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中文Catherinehadstayedathomeallherlifetolookafterherthreechildren,butnow,she,who

lost

herhusbandinacaraccident,hadtostepoutandearnmoneyto

makeendsmeet.Catherine一直待在家里照顧她的三個(gè)孩子，但現(xiàn)在，她在車禍中失去了丈夫，不得不出去賺錢(qián)維持生計(jì)。Withzeroworkexperienceandnoprofessionaldegree,herchancesofgettinghiredforawell-paidjobwerenexttozero.因?yàn)槿狈ぷ鹘?jīng)驗(yàn)，也沒(méi)有專業(yè)學(xué)位，她很難找到一份報(bào)酬高的工作。Oneday,afterdroppingherchildrenatschool,Catherine

spotted（母親spot工作，孩子spot母親）

aconstructionsite."IthinkIcanworkhere,"shethoughtandapproachedthemanager.一天，在送孩子們上學(xué)后，Catherine看到了一個(gè)建筑工地?！拔乙苍S可以在這里工作，”她想了想，便去找工地經(jīng)理。"Hi,areyouhiring?"sheasked."Yes,weare,"themanagerlookedatCatherinefromheadtotoe."Areyousureyoucanworkhere?Thisjobrequiresalotofhardwork."“你好，你們?cè)谡腥藛?？”她?wèn)?！笆堑?，我們?cè)谡校苯?jīng)理從頭到腳打量了Catherine一番?！澳愦_定你能行么？在工地工作很辛苦的。”"I'mreadyforit,"shetoldthemanagerandsignedacontracttoworka12-hour

shift.（工作輪班倒，孩子與媽媽的觀念也應(yīng)該發(fā)生一種轉(zhuǎn)換變化）“我可以，”她告訴經(jīng)理，簽了工作合同，拿下了這個(gè)12小時(shí)輪班倒的工作。However,Catherinekepthernewjobasecretfromherchildren.Shethoughttheywouldfeelembarrassedafterlearningtheirmotherworkedataconstructionsite.然而，Catherine沒(méi)敢和孩子們說(shuō)她去工地打工的事。她認(rèn)為，一旦孩子們知道他們的媽媽在工地工作，會(huì)讓孩子們?cè)谕瑢W(xué)間“抬不起頭”。Everymorning,afterdroppingherchildrentoschool,shewouldgototheconstructionsiteandworkuntilhershiftended.Shewouldpickupheavybricksonhershouldertotransportthemfromonepartofthesitetotheother.每天早上，送完孩子上學(xué)后，她就會(huì)去工地工作。她從工地的一頭把建筑材料磚頭等運(yùn)到另一頭。Oneevening,Catherine'sson,Peter,toldherabout

anupcomingcontest

inschoolthat

requiredmothers

toparticipate.Inthecompetition,studentswillwearblindfoldsandhaveto

recognizetheirmothers

withoutlookingatthem.（粗糙的手，傷口是識(shí)別媽媽的方式，是媽媽為了家庭和孩子的付出，是愛(ài)）一天晚上，Catherine的兒子Peter告訴她學(xué)校即將舉行一個(gè)需要親子活動(dòng)。在比賽中，學(xué)生們會(huì)被蒙上眼睛，要在不看的情況下認(rèn)出自己的媽媽。"Thatsoundslikesuchacoolevent,Peter!"Catherinesaidexcitedly."Ican'twaitforit!"“那聽(tīng)起來(lái)是個(gè)很酷的活動(dòng)！”Catherine興奮地說(shuō)?！拔姨肴⒓舆@個(gè)活動(dòng)了！”"Iwon'tgotherewithyou,mom,"Peterreplied."Butwhy?"WhathersonsaidnextwassomethingCatherine

wasn'tpreparedtohear.“我不會(huì)和你一起去那兒，媽媽，”P(pán)eter回答。“但是為什么？”她兒子接下來(lái)說(shuō)的話讓Catherine陷入了沉默。"Mom,Iwouldhavetotouchyourhandstorecognizeyou,andeveryonewouldlookatthem,"Peterexplained.“媽媽，我得摸你的手才能認(rèn)出你，而且每個(gè)人都會(huì)看著它們，”P(pán)eter解釋道。"Yourhandsaresougly.They'resohardandrough,"headded.“你的手好丑。它們又硬又粗糙，”他補(bǔ)充道。"Iwillfeel

