與沒有經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工相比，經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工更有可能獲得晉升，并在職業(yè)生涯后期享受更高的工資增長(zhǎng)。公司的高層往往由能力廣泛而非深厚的人組成，這或許可以解釋為什么橫向調(diào)動(dòng)有利于晉升前景。你寫的Comparedtoemployeeswhodidn'texperiencehorizontalmoves,thosewhoexperiencedthisaremorelikelytobepromotedandtoenjoyhigherwagegrowthlaterintheircareers.Thetoppositionsofcompaniestendtobefilledbypeoplewhoseabilitiesarebroadbutnotdeep,whichmayexplainwhyhorizontalmovesaregoodforpromotionprospects.外刊的Employeeswhoexperiencedlateralmovesweremorelikelytobepromotedandtoenjoyhigherwagegrowthlaterintheircareersthanemployeeswhodidnot.Thehigherechelonsofcompaniestendtobepopulatedbypeoplewhosecapabilitiesarebroad,notdeep;thatmayexplainwhylateralmovesaregoodforpromotionprospects.句型部分1.與沒有經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工相比，經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工更有可能獲得晉升，并在職業(yè)生涯后期享受更高的工資增長(zhǎng)。Comparedtoemployeeswhodidn'texperiencehorizontalmoves,thosewhoexperiencedthisaremorelikelytobepromotedandtoenjoyhigherwagegrowthlaterintheircareers.→Employeeswhoexperiencedlateralmovesweremorelikelytobepromotedandtoenjoyhigherwagegrowthlaterintheircareersthanemployeeswhodidnot.比較結(jié)構(gòu)的省略外刊作者使用了than連接的比較結(jié)構(gòu)，并對(duì)than后邊的部分進(jìn)行省略。未省略前的句子是：Employeeswhoexperiencedlateralmoves……thanemployeeswhodidnotexperiencelateralmoves.今天介紹兩種比較結(jié)構(gòu)的省略。第一類的謂語動(dòng)詞是be動(dòng)詞:MaryistallerthanLucyistall.→MaryistallerthanLucyistall.Maryissmarterthanyouaresmart.→Maryissmarterthanyouaresmart.由此可見，例1中兩處劃線部分相同，則第二處劃線部分可全部去掉；例2中劃線部分的be動(dòng)詞不同，則保留be動(dòng)詞。第二類的謂語動(dòng)詞是實(shí)義動(dòng)詞：MaryreadsbooksmorethanLucyreadsbooks.→MaryreadsbooksmorethanLucydoes.Maryplaysgamesmorethanyouplaygames.→Maryplaygamesmorethanyoudo.由此可見，兩處劃線部分不管是否完全一致，都會(huì)在省略后加一個(gè)助動(dòng)詞do。為什么要這樣呢?看看下面這個(gè)句子：Ihatehimmorethanyouhatehim.如果因?yàn)閮商巹澗€部分相同，而去掉第二處劃線部分，句子則會(huì)變成Ihatehimmorethanyou.(比起你我更恨他。)句意就改變了,因此要寫成Ihatehimmorethanyoudo.2.公司的高層往往由能力廣泛而非深厚的人組成，這或許可以解釋為什么橫向調(diào)動(dòng)有利于晉升前景。Thetoppositionsofcompaniestendtobefilledbypeoplewhoseabilitiesarebroadbutnotdeep,whichmayexplainwhyhorizontalmovesaregoodforpromotionprospects.→Thehigherechelonsofcompaniestendtobepopulatedbypeoplewhosecapabilitiesarebroad,notdeep;thatmayexplainwhylateralmovesaregoodforpromotionprospects.分號(hào)的使用分號(hào)用于連接兩個(gè)關(guān)系緊密，結(jié)構(gòu)獨(dú)立的句子。它的意思同等于輕度的and,but,because等等。例:。Ineededtoopenthewindowandgetsomefreshair;Ineededtodosomechorestomakemyhouseclean.(我需要打開窗戶，呼吸一些新鮮空氣；我需要做一些家務(wù)，讓家里變得干凈。)并列關(guān)系。Youshootmedown;Iwon'tfall.(你開槍打我，我不會(huì)倒下。)轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。Wecangotothemuseumtodosomeresearch;Mondaysareprettyquietthere.