2023年自考類英語自考英語寫作基礎(chǔ)歷年高頻考題帶答案難題附詳解（圖片大小可自由調(diào)整）第1卷一.歷年考點(diǎn)試題黑鉆版(共50題)1.Wereluctantlyacceptedouremployees'request.Theyrequestedforextendedcoffeebreaks.(simplesentence)2.Alandidnotknowthathehadwontheraceuntilhecrossedthelineandfeltthetapesnapagainsthischest.(periodicsentence)3.Writealetterofjobapplicationaccordingtothefollowingsituation:ProfessorLiuwhooncetaughtyouatuniversityresignedlastyearandbecamepresidentofChungHwaCommercialBank.Asabankingmajor,writealettertohiminordertoseekapositioninthebank.PleasesignyournameasLiPing.(150-200words)4.Therearethreeboyswhoaremastersofoperatingcomputerprograms,Tomisthegreatestone.5.Alicelikestolistentoclassicalmusic,andJessicalikestolistentoclassicalmusictoo.(simplesentence)6.Therainbecameheavy.Makingitimpossibletocontinuewiththegame.7.Topassthecourse,yourtermpapermustbehandedinontime.8.Thenshewentonnervouslywithherwork.Knitting.9.Ihaveanewdigitalcamera,butIdon'tknowhowtouseitproperly.(compound-complexsentence)10.Thenextafternoonwecametothewaterfall.Themostbeautifulsightonourjourney.11.ReadthefollowingparagraphcarefullyandchoosethebesttopicsentencefromthefourpossibleanswersthatfollowtheparagraphbywritingA,B,CorD.

TopicSentence.______

Afewyearsago,letterwritingwasthemostimportantmeansofcommunicationandpeopleseldommadephonecalls,especiallyintheruralareas,becausetherewerenotmanytelephonesavailable.WiththerapiddevelopmentofChina'seconomy,telecommunicationserviceisbadlyneeded.Forexample,whenmanyyoungChinesegoabroadtoworkortostudy,theywanttogetintouchwiththeirfolksregularlyandeasily.PrivatecompanieshavemushroomedalloverChina;businessmenrealizetheimportanceoftelephone.Inthecountryside,lettersusuallytakeseveraldaysorweeks,andmuchtimewillbewasted,sopeoplehavedreamedformanyyearstohavetelephoneservice.Sincemanyfamiliesaregettingrich,theycanafforditnow.

A.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplerelyheavilyonthetelephoneinsteadofletters.

B.Nowadaysletterwritingisthemostimportantmeansofcommunication.

C.Internetisthemostimportantmeansofcommunicationtoday.

D.ManyfamiliesinChinaaregettingrichnow.12.Thoughcheerfulincompany,hewasoftensadinprivate.(loosesentence)13.Choosethebesttopicsentencefromthefouroptionsbelow.WritethecorrespondingletterofyourchoiceontheAnswerSheet.A.Somepoliticalpartieshaveadoptedanimalstorepresentthem.B.Carsaregivenanimalnamestomakeconsumersassociatethemwithspeedandgrace.C.Manyprofessionalsportsteams,suchastheTigersandRams,havechosenanimalnamestosuggestpower.D.Manypeopleintheworldholdanimalsinsuchhighregardthattheyuseanimals'namesfortheirorganizationsandproducts.14.Ihavecheckedmydocumentsseveraltimes.Istillcan'tfindtheproblem.(compoundsentence)15.Walkedalongtheriver,Iranintoahighschoolfriendofmine.16.Wheretogo,whentostartandwhatotherthingsweshouldpayspecialattentionto.Wehavetodiscussnow.17.Tokeepthegirlstudentsinterestedingettinginshape,anexerciseprogramwassetupforthesummermonths.18.Theyhavebeenengagedintheworkalldaylong.Withoutarest.19.Anewblouseinafashionablecolorcanupdateanoldoutfit;incontrast,addingdramaticjewelryoranattractivescarfcanmakeanoldoutfitseemnew.20.Heinvitedallhisgoodfriendstohiswedding.JackandJoeywereincluded.(simplesentence)21.Thearticleisdifficulttounderstandnotbecausethevocabularyistechnicalbutbecauseofthecomplicatedsentencestructure.22.Thestorywasinteresting.Itwasnotbelievable.(complexsentence)23.Asherweddingdateapproached,IthinkthatIwasalmostasexcitedasmysister.Sheclaimsshedidnotsleepatalltheweekbeforethewedding,andIdon'treallythinkIdideither.UsuallyIgotobedabout10:30,andsleepuntilaround7:30.Iknowthatatleasttwoofthosenightswesatupallnightreviewingplans,checkingtoseethatwehaddoneeverythingonour"todo"list.Twodaysbeforethewedding,myexcitementhadreachedsuchapeakthatIdidn'teveneat.Iusuallyenjoyeatingalotofcandieseveryday.MaybeIhadborrowedlovefrommysisterandwaslivingonit,butIjustwentsailingthroughtheday,fullofenergyandnottheleastbithungry.Onthedayofthewedding,Iwasupat4:30inthemorning,shoutingateveryonetogetup.Ievenbegantogetdressedfortheweddinganhourbeforemysisterdid.AndafterIwasdressedinmybridesmaid'sgown,Icouldn'tsitdown.Ijustpacedthefloor—foranentirehour.Idon'tthinkIcouldtakehavingasistergetmarriedveryoften.24.Smallbusinessesgrowintobiggerones.Addingtotheeconomicvitality.25.HowmuchthereistolearnandhowmuchIdon'tyetknowisoneofthemostimportantthingsI'velearned.(periodicsentence)26.You(LiuDan)receivedapresentofsomemoneyfromarelative.Writealettertothankhimorherforthepresentandsaywhatyouintendtodowithit,suchaspayingtheregistrationfeefornewcoursesandrents,andbuyingtextbooksandreferencebooks.Promisethatyouwillkeephimorherinformedofyourlifeandstudyatschool.(150～200words)27.Wehaveallusedphysicaldatabasessinceourgrammarschooldays.Grammarschoolisknown

