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曉艷考研一寫作三大原則1.v2.i3p二寫作常犯錯(cuò)誤ReadingWhenitcomestoreading,everybodyhaveinadividulsopinions.somepeoplethinkthatweshouldreadbooksetectively.Therearesomereasonforreadbooksetectively.First,moreandmorebooksarepublished.itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.forreasonthatourtimeandvigorousislimited.What'smoremanybookcanpoisonoustoourmind,owningtothecontentofthosebooksincludecrime,violent,unheathlyandsoon.Theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingwidelyisbetter,Therearesomereasonforreadbookwidely,Firstandforemost,readbookwidelycanextentourknowledgeinallaspect.Theybelievethat"toknowmore,toreadmore".Besides,ifonemanhavemanykindsofknowledge.Hewillhavemorechancetosuccess.

Inmyopinion,despiteallthedisadvantagereasonofreadbooksseletivelymentionabove.Istillthinkreadbookseletivelyisbetter.Asforthispromble,Ithinkthatwewould'dbettermakefulluseofbooks.三評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)(1)第五檔:A節(jié)(9~10分),B節(jié)(17~20分)很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)：——包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);——使用豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;——語言自然流暢，語法錯(cuò)誤極少;——有效地采用了多種銜接手法，文字連貫，層次清晰;——格式和語域恰當(dāng)貼切。第四檔:A節(jié)(7~8分),B節(jié)(13~16分)較好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)：——包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，允許漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn);——使用較豐富的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;——語言基本準(zhǔn)確，只有在試圖使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯時(shí)才有個(gè)別語法錯(cuò)誤;——采用了適當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?，層次清晰，組織較嚴(yán)密;——格式和語域較恰當(dāng)。第三檔:A節(jié)(5~6分),B節(jié)(9~12分)基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)：——雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容，但包含多數(shù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);——應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的需求;——有一些語法及詞匯錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解;——采用了簡單的銜接手法，內(nèi)容較連貫，層次較清晰;——格式和語域基本合理。第二檔:A節(jié)(3~4分),B節(jié)(5~8分)未能按要求完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)：——漏掉或未能有效闡述一些內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容;——語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限;——有較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)及詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解;——未采用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯邮址?，?nèi)容缺少連貫性;——格式和語域不恰當(dāng)。連詞副詞介詞短語邏輯關(guān)系A(chǔ)ndSimilarly,equally,likewise,atthesametime,inthemeanwhile

平行關(guān)系thenfurthermore，moreover，besides，alsoInaddition,additionally,subsequently遞進(jìn)關(guān)系but，yetwhilewhereasHowever，nevertheless，conversely,unexpectedly,unfortunately,onthecontrary,bycontrast

轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系Orotherwise選擇關(guān)系Soconsequently，therefore，thus，accordingly，hence，asaresult因果關(guān)系第一段自我介紹+寫作目的自我介紹：A文中已經(jīng)給出B文中沒給出

Iamaseniorfromthedepartmentof__in___university.寫作目的：thepurposeofmyletter,asamatteroffact,seeksto曉艷考研第二段：

It,tobeginwith,seemsmyargumentthat簡單句+and/but/so/because/although+簡單句或notonly...butalso...；thenmoreimportantly,so...that...句型.Anotherelementimustpointouthereisthat簡單句，whichhasbeenignoredbynumerous人.privateindividualshumanbeingsyoungstersoncampuschildrenandadultsteenagersandyoungsters小作文萬能理由：1__________.English,formypart,playsacrucialroleinpeople'scommunication

.Therefore,ifonereallyexcelsinit,hecouldimprovehimselfbothinhis

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.第三段表示感謝+期待回信落款Yourstrulyliming表示感謝：AMythankstoyouforyourgenerousassistancearebeyondwords.BWordsfailmewhenIdesiretoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforyourkindconsiderationmyplaint.CItaketheopportunitytoshowmyheartfeltappreciationforyourgenerousassistanceyourenderedme

2)期待回信：

Aiamlookingforwardtoyourreply.BIlookforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.Cyourpromptattentiontomy…….Wouldbehighlyappreciated.大作文

一）圖畫作文1.第一段：第一二句話：用主語從句引出描述圖畫：WhatlooksquiteconspicuousisthatA一幅圖一個(gè)主體兩個(gè)動(dòng)作intheeasyandsimplecartoon,sb(定），doingsth次要?jiǎng)幼鳎ǘ?、狀），isdoingsth（主要?jiǎng)幼鳎ǘ?、狀）B一幅圖兩個(gè)主體，兩個(gè)動(dòng)作Intheeasyandsimplecartoon,Sb1（定）isdoingsth1(定、狀）；and/butsb2（定）isdoingsth2（定/狀）C兩幅圖Intheformerpicture,Sb1（定）isdoingsth1(定、狀）；and/butinthelatterone,sb2（定）isdoingsth2（定/狀）2009自信whatlooksconspicuousisthatthegoalkeeperisimaginghimselfassmallasanantwhenheisstandinginfrontofthegate.ontheotherhand,hecartoon,fouryoungsters,havinglunch,areplayingwiththeircellphones.

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inthecartoon,fouryoungsterswholookratherlessimpressivetoreaders,havinglunchwhentheyaregathering,areplayingwiththeircellphoneswithoutanycommunicationwitheachother.火鍋文化thehotpotdeliciousaswellashealthy,placedinthecenterofthevividcartoon,isfilledwithavarietyofculturessuchaskongfu,BiShengandSwanLake.2014intheformercartoon,awomanwasholdingthehandofherdaughterthirtyyearsago.onthecontrary,inthelatterone,heformercartoon,awomanyoungaswellaselegantwasholdingthehandofherdaughterthirtyyearsago.onthecontrary,inthelatterone,heformerpicture，aboyissaying“ihavemanybooks.”onthecontrary,inthelatterone,anotherboyissayingthathehastoread20booksayear.

