Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime!單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度應(yīng)用文建議信本單元以“建議信”為話題，主要談?wù)搶W(xué)生生活中所遇到的問題和困難，并針對這些問題和困難尋求幫助或給出建議。在寫作過程中，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：能正確使用if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；2.能正確使用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should提出建議；3.能使用生動(dòng)的語言，把自己的觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來；4.能在敘述的過程中，恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用過渡詞語，使文章銜接自然。（三段布局法）1.結(jié)構(gòu)：短文通常分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：引入話題。第二部分：給出建議。第三部分：總結(jié)收尾。2.人稱：第二人稱。3.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)。【詞匯積累】1.advice勸告；建議2.experience經(jīng)驗(yàn)；經(jīng)歷3.organize組織；籌備 4.solve解決；解答 5.feelupset感覺沮喪的 6.careless粗心的；不小心的 7.understanding善解人意的；體諒人的8.unless除非；如果不9.makemistakes犯錯(cuò)誤 10.keep...tooneself保守秘密11.getintoafightwithsb.和某人吵架12.arrive/belateforclass上課遲到13.loseone’swallet丟失錢包14.haveproblemswithschoolwork成績不好15.discussyourproblems討論你的問題16.tellyourparents告訴你的父母17.getadvicefromanexpert從專家處得到建議18.runawayfrom從……逃離19.solveproblems解決問題20.haveproblemswith/doingsth.在某方面/做某事有困難21.it’sbest1.haveagreattime玩得開心22.gototheparty去參加聚會(huì)23.wearjeans穿牛仔服24.stayathome呆在家25.talkabout談?wù)?6.haveaparty舉辦聚會(huì)27.thanksfor感謝.......28etomyhouse來我家29.haveanexam考試30.bringfood帶食物31.too..to太....而.....32.givesomesmallgifts送一些小禮物33.playthegames玩游戲34.afterschool放學(xué)后35.haveto必須36.studyformyEnglishexam備考英語37.beupset失落38.haveapianolesson上鋼琴課39.givemesomeadvice給我一些建議40.buysomeflowers買些鮮花41.getenoughexercise足夠的鍛煉42.makemorefriends多交朋友43.beafraidto擔(dān)心44.intheend最后45.understanding善解人意的46.thesameas與.....一樣47.havealotofexperience有很多經(jīng)驗(yàn)(not)todosth.最好（不）做某事四、句型積累1.IhavesomeproblemsandIneedyourhelp.我碰到一些問題，我需要你的幫助。2.Ihavetroubleingettingalongwithmyparents.我與我父母相處有困難。3.Ifyouhavetroubleindoinghomework,yourfriendswillbereadytohelp.4.Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime.如果你去參加聚會(huì)，你會(huì)過得愉快。5.Thestudentsaretalkingaboutwhentohaveaclassparty.周學(xué)們正在討論何時(shí)舉行班級聚會(huì)。6.Second,bekindandfriendlytothemandtryyourbesttohelpthemwhenthey’reintrouble.7.Someparentsoftenasktheirchildrentostudyhard,buttheyaretoobusytoknowtheirchildren’srealtrouble.一些家長常要求孩子努力學(xué)習(xí)，但他們因?yàn)樘σ灾劣诓荒芰私夂⒆拥恼嬲裏馈?.Runningawayfromproblemswillmakeyoufeelworse.逃避問題會(huì)使你感到更糟。9.Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.我認(rèn)為和人交談能幫助很多。10.It'sbestnottorunawayfromourproblems.最好不要逃避我們的問題。11.Sharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.分享困難可以使困難減半。12.Somepeoplebelievetheworstthingistodonothing.一些人相信最糟糕的事情是什么都不做?！糸_頭句①Asmiddleschoolstudents，wehavealotofhappiness，butwealsohavemanyproblems.②I'msorrytohearaboutyourproblem.③IhaveaproblemandIneedyouradvice.◆中間句①Weshouldn'tkeepthemtoourselves.②Ithinkyoushouldfollowyourparents'wishes.③Firstly，I'lltellthemmyfeelings.Secondly，I'lltrymybesttodomorehouseworksothattheycanhavemoretimetorelax.What'smore，Iwillmakethemsitdowntohaveagoodtalk.④Whynotwaituntilyougetolder，andthentalkaboutitwithyourparentsagain?⑤Ifyouhaveproblems，youshouldtalktootherpeople.◆結(jié)尾句①I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoonifIdoallthesethings.②Ireallyhopemyadvicewillhelpyou.【諺語積累】1．Twoheadsarebetterthanone.三個(gè)臭皮匠，頂個(gè)諸葛亮。2．Tohelpothersistohelpyourself.幫助別人就是幫助你自己。生活是如此的美好，人生有無盡的歡樂，但也有諸多煩惱。作為中學(xué)生，你最大的煩惱是什么？你打算如何解決你的煩惱？請你以“MyBiggestProblem”為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：1．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名；2．80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：◆◆審題指導(dǎo)1．文體：說明文；2．時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主；3．注意事項(xiàng)：注意段落布局并恰當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句或連接詞來增加得分點(diǎn)?！簟羲悸伏c(diǎn)撥◆◆組句成篇MyBiggestProblemAsmiddleschoolstudents，wehavealotofhappiness，butwealsohavemanyproblems.Weshouldn'tkeepthemtoourselves.Forme，mybiggestproblemisfrommyparents.Thesedays，myparentsargueandfightalotbecauseofdoingchores.Ireallywanttorunaway.Afterthinkingtwice，Idecidetohelpmyparents.Firstly，I'lltellthemmyfeelings.Secondly，I'lltrymybesttodomorehouseworksothattheycanhavemoretimetorelax.What'smore，Iwillmakethemsitdowntohaveagoodtalk.Theworstthingistodonothing.I'msuremyparentswillgetonwitheachothersoonifIdoallthesethings.一、詞匯積累(一)煩惱與問題類短語1．和某人吵架________________2．失去所有樂趣________________3．上課遲到________________4．丟失錢包________________5．沒有足夠的時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)________________6．犯粗心錯(cuò)誤________________7．感到害羞_(dá)_______________8．成績不好________________9．起床遲________________10．在某方面有麻煩________________(二)解決問題類短語1．討論你的問題________________2．告訴你的父母________________3．分擔(dān)你的問題________________4．什么都不做________________5．向老師尋求幫助________________6．向某人道歉________________7．為英語考試而學(xué)習(xí)________________8．計(jì)劃做某事________________9．環(huán)游世界________________10.接受教育________________11．上大學(xué)________________12．從專家處得到建議________________13．從……逃離________________14．與某人交談________________15．要求某人更細(xì)心________________16．解決問題________________(三)其他短語1．太……以至于不能________________2．擁有豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn)________________3．最后________________4.感覺一樣________________二、句子積累(一)佳句欣賞與模仿1．Ifweaskpeopletobringfood，they'lljustbringpotatochipsandchocolatebecausethey'llbetoolazytocook.【asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事；too…to…太……以至于不能】一些家長常要求孩子努力學(xué)習(xí)，但他們因?yàn)樘σ灾劣诓荒芰私夂⒆拥恼嬲裏?。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Ithinktalkingtosomeonehelpsalot.InEnglish，wesaythatsharingaproblemislikecuttingitinhalf.【動(dòng)名詞在句中可以作主語、表語、賓語、定語等】逃避問題會(huì)使你感到更糟。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)用“if”推理下列行為的后果，并提出合理的建議。1．Mikedecidestoworkwithoutfinishinghiscollege.Ifhedoes，________________________________________________________________________Ithinkheshould________________________________________________________________________2．Ilostmywalletlastweek，butIamstillafraidtotellmyparents.Ifyou________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________3．SuMei'sbrothercan'tdowellinEnglish.HeplanstogiveuplearningEnglish.If________________________________________________________________________Ithink________________________________________________________________________(三)給下面青少年存在的問題提出合理的建議。1．Bettyalwaysrunsawayfromherproblemsandtellsnobody.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________2．