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Ipeeredovermygrandma’sshoulderasshesewedpiecesofclothtogether.ThetwopiecesbecameonefasterthanI’dimagined.Thecolors,however,lookeduglywhenputtogetherandnoneofthepatternsmatched.Allthepatches(補(bǔ)丁)onthisblanketseemedtodisagree.
“Grandma,that’stheugliest
quilt
(棉被)I’veeverseen.”
“Oh,sweetie,it’s
warm
and
beautiful,”saidGrandma,pointingtoapileofcrazypatternedshirtsandsuits.“Ican
take
theseoldclothesthatGrandpaandIwillneverwearagainandturnthemintosomethingusefuland
good.It’snotthequiltsappearancebutthe
love
thatsewsittogetherthatmakesitbeautiful.Thisquiltwillkeepyouwarmonacoldnightliketonight.AndIknowthatforafact.”
Grandma
putherhandonmyshoulder,“Noteveryoneisasluckyasweare.Here,putonyourcoat.We’llgetasecondopinionabouthowuglymyquiltsare.”
Grandmafoldedafinishedquiltandtuckeditintoa
shoppingbag.Afterwards,wegotinthecaranddrovedowntown.Thewhitesnowturnedgrayeraswegottothecity.Eventually,Grandmapulledupatadarkalley(胡同)andwegotoutofthecar.Theterriblesmellofrottinggarbagemademefeelsickandpinchmynoseshut.Grandmatookmyhandandledmetothestreetlamp.Icouldseethesnowshimmering(發(fā)出微光)inthelight.
Grandmapaused.“There’susuallysomebodydownthisalley.It’squietandoutofthewind---agoodplacetostayoncoldnights.Anicewarmquiltmightmakeitevenbetter.”
Thedarkengulfed(吞沒)GrandmaandIaswesteppeddeepintothealley.Thepavementwascrackedandmissinginspots.Chickenbonesandstainedboxeslitteredtheirway.AndGrandma’sshoesmadealoudsoundwitheachstep.Feelingfrightened,IsqueezedGrandma’shand.Grandmasqueezedmyhandback.“It’sOK.”she
smiled.
“Who’sthere?”shoutedavoiceoutofthe
darkness.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語?!癐haveanicewarmquilt,ifyouwant.”saidGrandma.
Backhome,Ifoundaworn-outquiltbyaccidentinacupboard.
|分析|主題:愛心人物:I,Grandma情節(jié):我看到奶奶縫制了一條帶有各種補(bǔ)丁的被子,認(rèn)為這條被子非常的丑陋。但是,奶奶卻說被子的美不在于它的外表,而在于這條被子是用愛縫制的。之后,奶奶和作者一起來到城里破舊而又寒冷的胡同。......呼應(yīng):與奶奶一起獻(xiàn)愛心,幫助困難的人鋪墊:It'snotthequiltsappearancebutthelovethatsewsittogetherthatmakesitbeautiful.Thisquiltwillkeepyouwarmonacoldnightliketonight.鋪墊:Anicewarmquiltmightmakeitevenbetter.?-------Whatdidgrandmasayaboutit?------------Thequiltrepresentslove,careandwarmthAppreciatethedescriptionoftheenvironment.Whatcanyouinferfromit?鋪墊:黑暗吞沒了奶奶thedarkengulfedgrandmathepavementwascrackedandmissinginspots人行道上有裂縫,有些地方不見了chickenbonesandstainedboxeslitteredtheirway雞骨頭和染色的盒子散落在路上奶奶每走一步都發(fā)出很大的響聲grandma'sshoesmadealoudsoundwitheachstepHowdidIandgrandmafeel?I----------FrightenedGrandma----------FrightenedbutoptimisticTheme:Worn-outasthequiltis,itcarriesloveandwarmth.Timegoesbybutloveneverfadeaway.必須要回答的問題:Paragraph1."haveanicewarmquilt,ifyouwantit."Whatdidgrandmado?Whatdidthewomando?Howdidshefeel?Paragraph2:Backhome,/foundaworn-outquiltbyaccidentinacupboard.WhatdidIdo?What'sthestoryoftheworn-outquilt?Whatmightbetheending?Languageconsolidation:從我奶奶的肩膀后面窺視peerovermygrandma'sshoulder把一塊塊布縫在一起sewpiecesofclothtogether所有的補(bǔ)丁在這個(gè)毯子上似乎格格不入A11thepatches(補(bǔ)丁)onthisblanketseemedtodisagree一堆樣式瘋狂的襯衫和西裝apileofcrazypatternedshirtsandsuits不是被子的外觀,而是把它縫在一起的愛使它美麗。It'snotthequiltsappearancebutthelovethatsewsittogetherthatmakesitbeautiful.白色的雪變得更灰了Thewhitesnowturnedgrayeraswegottothecity駛?cè)牒诎档男∠飌ulledupatadarkalley下水作文“Ihaveanicewarmquilt,ifyouwant.”saidGrandma.
Silent,butsooncamethesoundofthefootstepsinthe
darkness,louderandlouder,towardsus.Abouttwometersaheadofusstoodashortthinoldmaninrags.Hiddenbehindmy
Grandma,Iknewallshedid!“Thequiltwasreallyforme?”askedhiminalowvoice.“Sure!”Grandmaopenedthe
shoppingbag
andpulledoutthecolorful
quilt.“A...thousand...thanks!”Icouldfeelthegratefultearsdownhischeeks.(76words)Backhome,Ifoundaworn-outquiltbyaccidentinacupboard.Curious,IwenttoGrandmafortheanswer,“Whyhaveyoukeptit?”Sheopenedhermouthasiftosaysomething,butchoked.Amomentofsilence,shesharedherbitterbut
warm
story.Alittlegirl,shecametothecityforalivingwithherparents,penniless.Thequiltwasa
love
fromakindman,helpingthemgothroughthecoldwinter.That’swhyshekeptsending
good
tothoseinneedyearsafteryears.Isurelywould,too!(83words)參考答案:Paragraph1."Ihaveanicewarmquilt,ifyouwantit."saidGrandma.Afterawhile,abeamoflight一束光appearedandaladywalkedoutofthedarkness,Grandmaopenedtheshoppingbagandpulledoutthemulticoloredquilt."That'sprettyanditlookswarm."Theladyexclaimedandtookthequilt,hereyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.Aswewalkedbackdownthealley,Ilookedovermyshoulderandsawtheladyholdingthequilttightlytoherface."You'reright,Grandma.Thatisabeautifulquilt"Onourridebackhome,thelady'sgratefulwordswerestillringinginmyears.Paragraph2:Backhome,Ifoundaworn-
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