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intheformerpicture，aboylookingathisnumerousbooksissaying“ihavemanybooks.”onthecontrary,inthelatterone,anotherboyissayingtohimselfwithacommitmentthathehastoread20booksayear.2012inthepicture,theleftmanwhoiscoveringhisfacewithhishandsfeelsgloomywhenthewaterrunsoutofthebottle.nevertheless,theothermanfeelsluckyasheishurryingtopickthebottleup;and替換LikewisesimilarlyequallyatthesametimeInthemeanwhilebut替換conversely,bycontrast,onthecontrary,unexpectedlyunfortunatelyneverthelesspicture替換CartoondrawingPaintingCaricaturephotograph萬能定語1.好的：aswellas連接兩個(gè)形容詞：Cute,Little,Graceful,elegant;youngConfident,energeticEnthusiastic,passionateoptimsticactiveaggressiveambitiousWholooksdistinctlyimpressivetoreaders2.壞的：crueluglyNegative，dispassionedTerrible，disgustingdisgracefulWholooksratherlessimpressivetoreaders.描述圖畫萬能狀語inthecenterofthevividpicture.練習(xí)精神類Theformergirlwholooksrathertimidaswellasreliantisdefeatedbysomemisfortunesorcriseswhenconfrontedwithdifficulties.onthecontrary,hepainting,abirdlittleaswellaslonely,sittingonanaxusedtocuttreesintheforest,isshedingtearswhenshelooksatthebarrenwide.圖表作文37percentofundergraduates,inauniversity,traveltoappreciatebeautifulsceneries.atthesametime,6percentofyoungsterstraveltomakethemselvesmoreindependent.Whatcouldbeseenclearlyinthetable,36.3percentofconsumers,whenhavingdinnerinrestaurants，regardspecialtiesasthemostimportantthing.Bycontrast,itissurprisingthatonly7.3percentofcitizenscareaboutthepriceoftheirfood.Apparently,thedrawingtriestorevealtous:thepriceisnolongerthemainconcernforquiteafewnationalcitizens.67.77percentoffreshmen,inauniversity,havepart-timejobs.onthecontrary,88.24percentofseniorshavesuchjobs.theamountofchinesecars,fromtheyearof2008to2009,rocketedby10percentrapidly.onthecontrary,thequantityofjapaneseones,inthesameperiod,droppedto15percentdramatically.staffbetween41to50yearsold,inacompany,failtobesatisfiedwiththeirjobs.conversely,40percentofstaff,morethanfiftyyearsold,feelhappyabouttheirwork.

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theamountofmuseums,fromtheyearof2013to2015,roseto7811gradually.Nevertheless,thequantityofvisitors,inthesameperiod,climbedby59.2millionslowly.圖形種類及概述法：泛指圖表：graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table餅圖：piechart直方圖或柱形圖：barchart趨勢曲線圖：linechart表格圖：table增加動(dòng)詞表達(dá)riseexpandclimbsoarjumprocketascendaccumulate,surgeswell

名詞表達(dá)ontheriseascendancecontinueitsupwardtrend減少dropdeclinediveplunge

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Asisshowninthebarchart,thenumberofgraduates,fromtheyearof2005to2009,rocketedto7millionsharply.onthecontrary,theyoungsterswhocanfindjobs,asisshownclearly,grewslowlyfrom1.55millionto200million.Itisclearthatthechartwantstodrawourattentiontothedifficultythattoday’suniversitygraduatesarefacedwithemployment.

第二段第一句二三四句具體的原因分析Althoughitissoabundantcasesthatcouldaccountformyperspective,theoneastoAbrahamLincolnisprettyimpressive.ashewasborninapoorfamily,hewasexceedinglydiligentandhard-working.Asaconsequence,hebecamePresidentoftheUnitedStates.

ApartfromthemanyfinequalitiesthatLincolnpossessed,Iappreciatehiminthathedaredtodowhathethoughtwasrightatatimewhenhisbeliefswereveryunpopularwithmanypeople.Healsohadinfinitepatienceandtoleranceforthosewhodisagreedwithhim,andboretheirdiscourtesytowardhimwithadmirablerestraint.Healsohadthemanlinesstoforgivehisopponents.WhentheCivilWarended,hetreatedhisenemieswithgreatgenerosity.Sothecasevividlyclarifiesatruththat_____hasplayedacrucialroleinoursuccess.馬云1MaYunischiefexecutiveofficer(CEO)oftheHangzhou-basedAlibabaNetworkingTechnologyCoineastChina'sZhejiangProvince.AformerteacherofEnglishinZhejiang,Mastartedthecountry'sfirstmercewebsite--in1998.Injustsixyears,ithasetheleaderinitsfield,servingwellover50,000membertradersin200countriesandregions,withanannualbusinessturnoveramountingtoaboutUS$$10billion.Heavenstandsbyiron-willedmenMa'sstoryseemslegendary."Thefirstfewyearswereprettygoodforus,"herecalled."In2001and2002,however,theso-called'Internetbubble'explodedandbecauseofthat,stayingalivebecameourtopconcern."Despitetheadversity,Madidnotgiveuphisambitionofturningthecompanyintothegreatestofitskindintheworld."IbelieveintheChineseproverb'Heavenstandsbyiron-willedmen,'"heto