地鐵漲價(jià)了以后，喝酸奶要舔蓋子了，吃薯片也要舔手指了、吃泡面也喝湯了、喝星巴克也自拍了、抽紙也不敢放在辦公室顯眼位置了，最最明顯的是吃益達(dá)不敢兩粒一起嚼了，去超市要自己帶購(gòu)物袋了，上廁所紙要折了，洗發(fā)水用沒了也要兌水晃了，任性再也沒有了?。?！家鄉(xiāng)變化類作文王文霞考情公示2014內(nèi)蒙古赤峰2013山東濰坊家鄉(xiāng)變化生活交通旅游家鄉(xiāng)變化？2014內(nèi)蒙古赤峰第一中學(xué)八年級(jí)下學(xué)期期中試題

某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，以“TheChangesinMyHometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇90字左右的短文。過(guò)去 1.房屋破舊.垃圾滿地。2.游客很少。現(xiàn)在 1.生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車。 2.旅游：每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自世界各地的游客。將來(lái)請(qǐng)你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)具體的地名，否則扣分； 2.標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3.提示：環(huán)境environment;污染pollution;方便convenient.經(jīng)典例題我們?cè)撊绾螌懀恐锌紝懽魅阶咧锌紝懽鞔蠓▽懽魅阶邉?dòng)筆前審題列提綱動(dòng)筆時(shí)緊跟提綱寫句子停筆后檢查如何審題？審題人稱時(shí)態(tài)字?jǐn)?shù)重點(diǎn)信息動(dòng)筆前—審題列提綱

2014內(nèi)蒙古赤峰第一中學(xué)八年級(jí)下學(xué)期期中試題

某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，以“TheChangesinMyHometown”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇90字左右的短文。過(guò)去 1.房屋破舊.垃圾滿地。2.游客很少?，F(xiàn)在 1.生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車。 2.旅游：每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自世界各地的游客。將來(lái)請(qǐng)你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)注意：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)具體的地名，否則扣分； 2.標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 3.提示：環(huán)境environment;污染pollution;方便convenient.經(jīng)典例題人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)字?jǐn)?shù)：90重點(diǎn)信息一起來(lái)審題人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)字?jǐn)?shù)：60重點(diǎn)信息人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)字?jǐn)?shù)：60重點(diǎn)信息人稱時(shí)態(tài)提綱字?jǐn)?shù)重要信息動(dòng)筆前—審題列提綱

列提綱結(jié)構(gòu)：四段式內(nèi)容：第一段–總體變化第二段–過(guò)去的樣子第三段–現(xiàn)在的樣子第四段–表達(dá)愿望動(dòng)筆時(shí)緊跟提綱寫句子文章提綱第一段–總體變化第二段–過(guò)去的樣子第三段–現(xiàn)在的樣子第四段–表達(dá)愿望第一段：總體變化 Withthedevelopment，ourhometownhasalreadychanged.動(dòng)筆時(shí)—緊跟提綱寫句子第二段：過(guò)去的樣子（過(guò)去時(shí)）過(guò)去1.房屋破舊.垃圾滿地。2.游客很少。 WhenIwasachild,therewerepoorroomsandlotsofrubbishinmyhometown.So,therewerefewvisitorseveryyear.動(dòng)筆時(shí)—緊跟提綱寫句子第三段：現(xiàn)在的樣子（現(xiàn)在時(shí)）

現(xiàn)在-1.生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車。2旅游：每年有成千上萬(wàn)來(lái)自世界各地的游客。

Now,manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Firstly,wehavebrightapartmentsandowncars.Secondly,thousandsofvisitorsaroundtheworldwillcomemyhometowneveryyear.動(dòng)筆時(shí)—緊跟提綱寫句子第四段：表達(dá)愿望 Astimepasses,Ibelievemyhometownwillbemuchbetterinthefuture.動(dòng)筆時(shí)—緊跟提綱寫句子初步成型第一段Withthedevelopment，ourhometownhasalreadychanged.第二段WhenIwasachild,therewerepoorroomsandlotsofrubbishinmyhometown.So,therewerefewvisitorseveryyear.第三段Astimepasses,Ibelievemyhometownwillbemuchbetterinthefuture.Now,manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Firstly,wehavebrightapartmentsandowncars.Secondly,thousandsofvisitorsaroundtheworldwillcomemyhometowneveryyear.第四段這樣的文章能拿高分嗎？

