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九年級(jí)上冊(cè)單元話題寫(xiě)作Unit5Whataretheshirtsmadeof?話題分析一、話題分析本單元以“中國(guó)制造的東西”為話題，圍繞某種產(chǎn)品的材質(zhì)、產(chǎn)地、用途及特殊性等信息而展開(kāi)。與之相關(guān)的話題作文通常會(huì)涉及民間藝術(shù)以及文化傳承。介紹特色產(chǎn)品。本話題適合記敘說(shuō)明兩種題材相結(jié)合。寫(xiě)作此類(lèi)話題作文時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，行文中注意準(zhǔn)確捕捉寫(xiě)作的“精髓”，表達(dá)被描述的事物時(shí)，有可能要用到被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要立足事實(shí)，表達(dá)真情實(shí)感。寫(xiě)作步驟“總分總法”寫(xiě)產(chǎn)品介紹類(lèi)的作文1.總起點(diǎn)明產(chǎn)品的名稱；2.詳細(xì)地描寫(xiě)產(chǎn)品的特征樣式、質(zhì)量、性能；3.總結(jié)評(píng)價(jià)。Ihaveahandbag.Itisbeautiful.It’smadeinSuzhou,JiangsuProvince.It’smadeofleather（皮革）.Also,it’scompletelymadebyhand.It’sred.It’ssospecialbecauseithasapieceofembroidery.Theflowersandbirdsonitaresolivelythatyoumaythinkthepictureonthehandbagisreal.Ilikeitverymuch.Readthepassage,whatcanyoulearn?Whatitlookslike物品樣子Whatitsmaterialis他的材質(zhì)Whereitismade在哪里制作Whyitisspecial為什么是特殊的Whattheproductis產(chǎn)品是什么Whoitismadeby被誰(shuí)制作Whatitcando它的功能Moreinformation(symbol,howtomake...)howtodiscribeobjects如何描述物品VocabularyCollections詞匯收集素材積累產(chǎn)品介紹類(lèi)常用詞匯：chopstick,fork,blouse,gloves,glass,cotton,steel,handbag,material;produce,process,product,local,heat,bemadeof,byhand,tuninto,cover...with,everyday,lively,beknownfor,soft,strong,interesting,smooth,real,small,cute,useful,helpful回顧單元寫(xiě)作素材產(chǎn)品介紹類(lèi)常用句型：1.Mytown/city/countryisfamousfor...2....isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.3.It'smoreconvenientfor...4....ismadeof/from/by/in...5....is/areknownfor...6....is/areusedfor...7....is/arespecialbecause..8.Chinaisfamousfor…9.It’sgreatthatChinaissogoodat...·10.…wishthatinthefuture·will…11.Theseusuallytrytoshow....12.Theyareseenassymbolsof...·萬(wàn)能模板開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，直接表述你要介紹的對(duì)象講物品的產(chǎn)地，原料，外觀，制作方式用途等講感受物品名稱產(chǎn)地Itismadein地點(diǎn)原料Itismadeof/from材料外觀制作方式Therearedifferentkindsofpicturesonit，suchas舉例Itismadeby方式用途Itisusedfor用途Itisgoodfor，weshould優(yōu)點(diǎn)美好祝愿1.Ihavea/an+物品2.物品+isfamousinmycity/town.3.Oneoffamousproductsinmycountryis+物品3aWhataresomespecialthingsthatyourhometownorcityisfamousfor?WhattheproductisWhatitismadeof/fromWhoitismadebyWhereitismadeWhatitcandoWhyitisspecialDuilian要點(diǎn)提示：1.風(fēng)箏的象征意義；2.原材料：竹子、紙或布或塑料(plastic)、細(xì)繩(string)；3.用途：過(guò)去用于送信，現(xiàn)在用來(lái)娛樂(lè)和鍛煉?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】1.

定基調(diào)體裁：應(yīng)用文(郵件)；郵件的主體部分為說(shuō)明文時(shí)態(tài)：介紹事物時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：第三人稱2.

