2024年中考英語書面表達命題預(yù)測作文預(yù)測04圖表作文圖表作文就是將表格、數(shù)字或圖像等所包含的信息，轉(zhuǎn)換成連貫的文字表述的一種寫作形式。此類作文要求學(xué)生通過分析圖表的直觀內(nèi)容，對數(shù)據(jù)變化所反映出來的問題或趨勢進行描述，并對數(shù)據(jù)變化的原因進行分析,弄清各種信息之間的關(guān)系，提煉要點，織語言進行寫作，得出令人信服的結(jié)果，必要時還需加入自己的觀點。從寫作類型來看，圖表作文的文體多以說明文和議論文為主。從組圖表形式可以分為表格、柱狀圖、曲線圖和餅狀圖等。表格、柱狀圖、曲線圖和餅狀圖等。閱讀是同學(xué)們未來參與社會應(yīng)具備的關(guān)鍵能力，無論你喜歡哪種閱讀方式，它都能讓你增長知識，開闊眼界。最近，某出版社在兩萬人中，針對人們喜歡的閱讀方式做了一項調(diào)查，下圖是相關(guān)的統(tǒng)計結(jié)果，其中包括電子閱讀和紙質(zhì)閱讀的人數(shù)。請你用兩段話寫一篇短文：第一段用百分比簡要說明圖表內(nèi)容，第二段從圖表中選出一項你喜歡的閱讀方式，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勥@種閱讀方式的好處。要求：1．詞數(shù)不少于80；2．首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。Recently,asurveywasdoneamong20,000peopleaboutthewaysofreading．Hereiswhatwehavelearnedfromit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Recently,asurveywasdoneamong20,000peopleaboutthewaysofreading．Hereiswhatwehavelearnedfromit．60%ofthepeopleliketoreadonmobilephonesore-readers,whileonly38.4%choosetoreadpaperbooks．Sowecanknowthatmoreandmorepeopleprefertoreade-booksratherthanpaperbooks．However,whateverwayofreadingwechoose,itcanhelpincreaseourknowledgeandopenoureyes．Asforme,Iamstillusedtoreadingpaperbooks．WheneverIopenapaperbook,thesmellofpaperremindsmeofthestoriesinthebooksfrommymomwhenIwasalittlekid．Justbecauseofthis,Igotintothehabitofreading．SowhenIreadpaperbooksnow,theyalwaysbringmetheoldfeelings．Ontheotherhand,comparedwiththeelectronicdevices,readingpaperbooksisgoodforeyes．Soyousee,Ibelievee-bookswon’ttaketheplaceofpaperbooksinmyheart.【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為看圖作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生要注意要點中的“從圖表中選出一項你喜歡的閱讀方式”來談?wù)勥@種閱讀方式的好處，這是本篇寫作的重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，簡要說明圖表內(nèi)容；第二步，從圖表中選出一項自己喜歡的閱讀方式，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勥@種閱讀方式的好處。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。【亮點詞匯】①moreandmore越來越多②increase增長③asfor關(guān)于，至于④remindsb．of使某人想起……⑤comparedwith與……相比較【高分句型】①Sowecanknowthatmoreandmorepeopleprefertoreade-booksratherthanpaperbooks.（prefertodosth．ratherthandosth．寧愿做某事而不愿做某事）②whateverwayofreadingwechoose,itcanhelpincreaseourknowledgeandopenoureyes．（whatever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）圖表作文通常以表格或圖形的形式呈現(xiàn)，體裁多為說明文，應(yīng)用文或議論文。此類題型要求考生根據(jù)圖表提供的數(shù)據(jù)和文字內(nèi)容進行分析與討論，得出令人信服的結(jié)論，或?qū)δ骋唤Y(jié)論進行評述。圖表作文常見的命題形式有；表格（table),條形圖（barchart)、餅狀圖（piechart)、線形圖（linegraph).圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)信息往往較多，寫作時一般不能把各種數(shù)據(jù)都列出來。因此，讀懂表格與圖形是關(guān)鍵，考生要認真分析圖表內(nèi)各數(shù)據(jù)或各信息之間的關(guān)系?？忌匠Ｒ嘧鼍毩?xí)，熟悉這類作文的寫法，熟記常用詞匯和句型。方法和步驟1.描述圖表內(nèi)容在文章開頭，簡要描述圖表的直觀內(nèi)容，包括各個類別的數(shù)據(jù)和比較對象.2.分析數(shù)據(jù)變化對圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)變化進行分析，揭示數(shù)據(jù)變化的趨勢和規(guī)律.3.探討原因分析數(shù)據(jù)變化的原因，可能是由于某種政策、現(xiàn)象、社會問題等導(dǎo)致的.4.