當(dāng)然不能！?。?/p>

我們來(lái)進(jìn)行升級(jí)！第一段Withtherapiddevelopmentofthesociety,manythingsaroundourlifearechanged.Personallyspeaking,myhometownhaschangedalot.Withthedevelopment，ourhometownhasalreadychanged.升級(jí)第二段WhenIwasachild,myhometownusedtohavelotsofpoorroomswheretherewereonewayleadingtothemainroadwithlotsofrubbishonbothside.Thetrafficwasnotsoconvenientthatfewvisitorswouldliketocomehere.WhenIwasachild,therewerepoorroomsandlotsofrubbishinmyhometown.So,therewerefewvisitorseveryyear.升級(jí)第三段However,Nowadays,manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Firstly,ourlivingconditionshaveimprovedrapidly.

Aincreasingnumberofpeoplehavetheirownbrightapartmentandnewcars.Secondly,myhometownattractsthousandsoftouristseveryyear.Itisgraduallywell-knownforhistoricalscenicspotsandwell-organizedhouses.Now,manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Firstly,wehavebrightapartmentsandowncars.Secondly,thousandsofvisitorsaroundtheworldwillcomemyhometowneveryyear.升級(jí)風(fēng)景名勝第四段Astimepasses,wonderfulchangesthankstothesocialdevelopment.Ibelievemyhometownwillbemuchbetterinthefuture.Astimepasses,Ibelievemyhometownwillbemuchbetterinthefuture.升級(jí)邏輯詞替換FirstlyFirstofallSecondly

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最終升級(jí)后 Withtherapiddevelopmentofthesociety,manythingsaroundourlifearechanged.Personallyspeaking,myhometownhaschangedalot. WhenIwasachild,myhometownusedtohavelotsofpoorroomswheretherewereonewayleadingtothemainroadwithlotsofrubbishonbothside.Thetrafficwasnotsoconvenientthatfewvisitorswouldliketocomehere. However,Nowadays,manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Firstofall,ourlivingconditionshaveimprovedrapidly.Aincreasingnumberofpeoplehavetheirownbrightapartmentandnewcars.Besides,myhometownattractsthousandsoftouristseveryyear.Itisgraduallywell-knownforhistoricalscenicspotsandwell-organizedhouses. Astimepasses,wonderfulchangesthankstothesocialdevelopment.Ibelievemyhometownwillbemuchbetterinthefuture.第一段第二段第三段第四段停筆后檢查認(rèn)真細(xì)致檢查全文1.格式、要點(diǎn)、詞數(shù)2.人稱、大小寫、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)3.有無(wú)語(yǔ)病、是否通順1.最低要求需做到2.細(xì)節(jié)之處很重要3.想拿高分不可少停筆后—檢查當(dāng)堂背誦10分鐘一句一句檢查隨機(jī)抽查回顧寫作三步走動(dòng)筆前審題列提綱動(dòng)筆時(shí)緊跟提綱寫句子停筆后檢查人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)字?jǐn)?shù)：60重點(diǎn)信息課堂練習(xí)文章提綱第一段–總體變化第二段–過(guò)去的樣子第三段–現(xiàn)在的樣子第四段–表達(dá)愿望參考范文 Withtherapiddevelopmentofthesociety,manythingsaroundourlifearechanged.Personallyspeaking,myhometownhaschangedalot. WhenIwasachild,therewasonlyoneblackandwhiteTVsetinourvillage.AndIdon’tknowwhat’scomputer.Ioftenwenttoschoolonfoot.What’smore,insummer,wehadtousehand-madefanstomakeourtemperaturedown.IfIwantedtoconnectwiththedistantfriendsorrelatives,themostconvenientwayiswritingletters,whichmaylostonthewayortakealotoftimetoreachthedestination. However,nowadays,therearefourcolortelevisionsinmyhomeandmostpeoplehavetheirowncomputers.Andnowcarsareseeneverywhere.Inaddition,mosthouseshaveair-conditioning,whichcan