謀布局、寫(xiě)句子

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第一次提到“風(fēng)箏”時(shí)用kites，再次提到時(shí)可以用they代替；為了避免重復(fù)，inmycity在成篇章時(shí)可以用here來(lái)代替，這都是使用照應(yīng)手段來(lái)使文章銜接的方法。在陳述風(fēng)箏的意義時(shí)可以使用表示原因的連詞because，這是使用邏輯紐帶的方式使文章銜接的方法。4.

成篇章DearMarcus,Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mexcitedtohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutkitesinmycity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillflyakitehere!Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua5.

化“平凡”為“非凡”P(pán)eopleusedkitestosendamessageintheolddays.→Kiteswereusedforsendingamessageintheolddays.DearMarcus,

Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mexcitedtohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutkitesinmycity.Mycity,WeifanginShandongProvince,isfamousforitskites.AninternationalkitefestivalisheldhereinAprileveryyear.Kitesarelovedbylotsofpeoplebecause

theyriseintotheairwithpeople’swishesforabetterlife.Theyareusuallymadeofbamboo,paperorclothorplasticandstring.Thereareallkindsofkitesandtheyareoftenpaintedwithcolorfuldrawings.Andkiteshereoftenhavespecialdesigns.Peopleusedkitestosendamessageintheolddays.Today,theyareusedforfunandexercise.

Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillflyakitehere!

Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練二假如你叫李華,來(lái)自江西省景德鎮(zhèn)市。近日，你的加拿大筆友Marcus發(fā)來(lái)一封電子郵件，他說(shuō)要來(lái)你市旅游，詢問(wèn)你市以什么而聞名，并讓你推薦有什么值得贈(zèng)送朋友的紀(jì)念品。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示給他回復(fù)郵件。要點(diǎn)提示：1.

以瓷器(china)聞名及其意義；2.

原材料：陶土；3.

用途：可供人們欣賞、也可用來(lái)裝(contain)東西；4.

最佳推薦：青花瓷(blueandwhiteporcelain)?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】1.

定基調(diào)體裁：應(yīng)用文(郵件)；郵件的主體部分為說(shuō)明文時(shí)態(tài)：介紹事物時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：第三人稱列提綱寫(xiě)句子引出介紹的產(chǎn)品(1)Mycity,JingdezheninJiangxiProvince,___________________.介紹產(chǎn)品意義(2)Chinaisspecial.ChinaisanexampleofexquisiteChinesecraftsmanship(精美的中國(guó)工藝)._____________________________________________(瓷器是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的一個(gè)象征).原材料(3)______________________.介紹產(chǎn)品用途(4)_______________________________.(5)_______________________________.Manythingsaremadeofchinainoureverydaylife,suchascups,bowlsandplates.最佳推薦(6)_________________________________________________(每天有許多不同種類(lèi)的瓷器被生產(chǎn))inmycity.Blueandwhiteporcelainisthemostfamousone.Youcanbuysomeforyourfriendsandrelatives.邀請(qǐng)及祝愿Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere!【參考范文】DearMarcus,Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mexcitedtohearfromyou.I’dliketointroducesomethingspecialinmycitytoyou.Mycity,

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隨著中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的騰飛，越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人意識(shí)到保護(hù)非物質(zhì)文化遺產(chǎn)的重要性。請(qǐng)你以“HaimenPastries”為題，寫(xiě)一篇110詞左右的英語(yǔ)文章，介紹海門(mén)糕仔。要點(diǎn)包括參考詞匯：leeks（蔥）；fat（肥肉）；sauce（醬料）sesame(芝麻);stream(蒸）;intheshapeof(用…的形狀）place海門(mén)鎮(zhèn)History數(shù)千年Materialsused蔥；肥肉；醬料；芝麻等Howtomake手工制作，約8個(gè)小時(shí)Features圓形；味道清甜軟糯Beusedfor零食和貢品meaning傳承傳統(tǒng)技藝審題1.文體：_________;時(shí)態(tài)：____________________