(我們可以去博物館做一些研究；周一那里很安靜。)因果關(guān)系原文里學(xué)生習(xí)作使用which從句也是完全可以的。外刊作者使用了分號(hào)，便可以把前面的broad和notdeep用逗號(hào)分離開，強(qiáng)調(diào)了重要信息notdeep(高層管理者額知識(shí)面在廣丕在深)。如果使用which從句或者and連接的并列結(jié)構(gòu)，就會(huì)變成capabilitiesarebroad,notdeep,andthatmayexplain逗號(hào)太多,結(jié)構(gòu)太松散了。措辭部分1.與沒有經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工相比，經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工更有可能獲得晉升，并在職業(yè)生涯后期享受更高的工資增長(zhǎng)。Comparedtoemployeeswhodidn'texperiencehorizontalmoves,thosewhoexperiencedthisaremorelikelytobepromotedandtoenjoyhigherwagegrowthlaterintheircareers.→Employeeswhoexperiencedlateralmovesweremorelikelytobepromotedandtoenjoyhigherwagegrowthlaterintheircareersthanemployeeswhodidnot.橫向調(diào)動(dòng)horizontalmoves→lateralmoveshorizontal水平的在這里用也還行l(wèi)ateral['l?t?r?l]adj.橫向的;往一側(cè)的這兩個(gè)單詞若修飾movement,horizontal強(qiáng)調(diào)移動(dòng)方向是橫向而必須平行沒有傾斜；而lateral只強(qiáng)調(diào)移動(dòng)的方向是橫向。對(duì)比：。thehorizonalmovement(平移)。Thelateralmovementofthebridgewasbetweenfourandsixinches.(大橋的橫向移動(dòng)范圍在4到6英寸之間。)因此這里使用lateral就足夠了,horizontal的意思反而多了。2.公司的高層往往由能力廣泛而非深厚的人組成，這或許可以解釋為什么橫向調(diào)動(dòng)有利于晉升前景。Thetoppositionsofcompaniestendtobefilledbypeoplewhoseabilitiesarebroadbutnotdeep,whichmayexplainwhyhorizontalmovesaregoodforpromotionprospects.→Thehigherechelonsofcompaniestendtobepopulatedbypeoplewhosecapabilitiesarebroad,notdeep;thatmayexplainwhylateralmovesaregoodforpromotionprospects.公司的高層Thetoppositionsofcompanies→Thehigherechelonsofcompaniesechelons[?ε??l?nz]n.=arankinanorganization梯隊(duì)用這個(gè)詞立刻就產(chǎn)生階層畫面感了。upperechelonshigherechelons例句：。Sheencourageswomentoreachthehigherechelonsofthescientificestablishment.(她鼓勵(lì)女性攀登到科學(xué)機(jī)構(gòu)的更高階層。)。85%ofthemembersbelongstotheupperechelonsofsocietyfigures.(85%的會(huì)員都是屬于社會(huì)的上層人物。)能力abilities→capabilitiesability更泛指,例如:Contestantsweregroupedaccordingtoageandability.(參賽者按年齡和能力分組。)同時(shí)更通俗，例如：Shehadtheabilitytoexplainthingsclearlyandconcisely.(她有能力簡(jiǎn)明扼要地解釋事情。)capability更特指，通常指完成某個(gè)特定事項(xiàng)所需要的能力,例如:thecapabilitytobecomeanactor(成為演員的能力)thecapabilitytosolveadvancedmathproblems(解決高數(shù)題的能力)同時(shí)格局更大，用于公司、組織、國(guó)家層面的東西。例如：thenuclearcapabilityofacountry(一個(gè)國(guó)家的核能力）詞匯horizontal[?h?rI'z?ntl]adj.水平的lateral['l?t?r?l]adj.橫向的;側(cè)面的promote[pr?'m??t]v.晉升prospects['pr?spekts]n.前景echelons[?ε??l?nz]n.梯隊(duì)populate['p?pj?le?t]v.居住于(這里=fillwithpeople)capability[?ke?p?'b?l?ti]n.特定的能力復(fù)習(xí)與沒有經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工相比，經(jīng)歷過橫向調(diào)動(dòng)的員工更有可能獲得晉升，并在職業(yè)生涯后期享受更高的工資增長(zhǎng)。公司的高層往往由能力廣泛而非深厚的人組成，這或許可以解釋為什么橫向調(diào)動(dòng)有利于晉升前景。Employeeswhoexperiencedlateralmovesweremorelikelytobep