todayasgradeschoolorelementaryschool.Ourclassyear-books,telephonebooks,shoeboxesfullofreceiptsdocumentingvariousbillswehavepaid-thesearealldatabasesinoneformoranother,foradatabaseisnothingmorethanacollectionofinformationorganizedtoallowretrieval(取回)ofthatinformationincertainways.Anyonewhoiswellorganizedhasabetterchanceofsucceedingincollegeorinthebusinessworld.28.ZhangHuaispickingupnewvocabularyveryfast.Thespeedisamazing.(complexsentence)29.Itwasnearlydark.Asnowmobileappeared.Thesnowmobilewasroaring.Itwasrunningwithoutlights.IthitMrs.Li.30.Iforgotthetime.Imissedthetrain.(complexsentence)31.Sheshoutedandcriedforalongtimeasshewasextremelydisturbed.(sentencewithaverb-edphrase)32.Writealetterofthanksaccordingtothefollowingsituation:Yourfriendsentyouabirthdaygiftfromabroad.Writetohim/hertoexpressyourappreciation,explainwhyyoulikethegiftandaskabouthis/hersituation.PleasesignyournameasLiFei.(150-200words)33.Theyploddedalongthetrailallday.Withoutarest.34.Itwasmid-Junethemorningwegraduated,andIfaintedinthehugehallfortheCommencement(畢業(yè)典禮)fromtheheat.AfterwardsFrani'sparentstookseveralofustolunchattheSilverSwan.Mygrandparentshadnotcomefortheoccasion,butsentmeacheckforatriptoEurope-thatwasagraduationpresent,andaweddingpresentaswell,theywrote.Yes,thedecisionofmarriagehadeventuallybeenmade.Wehadalreadyhadaninterviewwiththecurate(牧師助理),anditwasexactlyoneweekaftertheCommencementandmytwenty-firstbirthdaywhenwe"stoodup"togetherinthechapel.JohntoldmethatIwouldneverbecomeagoodactress.Wehadaone-nighthoneymoonataninninBriarcliff,andthereallofasuddenIhadanattackofpanic.Asweclimbedintothebigbed,Iknew,toolate,thatIhaddonethewrongthing.Tomarryamanwithoutlovinghim,whichwaswhatIhadjustdone,notreallyperceivingit,wasawickedaction,Isaw.Stiffwithremorseandterror,Ilayunderthethinblanketthroughagoodpartofthenight.35.Mikeis18andhandsome.Hewearsapairofsunglasses.(longsentence)36.Hewalksslowlybehindme.Asifhedoesnotseemewalkingafewmetresahead.37.Sheclosedhereyes.Thinkingbackthroughtheyearsofbeingmother,wife,friend,daughter,andsister.38.Theobjectivesincludereducingthegreenhousegases,increasinggreenerycoverageandtoimposeheaviertaxesontheenterpriseswhichreleaseuntreatedwastetorivers.39.Thisisarichcountry.Therearelotsofpoorpeople.(compoundsentence)40.Relievedofyourresponsibilitiesatyourjob,yourhomeshouldbeaplacetorelax.41.Atlastmywishisrealized.ThegovernmenthasgrantedmepermissiontogototheWest.(complexsentence)42.Helookedforwardtothestudyperiodatschool.Itbeingtheonlytimehecouldsitunbotheredanddreamabouthisfuture.43.HanSoloisoneoftheheroesofStarWars.Heisabravebutself-centeredpilot.(simplesentence)44.Aftercorrectingallthemistakes,theseconddraftofthepaperwasmuchbetterthanthefirst.45.Writealetterofcomplaintsaccordingtothefollowingsituation:You(LiuDan)boughtanairconditionerinSunAppliancesandhaditinstalledtheotherday,butyoufoundthatthefanmadetoomuchnoisewhenthemachineoperated.Youdemandthestoretosendarepresentativetocheckitup.Inyourletter,providethespecificdefectsoftheairconditioner,thedateofpurchase,theserialnumberofitandthewaytocontactyou.(150～200words)46.Hefailedanumberofcoursesbeforeheearnedhisdegree.Amongthem,English,EconomicsandGeneralBiology.47.Lakeyisthemostbeautifuloneofthegroupofgirls.Sheisalsothemostintelligentandthemostresourcefuloneofthem.(sentencewithparallelstructure)48.Wehaveallusedphysicaldatabasessinceourgrammarschooldays.Grammarschoolisknowntodayasgradeschoolorelementaryschool.Ourclassyear—books,telephonebooks,shoeboxesfullofreceiptsdocumentingvariousbillswehavepaid—thesearealldatabasesinoneformoranother,foradatabaseisnothingmorethanacollectionofinformationorganizedtoallowretrieval(取回)ofthat