提出建議根據(jù)圖表所揭示的問題或趨勢，給出相應(yīng)的建議或措施，以解決問題或改善現(xiàn)狀.5.結(jié)論總結(jié)全文的觀點，強調(diào)圖表所反映的問題或趨勢的重要性，呼吁人們重視并采取行動.圖表作文的寫作要點在于準確地描述圖表內(nèi)容,分析數(shù)據(jù)變化的原因，給出合理的建議或評價.在寫作過程中，對圖表中的內(nèi)容說明一定要簡明扼要，盡量使用簡單句?這種類型的作文可以幫助學(xué)生提高數(shù)據(jù)分析和表達能力，同時也有助于培養(yǎng)他們的批判性思維和社會責任感.（1）【圖表類：制作海報。說明文】假定你是李輝，你制作的關(guān)于家鄉(xiāng)變化的海報在某英文網(wǎng)站展示并獲得好評。請結(jié)合下面圖示信息，用英語寫一篇短文向該網(wǎng)站瀏覽者簡述你的制作經(jīng)歷。注意：1．短文須包含上圖所有信息，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和地名；3．詞數(shù)80～100（短文題目與首句已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：poster（n.海報）；design（v．&n.設(shè)計）MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek,Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2）【圖表類：奇美湖南。地方元素介紹】學(xué)校英文報正在以“AmazingHunan”為題開展征文活動。請你結(jié)合以下圖示，寫一篇短文投稿。要求：(1)短文必須包括圖示中的所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；(2)80詞左右（標題和開頭都已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名。Wordbank:transport交通；convenient方便的AmazingHunanHunanisalovableandlivableplace．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（3）【圖表類：寫活動】你是校志愿隊隊長李華。你校將于下周六組織主題（theme）為“健康你和我”的志愿服務(wù)活動，交換生Sam也報名參加。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一封電子郵件，向他介紹活動的安排。ThemeHealthyYouandMeTime8:30a.m.—11:30a.m.PlaceSportsCenterActivities…Purpose…注意：1．可在內(nèi)容提示的基礎(chǔ)上適當拓展信息；2．詞數(shù)80詞左右（郵件的開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；3．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。DearSam,ThankyouforjoiningusinourvoluntaryworknextSaturday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua（4）【圖表類：學(xué)校生活，英語學(xué)習(xí)】新時代英語課堂的語言實踐活動豐富多彩。學(xué)校英語社團開展了以Students’FavoriteEnglishClassActivities為主題的調(diào)查，請使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英文報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.描述并評價調(diào)查結(jié)果；2.陳述你的選擇并說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。TherearemanypracticallearningactivitiesinEnglishclass．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（5）【圖表類：五育并舉】根據(jù)所給要求，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。下圖是某校對八年級100名學(xué)生寒假活動的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請簡要說明圖表內(nèi)容，并結(jié)合自身情況，談?wù)勗撊绾芜^一個充實又有意義的寒假。要求：(1)詞數(shù)不少于80詞；(2)不得出現(xiàn)真實校名和人名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（6）【圖表類：學(xué)習(xí)與生活】近期，你們學(xué)校針對學(xué)生利用電子設(shè)備(device)上網(wǎng)的情況做了一次調(diào)查，具體結(jié)果如下表。請你用英語寫一份調(diào)查報告，以便刊登在?？稀Ｒ蟛簧儆?0詞，并簡要分析產(chǎn)生這種情況的原因。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（7）【圖表類：建議】適當?shù)姆潘捎兄诰徑鈱W(xué)生壓力，使他們保持精力充沛，促進其身心健康。為更有效地助力學(xué)生成長，某校針對“你最喜歡的放松方式”，對某年級1000名學(xué)生進行了抽樣調(diào)查，下圖是相關(guān)的統(tǒng)計結(jié)果。請你用兩段話寫一篇英文短文，第一段簡要說明圖表內(nèi)容，第二段從圖表中選出一項你喜歡的方式，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀阆矚g的放松方式的好處。要求：1．詞數(shù)不少于80詞，首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。