Unit8DetectivestoriesTask九年級(jí)上冊(cè)O(shè)bjectivesTolearntowriteadetectivestoryNote:Payattentiontodescribingthecrimeandcriminal(s).Givesomedescriptionofthesuspectandtheplot(情節(jié))etc.getalong/onwithsteal與……和睦相處vt.偷，竊取WordsreviewAnassistant(助手)iswanted.

Ok.Andyoumustfinish4tasks.PlanthestoryWriteastoryFinishthestoryFindthemurdererFourtasksPlanBruce’sstoryTask1Areyouready?GO!degree:★

Canyouorderthestory

andreaditout?Welldone,sowecangotoTask2.Task2

HelptofinishthestoryAreyouready?

degree:★★Great!Anothertaskiscoming.

Task3FindthemurdererAreyouready?GO!degree:★★★AMilliehasenteredtheschoolwritingcompetition.Shehasdrawnsomepicturestohelpherplanherstory.Helpherlabelthepictures.Writethecorrectlettersintheboxes.AdetectivestoryaAwitnesssaidthatshehadseensomeone

runningintoBruce’sbuilding.bBruceplannedtotakethenecklacetothe

policestationthenextday.cOneday,Brucefoundagold(金的)

necklace(項(xiàng)鏈)outsidehisdoor.dBrucewaschargedwiththeft.abcdBMilliehaswrittenthefirstpartofthestory,butshemissedoutafewwords.Helphercompletethesentences.

Bruceandthetheft

Brucegetsalongwithallofhisneighboursexceptthemanwholivednextdoor.Themanneverspeakstoanyone,andnooneknewwhathedoesforaliving(以...…謀生).Oneday,whenBrucecamehomefromwork,hefounda________________

outsidehis____.Brucewonderedwhereitcamefrom.goldnecklacedoorBrucethoughtthatperhapssomeonehaddroppedthenecklace.Soheplannedtotakeittothe__________thenextday.Justthen,a_________

cametoBruce’shomeandsawthenecklaceinhishand.Brucewasverysuprised(震驚的)whenhewaschargedwith_____.

policestationpolicetheftThepolicemantoldhimthatsomevalublejewelleryhadbeenstolen.A_______saidthatshehadseensomeonerunfromthejewelleryshopinto_____________rightafterthe_____.

Burcewasnotguity,buthowcouldheproveit?witnessBruce’sbuildingtheftBrucewasnot(9)______,buthowcouldheproveit?guiltyWriteanending:…CYoualsowanttoenterawritingcompetitionatschool.Youhavedrawsomepictures.Nowwriteyourowndetectivestoryusingthepicturesbelow,orwriteanendingtoMillie’sstoryinPartBonpage118.Possibleendingofthestory

Brucetriedtocalmdown.Hetoldthepolicethathehadevidencetoprovehewasnotguiltyofthefty.Hewasattheofficewithhisfriendsatthetimeofthecrime.Andheaskedthepolicetocheckthesceneforfingerprints.Atlast,Brucewasprovedinnocentofthecharge.Writing:Adetectivestory1.We’dbettercallthepolice.2.Hewasmurdered.Startlookingforclues.3.Idon’tknow.I’veneverseenhimbefore.4.Wedidn’tseeorhearanything.Wewerehavingaparty.5.I’llhavetochecktheseforfingerprints.6.You’reunderarrestformurder.Task1:HelpMillie

completeherdetectivestory.1.Lookatthepicturesandwritethecorrectlettersofthesentencesintheboxes.2.Completethesentencesinpartofthestory.3.WriteanendingtoMillie’sstory.(about30words)Whatshouldwedofirstbeforeawriting?Step1:Readthetitlecarefullyandtrytounderstandwhattowrite.(認(rèn)真審題,明確寫什么,找出要點(diǎn),分析要點(diǎn))

Whatshouldwedonextbeforeawriting?Step2:Writeanoutline.