informationincertainways.Anyonewhoiswellorganizedhasabetterchanceofsucceedingincollegeorinthebusinessworld.49.Ireturnedtoschoolfollowingalongillness.Themathsteachergavememake-upworktodo,butthehistoryteachermademedrophercourse.(compound-complexsentence)50.Iamtired.Ihavetofinishtheassignmenttonight.(complexsentence)第1卷參考答案一.歷年考點(diǎn)試題黑鉆版1.參考答案：Wereluctantlyacceptedouremployees'requestforextendedcoffeebreaks.[解析]此題要求把句子改為簡單句。在此題中，主要是把前后兩個句子合并為一句話，并且在這句話中只能有一套主謂結(jié)構(gòu)。只要把后一句話中修飾request的短語“extendedcoffeebreak”移到前一句，修飾前一句的request即可。2.參考答案：Notuntilhecrossedthelineandfeltthetapesnapagainsthischest,didAlanknowthathehadwontherace.[解析]原句是一個松散句，要求變?yōu)榈粑簿?。原句的主句部分為until前面的內(nèi)容，變?yōu)榈粑簿鋾r，該部分要移至句尾。需要注意的是notuntil位于句首時，主句要采用倒裝語序。譯文：直到他沖過終點(diǎn)，胸部撞到終點(diǎn)線之后，艾蘭才知道他贏了比賽。3.參考答案：January20,2016DearProf.Liu,

ItisayearsinceIlastsawyou.Ihopeyouhavebeenfaringalongverywell.IhavejustlearnedfromthepressthehappynewsthatyouarenowthepresidentoftheChungHwaCommercialBank.Wouldyoubesokindastoputmynamedownasastaffmemberofyourbank?

IremainedatKangnanUniversityafteryourresignationlastyear,andgraduatedfromtheSchoolofCommercewithabachelor'sdegreelastsummer.Asbankingwasthemajorareaofmyfouryears'study,Iamanxioustogetabankpositionsoastomakeprofitableuseofmytraining.Iwillacceptanystartingsalary,formyobjectiveistogainexperienceinthecommercialbankingfromthebottom.Ishallfeelentirelycontentifthepositionoffersprospectsofpromotion.Astomypersonality,IsupposeyoustillrememberthatIamindustriousandconscientious.Hopingyouwillfavormewithanearlyreply.