Theschooldidasurveyamong1,000studentsaboutdifferentstudents’favoritewaystorelax．Herearetheresults．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（8）《論語》有云：吾日三省吾身。自我反思能讓我們發(fā)現(xiàn)自身的不足。作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)當認識到反思的重要性，尤其是在考試后，反思能夠有效地幫助我們實現(xiàn)“考后一百分”。下圖是某校九年級的200名學(xué)生對以往考試失敗原因的反思結(jié)果。ReasonsWhyStudentsFailExams在初中三年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中，你一定有一些難忘的自我反思的經(jīng)歷跟大家分享。請你分兩段寫一篇短文，第一段簡要說明圖表內(nèi)容，第二段結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺?。要求?.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。Aschoolcarriesoutasurvey（調(diào)查）among200studentsfromGrade9aboutthereasonswhytheyfailexams．Herearetheresults.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（9）【圖表類：觀點與看法】現(xiàn)今，越來越多的人喜歡網(wǎng)上點餐外賣服務(wù)，你所在的學(xué)校學(xué)生會就“你對網(wǎng)上點餐的看法”進行了問卷調(diào)查。請根據(jù)調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶āＷ⒁猓?（1）參考詞匯：塑料包裝plasticpackaging2）詞數(shù)：80個左右（文章的開頭己給出，不計入詞數(shù)）·（3）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。OnlinefooddeliveryisboominginChina．ThestudentUnioninourschoolhasmadeasurveyaboutit．Herearetheresult________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（10）【圖表類：科技創(chuàng)新】科學(xué)技術(shù)日新月異，新發(fā)明給人們的生活帶來了很多便利。假定你家就有一臺智能家用電器(smartappliance),掃地機器人(robotcleaner),請你根據(jù)以下寫作內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于它的英語短文，給同學(xué)們介紹一下它，讓更多人受惠。注意:（1） 請適當拓展，不要直譯內(nèi)容：（2） 詞數(shù)80左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；（3） 不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分Manyinventionshavechangedpeople’slife．Myrobotcleanerisoneofthem．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(11)今天的英語課上，班級進行了題為“我送過的一份珍貴禮物”的主題分享。請你寫一篇英語短文，匯報你們四人小組的分享內(nèi)容，需包括以下要點。注意：1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）； 2．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Intoday’sEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionon“AvaluablegiftIgave”．Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(12)上個月，你校舉辦了“我的成長”的英語主題分享。請你寫一篇英語短文，匯報你們小組四人的分享內(nèi)容，需包括以下要點。注意：1．字數(shù)：80詞左右(短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。2．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon“Myprogress”lastmonth．Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(13)最近，你隨機調(diào)查了你校50名同學(xué)的課外英語學(xué)習(xí)現(xiàn)狀（結(jié)果見下面圖表）。請你就此用英語寫一篇短文，在英語課上進行匯報，并談?wù)勀目捶ê徒ㄗh。注意：1、文章必須包括圖表中的四項內(nèi)容，可適當增加細節(jié)；2、看法和建議至少兩條；3、詞數(shù)80左右。IhaverecentlydoneasurveyabouthowstudentslearnEnglishoutofclass.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(14)中國《政府工作報告》提出綠色低碳發(fā)展。作為新時代的青少年，我們應(yīng)響應(yīng)國家號召，共建綠色低碳家園，請以“Let’sBuildaGreenCityTogether!”為題，寫一篇英語倡議書。要求：1．書寫認真規(guī)范，詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開頭已給出不計入總詞數(shù)；2．短文必須包括所有要點提示，語句通順，意思連貫，可適當發(fā)揮；3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。