讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作指導(dǎo)講義試題原題閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Mr.Beal'sEggDropChallengewasaninstitution（習(xí)俗）atmyschool.ThegoaloftheChallengewassimple---youhadtobuildaprotectivecontainertokeepaneggfrombreakingwhendroppedoverthestadiumwall.“BringyourcontainertoclassonFriday/'Mr.Bealsaid."Thisyearwe'regoingtotrysomethingdifferent.Youcanworkaloneorwithapartner.”Mybestfriend,Cassie,andIgrinnedateachother.Wealwaysworkedonprojectstogether.We'retheperfectcombination.ImademyfavoritesandwichthatafternoonwhilewaitingforCassietocomeoverandworkonthecontainer.Spreadingthefluffymarshmallowcream（蓬松棉花糖奶油）gavemeanidea.WhenCassiearrived,Itoldhermybrilliantidea---usemarshmallowcreamtoabsorbtheshockoftheimpact.“Youmustbekidding,"Cassieresponded."Whynotputtheegginabasketwithaparachute（降落傘）attached?Itwillsimplyfloattosafety/7"It'stooeasyforsomethingtogowrong.Itwillneverwork!”Iargued."Andmarshmallowcreamwill?”Cassierolledhereyes."Theparachuteisbetterthanthatstupididea.”Icouldn'tbelieveit.Ofcoursewe'dhadourlittlefightsinthepast,butthiswasdifferent.She'dnevercalledanyofmyideas"stupid"before.“ThenI'llbuildmineandyoubuildyours,andwe'lljustseewhoseisbetter/'"Fine!"Cassiegrabbedherbackpackandstormedout.Andjustlikethat,ourfriendshipwassmashed（粉石卒）.Likeaneggdroppedfromthetopofastadiumwithoutmarshmallowcreamtoprotectit.Fridayfinallyrolledaround.Allthekidscarriedtheireggcontainersupthreestadiumstepsanddroppedthemoverthesidewall.Iftheeggbroke,youwereout.Iftheeggsurvived,youhadtowalkupthreemorestepsanddropitagain.Thiswentonuntilthelasteggbroke.Bythefourthlaunch,onlyCassieandIwereleft.“OK,〃Mr.Bealyelled.zzLetthemgoonthecountofthree/7Theclasscalled,“One,two,three!,zIletgoofmycontainerfirstandthenCassie.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！癘h,no!〃Iheardsomeonesayandraceddown.eggbouncedout//Cassiesighed,frowning.試題分析L人物：①I:②Cassie：③Mr.Beal：”BringyourcontainertoclassonFriday/'Mr.Bealsaid."Thisyearwe/regoingtotrysomethingdifferent.Youcanworkaloneorwithapartner//2.前文情節(jié):一年一度的“扔雞蛋挑戰(zhàn)〃比賽即將開始，Mr.Beal宣布今年的規(guī)則既可以單獨，也可以找同伴一起完成。我跟Cassie一直來都是“最佳搭檔"。于是，我們開始商量今年的比賽方案：我決定用蓬松棉花糖奶油作為保護(hù)雞蛋的重要物件，而Cassie則想用降落傘。兩個人開始起了不同意見，Cassie一氣之下就奪門而出。這友誼說碎就碎。今年只能各自準(zhǔn)備比賽器具了。周五來臨，經(jīng)過一輪又一輪的比賽，我跟Cassie進(jìn)入最后的決賽。在全班同學(xué)喊完“一二三，開始"后，我把我的雞蛋先扔了出去，然后Cassieo哪里知道，結(jié)果…….主題：人與社會，人與自我We'retheperfectcombination.^Ourfriendshipwassmashed.玲….續(xù)寫情節(jié)安排：▼第一段："Oh,no!”Iheardsomeonesayandraceddown.①（與開頭句銜接）飛奔過去看到底發(fā)生了什么？（為什么有人喊no?）②看到地面上自己的雞蛋，感覺如何？兩人有什么樣的反應(yīng)？③（與下文開頭句銜接）正當(dāng)我還在替自己可惜的時候，我聽到了Cassie的失望。▼第二段："Myeggbouncedout,"Cassiesighed,frowning.①（與開頭句銜接）聽到Cassie也沒成功，我就回過神來，不再為自己的失敗懊惱。②看著Cassie的結(jié)果，心里想了寫什么？做了寫什么？③（主題升華）不僅爭取到了最終分勝負(fù)的機(jī)會，還贏回了值得珍惜的友誼。下水作文“Oh,no!〃Iheardsomeonesayandraceddown.Theword“BROKENrunningaroundinmymind,Ispentnomorethantwosecondsinreachingthespot,wherelaynumerousbrokeneggs.Minewasnoexceptionthistime.Whatannoyedmemostwasthatmy“opponent”,Cassie,giggledbesideme!Sheevenmadefunofmy“masterpiece",jokingthatwasamessypaste.Nothingwasworsethanfeelingitagreatshametolosebothcherishedfriendshipandpreciouschance.JustasIwaslostinmyfailure,therecameCassie/sdisappointment!(85words)〃Myeggbouncedout//Cassiesighed,frowning.Herwordsdrewmebacktomyself.Havingaglanceatheregg,whichwasmiserabletoo,lyingonthemessygroundwithitsbrokenshell,Ifeltabitsorryforherover-confidence.Thesametomine!Herprojectwasreallyacreativeone,butsheignoredmykindwarningtheotherdays!Insteadoflaughingather,Ibegantohelptofindwhy.WebeggedMr.Bealforanotherchance,wherebackcametheperfectcombinationaswellasthetreasuredfriendship.(85words)參考范文續(xù)寫(滿分25分)“Oh,no!”1heardsomeonesayandraceddown."Myeggbroken?”Iwonderedalltheway.Cassiefollowedmeclosely.Igottothebottomfirst.Comingintosightwereeggshellsandalltheprotectivecontainersfrompreviousfaileddrops.Isearchedandfinallyspottedmycontainer.Itseemedtobeinonepiece!Excited,Irushedoverandpickeditup."Oops!”Yolkandeggwhitemixedwithmarshmallowcreamwereleakingout.Afailure!"Thatlookslikeeggdropsoup.**IheardCassiemakejokesaboutme."Shewin?”Idroppedmycontainerandlookedintohers.Noegginit!"Myeggbouncedout,"Cassiesighed,frowning.Notfaraway,onthegrass,laythebrokenshellofheregg.HIguessthepilothadanegg-ejectorseat/*Ijoked.Cassielookedatme,herfacesoftening.Thensheshruggedhershouldersandgrinned.Igiggled."Egg-ejectorseat,eggdropsoup.**Ilaughedtotears."Sorr