滿分練(十四)短文改錯+書面表達(dá)ⅠⅡ短文改錯(2023四川廣安二診)Ilikekeepingadiary.Ithinkkeepingdiariesareagoodhabit.Itinterestspeopleofallage.Olderpeoplewanttolookbackonthepastandseewhichthey’vedoneandlike.Theyalsohopetoleavesomethingusefullyfortheirgrandchildren.Middle-agedpeopleexploretheirlivesbykeepdiaries.Whydoyoungpeopleenjoykeepingdiaries?Withmyopinion,theywishtofindoutwhotheyare,andwherethey’regoing.Ifyouwanttorememberyourpastlife,andyouneedtokeepapersonaldiarythroughouttheirlife.That’sbecauseitisimpossibleforyouremembereverythingyou’veexperienced.ⅠⅡ[語篇解讀]本文是一篇說明文。文章主要介紹人們都喜歡寫日記的原因和寫日記的好處。1.第二句:are→is

考查主謂一致。主語是動詞-ing形式短語keeping

diaries,謂語要用單數(shù)形式。故將are改為is。2.第三句:age→ages

考查名詞的數(shù)。可數(shù)名詞age前面有all,名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將age改為ages。3.第四句:which→what

考查連詞。see后是賓語從句,從句中缺少動詞done和like的賓語,意為“什么”,用連接代詞what引導(dǎo)。故將which改為what。4.第四句:like→liked

考查謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)和意思可知,這里like和前面have

done是并列的謂語動詞,都用現(xiàn)在完成時,因此like用過去分詞。故將like改為liked。ⅠⅡ5.第五句:usefully→useful

考查形容詞。修飾前面的不定代詞something,應(yīng)用形容詞。故將usefully改為useful。6.第六句:keep→keeping

考查非謂語動詞。介詞by的賓語應(yīng)用keep的動詞-ing形式。故將keep改為keeping。7.第八句:With→In

考查介詞短語。這里考查介詞短語in

my

opinion,意為“在我看來”。故將With改為In。ⅠⅡ8.第九句:刪除and

考查連詞。這句話是if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句,后面的連詞and多余。故將and刪除。9.第九句:their→your

考查代詞。從句提到的人稱代詞是you,所以用you的形容詞性物主代詞。故將their改為your。10.第十句:在remember前面加to

考查非謂語動詞。此處為固定句型:it

be+adj.+for

sb.to

do

sth.,it作形式主語,后面用動詞不定式作真正的主語。故在remember前面加to。ⅠⅡⅠⅡDearPrincipalWang,

Yourssincerely,LiHuaⅠⅡDearPrincipalWang,

It’ssuchagreatprivilegeformetobeinvitedtosharemyexperiencewiththerobotloversinyourschool.Withthedeepestgratitude,I’msopleasedtoacceptyourinvitation.Asisscheduled,thetrainingcoursewillbedividedinto3parts.Themostadvancedtechnologyandapplicationwillbedeliveredinthefirstplace.Toenhancetheirfurthermotivation,aninteractivepartwillbeprovided,throughwhichtheycansharetheirperspectivesonthegivensamplerobotenthusiasticallyaswellasbeinspiredmutually.Intheend,apracticalrobotdesigningontheirownwillberequired.ⅠⅡI’mlookingforwardtomeetingwithyounextweekandIdohopethecoursecanbeofgreatbenefittoyouall.Yourssincerely,

LiHua

ⅠⅡ1.詞匯積累

榮幸:privilege→honour 高興的:pleased→delighted觀點:perspective→opinion 有益的:beofbenefit→bebeneficial2.高分句型(1)Asisscheduled,thetrainingcoursewillbedividedinto3parts.(as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)(2)Toenhancetheirfurthermotivation,aninteractivepartwillbeprov