Linglingisheavy.Someclassmatesoftenlaughather.Ithink________________________________________________________________________If________________________________________________________________________【答案】一、詞匯積累(一)煩惱與問題類短語4．loseone'swallet5.nothaveenoughtimetostudy6.makecarelessmistakes7.feelshy8.haveproblemswithschoolwork9.getuplate10．haveproblemswithsth.(二)解決問題類短語1.discussyourproblems2.tellyourparents3.shareyourproblems4.donothing5.asktheteacherforhelp6.saysorrytosb.7.studyfortheEnglishexam8.plantodoaroundtheworld10．getaneducation11.gotocollege12.getadvicefromanexpert13．runawayfrom14.talktosomeone15.asksb.tobemorecareful16.solveproblems(三)其他短語1.too…to…2.havealotofexperience3.intheend4.feelthesamewayas二、句子積累(一)佳句欣賞與模仿1.Someparentsoftenasktheirchildrentostudyhard，buttheyaretoobusytoknowtheirchildren'srealtrouble.2.Runningawayfromproblemswillmakeyoufeelworse.（一）1．Mike是一名中學(xué)生，他沉迷于玩電腦游戲，并因此影響了他的學(xué)習(xí)。作為Mike的好朋友，你打算怎么幫助他呢？請用下面所給的提示寫一篇80詞左右的短文(開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。提示：giveup;wastetime;beinterestedin;haveagreattimeDearMike，Thanksforyourletter.Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike，Thanksforyourletter.Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow.Don'tworry.Letmehelpyou.Now,I'llgiveyousomeadviceabouthowtodobetterinyourstudy.Ifyouplaytoomuchputergames,you'llwastelotsoftime.Asaresult,you'llhavelittletimetodoyourhomework.Ifyougiveupplayingputergames,youmaybeinterestedinotherthings,likestudyorsports.Soyoushouldgiveuptheputergamesandworkhard.Ithinkifyoukeepworkinghard,you'llhaveagreattimeatschoolwithyourgoodfriends.【詳解】這是一篇材料作文。Mike是一名中學(xué)生,他沉迷于電腦游戲,并因此影響了學(xué)習(xí)。假如你是Mike的好朋友，要求你寫一篇短文，給他一些意見和建議幫助他。寫作前要仔細(xì)審題，確定寫作的重點(diǎn)，要把握好時(shí)態(tài)和人稱。為使文章更有條理性可以先分條列出寫作計(jì)劃，列出所用到的一些基本詞匯、詞組；注意語意要通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連詞。為避免文章的單調(diào)和枯燥，應(yīng)該考慮運(yùn)用比較高級的語法形式讓文章增色。注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。提示詞語：giveup;waste…time;beinterestedin;haveagreattime（二）近年來，青少年的心理健康問題引起了越來越多的關(guān)注。你們學(xué)校的英語角這周的主題就是“青少年心理健康問題大家談”。請你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇文章，就這一話題進(jìn)行發(fā)言。提示：1.學(xué)校方面：建立專門的部門；2.家長方面：給予更多關(guān)注；3.青少年自己：正確處理困難。參考詞匯：心理健康mentalhealth;全社會(huì)thewholesociety;部門department要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右(文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；2.根據(jù)所給信息可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Nowadays,peoplearepayingalotmoreattentiontoteenagers'mentalhealth._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,peoplearepayingalotmoreattentiontoteenagers'mentalhealth.Inmyopinion,thewholesocietyshouldworktogethertosolvethisproblem.First,schoolsshouldorganizeaspecialdepartmenttohelpteenagerstosolvetheirproblems.Second,parentsshouldcaremoreaboutthementalhealthoftheirchildren.Lastbutnotleast,youngpeopleshoulddealwithdifficultiesinarightway.Theycanasktheirteachersandparentsforsomeadviceonhowtosolvetheirproblems.Wehopethatalltheteenagerscanhaveahappylife.【詳解】這篇作文的主題是“青少年心理問題”，要求我們對學(xué)校英語角舉辦的這一主題活動(dòng)進(jìn)行發(fā)言。文章主要從三個(gè)方面來敘述：學(xué)校方面、家庭方面和青少年自身。題目中只是簡單列出了這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)，文章里具體的內(nèi)容需要學(xué)生們自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，并用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。