Let’sBuildaGreenCityTogether!Asweallknow,theenvironmentisimportanttous．Soit’sourdutytoprotectit．Agreencityisthekeytoahealthylife．Let’stakeactionnow!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案（1）【圖表類：制作海報。說明文】MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek，Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown．Thepurposeofmakingitistoshowtherapiddevelopmentofmyhometowninrecentyears．Firstly,Iaskedmygrandparentsabouttheirpastlivingconditions．Then,Ifoundsomeoldphotosonlinetocomparethepastandpresentofmyhometown．Finally,IsortedtheinformationthatIhadlearnedanddesignedaposterwithrelevantpicturesattached.Thisexperiencehelpsmeknowbetteraboutmyhometown．Withitsdevelopment,peoplehaveledbetterlivesandtheenvironmenthasbeenimproved．Iamveryhappytoseethesechanges．Asamemberofthistown,Iwillcontributemyowneffortstoitsdevelopment.【解析】【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般過去時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“圖示信息”中的各個要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。【寫作步驟】第一步，承接所給開頭，介紹制作海報的目的；第二步，具體闡述制作海報的過程；第三步，表達從這次經(jīng)歷中學(xué)到的東西以及自己的感悟?！玖咙c詞匯】①rapiddevelopment快速發(fā)展②livingconditions生活條件③sortedtheinformation把信息分類④leadabetterlife過上更好的生活【高分句型】①Finally,IsortedtheinformationthatIhadlearnedanddesignedaposterwithrelevantpicturesattached.（that引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Withitsdevelopment,peoplehaveledbetterlivesandtheenvironmenthasbeenimproved.（現(xiàn)在完成時的被動語態(tài)）（2）AmazingHunanHunanisalovableandlivableplace．LetmetellyousomethingaboutHunan.First,therearelotsofplacesofinterest,suchasZhangjiajie．Zhangjiajieispicturesqueandbreathtakinglybeautiful,whereyoucanappreciatethebeautyofnature．Second,thehigh-speedtrainisconvenientanduser-friendly,soyoucangotoHunanbyhigh-speedtrain．Third,Hunancuisineconsistsofmanykindsofdeliciousfoodthatyoucannotmissanyway．Ifyoulikenoodles,youmusttrythetastyandmouth-wateringricenoodlesinHunan．What’smore,thepeopleinHunanarehelpfulandwarm-hearted．Youwillfeelathomehere.WelcometoHunan.【解析】【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：要求以“AmazingHunan”為題，結(jié)合所給要點進行寫作，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點，適當添加細節(jié)，突出寫作內(nèi)容?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，簡單介紹湖南，引出下文重點；第二步，介紹湖南的名勝古跡、交通工具、美食和人等；第三步，書寫結(jié)語【亮點詞匯】①lotsof許多②suchas比如③consistof由……組成④what’smore此外⑤feelathome感到自在【高分句型】①LetmetellyousomethingaboutHunan.（祈使句）②Zhangjiajieispicturesqueandbreathtakinglybeautiful,whereyoucanappreciatethebeautyofnature.（where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）③Third,Hunancuisineconsistsofmanykindsofdeliciousfoodthatyoucannotmissanyway.（that引導(dǎo)定語從句）④Ifyoulikenoodles,youmusttrythetastyandmouth-wateringricenoodlesinHunan.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）（3）DearSam,ThankyouforjoiningusinourvoluntaryworknextSaturday．