第第頁(yè)北師大版（2023）必修第二冊(cè)Unit6TheAdmirableWritingWorkshop課件(共22張PPT)(共22張PPT)

WritingWorkshop

Unit6TheAdmirable

Abriefstatementoranaccount

ofthemainpointsofsomething.

Summary

Tick(√)thestatementsthataretrueaboutsummarywriting.

Asummaryshouldleaveoutunnecessarydetailslikeexamplesandexplanations.

Youcanaddyourownopinioninasummary.

Asummaryshouldincludeallthemainandsupportinginformation.

Itisimportanttouseyourownwordsinthesummary.

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Readthesummary,andanswerthefollowingquestions.

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Whatmainpointsoftheoriginaltextareincluded

WhatinformationoftheoriginaltextisleftoutWhy

Doesthesummaryincludetheopinionofthesummarywriter

Whatmainpointsoftheoriginaltextareincluded

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theNobelPrizeAward(Para1)

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hermissionandresearch(Para3-4)

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personalinformation(Para2)

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herattitudetowardsfame(Para5)

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Compareandfindthesimilaritiesanddifferencesbetweenthetextandsummary.

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Readthesummaryandunderlineinthetext

AttheNobelPrizeLectureon7December,2023,an84-year-oldChinesewomanwalkedslowlyontothestage.Shebegantotalkaboutthelife-savingdrug,artemisinin,whichshehaddiscoveredwiththehelpofherteaminthe1970s.ThewomanwasTuYouyou,thefirstChinesefemalescientisttobeawardedaNobelPrizeforherwork.AscientistwhowasontheNobelPrizeCommitteecalledHansForssbergexplainedthat“thediscoveryofartemisininhasledtothedevelopmentofnewdrugswhichhavesavedthelivesofmillions”.WhenthankingtheCommitteeforthehonour,TuYouyousaid,“Thisisnotonlyanhonourformyself,butalsorecognitionandencouragementforallscientistsinChina.”

Leftoutsomedetails,explanationsandquotes

Readthesummaryandunderlineinthetext

TuYouyouwasborninZhejiangProvince,China,on30December,1930.ShestudiedmedicineatPekingUniversityHealthScienceCentre.Aftergraduation,shebecameamemberofChinaAcademyofChineseMedicalSciences.Later,shestudiedChinesemedicinefortwoandahalfyearswithexpertsinthefieldfromwhomshegainedadeepknowledgeabouttraditionalpractices.

Justintroducedherexperiencesofstudyingmedicine

Readthesummaryandunderlineinthetext

In1969,TuYouyouwaschosentoestablishateamtofindacureformalaria—adiseasethatkilledmillionsofpeopleeveryyear.Acrosstheworld,scientistshadbeentryingtofindacure.Theytestedmorethan240,000chemicalswithnosuccess.However,TuYouyouhadanideathatChineseherbsmightholdthesecret.ShestudiedancientChinesemedicalliteratureandvisitedexpertsintraditionalChinesemedicine.Sheresearchedhundredsoftraditionalrecipesconnectedtoanti-malarialcures.ThenTuYouyouandherteambeganusingmodernresearchmethodstostudytheseChineseherbsonebyone.

introducedhermissionandthebackgroundofherresearch

Readthesummaryandunderlineinthetext

Thiswasnotaneasytask.Thereasonwhythiswasdifficultwasthattheteamhadlimitedresources.Theydidnothaveenoughstaff,andthelaboratoryinwhichtheyworkedhadpoorairquality.However,afterhundredsoffailedexperiments,theyeventuallycameacrossapromisingchemical.Itworkedwellinexperimentsonanimals,buttheyhadtoknowifitwassafeforhumans.TuYouyoubravelyvolunteeredtobethefirsthumansubjectwhentheywerereadytostarttestingandtherestofherteamfollowedher.Thetestwasasuccess.Themedicinetheydiscovered,artemisinin,hasnowbecometheworld’smosteffectivedrugforfightingmalaria.