因此首先我們應(yīng)對文章內(nèi)容進(jìn)行組織和發(fā)揮，確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和層次；然后確定應(yīng)使用的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)娜朔Q。接下來就是具體的表達(dá)，需要注意：英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，而應(yīng)從句子是整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用較常見的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)或主系表結(jié)構(gòu)，穿插使用并列句和復(fù)合句，并注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型；其次需要注意語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文章整體意思連貫、語句通順、表達(dá)流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。短文是總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)，共分為三段。第一段作者引出話題，并用一句話概括自己的觀點(diǎn)；第二段是主體段，作者從三個(gè)方面敘述了如何對待“青少年心理問題”，它需要學(xué)校、家庭和青少年自身的共同努力。這一段所占篇幅最大，是文章的主要內(nèi)容；第三段作者用一句話表達(dá)了自己的愿望，與開頭呼應(yīng)。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，語法規(guī)范，語句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語的習(xí)慣，以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句，如賓語從句等。長短句結(jié)合，使文章富有節(jié)奏感。短文第二段中作者使用了First,Second,Lastbutnotleast來連接各部分內(nèi)容，使文章內(nèi)容非常連貫。文章中使用了較豐富的短語和句型，如Inmyopinion,thewholesocietyshouldworktogethertosolvethisproblem.、First,schoolsshouldorganizeaspecialdepartmenttohelpteenagerstosolvetheirproblems.、Lastbutnotleast,youngpeopleshoulddealwithdifficultiesinarightway.、Theycanasktheirteachersandparentsforsomeadviceonhowtosolvetheirproblems.、Wehopethatalltheteenagerscanhaveahappylife.等等。（三）新冠病毒疫情仍肆虐全球。在江陰政府的有效控制下，我們有幸在校學(xué)習(xí)。利用此契機(jī)，根據(jù)所給提示，以“BeaGoodStudent”為題寫一篇短文，人人做最好的自己。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必須包含所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；BeaGoodStudentIfyouwanttobeagoodstudent,Ithinkitisgreatforyoutodothefollowingthings.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文BeaGoodStudentIfyouwanttobeagoodstudent,Ithinkitisgreatforyoutodothefollowingthings.Firstofall,youshouldstudyhard,listencarefullyinclassandfinishyourhomeworkbyyourselfontime.Secondly,youshouldliveacolourfullife.Youcanlearnnewskills,readplentyofbooksandkeepapetifyoulike.Thirdly,agoodstudentshouldhelppeopleinneed.Youcanbeavolunteeratyourmunitycentretohelppeoplearoundyou.Youcanalsoraisemoneyforthechildreninpoorareas.Lastbutnotleast,ahealthybodyisveryimportantforagoodstudent,soyouhadbetterenjoysportslikerunning,joggingandswimming.Ifyoucanfollowmyadvice,Iamsureyouwillalwaysbeagoodstudentinyourlife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中如何做一名好學(xué)生的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“人人做好自己”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“認(rèn)真聽課，學(xué)習(xí)新技能、做志愿者等”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹如何做一名好學(xué)生的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)“如果你能聽從我的建議，我相信在你的生活中你將永遠(yuǎn)是一個(gè)好學(xué)生”的想法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①firstofall首先；②ontime按時(shí)；③plentyof大量的；④raisemoney籌集資金。[高分句型]①Youcanbeavolunteeratyourmunitycentretohelppeoplearoundyou.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語)②Ifyoucanfollowmyadvice,Iamsureyouwillalwaysbeagoodstudentinyourlife.(if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)（四）一場疫情把人們都“封印”在家。父母和孩子天天近距離相處，引發(fā)了不少親子關(guān)系問題。作為晚輩，我們應(yīng)該如何與父母相處才能讓這種難得的家庭時(shí)光變得更輕松，讓親子關(guān)系更加融洽呢？請你根據(jù)提示，以“Howtogetonwithparents?(如何與父母相處)為題寫出一篇字?jǐn)?shù)不少于70的文章，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?.主動(dòng)和父母交流在學(xué)校的學(xué)習(xí)和生活等情況；2.主動(dòng)幫助父母承擔(dān)家務(wù)，為父母分憂，比如整理房間，洗碗等；3.遇事多與父母討論，多向長輩求助；4.……提示詞：交流municatewith