Yoursrespectfully,

LiPing[解析]本題要求寫一封求職信。寫信時需要涉及的內(nèi)容包括：寫信的目的；自身學(xué)習(xí)情況以及性格等；對待工作的態(tài)度。寫信時要有日期和稱呼，最后要表達(dá)祝愿之情，簽署姓名。4.參考答案：Therearethreeboyswhoaremastersofpperatingcomputerprograms,Tombeingthegreaestone.[解析]本題考查串句的修改。此題可直接將s改成being，從而使后半部分成為獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，從屬于前面的主句。5.參考答案：BothAliceandJessicaliketolistentoclassicalmusic.[解析]首先來看譯文：愛麗絲喜歡聽古典音樂，杰西卡也喜歡聽古典音樂。該句是由and連接的一個并列句，要求把它變?yōu)楹唵尉?。并列句是由處于同等地位的幾套主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的句子組成，而簡單句則只有一套主謂結(jié)構(gòu)。做這類題的關(guān)鍵是看原句的幾個部分中哪些成分是重合的。顯然，謂語部分是相同的，那么只要把主語部分Alice和Jessica重新并列組合即可，用and或者both...and...均可。需注意的是：當(dāng)主語的單復(fù)數(shù)形式改變時，謂語動詞也要有相應(yīng)變化。6.參考答案：Therainbecameheavy,makingitimpossibletocontinuewiththegame.[解析]本題考查-ing分詞引起的破句的修改。此類題可直接將-ing分詞與前面句子連接。7.參考答案：Topassthecourse,youmusthandinyourtermpaperontime.[解析]本題錯誤是由垂懸修飾語引起的。修改這類錯誤的方法之一是找出隱含主語使前后句子邏輯上的主語一致。前面不定式的施動者是you，所以后面句子的邏輯主語不應(yīng)為yourtermpaper。8.參考答案：Thenshewentonnervouslywithherknitting.[解析]這是一個由-ing分詞引起的破句。當(dāng)-ing分詞處于一組詞的首位或靠近首位時就有可能出現(xiàn)破句。這樣的句子缺少主語或謂語動詞的一部分，不完整，改正這類破句的方法有三個：(1)讓破句與其前或其后的句子連接起來，使意思完整；(2)增添主句，把-ing部分變?yōu)閯釉~的正確形式；(3)把being改為be的恰當(dāng)形式。在此病句中，只有knitting這個-ing形式，弄不清楚它是主語還是謂語，根據(jù)前句意思，它應(yīng)該是動名詞形式，修改時可將其與前句合并。9.參考答案：Ihaveanewdigitalcamera,butIdon'tknowhowIcanuseitproperly.[解析]原句是一個并列句，要求轉(zhuǎn)化為并列復(fù)合句。從原句的句法形態(tài)可看出原句的兩個分句之間已經(jīng)是并列關(guān)系，故在變?yōu)椴⒘袕?fù)合句時，只需要把其中的一句或兩句變成復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)(即轉(zhuǎn)化為含有某種從句的結(jié)構(gòu))。觀察可知，前半句無法改成一個從句，故只能將第二句改成復(fù)合句，可以把how加不定式部分改為賓語從句。譯文：我有一個新的數(shù)碼相機(jī)，但我不知道怎么用它。10.參考答案：Thenextafternoonwecametothewaterfall,themostbeautifulsightonourjourney.[解析]這是一個因增加細(xì)節(jié)引起的破句，這種破句通常缺少主語或者謂語。改正這類破句的一般方法是把破句與其前具有完整意義的話語連接起來，為破句增加主語和謂語動詞，必要時可改變字詞。在這句話中后一句話是前面“waterfall”的同位語，因此不用為后一句添加主語或者謂語，只需把它用逗號和主句隔開即可。11.參考答案：Topicsentence：A[解析]通過段落的第一句話可以排除選項B。由于全文中一直沒有出現(xiàn)Internet這個詞，所以選項C也可以排除。文章主要描述的內(nèi)容是電話在現(xiàn)代社會越來越普及，代替了信件。這雖然和中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展有關(guān)，但中國人越來越富只是電話普及的一個條件，并不是主要內(nèi)容，因此選項D也不正確。所以選A。12.參考答案：Hewasoftensadinprivatethoughcheerfulincompany．[解析]本題考查松句和掉尾句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，題目中心意思是“Hewasoftensadinprivate”，將其提至句首即可。13.