讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)三：讀通(感情發(fā)展)eq\a\vs4\al(Ⅰ)外刊輸入——悟語(yǔ)言之道WorkingoutinaNewWayThemostpopularPEclassatWaukeganHighSchoolinIllinois,US,takesplaceinthestadium.Itistheschool'sversionofCrossFit,thedifficultworkoutthathasexplodedinpopularityoverthelast16yearsatthousandsofgyms.IthasmorethanonemilliondevoteesandaprofessionalcompetitionshownonESPN.SchoolsaroundtheChicagoareahaveadoptedCrossFittointereststudentsatatimeofarisingweightproblemamongyoungpeople,andmostsayitreallyworkscomparedwithtraditionalgymclasses.“Ithinkit'sagreatwaytoteachkidslifelongfitness,especiallythosekidswhoaren'tinterestedinhockey,soccerorbasketball，”saidteacherTracyHarafofIllinois'StonyCreekElementary.“Theythinkit'stough,buttheymentionedtheirperformancehasimproved.”Butsomedoctorsandresearchersadvisecaution,sayingworkoutsthatinvolveliftingweightscanleadtoinjuries,particularlywhenperformedbyinexperiencedpeople.DoctorCraigFinlaysonatLurieChildren'sHospitalofChicagosaidhewasworriedthatwhilestrengthtraininghasapositiveeffectonkids,heavyweightscouldbetroubleforteenagerswhomighthurtthemselvesbytryingtodotoomuchorusingpoorform.CrossFitInc.,thecompanythatcertifies(發(fā)證書(shū))trainersandlicensesgyms,disagreesthatitsprogramismoredangerouscomparedwithotherfitnessroutines,likejogging.Thecompanyevensued(控告)overaresearcharticlethatfound16percentofaCrossFitgrouphadstoppedparticipatingbecauseofoveruseorinjury,sayingthestatisticpresentingCrossFitasunsafewasnotscientific.GymteacherslikeWaukegan'sGregMoisio,alsosaytheriskofinjurycanbereducedwithproperteachingandCrossFit'sflexibility.Moisioreferredtoaworkoutcalled“DeathbyBurpees”，whereeveryoneminuteand20seconds,studentsrunalapandperformanincreasingnumberofburpees—amovementinvolvingasquat(蹲下),apush-upandajumpwithhandsheldabovethehead.Thechallengeistokeepgoingaslongasyoucan.“That'sthegreatthing,becausesomethinglikerunningthemile,theworstkidisalwayslast，”Moisiosaid.“Everybodyknowswho'slast;thesenseoffailurewillmakethemloseheart.That'saterriblefeelingforakid.Now,nooneknowswhodroppedoutinroundthreebecausethey'retooworriedabouttryingtogettheirownbuttaroundthetrack.”1.重點(diǎn)詞匯再現(xiàn)(1)workout 鍛煉(2)stadiumn. 體育場(chǎng)(3)competitionn. 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，競(jìng)賽(4)compare...with 與……比較(5)gymn. 體操訓(xùn)練(6)fitnessn. 健康(7)soccern. 足球(8)injuryn. 傷害；損傷(9)strengthn. 力量；體力(10)positiveadj. 積極的(11)jogn. 慢跑(12)push-upn. 俯臥撐(13)failuren. 失敗(14)loseheart 喪失信心；泄氣(15)trackn. 跑道2．經(jīng)典句型再現(xiàn)：名詞短語(yǔ)作同位語(yǔ)(1)Itistheschool'sversionofCrossFit,thedifficultworkoutthathasexplodedinpopularityoverthelast16yearsatthousandsofgyms.這是學(xué)校版的交叉健身法，這項(xiàng)高難度的運(yùn)動(dòng)在過(guò)去16年里在數(shù)千家健身房大受歡迎。(2)CrossFitInc.thecompanythatcertifies(發(fā)證書(shū))trainersandlicensesgyms,disagreesthatitsprogramismoredangerouscomparedwithotherfitnessroutines.CrossFit公司，一家認(rèn)證、頒發(fā)教練和健身房執(zhí)照的公司，不認(rèn)同這個(gè)項(xiàng)目比其他健身項(xiàng)目更危險(xiǎn)。