(列出寫作提綱)Whatshouldwedoafterawriting?Let’swriteanendingtoMillie’sstory.Step3:Checkyourworkandcorrectthemistakes.

(檢查文章，訂正錯(cuò)誤)(wordusagemistake,punctuationmistake,wrongtense,spellingmistake,missingword)Task2:

Howtowriteagoodcomposition?Step1:Readthetitlecarefullyandtrytounderstandwhattowrite.(認(rèn)真審題,明確寫什么,找出要點(diǎn),分析要點(diǎn))Step2:Writeanoutline.(列出寫作提綱)Step3:Checkyourworkandcorrectthemistakes.(檢查文章，訂正錯(cuò)誤)

Milliehasdrawnsomepicturestohelpherplanthestory.IntroductionMainbodyConclusionPara.1-2Para.3Para.4(thebeginningofthestory)(theendingofthestory)(somethingabouttherobbery)Canyouwriteanoutlineofherstoryaccordingtothepassage?Task3:CompleteyourdetectivestoryWriteadetectivestoryusingthepictures.1)Matchthesentenceswiththepictures.Writethecorrectlettersintheblanks.2)Writethestoryandremembertoincludetheseelementsinyourstory.(about100words)

﹡Adescriptionofthecrime﹡Anyobjectsorcluesfoundatthesceneofthecrime﹡

Adescriptionofthesuspect﹡

HowthedetectiveknowsheorshehasfoundtherightpersonAdescriptionofthecrimeAnyobjectsorcluesfoundatthesceneofthecrime

1.Introduction2.Mainbody3.ConclusionHowthedetectiveknowsheorshehasfoundtherightpersonAnoutlineofyourstoryAdescriptionofthesuspectPictures1-2Pictures3-5Picture6(name/ageofvictim,time/placeofmurder,nameofwitness,relationbetweenvictimandwitness…)(blood,fingerprints,knife,gun,interviewswithsomepeople…)(name,appearance,occupation...)(whoisthecriminal,reasonformurder…)5)Goodhandwriting.(好的書寫)5tips:1)Writeadraftbeforeyourfinalarticleifyouhavetime.(打草稿)2)Haveparagraphs,abeginningandanendinginyourarticle.(有段落，有開頭和結(jié)尾)3)Correcttenses.(正確的時(shí)態(tài))4)Properexpressions,sentencesandmeanings.(恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá))TowriteagoodcompositionStep1:認(rèn)真審題,明確寫什么,找出要點(diǎn),分析要點(diǎn)Step2:列出寫作提綱

Step3:檢查文章,訂正錯(cuò)誤

5個(gè)注意點(diǎn)：1)打草稿2)有段落,有開頭和結(jié)尾3)正確的時(shí)態(tài)4)恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)5)好的書寫SampleWritingMrWangwasoldman.HehadlivedinthesameflatinHillTownfor20years.Helivedaloneandwenttotheparkeverydaytopractiset’aichi.Oneday,MrWang'sneighbours,MrandMrsZhang,noticedthattheyhadnotseenMrWangthatday.Hehadnotgonetotheparkthatmorningasusual.MrsZhangbecameworried.Sotogetherwithherhusband,shewenttoknockonMrWang'sdoor.Astheyknocked,theynoticedthedoorwasnotlocked.TheypushedthedooropenandsawMrWang.Hewasdeadontheground.Therewasalotofbloodaroundhim.MrandMrsZhangcalledthepolice.DetectiveLiarrivedinfiveminutes.HeaskedtheZhangswhethertheyhadseenanythingunusualthenightbefore.Theysaidthattheyhadnotbecausetheywerehavingaparty.DetectiveLialsointerviewedanotherneighbour,ZhouMing.Hewasacook.HesaidhehadneverseenMrWangbefore.Healsosaidthathewasworkingathisrestaurantthenightbeforeanddidnotknowanythingaboutthecase.Atthecrimescene,DetectiveLifoundaknifeandagun.Henoti