人教九年級英語作文Unit10Youaresupposedtoshakehands.Topic:禮儀和習(xí)俗Function：談?wù)摬煌瑖业牧?xí)俗和你應(yīng)該做的事作文主題：介紹中國的禮儀習(xí)俗

英語作文Beforewriting積累素材LeadinHowmuchdoyouknowaboutChinesecustoms？It’spoliteto…It’simpoliteto…Youaresupposedto…Youarenotsupposedto…Youshould…Youshouldn’t…Youareexpectedto…You’dbetter…TablemannersIt’simpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Youshouldn’tstarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Youarenotsupposedtopointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.……Beforewriting積累素材HouserulesIt’spoliteto…It’simpoliteto…Youaresupposedto…Youarenotsupposedto…Youshould…Youshouldn’t…Youareexpectedto…You’dbetter…It’spolitetotakeoffyourshoesandputonslipperswhenyouenterotherpeople’shouses.Youaresupposedtoknockatthedoor,beforeyougetintotheroom.…Beforewriting積累素材GooutwithpeopleIt’spoliteto…It’simpoliteto…Youaresupposedto…Youarenotsupposedto…Youshould…Youshouldn’t…Youareexpectedto…You’dbetter…Youshouldwalkontherightsideoftheroadwhenyougoout.Youareexpectedtoshakehandswhenmeetingpeople.……BeforewritingMakenotesinthechartIt’simpolitetostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Youshouldn’tstarteatingfirstifthereareolderpeopleatthetable.Youarenotsupposedtopointatanyonewithyourchopsticks.……It’spolitetotakeoffyourshoesandputonslipperswhenyouenterotherpeople’shouses.Youaresupposedtoknockatthedoor,beforeyougetintotheroom.…Youshouldwalkontherightsideoftheroadwhenyougoout.Youareexpectedtoshakehandswhenmeetingpeople.……Whilewriting一審題體裁：人稱：時態(tài)：關(guān)鍵信息：應(yīng)用文第二人稱禮儀習(xí)俗提建議句型一般現(xiàn)在時Whilewriting學(xué)習(xí)信件的格式：稱呼：首段：導(dǎo)入（慰問）寫信目的中間段：TablemannersHouserulesGoingoutwithpeople尾段：祝愿+期待落款：WhilewritingPleasefinishthisletteraccordingtothenotes.學(xué)生習(xí)作時間，注意提示他們，可以不必使用和課本一樣的句型，注意連接詞的使用，和使用不一樣的句型。Whilewriting美化文章常見連接詞：表示順序：Firstly,…secondly,…atlast/finally

表示條件：if;unless;aslongas;incase…表示因果：because;so;asaresult…

表示并列或遞進(jìn)：and;notonly…butalso…Both…and…;what’smore;besides;inaddition5.表示選擇：or;either…or…6.表示列舉：forexample,suchas,It’spoliteto…It’simpoliteto…Youaresupposedto…Youarenotsupposedto…Youshould…Youshouldn’t…Youareexpectedto…You’dbetter…學(xué)生作文批改檔次分值作文五檔計分一13-15很好的完成了規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。語句流暢，語篇連貫，層次清晰，字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范，可得滿分。有1-2處語法或單詞拼寫錯誤，可得13分或14分。二10-12較好的完成了規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。語篇比較連貫，語句完整，意思清楚，格式基本正確，書寫較為規(guī)范。有3-4處語法或單詞拼寫錯誤（重復(fù)錯誤不累加）。三7-9基本上完成了規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。意思基本清楚，但結(jié)構(gòu)欠完整，少數(shù)語句不通順。格式基本正確，書寫基本規(guī)范，但語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯誤較多。四4-6未能按要求完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。出現(xiàn)了參考詞匯，但多數(shù)語句欠完整，意思不夠清楚，只有1-2個可讀句。語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯錯誤較多，影響理解，格式不夠正確