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家務(wù)houseworkHowtogetonwithparents?Asteenagers,it’simportanttogetonwithparents.Whatshouldwedo?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Howtogetonwithparents?Asteenagers,it’simportanttogetonwithparents.Whatshouldwedo?Firstly,wecantellthemaboutourschoollifeandstudy.Theywillbegladtolistentoyourhappinessandyourproblems.Secondly,wecanoffertohelpourparentswithsomehousework,suchastidyingupthebedroomanddoingthedishes.Thentheywon’tbesotiredafterwork.Thirdly,whenweareintrouble,wecanhaveadiscussionwiththem.Andweshouldaskourparentsforhelporadvice.Finally,wecandosomesportstogether.Ithinkitisveryhelpfultomaintaintherelationshipbydoingsportstogether.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttogetonwellwithourparents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)所給的提示內(nèi)容，具體闡述下如何與父母相處；第二步，表達(dá)你自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①offertodosth主動(dòng)做某事②suchas比如③introuble陷入麻煩④inaword總之[高分句型]①Thirdly,whenweareintrouble,wecanhaveadiscussionwiththem.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②Ithinkitisveryhelpfultomaintaintherelationshipbydoingsportstogether.（Ithink后跟賓語從句）（五）假如你是心理醫(yī)生DrSmith，你收到學(xué)生Mary的來信，她在信中說，自己很喜歡看電視，但父母擔(dān)心看電視影響她的學(xué)習(xí)，不讓她看，她有時(shí)會(huì)和父母爭吵，很煩惱，卻不知道怎么辦。請你給Mary寫一封70個(gè)詞左右的英文回信，給出解決的辦法。提示詞：arguewithsb．和某人吵架【答案】DearMary,Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblem.First,stoparguingwithyourparents．Arguingwiththemcan’tsolveanyproblemsanditmakesyouallangry.Rememberyourparentsloveyoudeeply.Second，youshouldunderstandyourparents．WatchingtoomuchTVisreallybadforyourstudy.Third,youcantellyourparentswhatyouthink.YoushouldtellthemwatchingTVcanhelpyouwithyourstudy．Andyouwon’twatchtoolong.Bestwishes!Yours，DrSmith【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給Mary寫信，給出她解決煩惱的方法?！驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為數(shù)第二，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Thanksfor……，youshould……，WatchingtoomuchTVis……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表示謝謝你告訴我你的問題，接下來介紹我給出的解決問題的方法，最后表達(dá)最好的祝愿。此處tellsbaboutsth,stopdoingsth,arguewith,bebadfor,helpsbwithsth等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。（六）6．假如你是勞拉(Laura)，你的好朋友蒂娜(Tina)對于將要到來的考試感到很擔(dān)憂，擔(dān)心不能取得好成績。請你給她寫一封信，針對她的問題，提出你的建議，并給她一些安慰和鼓勵(lì)。提示詞：worriedabout,normal,helpful(有幫助的),firstofall,next,if,will,nervous(緊張的),believeinoneself,best要求：1.語句通順、符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.70詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearTina,I’msorrytohearthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Laura【答案】DearTina，I’msorrytohearthatyouareworriedabouttheingexam.It’snormaltofeelnervouswhenthereisanexam.Ihavethesamefeelingasyou.Hereismyadvice.Ihopetheyarehelpfultoyou.Firstofall，theexamresultsdon’tmeaneverything.It’sgoodtocareabouttheresult，butifyoucaretoomuchaboutit，youwillnotbeabletoenjoyyourstudy.Next，ifyouaretoonervous，you’dbetterdosomethingtorelax.Don’tspendyourtimeworryingabouttheexamsallthetime.Justbelieveinyourselfandtryyourbest.Ialwaysbelieveyou’rethebest!Yours，Laura【詳解】1.