參考答案：A[解析]主題句是一段話的主題思想，通常是表示一般概念的句子，范圍不能太大或太小，不能太籠統(tǒng)或太具體。B項“以動物名字命名的汽車使消費(fèi)者聯(lián)想到速度和魅力”和C項“許多職業(yè)球隊像老虎和公羊，用動物名字來展示力量”太過具體，而D項“世界上的很多人將動物的地位看得很高，他們將動物作為自己組織和產(chǎn)品的名字”太過籠統(tǒng)，給出的信息較多，沒有體現(xiàn)內(nèi)容的限制。A項“一些政黨利用動物來代表自己”指明了主題是“動物”，又將范圍限定在“政黨和動物之間的關(guān)系”上，因此最符合主題句的要求。14.參考答案：Ihavecheckedmydocumentsseveraltimes,yet/butIstillcan'tfindtheproblem.[解析]譯文：我已經(jīng)把我的文件檢查了好幾遍了。我還是沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)有什么問題。本題是兩個簡單句，要求變成一個并列句。并列句是處于同等地位的兩套主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的結(jié)合。做這類題的關(guān)鍵在于準(zhǔn)確選擇并列連詞。根據(jù)邏輯，很顯然，兩句為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，可用并列連詞but或yet連接。15.參考答案：Walkingalongtheriver,Iranintoahishschoolfriendofmine.[解析]本題中“walkedalongtheriver”是后面句子的狀語成分，但由于“I”和“walked”是主謂關(guān)系，故應(yīng)將“walked”改為“walking”。16.參考答案：Wehavetodiscussnowwheretogo,whentostartandwhatotherthingsweshouldpayattentionto.[解析]此題也是由從屬連詞引起的破句。改正方式是和后一句話連接起來，組成一個句子，前一句話作賓語從句。17.參考答案：Tokeepthegirlstudentsinterestedingettinginshape,theysetupanexercisepro-gramforthesummermonths.[解析]本題屬于垂懸修飾語錯誤，修改方法是找出句子隱含主語。該題中的不定式部分找不到邏輯主語，改正時要明確動作的實施者。18.參考答案：Theyhavebeenengagedintheworkalldaylongwithoutarest.[解析]此句也是一個破句。改正的方法就是讓后一句和前一句連接起來，做前一句的狀語。19.參考答案：Anewblouseinafashionablecolorcanupdateanoldoutfit;bycomparison,addingdramaticjewelryoranattractivescarfcanmakeanoldoutfitseemnew.[解析]譯文：顏色時尚的上衣足以為一件舊衣服增添光彩；相比較而言，加一串光彩奪目的珠寶或者一條引人注目的圍巾也會使舊衣裳煥然一新。updateanoldoutfit和makeanoldoutfitseemnew意思是一樣的，都是“使舊衣服變新”的意思，因此前后兩個分句強(qiáng)調(diào)的是相同點(diǎn)而非不同點(diǎn)，而incontrast指的是兩者之間的不同，因此應(yīng)改為強(qiáng)調(diào)兩者之間相同點(diǎn)的bycomparison。20.參考答案：Heinvitedallhisgoodfriendstohiswedding,JackandJoeybeingincluded.[解析]本題考查把兩個句子組合成一個簡單句。題目中第二個句子將動詞be轉(zhuǎn)換成分詞being后，后半部分就成了前面句子的狀語，符合要求。21.參考答案：Thearticleisdifficulttounderstandnotbecausethevocabularyistechnicalbutbecausethesentencestructureiscomplicated.[解析]本句中由not...but...引起的兩部分內(nèi)容，在句法功能上，都是狀語，但在語法表現(xiàn)形式上卻不相同，屬于典型的錯誤平行結(jié)構(gòu)。改正時只需將兩部分內(nèi)容都變成由because引導(dǎo)的狀語從句即可。22.參考答案：Althoughthestorywasinteresting,itwasnotbelievable.[解析]同樣先看澤文的意思，這個故事很精彩，令人難以相信。原句同樣是兩個簡單句，要求我們變?yōu)閺?fù)合句?，F(xiàn)在把簡單句變?yōu)閺?fù)合句，同樣先判斷這兩個句子的主從地位。根據(jù)句意，我們可以看出兩個句子的意思前后有很大的轉(zhuǎn)折。這樣我們就可以確定從屬連同可以用表語氣轉(zhuǎn)折的although；but等。23.參考答案：(1)UsuallyIgotobedabout10:30andsleepuntil7:30.

