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2021/5/92Reasons:SpeedingTireddrivingDrunkdrivingCarelessdrivingUsingcellphones

whiledriving......?2021/5/93Topic:Usingcellphoneswhiledriving

1.It'sadangerousdistractiontodrivers.

2.Itshouldbeforbidden.Para2:Argument(論點(diǎn))1Para3:Argument(論點(diǎn))2Para4:SuggestionPara5:ConclusionTip1:StructureisaguidetofindthemainpointsPara1:Viewpoint(觀點(diǎn))2021/5/94Para1Cellphonesareusedeverywhere,butontheroadtheyareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.afactaviewpointPara1:ViewpointTip2:Theviewpointofanargumentativewriting（議論文）shouldbeincludedinasummary.2021/5/95Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Mainpointsofthesummary2021/5/961.Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers.Para2:Argument(論據(jù))1usinganotusingaonthephoneontheroadunpredictablecarefulIt'sdangerous.It'ssafe.Driversusingaphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusing.DriversAttentionDrivingResult(Support)2021/5/97Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.Mainpointsofthesummary2021/5/98Para3:Argument(論據(jù))22.Cellphonesusedontheroadshouldbeforbidden.①②atleast1,000deathsperyearagainstthelawandstrictlyenforcedlawsareneedtoforbidtheuseofcellphonesincarsAnexample：phonesusedbydriversdrunkdrivingSimilarly（Support)2021/5/99Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.2021/5/910Q1：Beforeusingacellphone,whatquestionshoulddriversaskthemselves?Para4:SuggestionSuggestion1：Suggestion2：Isthiscallreallythatimportant?Yes.No.Driversneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.UseaphonewiselyNotuseaphone（Support)2021/5/911Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.2021/5/912Para5Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.AsprofessionalracerJohnAndrettisays,“Drivingsafelyisyourfirstresponsibility.”Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.Para5:Conclusionaquote(引語)Tip3:Aquoteisusuallyusedtosupportanideaand

shouldbenotincludedinasummary.2021/5/913Point1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.Point5：Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.2021/5/9141.Cellphonesusedontheroaddangerouslydistractthedriversandshouldbebanned.Skills:1.詞性轉(zhuǎn)換法2.近義替換法3.正話反說法4.語態(tài)互換法5.句式變化法Skillsofrestatement(重述):“Point1”asanexamplePoint1：①Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers

and②shouldbeforbidden.2.Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingdangerouslydrawawaydrivers'attentionandshouldnotbeallowed.3.Weshouldforbidusingcellphonesontheroad

fortheirharmfuldistractiontodrivers.4.Driversshouldbepreventedfromusingcellphoneswhiledrivingbecausetheycanbedangerouslydistracted.并列句復(fù)合句簡(jiǎn)單句6.主語變身法2021/5/915Haveatry:workingroupsof4tocreateagoodsummaryPoint1：Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2：Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.Point3：Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4：Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.Point5：Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.2021/5/916Factors

Checkingpointscompleteconcisecoherentcorrectobjective2.Nodetailsin40~80words1.Coverthemainpointsusingyourownwords4.Nogrammaticalmistakes5.Nopersonalopinion3.UsetransitionalwordsifpossibleLearntousethechecklist:4C+1O2021/5/917Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingcandistractthedriversandshouldbebaned.Drivershaveahigherrateofaccidentswhenusephones.Accidentsaredanger,whichincluderunningoffaroadandcrashingintotrees,fences.Justlikedrunkdriving,lawsareneededtorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Driversshouldusephoneswithgreaterresponsibilityforsafe.Inconclusion,cellphonesareimportantinemergenciesandshouldbeusedwisely.Afterall,weonlyhaveonelifeatall.(89words)copyoriginalwordsΛToensuresafedriving,drivershadbetternotusethem.

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