題干解讀：本篇書面表達(dá)是一封書信，結(jié)合所給的寫作要求，闡明問題、給出建議。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)使用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連詞、固定短語的交替使用，使文意連接緊密。還要注意使用豐富的語句，如賓語從句、狀語從句等。注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最好表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。（2023·青?！そy(tǒng)考中考真題）積極健康、樂觀向上的生活是我們共同追求的目標(biāo)。通過正確合理的自我管理和自我提升，我們都能遇見更好的自己。請參考右圖信息，以“Howtobeeabetterperson”為主題，寫一篇英語短文。寫作要求：(1)語句通順，邏輯清晰，書寫規(guī)范；(2)詞數(shù)60—80左右；(3)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonewantstobeeabetterperson,sodoI.Ithinkthefollowingsuggestionscanhelpme.Firstly,makingmorefriendswillhelpme.Itwillnotonlyoffermeopportunitiestolearnfromthem,butitwillalsogivememorechancestohelpothers.Secondly,itisimportantformetoreadmorebooks.Becausereadingcanhelpmeopenmyeyestotheworldandenrichmyknowledge.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.Iwilltrymybesttobeeabetterperson【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求以“Howtobeeabetterperson”為主題，結(jié)合圖示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出下文的建議；第二步，具體介紹如何成為一個(gè)更好的人；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達(dá)決心。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①learnfrom向……學(xué)習(xí)②openmyeyestotheworld打開我的眼睛看世界③enrichmyknowledge豐富我的知識(shí)[高分句型]①Itwillnotonlyoffermeopportunitiestolearnfromthem,butitwillalsogivememorechancestohelpothers.（notonly...butalso...）②Actionspeakslouderthanwords.（習(xí)語）（2023·山東泰安·統(tǒng)考中考真題）強(qiáng)國有我！作為祖國未來的建設(shè)者和接班人，青少年學(xué)生要努力成長為堪當(dāng)大任的棟梁之材。請根據(jù)下面提示，以“Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera”為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勅绾巫鲆幻聲r(shí)代（era）的好學(xué)生。要求：語句通順，意思連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)80—100；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名、地名等與考生本人相關(guān)的信息。Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Howtobegoodstudentsinthenewera.The21stcenturyisatimefullofchallengesandchances.Itisimportantforustoknowhowtobegoodstudentsinthisnewera.TodayI’mgladtosharemyideasabouthowtobegoodstudents.First,weshouldloveourcountryaswellasourfamily.Wemustkeepourpromiseandbethankfultopeoplewhohelpedus.Weshouldbefriendlywithourclassmates.Second,weshouldstudyhardandbecreative.Weshouldhelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.Third,weshouldtakemorephysicalexercisetokeepourbodyandmindhealthy.Weshouldalsodohouseworkfrequentlyandlearntobeindependent.Aslongasweworkhard,wewillbeexcellentmiddleschoolstudents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，從品德方面介紹如何成為好學(xué)生；第二步，從學(xué)業(yè)方面介紹如何成為好學(xué)生；第三步，從生活方面介紹如何成為好學(xué)生。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①aswellas以及②helpeachother互相幫助③learntodo學(xué)習(xí)做[高分句型]①Wemustkeepourpromiseandbethankfultopeoplewhohelpedus.（who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Aslongasweworkhard,wewillbeexcellentmiddleschoolstudents.