soembarrassed

whenmyclassmateslookatyourhands,"theboysaid.“當(dāng)我的同學(xué)們看到你的手時(shí)，我會(huì)感到非常尷尬，”男孩說(shuō)。"Iwon'tattendtheevent."Catherinefeltterriblebutcouldn'tsayanythinginherdefense.續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomething

unexpected

caughthisattention.續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Onhiswaybackhome,hekeptthinkingabouthowhe

wouldapologize

tohismother.“那我就不去參加活動(dòng)了?！盋atherine感到非常難過(guò)，但她找不到合適的語(yǔ)言為自己辯解。幾周后，當(dāng)Peter走在回家的路上時(shí)，他突然看到了什么。走在回家的路上，他一直在思考該如何向母親道歉。Analysisbeforewriting:Introductionscenario:Firstly,weneedtocontinuetheplotfromtheprevioustext,whereCatherineworksonaconstructionsitetoearnmoneytosupportherfamily,butherchildrenareunawareofthis.Emotionalturningpoint:Inthefirstparagraphofthecontinuation,wecandescribePeter'saccidentaldiscoveryofthetruthabouthismotherworkingonaconstructionsite,whichwasbothanaccidentandanemotionalturningpointforhim.InnerStruggle:Afterlearningthetruth,Petermayfeelshocked,guilty,oradmiredforhismother.ThisparagraphneedstodescribePeter'sinneractivitiesandshowcasehisemotionalchanges.ApologyandUnderstanding:Inthesecondparagraphofthecontinuation,Peterdecidestoapologizetohismotherandexpresshisunderstandingandrespectforher.ThissectioncandescribehowPetermustersupcourageandexpresseshisfeelingstohismother.Emotionalsublimation:Finally,wecandemonstratetheemotionalsublimationbetweenCatherineandPeterbydescribingtheirinteraction,suchasCatherine'stoleranceandunderstanding,aswellasPeter'sgrowthandmaturity.參考范文1：續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomething

unexpected

caughthisattention.

Amidthebustleoftheafternooncrowd,he

spotted

hismother,coveredindustandsweat,workingattheconstructionsite

hepassedeveryday.

Hiddenfromview,hestoodrootedtothespot,watchinghismotherlift

heavybricksbeneaththescorchingsun.

Hehadnoideahismotherwasdoingsuchback-breakingwork

tosupportthefamily.

Guiltwashedoverhimasherecalledhisearlierwordsandthelookofhurttheyhadbroughttomother'sface.續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Onhiswaybackhome,hekeptthinkingabouthowhe

wouldapologize

tohismother.

Peterdecidedthathewouldprepare

aheartfeltdinnerwithhissiblings

forhismother,

tellherhowmuchtheylovedher,andthankhersincerelyforeverythingshedidforthefamily.

As

Catherine

arrivedhome,herhands

still

carried

themarksoftheday'stoil.Withachokedvoice,Peterwrappedhisarmsaroundher,and

whisperedanapology,expressing

theirdeepadmiration

fortheirmother.

Catherinewassurprisedbythesuddenembraceinitially,butshe

quicklyrespondedwithaheartfeltwarmth,saying:"

Thankyou,

mydear.Momisalwayswithyou."

Fromthen,

Peter

wasdeterminedtosupporthismother

ineverywayhecould,

startingwiththeupcomingschoolevent.參考范文2Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomethingunexpectedcaughthisattention.

There,coveredindustandsweat,washismother,liftingbrickswithherstronghands.Hehidbehindatree,watchingherworktirelessly,hiseyesopenedwideinshock.Hefeltamixofdisbeliefandadmiration.Hismother,whomhethoughtdelicateandfragile,wasperformingphysicallaborthatevengrownmenfoundchallenging.Guiltwashedoverhimasherealizedhowmuchshehadbeensacrificingfortheirfamily.Onhiswaybackhome,hekeptthinkingabouthowhewouldapologizetohismother.

Hewalkedthroughthedoor,hisheartheavywithremorse.Hefoundhismotherinthekitchen,preparingdinner.Shelookedupandofferedhimatiredsmile,herroughhandsbusywiththefood.