[題目要求](2011·陜西高考)假定你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫TigerMom的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)

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，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。I'mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetop5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomefriendsofminekeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?博客內(nèi)容寫作要點(diǎn)要求寫作要點(diǎn)：1．表明自己的看法；2．陳述自己的理由(可舉例說(shuō)明)；3．提出至少兩條建議。要求：1．短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域。2．短文詞數(shù)不少于100(不含已寫好的部分)。3．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)意連貫。4．書(shū)寫需清晰、工整。Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideais________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[技法指導(dǎo)]議論文是用來(lái)論述某個(gè)道理、闡明某種觀點(diǎn)的一種文體。它通過(guò)擺事實(shí)、講道理、辨是非來(lái)表達(dá)作者的見(jiàn)解和主張。議論文可分為許多種類，但中學(xué)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)所要求的議論文是一種限定的寫作，其論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證都比較明確。有的文章提出問(wèn)題，如：……為什么？……怎么辦？……該采取什么措施？考生可以結(jié)合問(wèn)題要求，闡述相關(guān)的觀點(diǎn)，切忌隨意發(fā)揮。近幾年的高考書(shū)面表達(dá)中，其主要命題形式是以表格式和提綱式來(lái)呈現(xiàn)寫作材料的?；疽螅?．文章直接闡述事物的道理，明確表露作者的思想觀點(diǎn)。2．表達(dá)方式以議論為主，輔之以說(shuō)明、敘述等方式。議論文中的記敘和描寫是為論點(diǎn)提供根據(jù)的。因此，記敘應(yīng)該是概括的，描寫應(yīng)該是簡(jiǎn)要的。3．內(nèi)容重在說(shuō)理，堅(jiān)持?jǐn)[事實(shí)、講道理。4．議論文主要包括三個(gè)要素：論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)和論證方法。論點(diǎn)是指需要證實(shí)的問(wèn)題；論證是指闡述道理以理服人；論據(jù)就是用于論證的具有說(shuō)服力的事實(shí)和證據(jù)。論點(diǎn)解決“證明什么”，論據(jù)解決“用什么來(lái)證明”，論證解決“怎樣證明”。5．觀點(diǎn)正確，論據(jù)充分，語(yǔ)言精練，論證合理，有嚴(yán)密的邏輯性。6．語(yǔ)言應(yīng)該簡(jiǎn)練、準(zhǔn)確；盡可能避免使用口語(yǔ)，多用書(shū)面語(yǔ)。第一步構(gòu)構(gòu)建框框架，清清晰行文文[謀篇布局局][黃金模板板]Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthat______________________(表明自己己的觀點(diǎn)點(diǎn)).Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.________________________(舉例陳述述自己的的理由).SoIsuggestthat___________________________(提出自己己的具體體建議).第二步打打造亮亮句，增增色文章章1．而且，，懲罰絕絕不是幫幫助他們們身心發(fā)發(fā)展的明明智選擇擇。?What'smore,punishmentisn'tawisechoiceofhelpingthemgrowupmentallyandphysicallyatall.?Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.2．因此，，我建議議你采取取你朋友友們的建建議。?Therefore,Iadviseyoutotakeyourfriends'advice.?SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.第三步串句句成文，保證證流暢Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.Someall-Astudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.，SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl;letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities;andlethermakemistakesofherownasweteenagersoftendo.作為一名中學(xué)學(xué)生，平時(shí)你你是否愿意和和自己的老師師交流？你認(rèn)認(rèn)為良好的師師生關(guān)系應(yīng)該該是什么樣的的？如何才能能建立這種關(guān)關(guān)系？請(qǐng)寫一一篇120～150詞的短文，就就這一話題談?wù)務(wù)勛约旱目纯捶?。注意?．可以使用一一些具體的事事例支持你的的論點(diǎn)；2．標(biāo)題自擬。。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文：LoveandConcernMakeanIdealRelationshipStudentsarebecomingunwillingtoconfesstotheirteachersbecausetheyarenotequalinpositionandteacheButIamwillingtosharemyinnerthoughtswithmyteachers.Theyshowloveandconcernfortheirstudentsandaregoodlisteners.Ialwaysfinditeasytoseeksupportandadvicefromthem,fromwhichIbenefitandlearnalot.Inthiscase,anidealrelationshipbetweenteachersandstudentsisveryimportant.Inmyopinion,thisrelationshipshouldbeonefilledwithlove,care,understanding,