(2)Iusuallyenjoyeatingalotofcandieseveryday.[解析]閱讀后不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，本文作者是在描述姐姐在結(jié)婚之日將要來臨以及結(jié)婚之日既緊張又興奮的心情導(dǎo)致很多不尋常的事發(fā)生的情況。文章論述的核心點(diǎn)是不尋常的事，故表示尋常行為的第三句和第六句應(yīng)當(dāng)刪掉。24.參考答案：Smallbusinessesgrowintobiggerones,addingtotheeconomicvitality.[解析]本題考查的是-ing分詞引起的破句。當(dāng)-ing分詞處于一組詞的首位或靠近首位時，就有可能出現(xiàn)破句。改正這類破句的方法有三個：(1)將破句與其前或其后的句子連接起來，使語義完整；(2)增添主語，把-ing部分變?yōu)閯釉~的正確形式；(3)把being改為be的恰當(dāng)形式。此題可以用逗號讓破句與其前的句子連接起來，使語義完整。25.參考答案：OneofthemostimporantthingsI'velearnedishowmuchthereistolearnandhowmuchIdon'tyetknow.[解析]本題考查的是松句和掉尾句之間的轉(zhuǎn)換。本題中心意思是HowmuchthereistolearnandhowmuchIdon'tyetknow，將其與后半部分位置互換即可。26.參考答案：