Ⅱ迷你語(yǔ)料庫(kù)(MiniCorpus)序號(hào)佳句呈現(xiàn)賞析1Asaplayer,LangPingbroughthonourandglorytohercountry.描寫(xiě)運(yùn)動(dòng)員的句子。特別注意honour和glory，表示“榮耀”。2Asaperson,LangPingislovedbyfansathomeandabroad.描寫(xiě)人物受歡迎。athomeandabroad意為“國(guó)內(nèi)外”。3TheteamthatLangPinghadbuiltwas①fallingapart②.①定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞theteam。②fallapart意為“破裂；破碎；崩潰”。4Losingtwoimportantplayerswasabigchallenge,butLangPingdidnotloseheart.描述在困難面前，不灰心喪氣。動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)形式。5Thenin2016,LangPingledhervolleyballteamtoOlympicgoldinBrazil.描述人物具有領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力。leadsb.toOlympicgold意為“帶領(lǐng)……獲得奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌”。6WhenMichaelJordan'sfeetlefttheground,timeseemedtostandstill.描述“飛人”喬丹，運(yùn)用了夸張的寫(xiě)作手法。timeseemedtostandstill意為“時(shí)間似乎都凝固了”。7Theplayerwhobecameknownas“AirJordan”changedbasketball①withhisgracefulmovesandjumps②.①who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞theplayer。②“with＋名詞”作狀語(yǔ)。8Jordan'sskillswereimpressive,butthementalstrengththatheshowedmadehimunique.描述人物，特別注意兩個(gè)形容詞impressive和unique。9Jordansaysthatthesecrettohissuccessislearningfromhisfailures.thesecrettohissuccessisdoingsth.意為“他成功的秘訣是做某事”。續(xù)表序號(hào)佳句呈現(xiàn)賞析10Icanacceptfailure;everyonefailsatsomething.ButIcan'tacceptnottrying.本句是喬丹的名言，說(shuō)明遇到失敗時(shí)，不氣餒，堅(jiān)持嘗試。11Losinggamestaughthimtopractiseharderandnevergiveup.本句適用于描述失敗之后勇敢的狀態(tài)。12Ialmostwentbananas,too.諺語(yǔ)，表示“我?guī)缀醢l(fā)瘋了”。13Ihadnoideaalettercouldmakesuchadifference！havenoidea后接同位語(yǔ)從句；makeadifference意為“有影響的；起作用”。14OnceIstartedthinkingaboutfitnessratherthanweight①，thingsbegantochange②.①once引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。②概括描述情況的變化。15RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed①，Iaddedhealthyfoodsto②mymeals.①ratherthan表示“而不是”，作狀語(yǔ)，前置放句首，表示強(qiáng)調(diào)。②add...to...意為“把……添加到……”。16Finally,Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.描述自我接納。comparing和lookingfor并列作stop的賓語(yǔ)。17Instead,ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.描述自我接納。makealistof意為“列清單”。18Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.描述通過(guò)努力，增加信心，并接受自我。Ⅲ讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)起始篇：讀通——感情發(fā)展(Feelingdevelopment)故事類記敘文有兩條線索，一是情節(jié)(plot)發(fā)展線索，二是感情(feeling)發(fā)展線索。通常情況下，隨著情節(jié)的發(fā)展，文章的主角感情會(huì)隨之發(fā)生變化。所以，對(duì)文章的整體把握就離不開(kāi)對(duì)角色感情發(fā)展的分析。對(duì)于感情發(fā)展線索的梳理有兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)。第一，按照情節(jié)發(fā)展的順序，逐步獲取表示感情的詞匯、句型及表達(dá)，進(jìn)而獲取感情的發(fā)展。第二，要特別關(guān)注感情最大的變化。這是記敘文的核心，往往也是最大沖突的爆發(fā)點(diǎn)和續(xù)寫(xiě)的基礎(chǔ)?！镜漕}精析】閱讀下面的材料，完成以下任務(wù)。