新SAT寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解析在新SATEssay的評(píng)分中，將分?jǐn)?shù)分成了三個(gè)維度：Reading,Analysis和Writing。這里，我們通過(guò)對(duì)于評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要分析，來(lái)看一篇高分的Writing應(yīng)該具備的條件。下圖是SATEssay評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)關(guān)于Wring部分的要求（依次為4分，3分，2分）：我們對(duì)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的每一條進(jìn)行對(duì)比分析：4：Theresponseincludesaprecisecentralclaim.3：Theresponseincludesacentralclaimorimplicitcontrollingidea.2：Theresponsemaylackaclearcentralclaimorcontrollingideaormaydeviatefromtheclaimorideaoverthecourseoftheresponse.通過(guò)對(duì)比我們看到，新SATEssay要求有一個(gè)明確的precisecentralclaim,這個(gè)claim就是原文作者的觀點(diǎn)。對(duì)于這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們其實(shí)大可不必?fù)?dān)心，因?yàn)樵诿科恼潞竺娴膒rompt中會(huì)明確給出作者的claim,如0G中的文章：上圖中劃線部分就是文章中作者所要表述的觀點(diǎn)，各位同學(xué)記住一定要對(duì)這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行paraphrase而不是直接copy哦！我們看一組例子：GOOD:ltiscrucialthatnewsorganizationsincreasetheamountofforeignnewscoverageprovidedtoAmericans.BAD:Thisisanarticletalkingaboutforeignnews.4：Theresponseincludesaskillfulintroductionandconclusion.Theresponsedemonstratesadeliberateandhighlyeffectiveprogressionofideasbothwithinparagraphsandthroughouttheessay.3：Theresponseincludesaneffectiveintroductionandconclusion.Theresponsedemonstratesaclearprogressionofideasbothwithinparagraphsandthroughouttheessay.2：Theresponsemayincludeanineffectiveintroductionand/orconclusion.Theresponsemaydemonstratesomeprogressionofideaswithinparagraphsbutnotthroughouttheresponse.通過(guò)對(duì)比我們可以看出，新SATEssay要求學(xué)生在寫作中包含askillfulintroductionandconclusion,什么樣的introduction和conclusion才是好的呢?我們不僅需要包含上一條評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的claim,還要說(shuō)明作者如何去論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，下面就是一個(gè)很好的例子：PeterS.Goodmanbuildsasolidargumentforthegrowingneedforforeignnewscoverageandutilizesconcreteevidencejogicalreasoningandpersuasiveappealstonotonlyexposethepaucityofinternationalnewsneeds,butalsoconvincehisaudiencethatitiscrucialthatnewsorganizationsincreasetheamountofforeignnewscoverageprovidedtoAmericans.在具體分析作者的論證過(guò)程中，還需要注意文章的progression,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)膖ransitionalwords是一種有效的方式，如：Goodmanbeginsbyclearlylayingout;Goodmancloseshisargument;4：Theresponsehaswidevarietyinsentencestructures.Theresponsedemonstratesaconsistentuseofprecisewordchoice.Theresponsemaintainsaformalstyleandobjectivetone.3：Theresponsehasvarietyinsentencestructures.Theresponsedemonstratessomeprecisewordchoice.Theresponsemaintainsaformalstyleandobjectivetone.2：Theresponsehaslimitedvarietyinsentencestructures;sentencestructuresmayberepetitive.Theresponsedemonstratesgeneralorvaguewordchoice;wordchoicemayberepetitive.Theresponsemaydeviatenoticeablyfromaformalstyleandobjectivetone.通過(guò)對(duì)比我們可以看出，新SATEssay要求學(xué)生在寫作中有多變的句式和精確的詞匯選擇。但同學(xué)們要注意的是，多變的句式并不意味著全文充斥著倒裝句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句式等，SATOG中明確指出，需要avoidasimple/epetitivesubject-verbstructure,如：PeterS.Goodmanoffers...;Heappeals...;Goodmangives...;Hetalks....這種單一的主謂結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)使得文章枯燥，我們可以合理的使用從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和介詞短語(yǔ)等完成考試中要求的句式變化，如：Whileonemightviewthisasselfish,SummersreassuresthereaderthattheyarenotaloneinfeelingthiswayFurthercontributingtohisargument,...同樣，精確的詞匯選擇并不意味著復(fù)雜的單詞，而是能夠準(zhǔn)確地表述意思的表達(dá)，如下面就是0G中給出的precisewordchoice:dramaticdecline,discussthecontextofthedecrease,usesthisirony,honesinonexamples,makeamorepowerfulimpressiononthereader,appealstotheindividual,alwaysreferencingthepracticalneed.最后，評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中提到aformalstyleandobjectivetone,也就是說(shuō)在寫作中不可以給出自己的觀點(diǎn)，而且盡量避免口語(yǔ)化的表達(dá)。4：TheresponseshowsastrongmandoftheconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglishandisfreeorvirtuallyfreeoferrors.3：TheresponseshowsagoodcontroloftheconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglishandisfreeofsignificanterrorsthatdetractfromthequalityofwriting.2：TheresponseshowsalimitedcontroloftheconventionsofstandardwrittenEnglishandcontainserrorsthatdetractfromthequalityofwritingandmayimpedeunderstanding.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中最后提到的就是語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范，也就是語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的正確性，可以看到，4分的文章幾乎沒(méi)有語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤，3分的文章沒(méi)有大的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤（其實(shí)還是存在一些小的錯(cuò)誤），2分的作文就存在很多語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤了。同學(xué)們?nèi)菀追傅腻e(cuò)誤主要有：SpellingMistakes,Syntacticallyawkwardsenten