續(xù)寫(xiě)原文閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Theairwasthickwithhumidity(潮濕)insidetheswimmingpoolhallasElishapacednervouslynearthestartingblocks.Thefainttracesofchlorine(氯氣)intheairstung(刺痛)hereyes,buttheseweremildconcernsparedtothematterwhichseemedlargestinhermind:theouteofthestatesemifinals.Theyoung16yearoldhadtrainedhardanddedicatedherentirelifesofartowardswimming.Almostassoonasshecouldwalk,Elishahadtakenlikeafishtothewaterandgaveherwholebody,mindandspirittothesport.Shealwayslovedbeinginthewater,whethertocooloffonahotsummer'sdayortoforgetabouthertroublesatschool–thewavessimplycarrieditallaway.ButforElisha,swimmingwasnotmerely

forrecreation.Herfather，aretiredathleteturnedcoachinhisownright

alwayspushed

Elisha

to

findouttheextentofhertalentsandabilities.Herwholefamily,infact,werefullofamateurandprofessionalathletes,especiallyherolderbrothersandsisterswhohadgoneontoplayintheNCSAatuniversity.Therewasnowayshecouldletthemalldown.Nothere,andnotnow.Finally,thetimehade:the400metermedley(混合泳)relay.Ina

allcamedowntohertobringithome.Atthesoundofthebuzzer,theswimmersalldoveintothewater.

Kayceewiththefreestylestroke,Lizziewiththebreaststroke,andfinallySusanwiththebackstroke.Elisha'sheartpoundedasshereadiedherselffortakeoff.注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。JustasSusanwasinginclose,a

small

childfellintothedeependofthepool.Elisha,outofbreath,pulledherself

upoutofthepool.素材分析主要人物：Elisha故事線：Elisha熱愛(ài)游泳，他的父親是一名教練，她的家人也都是業(yè)余或者專業(yè)選手，她希望在這場(chǎng)混合游泳接力比賽中取得好成績(jī)，最后進(jìn)入全國(guó)決賽！在隊(duì)友即將接棒，輪到她上場(chǎng)的時(shí)候，一個(gè)小孩掉入了泳池中！主題：生命第一，比賽第二續(xù)寫(xiě)方向：第一段可以續(xù)寫(xiě)Elisha立刻跳入水中營(yíng)救落水的小孩。雖然其他隊(duì)已經(jīng)遠(yuǎn)超自己隊(duì)，但是秉著體育精神她還是堅(jiān)持完賽！第二段可以續(xù)寫(xiě)Elisha精疲力盡上岸后失落內(nèi)疚，但是隊(duì)友的支持，觀眾的吶喊，父親的信任，最重要的被營(yíng)救的小孩，讓Elisha意識(shí)到，這些東西比贏得比賽更有價(jià)值！續(xù)寫(xiě)范文JustasSusanwasinginclose,asmallchildfellintothedeependof

thepool.

Almostasifbyinstinct,Elishaturnedherattentiontothechild

cryingforhelpinthewater.Truetoherfishlikespeed,inoneswift

motionElishascoopedthechildupandoutofthewater.Turningtoface

herlane,Elishaspedbackthroughthewatertoherstartingpositionand

thenmadeherwaytowardthefinishline.Elisha,outofbreath,pulledherselfupoutofthepool.

Withthelastounceofherenergygivingout,herfatherandher

teammatescamerunningovertohelphertoherfeetandtoher

amazementheardaloudcheereruptfromthecrowd.WhenElisha

heardthenewsthatherteamfinishedlastinthefinalevent,shenearly

brokedownintotears.Butherdadgaveherabighugandtoldherthat

it'sallrightshewillalwaysbeawinnerinhisheart,nomatterwhat.下水文章游泳比賽下水救人JustasSusanwasinginclose,asmallchildfellintothedeependof

thepool.

Almost

asifbyinstinct,

takingadeepbreath,

Elisha

plungedintothewater

inasplitsecond,

quicklylocatingtheboywhowasstrugglingtostayafloat.

Withswiftstrokes,Elisha

managedto

scoop

thechildupin

time

andoutofthewater.

Theotherteamswerealreadyfaraheadnow.Still,

summoningupher

remaining

strength,

Elisha

swiftly

spedback

toherstartingpositionand

swam

herway

towards

thefinishline,

doingherutmost.

Itcameasnosurprisethat

Elisha’steamcamelast.Elisha,outofbreath,pulledherselfupoutofthepool.

Withthelastounceofherenergygivingout,

Elisha

collapsed

ontotheground,

immensedisappointmentandguiltconsumingher.Her

dadand

teammatescamerunningoverto

helphertoherfeet,praisingherforherswiftaction.And

toher

amazement

aloudcheererupted

fromthecrowd.

Noddingatheraffectionately,Dad

gaveherabigthumbup,saying

sh