Oct.20,2005

DearAuntie,

Iammostgratefultoyouforsendingmetheamountofmoney.Idon'tknowhowtothankyouenough.

Indeed,themoneyyougavemejustmeetsmyneed.Atpresent,Ihaveregisteredtwocoursesinself-schoolingandwilltaketheexamsprettilysoon.Andit'stimeformetoregisteranothercourseapartfromEnglishandcomputer.Somemoneyisneededuponregistration,forinstance,payingtheregistrationfeeandbuyingnecessarybooksforthenewcourses.Besides,someofthemoneywillgotomylodging.Ihavesharedaroomwithaclassmateofmineinaplaceclosetomyschool.

ThankyouonceagainforyourtimelyhelpsothatIcouldgoonwithmystudy.Itwillprobablytakeanotheryeartocompleteallthecoursesandgetmydiploma.I'llhaveyouinformedofmylifeandstudyatschoolandI'lltrymybestnottoletyoudown.

Withlove,

LiuDan[解析]本文要求寫一封感謝信，感謝信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含：①表示對親戚的感謝；②收到錢以后對其的利用情況；③向他(她)告知自己的狀況并再次表示感謝。

Usefulexpressions:

(1)Iammostgratefultoyouforsendingmemoney.

(2)Yourmoneyindeedmeetmyneed.

(3)Icanuseittopay....

(4)I'lltrymybestnottoletyoudown.27.參考答案：Wehaveallusedphysicaldatabasessinceourgrammarschooldays.Grammarschoolisknowntodayasgradeschoolorelementaryschool.Ourclassyear-books,telephonebooks,shoeboxesfullofreceiptsdocumentingvariousbilkswehavepaid—thesearealldatabasesinoneformoranother,foradatabaseisnothingmorethanacollectionofinformarionorganizedtoallowretrieval(取回)ofthatinformationincertainways.Anyonewhoiswellorganizedhasabetterchanceofsucceccdingincollegeorinthebusinessworld.[解析]本段話的大概意思是：我們從上語法學(xué)校起就開始使用物理數(shù)據(jù)庫了。語法學(xué)校在今天稱為年級學(xué)?；蛐W(xué)。我們的班級年鑒、電話簿和裝滿了收據(jù)的鞋盒——這些都是不同形式的數(shù)據(jù)庫，因為一個數(shù)據(jù)庫也不過是可以用某種方式取回整理好的信息的一種形式而已。任何一個善于規(guī)劃的人都有更大的希望在大學(xué)或商業(yè)界中獲得成功。本段的主題是數(shù)據(jù)庫的特點(diǎn)，而第二句和末句與此無關(guān)，故可刪除。28.參考答案：ThespeedwhichZhangHuaispickingupnewvocabularyveryfast,isamazing.[解析]原句是兩個簡單句，要求變成復(fù)合句。復(fù)合句是含有從句和主句的句子，主句部分常常是一句話的中心，從句部分由從屬連詞引導(dǎo)。本題中，speed是聯(lián)系兩個句子的紐帶，本題主要講第二句，即速度很驚人，所以將第一句改為第二句主語speed的定語從句。29.參考答案：Itwasnearlydark,andtheroaringsnowmobilewithoutlightshitMrs.Li.[解析]原句由幾個簡單句構(gòu)成。第一句意思為“天快黑了”。第二句意為“一輛機(jī)動雪橇出現(xiàn)了”。第三句為“機(jī)動雪橇呼嘯著”。第四句為“它沒開車燈向前飛跑著”。第五句為“它撞上了李太太”。第一句顯然是說明事情發(fā)生的時間，二句和五句說明了事情的經(jīng)過和結(jié)果，三、四句則可以改為對第二句主語的補(bǔ)充修飾。30.參考答案：BecauseIforgotthetime，Imissedthetrain.[解析]本題考查把句子改為復(fù)合句。復(fù)合句是有主有從的句子，所以把意思較為次要的句子轉(zhuǎn)化為從句即可。由于兩句話之間是因果關(guān)系，所以應(yīng)把第一句話轉(zhuǎn)化為表示原因的從句，用because引導(dǎo)。31.參考答案：Extremelydisturbed,sheshoutedandcriedforalongtime.[解析]本題考查將句子改寫為含動詞-ed分詞的句子。動詞的過去分詞和副詞一起構(gòu)成動詞-ed短語作狀語。32.參考答案：June23,2016DearAnna,

I'msohappytogetthebirthdaygiftyousentme.I'msohappythatyoustillremembermybirthday.Thankyousomuchforyourkindnessandthesurprise.

