U2Writing（2）課前準(zhǔn)備：1號(hào)本,notebook,

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pens,groupcard,作文積累本1.Editthepassagebyyourselfandyourgroupmembers.2.Learnhowtoreplacethewordanduseclausescorrectly.3.Learnthestructureofintroductionofaperson.LearninggoalsFillintheblankswiththecorrectforms.LuXun,_________asoneofthegreatestmodernwritersinChina,wasborninShaoxing,ZhejiangProvincein1881.In1904,hewenttoJapanandbecameamedicalstudent,withthe____ofimprovingpeople’shealthandsavinglives.Hequitmedicalschool.WhenhereturnedtoChinain1908,he____ateachingjob.In1917,afriend______thathehelpwriteforamagazinecalledNewYouth.Hisstorymadegreat________onpeople’smind.

Heplayeda______roleinraisingChinesepeople’sspirit.Whata_____manheis!goalgetconsidercrucialgreatsuggestinfluence consideredgoalgotsuggestedinfluencecrucialgreat1號(hào)本熒光筆標(biāo)畫可學(xué)習(xí)短語(yǔ)假如明天英語(yǔ)課的主題是“Famouspeople”,你想在課堂上介紹你最喜愛(ài)的演員—CharlieChaplin。請(qǐng)你寫一篇介紹查理·卓別林的英語(yǔ)短文?；拘畔?889年4月出生于英國(guó)倫敦。1977年12月逝世。被認(rèn)為是世界上最偉大的演員之一。成就及作品特點(diǎn)童年時(shí)期家境貧窮，但很有天賦。14歲起在英國(guó)各地劇院參加演出。1913年到美國(guó)開(kāi)始從事電影表演事業(yè)。一生共拍攝80多部影片，其作品總是同情窮人而嘲弄富人。評(píng)價(jià)？參考詞匯：有天賦的(talented),同情某人(sympathizewithsb.)劇院(theater)Peer-editingDoesthewriterdescribetheperson’sinformation?Doesthewritermakeaclearstructureofthepassage?Doesthewritersaywhythepersonisgreat?Doesthewritersumuphowhe/shefeelsaboutthisperson?Correctthegrammarmistakeincludingspellingmistakes.3minsGroupsharing1.Shareyourgoodsentencepatternsandphraseswithyourgroupmembers.2.Writedownonablanksheet3minsGroupwork4mins改正錯(cuò)誤及畫出好句好短語(yǔ)，進(jìn)行句子提升G1&G5Ex.1G2&G6Ex.2G3&G7Ex.3G4&G8Ex.4Grouppresentation3人任務(wù)，1人負(fù)責(zé)指出錯(cuò)誤，1人闡述改正方法或進(jìn)行好詞好句分析，1人寫出提升方法。展示時(shí)間：2minsExample1

CharlieChaplinbornin1889,Apr.inLondun,England.Hediein1977,Dec.Hewasthemostgreatactor.

Atanearlyago,hewaspoor,buthewastalented.Attheageof14yearsold.HetookinmanytheaterseverywhereinEngland.In1913,hewenttoAmericaandstartedworkasfilmshow.Hewasin80films.Hesympathizewiththepoorpeopleandhemakejokeontherichpeople.Hewasagreatman.提升方法：Hewasagreatman.可升級(jí)為_(kāi)________________!/_________________!（感嘆句）WhatagreatmanHowgreat

CharlieChaplinaBritishactorwasborninApril1889inEngland,London.HediedinDecember,1977.Hewasconsideredoneofthegreatestactorintheworld.Whenhewasyoungage,hisfamilywaspoor.Buthehadagreattalented.Attheageof14,hetookpartinmanyshowsintheatersinEngland.HewenttoAmericatoworkasafilmactor.Inhislife,hemade80films.Hisworkssympathizedtheoldandlaughedattherich.Heisagreatandhard-workingmanandwealllovehimsomuch.Howagreatman!Peopleinmemoryofhim.Example2

提升方法：1.Hisfamilywaspoor.Buthehadagreattalented.可升級(jí)為Although_________________,____________________.(用although從句引導(dǎo))2.Heisagreatandhard-workingmanandwealllovehimsomuch.可升級(jí)為Heisgreat____________hard-workingandhe__________bypeople.（用短語(yǔ)代替單詞,主動(dòng)變被動(dòng)）hisfamilywaspoorhehadagreattalentaswellasislovedExample3

CharlieChaplinwhowasborninLondon,England,inApril1889andpassedawayinDecember,1977.Hewasconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.Whenhewasayoungchild,hisfamilywaspoorbuthetalented.Attheageof14,hestartedtoperformintheaterseverywhereinEngland.Hebegantoworkasafilmactorin1913whenhearrivedatAmerica.Inhislife,heactedout80films.Hisworksalwayssympathizedtheoldandlaughedattherich.