Introducedmoredetailsaboutherresearch

Readthesummaryandunderlineinthetext

EventhoughTuYouyouisnotinterestedinfame,shehasbecomeascientistwhoseworkisinternationallyrenowned.In2023,shewasselectedbytheBBCasoneofthemostinfluentialfiguresofscienceinthe20thCenturyalongwithAlbertEinsteinandAlanMathisonTuring.TuYouyouwasnotedforherbraveryinbeingascientistduringadifficulttimeforscienceinChina,herabilitytouseoldwisdomandnewmethodstoachievehergoalsandthefactthatherworkbridgedtheEasternandWesternworlds,savingmillionsoflives.TodayTuYouyoucontinuestoconductresearchdespiteherage.AccordingtoTuYouyou,“Fromourresearchexperienceindiscoveringartemisinin,welearntthewisdombehindbothChineseandWesternmedicine.Thereisgreatpotentialforfutureadvancesifthesetwokindsofwisdomcanbefullyintegrated,”shesaid.

Introducedmoreaboutherachievement

Similaritiesanddifferences

Similarities

Differences

Thestructure

Mainpoints

Someinformationisleftout.

Someexpressionsare

replacedwithsynonyms.

Writeasummary

aboutTheSuperhero

BehindSuperman

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WritingHelp

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Readthetextanddivideitintoparts;

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avoidincludingexamplesandexplanations;

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summariseeachpartinoneortwosentencescoveringthekeyinformation;

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avoidaddingyourownideas;

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uselinkingwordswherenecessary.

Whatmainpointsoftheoriginaltextareincluded

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generalintroduction(Para1)

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asuperheroinreallife(Para4-5)

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lifebeforetheaccident(Para2-3)

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hisdeath(Para6)

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Readthetextandunderlinethemainpoints

ThestoryofChristopherReeve’slifeisonethatisalmostimpossibletoimagine—fromawildlysuccessfulHollywoodcareer,tothehorroroflife-threateninginjury;Reeveexperiencedboth.Thus,notonlyisheknownasasuperherointheSupermanfilms,butheisalsoregardedasasuperherotomanyinreallife.

Readthetextandunderlinethemainpoints

Reevewasbornon25September,1952inNewYork—thesonofFranklinReeve,ateacherandnovelist,andBarbaraPitney,ajournalist.Hefoundhispassioninactingandstarredinhisfirstschoolplayattheageofeight.Althoughhebelievedhewouldonlyeveractonstage,Reevetriedoutfor,andwaseventuallygiventheleadroleinaSupermanfilm.

Readthetextandunderlinethemainpoints

ReevestarredinfourSupermanfilmsfrom1978to1987.Herealisedthathisrolesinthesefilmshadgivenhimtheopportunitytobeareal-lifesuperman,andhesoongainedareputationforraisingawarenessforgoodcauses.HevisitedsickchildreninhospitalsandworkedwithorganisationssuchasSavetheChildren,speakingoutabouthealth,educationandchildprotectiontohelpthosemostinneed.

Readthetextandunderlinethemainpoints

Unfortunately,in1995disasterstruckReeve.Whilehorsebackriding,hewasthrownoffhishorseandbrokehisneck.Hisinjuriesweresoseverethathehadnomovementorfeelinginhisbodyatallandevenneededamachinetohelphimbreathe.Atfirst,hisdoctorsdidnotbelievethathewouldsurvive.Duringthistime,Reevefeltlikehehadlostallhope.Havingoncebeenahealthyandsuccessfulyoungmantobeingtrappedinabrokenbodywaslikealivingnightmaretohim.Headmittedthatduringtheearlystagesoflivingwithhisinjury,hewishedthathewasdeadandeventhoughtofendinghisownlife.Hefellintoadepressionwhichlastedformanymonths.Itwasonlyduetotheongoingsupportofhiswife,familyandfriendsthatheeventuallyfoundthewilltoliveagain.Fortheyearsthatfollowedhefocusedhisattentiononhisgoalofonedaywalkingagain.

Readthetextandunderlinethemainpoints

Withanewsenseofenergyandcommitment,Reeveundertookanintenseexerciseprogrammetohelphimachievethisgoal.Heengagedinawiderangeofexercisesdesignedtorebuildmuscle,andmaderemarkableprogress.Shortlyafter,hemanagedtoreturntohisfilmcareerbydirecting,producinga