讀后續(xù)寫一切都是值得的閱讀下面材料,

根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,

使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。BalesleftthepavementofBaseRoadand

steppedontosnowcovered

JewellTrail.

SheplannedasixhourhikethroughNewHampshire’sMountWashingtonStatePark.Shehadpackedforalmosteveryemergencyand

intendedto

walkalone.She’dcheckedtheweatherforecastpostedbytheMountWashingtonObservatorybeforesheleft.Basedonherexperience,Balesknewthatherhikewas

realistic.Besides,shehadtwoemergencyplansandextralayersofclothingtobetteradjustherbodytemperatureasconditionschanged.ThehikeupthelowerpartofJewellTrailwaspleasant.Balesfeltexcitedasshewalkedupintosnowypaths.Thesunshonethroughthetreesandcastashadowoverhersmilingface.

Lessthananhourlater,loadsofdarkcloudshadreplacedthesunshine,andsnowcoveredthesurroundingtrees.Shestillsmiled.However,

theweatherwasshowingitsteeth.Balesaddedevenmorelayerstoshelterherselffromthecoldwindsandthickfog.Shemadeherwayacrossthesnowcoveredridge(山脊)towardMountWashingtonandbegantothinkabout

callingitaday.

Suddenly,shenoticedsomething:

asinglesetoffootprintsinthesnowaheadofher,whichhadbeenmadebyapairofsneakerstypicallynotthetypeforhiking.Meanwhile,Baleswasgettingcolder,eventhoughshewasmovingfastand

generating

somebodyheat.

Withstronggustsofwindscreamingandattackingherbackandleftside,shedecidedto

abandon

herplan.Theonlything,however,keptheronthetrailwasthesneakertracksinthesnow.注意:

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Balesfacedadilemmaaboutwhethertofollowthetracksornot.

____________________________________________________________________Hersearchingnowturnedintorescuingtheman.

____________________________________________________________________重點(diǎn)短語句式1.stepontosnowcovered

踏上了積雪覆蓋的2.intendto打算3.realistic

現(xiàn)實(shí)的4.Thesunshonethroughthetreesandcastashadowoverhersmilingface光透過樹叢，在她微笑的臉龐上投下了光影。5.Lessthananhourlater,loadsofdarkcloudshadreplacedthesunshine,andsnowcoveredthesurroundingtrees.

不到一個(gè)小時(shí)后，烏云已經(jīng)取代了陽光，周圍的樹木都被白雪覆蓋了。6.theweatherwasshowingitsteeth天氣正在發(fā)怒7.callitaday結(jié)束這一天8.generate產(chǎn)生9.Withstronggustsofwindscreamingandattackingherbackandleftside，狂風(fēng)呼嘯著襲向她的后背和左側(cè)10.abandon放棄【參考范文】Balesfacedadilemmaaboutwhethertofollowthetracksornot.Ifshechosetofollowthetracks,she’daddtimeandrisktoherhiking.Butthetracksaheadsuggestedsomeonemightbeindanger.Shecouldn’tletthisgo.Shecalledout

intothefrozenfog,“Isanybodyoutthere?Doyouneedhelp?”

Thestrongwindscarriedhervoiceaway.Thenshewalked

cautiouslyinthedirectionofthetracks.

Sheroundedacornerandspottedamansittingmotionlessly.Hersearchingnowturnedintorescuingtheman.She

approached

him

instantly

andfoundhewas

sufferingfromfrostbite

onhisfeet.

Withoutanyhesitation,shecoveredhisbodywithwarmclothes,andthenpouredhimsomesugarydrink.

Thewindroaredoverandtheywoulddiesooniftheydidn’tgetoutofthere.

Shesupportedthemanand

inched

alongthetrail.

Withgreatefforts,Balesmanagedtosavetheman’slife.

Exhausted,shefeltthatitwasallworthit.續(xù)寫譯文：貝爾斯面臨著是否遵循軌道的兩難境地。如果她選擇沿著小徑走，她會(huì)增加徒步旅行的時(shí)間和風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。但前方的軌道表明有人可能處于危險(xiǎn)之中。她不能置之不理。她對(duì)著冰冷的霧氣喊道：“這里有人嗎？您需要幫助嗎？”強(qiáng)風(fēng)把她的聲音吹走了。然后她小心翼翼地向鐵軌的方向走去。她繞過一個(gè)拐角，發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)男人一動(dòng)不動(dòng)地坐著。她的找尋現(xiàn)在變成了拯救那個(gè)男人。她立刻走近他，發(fā)現(xiàn)他的腳被凍傷了。她毫不猶豫地給他蓋上了保暖的衣服，然后給他倒了一些含糖飲料。風(fēng)呼嘯而過，如果他們不離開那里，他們很快就會(huì)死去。她扶著那個(gè)男人，沿著小路蹣跚而行。經(jīng)過巨大的努力，貝爾斯救了該男子的生命。盡管筋疲力盡，但是她覺得這一切都是值得的。續(xù)寫亮點(diǎn)Ifshechosetofollowthetracks,she’daddtimeandrisktoherhiking.運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣。Butthetracksaheadsuggestedsomeonemightbeindanger.運(yùn)用了賓語從句。Sheroundedacornerandspottedamansittingmotionlessly.運(yùn)用了and連接并列謂語動(dòng)詞。She

approached

him

instantly

andfoundhewas

sufferingfromfrostbite

onhisfeet.

運(yùn)用了and連接并列謂語動(dòng)詞。Withoutanyhesitation,shecoveredhisbodywithwarmclothes,andthenpouredhimsomesugarydrink.

運(yùn)用了and連接并列謂語動(dòng)詞。T