HowtowriteacongratulationletterLearningobjectives:1.熟練掌握祝賀信文體結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)。正確運(yùn)用祝賀信的功能性詞句。在限定時(shí)間內(nèi)完成80字左右的祝賀信。

祝賀信

祝賀信是向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀ＹR的信件,一般用于對(duì)方有什么喜事或取得了什么成績(jī)以及節(jié)日壽誕等。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為:寫作技法IDO!1.吸引眼球開頭句①CongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstplaceintheChemistrycontest.祝賀你在化學(xué)競(jìng)賽中獲得第一名。②IamdelightedtolearnthatyouhavewonthefirstplaceintheEnglishspeechcontest.得知你在英語(yǔ)演講比賽中獲得第一名,我很高興。③IamwritingtoexpressmycongratulationsonyoursuccessintheCollegeEntranceExamination.我寫這封信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你高考成功的祝賀。WEDOTOGETHER!增分佳句④Iamwritingtocongratulateyouon...我寫信來(lái)祝賀你……⑤Iamwritingtoofferyoumysincerestcongratulationsonsth.(yourwinningtheprize/...)

我寫這位信表達(dá)我對(duì)你......由衷的祝愿WEDOTOGETHER!增分佳句Makingsentences.1.祝賀你在漢語(yǔ)演講比賽中獲得第一名2.得知你被北大錄取我很高興。CongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstplaceintheChineseSpeechCompetition.IamdelightedtolearnthatyouhavebeenadmittedintoPekingUniversity.Practice3.我寫這封信是為了表達(dá)對(duì)你們成功舉辦教師節(jié)晚會(huì)的祝賀。4.我寫信祝賀你今天高中畢業(yè)。IamwritingtoexpressmycongratulationsonyoursuccessinorganizingtheTeacher’sDayPartyI’mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourgrduationfromhighschooltodayPracticeMakingsentences.

2.亮點(diǎn)出彩篇中句1)Itcameasnosurprisetome/isnosurprisetomethatyouarethewinnerof...2)Itwaspersistenceanddeterminationthatledyou,stepbystep,toyoursuccess.3)Youshowedpersistenceinthecompetition,whichcontributedtoyourfinalsuccess.4)Thereisnodenying/doubtthatyoursuccesspartlyliesinyourtalentfortennis.5)Youcouldn’thavemadesuchremarkableachievementswithoutyourcontinuouseffort.1.你在漢字聽寫大賽中獲勝對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)并不奇怪。（it作形式主語(yǔ)）2.是你平時(shí)堅(jiān)持不斷的練習(xí)促成你今天的成功。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）ItcameasnosurprisetomethatyouarethewinneroftheChineseCharacterDictationCompetition.

It’syourconstantpracticethatcontributestoyoursuccess.PracticeMakingsentences.3.你在比賽中表現(xiàn)出非凡的毅力和決心，這令人很欽佩（非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）4.沒有平時(shí)不斷的努力，你不可能取得如此非凡的成就。（without含蓄虛擬）Youshowedpersistenceinthecompetition,whichisadmirable.Youcouldn’thavemadesuchremarkableachievementswithoutyourcontinuouseffort.PracticeMakingsentences.3.韻味無(wú)窮結(jié)尾句。1)Congratulationsagain,andIwishyoufurthersuccess!2)

CongratulationsagainandI’mlookingforwardtoyourfurther

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假定你是校體育部部長(zhǎng)李華,你校英國(guó)交換生Ivan在全市網(wǎng)球比賽中獲得了第一名。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給Ivan寫一封信,向他表示祝賀,內(nèi)容包括:1.表明得知Ivan獲獎(jiǎng)的消息;2.對(duì)Ivan的成功進(jìn)行積極評(píng)價(jià);3.表達(dá)衷心的祝賀。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;典例示范Canyoutellmewhythewritingisgood?【滿分范文】DearIvan,Iammuchdelightedtolearnthatyougotthefirstplaceinthecitytenniscontest.Iamwritingto

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假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)朋友John獲得了在華高中留學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.祝賀獲獎(jiǎng);2.肯定付出;3.再次祝賀并表示祝愿：注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;YOUDO!演練提能參考范文:DearJohn,IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.Itisreallygoodnewsthatyoubecamechampionofthiscompetition.IknowyouwerenotverygoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpractisedspeakingChinesealmosteveryday.Asthesayinggoes,

“Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.”Andyoureffortspaidoffatlast!Ibelieveyoucanachievemo