Letmeintroducesomethingabouttheactivitytoyou.Thethemeoftheactivityis“HealthyYouandMe”,anditwillbeheldfrom8:30a.m．to11:30a.m．nextSaturday．ItwillbeheldintheSportsCenter．Therearemanyinterestingactivities．First,therewillbeasportshistoryshow．Itwillbeheldinourschoolhall．Besides,“HealthyYouandMe”speechwillbeon,too．Ifyouwanttotakepart,pleaseletusknowbeforethisFriday．Therewillbedifferentkindsofafter-schoolexerciseclasses,suchasfootball,basketball,tennisandsoon．Youcanchoosetheoneyoulike.Themainpurposeistoincreasestudents’interestinsports,andencouragestudentstotakeexerciseactively．Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【解析】【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般將來時”為主；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意結(jié)合表格提示內(nèi)容介紹活動的安排。適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出對活動的重點介紹；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“主題、時間、地點、活動”幾個方面重點介紹；第三步，介紹活動的目的并書寫結(jié)語?！玖咙c詞匯】①introduce...to...介紹……給……②from...to...從……到……③differentkindsof各種不同的④lookforwardto期待【高分句型】①Thethemeoftheactivityis“HealthyYouandMe”,anditwillbeheldfrom8:30a.m．to11:30a.m．nextSaturday．（and連接并列句）②Themainpurposeistoincreasestudents’interestinsports,andencouragestudentstotakeexerciseactively.（不定式結(jié)構(gòu)作表語和作賓語補足語）（4）TherearemanypracticallearningactivitiesinEnglishclass．Recently,ourschoolclubhasmadeasurveyonstudents’favoriteEnglishclassactivities．Herearetheresults.Ofthefouractivitiesmentioned,aboutonethirdofthestudentssaypresentationistheirfavorite．Thenumberofstudentswhochoosediscussionandcreativewritingisalmostthesame,takingup25%and27%each．Only17%ofthestudentsconsiderdebatetheirfavoriteastheythinkitischallenging.AsfarasIamconcerned,presentationisthemostuseful．Ontheonehand,Iamabletolearnalotwhilepreparingforit．Ontheotherhand,ithelpstoimprovemyEnglishspeakingabilityaswellascommunicationskills.Englishclassactivitiesareimportant,sowehadbettermakefulluseofthemtomakeEnglishlearningmoreinterestingandcolorful.【解析】【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山介紹以下是關(guān)于學(xué)生最喜歡的英語課堂活動的調(diào)查結(jié)果；第二步，描述并評價調(diào)查結(jié)果；第三步，陳述你的選擇并說明理由；第四步，書寫結(jié)語，表達自己的感受?！玖咙c詞匯】①thenumberof……的數(shù)量②asfaras就……而言③hadbetterdosth.最好做某事④makefulluseof充分利用【高分句型】①Herearetheresults.(倒裝句)②Thenumberofstudentswhochoosediscussionandcreativewritingisalmostthesame,takingup25%and27%each.(定語從句)（5）

Aschooldidasurveyamong100studentsabouttheiractivitiesforwinterholidays．Herearetheresults.

16percentofthestudentslearnedanewskill,suchascooking,tidyingtheroomandsoon．Theythinkthesebasicskillscanhelpthemdeveloptheirindependence．22percentofthestudentshelpedtheirfamilylikedoinghousework．Theirparentsfelthappytoseetheirchildren’schanges．62percentofthestudentsplayedforfunsuchaswatchingTV,travellingandsoon．Asforme,Ididcommunityvolunteerworkduringthewinterholiday．Howcanwespendameaningfulholiday?