Thescarfyouchoseformeisverybeautifulandfashionable.Bothitscolorandstylearemyfavorite.YesterdayeveningIworeitatmycolleagueget-togetheranditmatchedmybluedressverywell.MycolleaguesallsaidthatIlookedstylishandelegantinthescarf.Ithinkit'ssuitableforcasualwearandofficedressaswell.Youalwaysknowwhatisbestforme!

HowisyourlifeinAmerica?Haveyoudecidedwhethertocontinueyourstudyortowork?Anyway,I'msureyoucanmaketherightchoice.Bytheway,ourclassmatesareplanningagatheringinJulynextyear.Willyoujoinus?Wehaven'tseeneachotherforfiveyearssincegraduation!

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyon.Ican'twaittoseeyou.

Yonrs

LiFei[解析]本題要求寫一封感謝信，信中的內(nèi)容包括：表達(dá)自己的感謝之情；闡述自己喜歡這份生日禮物的原因；詢問對方的近況。寫信時要有日期和稱呼，最后要表達(dá)祝愿之情，同時要注意簽署姓名的時候不要用自己的名字，要用LiFei來代替。33.參考答案：Theyploddedalongthetrailalldaywithoutarest.[解析]此句也是一個破句。改正的方法就是讓后一句和前一句連接起來，作前一句的狀語。34.參考答案：Itwasmid-Junethemorningwegraduated,andIfaintedinthehugehallfortheCommencement(畢業(yè)典禮)frontheheat.AfterwardsFrani'sparentstookseveralofustolunchattheSilverSwan.Mygrandparentshadnotcomefortheoccasion,butsentmeacheektoratriptoEurope-thatwasagraduationpresent,andaweddingpresentaswell,theywrote.Yes,thedecisionofmarriagehadeventuallyheenmade.Wehadalreadyhadaninterviewwiththecurate(牧師助理),anditwasexactlyoneweekaftertheCommencementandmytwenty-firstbirthdaywhenwe"stoodup"togetherinthechapel.Johntold.methatIwouldneverbecomeagoodactress.Wehadaone-nighthoneynloonataninninBriarcliff.andthereallofasuddenIhadanattackofpanic.Asweelimbedintothebigbed,Iknew,toolate,thatIhaddonethewrongthing.Tomanyamanwithoutlovinghim,whichwaswhatIhadiustdone,notreallyperceivillgit,wasawiekedaction,Isaw.Stiffwithremorseandterror.Ilayunderthethinblanketthroughagoodpartofthenight.[解析]此題主要考查段落的統(tǒng)一性。統(tǒng)一性要求段落的支持句都必須圍繞段落主題句的中心思想展開，并要求各句在人稱、時態(tài)、文體等方面相互保持一致。任何與主題關(guān)聯(lián)不大的內(nèi)容都應(yīng)予以刪除。這段話主要講的是：六月中旬的一個早上作者畢業(yè)了，由于太熱，在舉行畢業(yè)典禮時作者昏倒在大廳里。她的祖父母并沒有來參加這個畢業(yè)典禮，但卻送給她一張去歐洲旅行的支票作為畢業(yè)禮物，同時也是結(jié)婚禮物.由此引出作者結(jié)婚的事。作者已經(jīng)決定要結(jié)婚了，婚禮定在畢業(yè)典禮后的一周，也就是作者21歲生日時。然后敘述作者在Briarcliff的一個小旅館度蜜月時的感受。由此可知，文章主要講的是作者結(jié)婚的事，所以第二句是多余的。第六句也與所講內(nèi)容無關(guān)，也應(yīng)刪去。35.參考答案：Mike,whois18,ishandsome,andhewearsapairofsunglasses.[解析]本題考查將句子改寫為長句。長短句一般是根據(jù)句子的長短和詞的多少來說的。短句多是簡單句，而長句多是并列句、復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。也有簡單句是長句，而復(fù)合句是短句的情況。題目要求將句子改為長句，可以把“18”和“handsome”兩個詞中的一個作定語修飾Mike，另一個作表語，再將后句與前句用and連接即可。36.參考答案：Hewalksslowlybehindmeasifhedoesnotseemewalkingafewinetresahead.[解析]本題考查破句的修改。修改方法是將后句直接和前句連接，句號改成逗號，As首字母小寫。37.參考答案：Sheclosedhereyes,thinkingbackthroughtheyearsofbeingmother,wife,friend,daughter,andsister.[解析]此題是一個ing分詞引起的破句。當(dāng)ing分詞處于一組詞的首位或靠近首位時，就有可能出現(xiàn)破句。這樣的句子缺少主語或缺少謂語動詞的一部分，語義不完整。改正這類破句的方法有三個：(1)讓破句與其前或其后的句子連接起來，使語義完整；(2)增添主語，把ing部分變?yōu)閯釉~的正確形式；(3)把being改為be的恰當(dāng)形式。此題可以用逗號讓破句與其前的句子連接起來，使語義完整。38.參考答案：Theobjectivesincludereducingthegreenhousegases,increasinggreenerycoverageandimposingheaviertaxesontheenterpriseswhichreleaseuntreatedwastetotherivers.[解析]本題考查錯誤平行結(jié)構(gòu)的修改。將“toimpose”改成“imposing”即可實現(xiàn)正確的平行連接。39.參考答案：Thisisarichcountry,buttherearelotsofpoorpeople.[解析]本題要求把句子改寫成并列句。題目中的兩個句子是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，因此可以用but直接將兩句話連接起來，構(gòu)成并列句，兩個句子仍保持原來的順序。40.參考答案：Relievedofyourresponsibilitiesatyourjob,youshouldbeabletorelaxathome.[解析]本題屬于垂懸修飾語導(dǎo)致的病句。垂懸修飾語指修飾語在句中找不到邏輯上被修飾的對象。本句中relieved這個形容詞表示感到寬慰的、放心的，這個心理狀態(tài)的主語并不是yourhome，所以relievedof...便成了無依著形容詞短語，對這樣的垂懸修飾語錯誤，必須明確心理狀態(tài)的主人或者動作的實施者。41.參考答案：AtlastmywishisrealizedbecausethegovernmenthasgrantedmepermissiontogototheWest.[解析]原句由兩個簡單句組成，要求合并為一個復(fù)合句。復(fù)合句是含有主句和從句的句子。分析題干后可知，第一個句子講述了中心意思“最終我的愿望成真?！钡诙鋭t是對第一句的原因的解釋，即兩句之間是一種因果關(guān)系，故用連詞because連接。譯文：最終我的夢想終于實現(xiàn)了，因為政府允許我去西部了。42.參考答案：Helookedforwardtothestudyperiodatschool.Itwastheonlytimehecouldsitunbotheredanddreamabouthisfuture.[解析]這是一個由ing分詞引起的破句。當(dāng)ing分詞處于一組詞的首位或靠近首位時就有可能出現(xiàn)破句。這樣的句子缺少主語或謂語動詞的一部分，不完整；改正這類破句的方法有三個：讓破句與其前或其后的句子連接起來，使意思完整；增添主句，把ing部分變?yōu)閯釉~的正確形式；把being改為be的恰當(dāng)形式。在此句中，只需把being改為be的恰當(dāng)形式即可。43.參考答案：HanSolo,abravebutself-centeredpilot,isoneoftheheroesofStarWars.[解析]原句是兩個簡單句，要求合并為一個簡單句。從句意上看，兩句話都是對同一個主語HanSolo的描述，在合并時我們可以采用同位語(abravebutself-centeredpilot為HanSolo的同位語)的方式將第二句的語意合并于第一句中。44.參考答案：Afterthecorrectionofallthemistakes,theseconddraftofthepaperwasmuchbetterthanthefirst.或Aftercorrectingallthemistakes,Ifound/feltthattheseconddraftofthepaperwasmuchbetterthanthefirst.[解析]譯文：在更正所有的錯誤后，這篇論文的第二稿要比第一稿好多了。Aftercorrectingailthemistakes的主語是人，而后邊的主語是theseconddraft，句子前后主語不一致。45.參考答案：

Oct.20,2004DearSir:

Iamawareofyourreputationforqualityproductsplusreliability;consequently,Idonothesitatetowritetoyou.

IpurchasedanairconditionerinyourstoreonFebruary14andhaditinstalledyesterday.Unfortunately,theinstallationwascompletebeforeIfoundthatthefanmadealotofnoise.Iwonderifthisairconditionerisadefectiveone.Theser