto/spellvariousproblems.可以替代think的詞believe,claim,maintain,argue,insist,holdtheopinion/belief/viewthat.優(yōu)先考慮/發(fā)展…give(top)prioritytosth..與?-?比較comparedwith…/incomparisonwith.提供就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)offerjobopportunities大作文開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式.開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式一：名人名言有人問(wèn)了，“我沒(méi)有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語(yǔ)名言？"，很好辦：編！原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來(lái)的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽(tīng)起來(lái)很有道理呦！而且沒(méi)準(zhǔn)將來(lái)我們就是名人呢！對(duì)吧？經(jīng)典句型：Aproberbsays,“Youareonlyyoungonce."（適用于已記住的名言）Itgoeswithoutsayingthatwecannotbeyoungforever.（適用于自編名言）更多經(jīng)典句型：Aseveryoneknows,Noonecandenythat....開(kāi)頭萬(wàn)能公式二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)原理：要想更有說(shuō)服力，就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來(lái)說(shuō)明。原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的，可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一，但編無(wú)妨，只要我有東西寫(xiě)就萬(wàn)事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about78.9%ofthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation.看起來(lái)這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的，其實(shí)都是編造出來(lái)的，下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造：Honesty：根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。TravelbyBike：根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候苜選的交通工具是自行車(chē)。Youth：根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，在某個(gè)大學(xué)，學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂(lè)。Five-dayWorkWeekBetterthanSix-dayWork?：根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：Arecentstatisticsshowsthat...結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式.結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一：如此結(jié)論說(shuō)完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論，到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類(lèi)的話，我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō)，開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子:Obviously（此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)），wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)：tosumup,inconclusion,inbrief,onaccountofthis,thus更多句型：Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat...,Therefore,wecanfindthat....結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論''是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽！Obviously,itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)?？歼@個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái)，你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢？更多句型：Accordingly,Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken.Consequently,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.寫(xiě)作的“七項(xiàng)基本原則”一、長(zhǎng)短句原則工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句，累死人！寫(xiě)一個(gè)短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.如此可見(jiàn)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，抑揚(yáng)頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段（開(kāi)頭）用一長(zhǎng)一短，且先長(zhǎng)后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式，定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。二、主題句原則國(guó)有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無(wú)首”之感！相信各位讀過(guò)一些破爛文學(xué)，故意把主體隱臧在文章之內(nèi)，結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定耍寫(xiě)一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開(kāi)頭（保險(xiǎn)型）或者結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會(huì)平安無(wú)事！特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的！Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam（主題句）.Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.三、一二三原則領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)…如此羅嗦?？僧吘惯€是條理清楚。考官們看文章也必然要通過(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的"標(biāo)簽''來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。first,second,third,last（不推薦，原因：俗）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推薦,原因：俗）thefirst,ihesecond,thethird,thelast（不推薦，原因:俗）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly（不推薦,原因：俗）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast（強(qiáng)烈推薦）mostimportantofall,moreover,finallyontheonehand,ontheotherhand（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）foronething,foranotherthing（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）建議：不僅僅在寫(xiě)作中注意，平時(shí)說(shuō)話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚！四、短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則寫(xiě)作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果使用短語(yǔ)，有兩個(gè)好處：其一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單，看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ)，必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)一精彩的短語(yǔ)，那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)，怎么辦？用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法！比如：Icannotbearit.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：Icannotputupwithit.Iwantit.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：Iamlookingforwardtoit.這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。五、多實(shí)少虛原則原因很簡(jiǎn)單，寫(xiě)文章還是應(yīng)該寫(xiě)一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之類(lèi)的形象詞。