First,weshouldlearnsomebasicskills．Second,weshouldkeepexercisingtostayhealthy．Lastbutnotleast,wecantakeupsomehobbies．Soyoucanliveameaningfulandenjoyableholiday.【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為看圖作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，根據(jù)提示材料介紹學(xué)生們的寒假活動以及如何度過一個有意義的寒假，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，引出本文主題；第二步，介紹學(xué)生們的寒假活動以及自己的寒假活動；第三步，介紹如何度過一個有意義的寒假；【亮點詞匯】①suchas例如②asfor至于③takeup開始從事【高分句型】①Herearetheresults.（倒裝句）②Second,weshouldkeepexercisingtostayhealthy（動詞不定式作目的狀語）（6）Thegraphshowstheresultsofasurveyinwhichstudentswereaskedabouttheirpreferreddevicesforgoingonline．Therearefourmaindevicesintheiranswers:asmartphone,alaptop,atabletandadesktopcomputer.Fromthechartitisclearthatmoststudentsprefertousesmartphonesandlaptops．Nearlyathirdofstudentsprefertogoonlinewithasmartphone．Thirtypercentliketousealaptop．Adesktopcomputeraccountsforfourteenpercentofusers’preferreddevices．Onlyfewstudentspreferadeviceotherthanthesemainfour.Inconclusion,sincemobileandportabledevicesarethemostpopularchoices,itisclearthatmanystudentsliketotakethemaround．Thedesktopistooheavytocarryandhardtouse,soitistheleastpopular.【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為圖表作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，整體介紹學(xué)生利用電子設(shè)備上網(wǎng)的情況；第二步，具體闡述每一項電子設(shè)備的占比；第三步，最后分析移動和便攜式設(shè)備最受歡迎的原因?！玖咙c詞匯】①prefertodo寧愿做②otherthan除了……以外③Inconclusion總而言之【高分句型】①Inconclusion,sincemobileandportabledevicesarethemostpopularchoices,itisclearthatmanystudentsliketotakethemaround.（since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）②Thedesktopistooheavytocarryandhardtouse,soitistheleastpopular.（最高級）（7）Theschooldidasurveyamong1,000studentsaboutdifferentstudents’favoritewaystorelax．Herearetheresults．41%ofthestudentslikedoingexercise.28%ofthestudentsthinkit’srelaxingtohavetrips．Andthepercentageofthestudentswhoprefertospendtimewiththeirfriendsis22%．Theother9%chooseotherwaystorelax．Asforme,Iaminterestedindoingexercise．Ithelpsmereducestressandkeepactive.Lastmonth,whentheteachertolduswewouldhaveamathtest．IfeltsoworriedthatIcouldn’tfallasleepuntilmidnight．Asaresult,IwastiredinclassandIcouldn’tfollowmymathteacher．Tobelessstressedout,Iplayedbasketballwithmyfriend．Wetalkedandplayed,sharingourproblemsandhappiness．Itwasbasketballthatbroughtmecouragetospeakoutmyproblems．Ifeltrelaxedandactive．Inthefollowingdays,myfriendoftenledmetothinkaboutsomemathproblemswhenwepracticedbasketballontheplayground．Gradually,Icoulddobetterinmath.Torelaxmyself,Iwillkeepdevelopinggoodhabits．Iwilltravel,haveapartywithmyfriendorgotothemovies．Iwillalsolearntocommunicatemorewithotherswhiledoingthesethings．OnlyinthiswaycanIbebetter.【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第一人稱為主，可自由發(fā)揮?！緦懽鞑襟E】第一步，簡要說明圖表內(nèi)容；第二步，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，說明自己喜歡的放松方式；第三步，總結(jié)自己的放松方式，以及這些方式的好處?！玖咙c詞匯】①fallasleep入睡②communicatewithsb.和某人交流③keepdoingsth一直做某事【高分句型】①Andthepercentageofthestudentswhoprefertospendtimewiththeirfriendsis22%.（who引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②IfeltsoworriedthatIcouldn’tfallasleepuntilmidnight.（so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）③Itwasbasketballthatbroughtmecouragetospeakoutmyproblems.（強調(diào)句）④OnlyinthiswaycanIbebetter.（倒裝句）（8）

45%ofthestudentsthinktheyarecarelesswhentheyhaveexams,whiletwointenfailtheexamsbecausetheylackbasicskills．35%ofthemthinkthattheyfailbecauseofnervousness．