Mariawaspracticingwithhersoccermatesinatinyschoolyard.TheywereallfromRiverEdgeRockers,asoccerteamoftheircommunity.Suddenly,theballflewintoadeepholeattheedgeoftheyard.Itwasthethirdtimethattheyhadlosttheirballthismonth.Withouttheball,Mariahadtowavegoodbyetohermatesandwenthome,depressed.“Ifonlytherewerearegulationsoccerfield！”shethought.Thatevening,seeingherlowspirits,herfatherasked,“Whatwasthematter,dear？”“Iwasjustthinkingaboutplayinginabrand-newsoccerfield！”Mariaanswered.Herfathersmiledandsaid，“Tomorrow,aTownCouncilmeetingistobeheldtodiscussabouttheuseofthatvacant(空著的)lotnexttothepetstore,HomeforPets.Whynottakethisopportunitytoconvincethemweneedabetterfield？”Thenextday,withthecompanyofherfather,Mariaandherteammateswenttothemeetinghall.Ontheirarrival,theysawCouncilwomanJillandsomecitizensalreadythere.Theytooktheirseats.AfterJillannouncedthestartofthediscussion,Mariastoodupandspokefirst.“Uptillnowthereisnosoccerfieldinourcommunity,whichcertainlyaffectsourphysicalhealth.Ourteamcurrentlyhavetopracticeinatinyschoolyard,andonlywhenit'snotalreadybooked.”MrsLorries,ownerofthepetstore,commented,“Icouldn'tagreemore.Kidsdoneedsuchafield.”TheRockersapplaudedexcitedlyandtheothercitizensallagreeditwouldbeawayout.“Asoccerfieldwouldbeagooduseforthatlotwithovergrownweedsandsomelargerocks,buttobuildsuchonewouldneedasmallsumofmoneyandmaybeyouevenneedtodoalltheworkonyourown.”CouncilwomanJillsmiled,“Canyoumanageit？”Thinkingforawhile,Marianoddedwithadeterminedlookonherface,“TheRockerscandoit!Wewillturnitintoasoccerfield.”Theteammatesallcheered.1．情節(jié)與感情發(fā)展(Plotdevelopmentandfeelingdevelopment)結(jié)構(gòu)(Structure)情節(jié)發(fā)展(Plotdevelopment)感情發(fā)展(Feelingdevelopment)開(kāi)端(Beginning)Paragraph1Mariaandhersoccermateswanteda__regulation__soccer__field．Ifonlytherewerearegulationsoccerfield!用感嘆句表示瑪麗亞對(duì)現(xiàn)在球場(chǎng)的不滿/失望和對(duì)新球場(chǎng)的渴望。發(fā)展(RisingAction)Paragraphs2－7Maria'sfathersuggestedusing__the__vacant__lot__next__to__the__pet__store．Thenextday,Council-womanJill,MrsLorries,owner__of__the__pet__storeandothercitizensagreedonthemeeting.Buttobuildaregulationsoccerfieldwouldneeda__small__sum__of__moneyandevenneedto__do__all__the__work__by__Maria__and__her__teammates．文章最大的沖突：寵物店旁邊的空地可以用作新球場(chǎng)，但是必須由瑪麗亞和她的隊(duì)員們自己籌錢并且自己動(dòng)手改造。...seeingherlowspirits...說(shuō)明瑪麗亞對(duì)舊球場(chǎng)的不滿/失望。Herfathersmiledandsaid...說(shuō)明爸爸對(duì)瑪麗亞的支持和疼愛(ài)。Icouldn'tagreemore.此處應(yīng)用了“否定詞＋比較級(jí)”表示最高級(jí)含義，表明洛瑞女士對(duì)瑪麗亞的支持。Kidsdoneedsuchafield.此處應(yīng)用了“do＋動(dòng)詞原形”表示對(duì)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的強(qiáng)調(diào)，表明洛瑞女士對(duì)瑪麗亞的支持。TheRockersapplaudedexcitedly...表明了隊(duì)員們的興奮之情。Jillsmiled...表明了吉爾對(duì)瑪麗亞的支持。高潮(Climax)Paragraph8Mariaandherteammateswere__willing__toacceptthechallengetotransformthe__vacant__lotintoaregulationsoccerfield.高潮：瑪麗亞和隊(duì)員們樂(lè)意接受挑戰(zhàn)。Marianoddedwithadeterminedlookonherface...表明了瑪麗亞下定決心、堅(jiān)定的心情。Theteammatesall