（aslongas引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）（2023·湖南益陽·統(tǒng)考中考真題）學(xué)校正在向同學(xué)們征集開設(shè)課后服務(wù)課程的意見。假如你是學(xué)生李華，請你給校長寫一封郵件，建議學(xué)校開設(shè)以下課程，并談?wù)勯_設(shè)這些課程的理由。AfterschoolclassesReasonsdancinghappy,interestingswimminghealthy,strong......要求：1.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、學(xué)校名稱等信息；3.詞數(shù)6080。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearheadmaster,I’mLiHua._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopewe’llhavemoreinterestingafterschoolclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearheadmaster,I’mLiHua.Iwanttogiveyousomeadviceaboutourschool’safterschoolclasses.Firstofall,dancingcanmakeushappy.Itisinterestingforus.SoIwanttohavedancinglessonsafterschool.Besides,swimmingcanhelpuskeephealthy.Doingsportscanmakeusbeastrongperson.Ilikeswimming.Iwanttohaveswimminglessons.Lastbutnotleast,puterscanhelpuslearnalotaboutscience.Iwishwecanlearnmoreaboutputersinafterschoolclasses.Ihopewe’llhavemoreinterestingafterschoolclasses.Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出本文的主題；第二步，提出有關(guān)學(xué)校開設(shè)課后課程的建議，并談?wù)劺碛?；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①firstofall首先②keephealthy保持健康③learnalotabout學(xué)習(xí)許多……的知識(shí)[高分句型]①Besides,swimmingcanhelpuskeephealthy（動(dòng)名詞作主語）②Ihopewe’llhavemoreinterestingafterschoolclasses.（賓語從句）（2023·江蘇無錫·統(tǒng)考中考真題）青少年在成長過程中會(huì)遇到各種問題，為此《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》開設(shè)了TeensTalk專欄，傾聽讀者的心聲，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回復(fù)。假設(shè)你是李華，最近也遇上了些煩心事，請給該專欄發(fā)一封英文郵件，講述你的煩惱并尋求建議。注意事項(xiàng)：（1）郵件內(nèi)容須自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；（2）詞數(shù)在100左右，郵件開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（3）郵件中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人姓名或?qū)W校名稱。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.ThesedaysI’mnothappy.Ialwaysarguewithmyparents.Theyonlycareaboutmyschoolwork.Thesummerholidayising.Theyplantochooselotsofafterschoolclassesforme.ButIdon’twanttotaketheseclassesanddon’twanttobesobusy.I’minterestedinpainting.Ijustwanttotakepaintinglessonsduringtheholiday.Theydisagreewithme.Idon’tknowwhattodo.AndhowcanIimprovetherelationshipwithmyparents?Canyougivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)要求講述自己的煩惱。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，點(diǎn)明自己遇到了問題。第二步，講述自己的煩惱并尋求建議。第三步，書寫結(jié)尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①arguewith和某人爭吵②careabout關(guān)心③takepaintinglessons上繪畫課[高分句型]①Thesummerholidayising.(現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)表示將來的動(dòng)作)②Idon’tknowwhattodo.(疑問詞+動(dòng)詞不定式)5．（2023·山東濱州·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，近日你的英國筆友Amy發(fā)來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾；自己體型微胖，想通過節(jié)食減肥，以更美的面貌進(jìn)入新的學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)。請你根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對這問題的見解。參考詞匯:diet(v.節(jié)食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(內(nèi)在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當(dāng)加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.___________________________________________________________________________________