Asforme,IfailinsomeexamsbecauseIalwaysmakemistakesforcarelessness．Lastterm,ItookanimportantEnglishexam,andIfailedtopassitbecauseofsomespellingmistakes．Forexample,Imistook“aunt”as“ant”,and“snack”as“snake”．Myclassmateslaughedatmy“funny”spelling．Afterthat,myteachergavemesomeaadvice,andIdecidedtotrytoavoidsuchmistakesbycarefullywritingandmemorizingwordswhichwereeasilymisspelledoverandoveragain．

Althoughitisaslowwaytoimprovemyspelling,I’msureIwillmakegreatprogressaslongasIkeepit.【總體分析】①題材：本文是一篇議論文，為看圖作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕目捶ê透惺艿纫c，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點?！緦懽鞑襟E】①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“九年級的200名學(xué)生分析考試失敗的原因”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“表格內(nèi)容、結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷、自己的看法和感受”等幾個方面重點議論；③第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達“只要堅持就會取得進步”的愿望?！玖咙c詞匯】①makemistakes犯錯②failtodosth未能做某事③makegreatprogress取得巨大進步④aslongas只要【高分句型】①Idecidedtotrytoavoidsuchmistakesbycarefullywritingandmemorizingwordswhichwereeasilymisspelledoverandoveragain.（which引導(dǎo)的定語從句）②Althoughitisaslowwaytoimprovemyspelling,I’msureIwillmakegreatprogressaslongasIkeepit.（although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句以及itis+n+todosth句型）（9）OnlinefooddeliveryisboominginChina．ThestudentUnioninourschoolhasmadeasurveyaboutit．Herearetheresult。35%ofstudentsconsiderthatit’sconvenientforthemtoorderonlineanytime,anywhere．Meanwhile,30%ofstudentsappreciatevariouschoicesforfood,whichcanmeetdifferentpeople’sneeds.However,25%ofstudentsworryaboutthepollutioncausedbyincreasingamountofplasticpackaging．Moreover,10%ofstudentspointoutdeliveryfoodisusuallyhighinfatorsugarandthismaycausehealthproblems.Asforme,I’mnotafanofit．Iwouldrathercookformyselfthoughittakestime．Therefore,weshouldmakeeveryefforttoeatinahealthierway.（10）Manyinventionshavechangedpeople’slife．Myrobotcleanerisoneofthem．It’saroundsmartappliance,justlikeabigcake/UFOwithwheelsatthebottomofitsothatitcanmovefreely．It’sassmartasahumanbeingbecauseitcancleantheflooritselfinahouse．What’smore,itworkswithelectricity,soitwillnotpollutetheair．Aboveall,it’smoreconvenientforustouseitbecausewecancontrolitbyusingourmobilephones.Inmyopinion,therobotcleanerisagreatinventionandourgoodfriend．Itsavestimeandhelpsusliveabetterlife．Whynothaveatryandbuyoneforyourselves?(11)Intoday’sEnglishclass,wehadadiscussionon“AvaluablegiftIgave”．Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup．Bobpreparedsomedeliciouschickensoupasagiftforhisparentsonhis16thbirthday．Hethoughtitwasagoodwaytoexpresshisgreatthanksandlovetohisparents．Forgraduation,Kategavehergoodfriendaphotoalbum,containingphotosofthememorableeventstheyhaveexperiencedtogether．Shethoughtitwasavaluablerecordoffriendship．LilysentherforeignteacherapapercuttingshemadeherselfonTeachers’Day．HerteacherAmylovesChinesecultureandwaslearningpapercutting．Asforme,Iboughtmyselfaskippingrope,withwhichIhopetodoregularexerciseandstayhealthyandfit.(12)Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon“Myprogress”lastmonth．Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.Therearefourmembersinourgroup,FangFang,SunLei,ZhaoYunandme．FangFanghasspentmostofhertimestudyinginherfreetime．Therefore,sheformsgoodlearninghabitsrightnow．SunLeihastakenpartinvariouskindsofvoluntarywork．Itissuchagoodchanceforhertohelpothersinneed．Asanoldsayinggoes,rosesinyourhand,flavorinmine．ZhaoYunhassparednoefforttojoinso