再比如：走出房間，general的詞是：walkoutoftheroom但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：slipoutoftheroom小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：sailoutoftheroom小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：danceoutoftheroom老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：staggeroutoftheroom所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文章將會(huì)大放異彩！六、多變句式原則1）加法（串聯(lián)）都希望寫(xiě)下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫(xiě)錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō)：Ienjormusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.其它的短語(yǔ)可以用：besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover2）轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角）批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題，再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說(shuō)話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.更多的短語(yǔ)：despitethat,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,notwithstanding3）因果（so,so,so）昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩，然后我主動(dòng)搭訕，然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d，然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了，然后我們成為了朋友…可見(jiàn)，講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系！Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.更多短語(yǔ)：then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,sothat4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子，就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句，表語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句的變形。舉例：ThisiswhatIcando.Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分：Whentogo,Whyhegoesaway...5）附加（多此一舉）如果有了老婆，總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況，當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候，她會(huì)插一句說(shuō)，我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他；或者說(shuō)，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)。Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriendofmine.Idon'tenjoythatbookyouarereading.Mrliu,ouroralEnglishteacher,iseasy-going.其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，同位語(yǔ)--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成：定語(yǔ)從句一借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其甫新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中，但是whomorthat關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。6）排比（排山倒海句）文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句，一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句，一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式，一個(gè)個(gè)地詞，一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ)，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)！Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional,sophisticatedorsimple,thereisplentyinLondonforyou.Nowadays,energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil,coal,naturalgas,solarheat,thewindandoceantides.Wehavegottostudyhard,toenlargeourscopeofknowledge,torealizeourpotentialsandtopayforourlife.（氣勢(shì)恢宏）要想寫(xiě)出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可！七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則既然是挑戰(zhàn)極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！原理：在學(xué)生的文章中，很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子，其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單.，只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì)，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致，而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如：Theweatherbeingfine,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.Africaisthesecondlargestcontinent,itssizebeingaboutthreetimesthatofChina.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！文章主體段落三大殺手銅一、舉實(shí)例思維短路，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)方案，舉實(shí)例！而且者也是我們揭示個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無(wú)法繼續(xù)文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！Inordertoattractmorecustomers,advertisershaveadoptedeverypossiblestimulativefactorinmakingads,suchassound,light,colours,cartoonfilmsandhumanperformance.Forinstance,toadvertiseacertainfood,advertiserswillaskanactororactresstositatatableanddevourtheseeminglydeliciousfoodwhiletheyfimehimorher.更多句型：Totake...asanexample,Oneexampleis....Anotherexampleis...,forexample二、做比較方法：寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，比較與之相似的；又寫(xiě)完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，再比較與之相反的；世界上沒(méi)有同樣的指紋，沒(méi)有相同的樹(shù)葉，文章亦同，只有通過(guò)比較，你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)(throughcomparison)和不同點(diǎn)(throughcontrast)。下面是一些短語(yǔ)：相似的比較：incomparison,likewise,similarly,inthesamemanner相反的比較：ontheotherhand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,incontrast,onthecontrary,comparedwith...三、換言之沒(méi)話說(shuō)了，可以換一句話再說(shuō)，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說(shuō)，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)！下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字Iloveyou!Iamenthusiasticaboutyou.Thatistosay,Iloveyou.Iamwildaboutyou.Inotherwords,Ihavefalleninlovewithyou.或者上面我們舉過(guò)的例子：Icannotbearit.可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：Icannotputupwithit.因此可以這樣說(shuō)：Icannotbearit.Thalistosay,IcannotputupwithitorIamfedupwithit.更多短語(yǔ)：inmoredifficultlanguage,insimplerwords,putitmoresimplyAnygovernment,whichisblindtothispointmaypayaheavyprice.任何政府忽略這一點(diǎn)將付出巨大的代價(jià)Nowdays當(dāng)前atthemerementionof—■提至IIInviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.考慮到問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性，在事態(tài)進(jìn)一步惡化之前，必須采取有效地措施Itisdisputablethat無(wú)可爭(zhēng)辯Althoughthisviewiswidelyheld,thisislittleevidencethat...Infact,wehavetoadmi