CharlieChaplinisagreatman,isn’the?Heishard-workingandkindness.Wewillloveandrememberhimforever.提升方法：1.Wewillloveandrememberhimforever.可升級(jí)為Hewill_________________(用he作主語(yǔ)，使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài))

2.hisfamilywaspoorbuthetalented.Attheageof14,hestartedtoperformintheaterseverywhereinEngland.可升級(jí)為Hewas_______talented____hestartedtoperformintheaterseverywhereinEngland.（用從句連接兩個(gè)句子）belovedandrememberedforever.sothatCharlieChaplin,aBritishactor,borninApril1889andpassedawayinDecember1977.Hewasconsideredasoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.Inhischildhood,hisfamilywaspoor,however,hewasverytalentedinacting.Whenhewasa14-year-oldboy,hestartedtogivegreatperformancesindifferenttheatersinBritain.In1913,hebeganhiscareertoactinfilmsinAmerica.Duringhislifetime,heactedinover80filmsintotal,whichsympathizedwiththepoorandplayedjokesontherich,werelovedbyalotofpeople.Hedevotedhimselftohiscareerandshowedagreatloveforit.Thoughhehasalreadybeenaway,helivesinmemoryofpeopleforhisworks.Howgreatheis!Example4

SummaryPart1:Introduction:介紹人物出生時(shí)間地點(diǎn)需要先____后_____人物有稱號(hào)的，可用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)及短語(yǔ)，如____________*3.介紹人物出生、職業(yè)放在一個(gè)句子，可以考慮使用______從句，注意who要緊跟在名詞后。

Part2:Experience/Achievement人物在xxx歲做了xxx事，可用表達(dá)包括（1）_____________(時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)（2）______________(短語(yǔ))2.描述人物所做過(guò)的事情，注意時(shí)態(tài)需要使用_______地時(shí)beknown/consideredas定語(yǔ)Whensb.wasxxxAttheageofxxx一過(guò)Part3:Influence/Comment描述我們?cè)诳吹皆撊宋锕适吕拥母惺蹾e/She_____________________(樹(shù)立了很好的例子)His/She________(被喜愛(ài))bypeoplearoundtheworld.2.描述人物或人物事跡所產(chǎn)生的影響。His/Herworks_______________(產(chǎn)生影響)infilm/science/writing.He/She________________________(作出巨大貢獻(xiàn))film/science/writing.He/She_________________________(扮演重要/至關(guān)重要的角色)infilm/science/writing.He/She_________________________(在人們記憶中).3.作出評(píng)價(jià)可使用_________或______句setagoodexampleforusislovedmadeaninfluenceonmadeagreatcontributiontoplaysanimportantroleinlivesinmemoryofpeople感嘆反意疑問(wèn)CharlieChaplin,aBritishactor,borninApril1889andpassedawayinDecember1977.Hewasconsideredasoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.Hewasborninapoorfamily.Thankstohistalent,hestartedtogivegreatperformancesindifferenttheatersinBritainattheageof14.In1913,hebeganhiscareertoactinfilmsinAmerica.Duringhislifetime,hetookpartinover80filmsintotal,whichsympathizedwiththepoorandplayedjokeson/laughedattherich,werelovedbyalotofpeople.Hisfilmsnotonlybringusfun,butalsoencourageustofacethedifficultiesbravelyinourdailylife.Hedevotedhimselftohiscareerandshowedagreatloveforit.Heisstillwidelyrememberedforhishumorthatheshowedinthefilm.1組CharlieChaplin,aBritishactor,wasborninApril1889.HediedinDecember1977.Hewasknownasoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.

Whenhewasyoung,hisfamilywaspoor.HewassotalentedthathestartedtogivegreatperformancesindifferenttheatersinBritainattheageof14.In1913,hewent