讀后續(xù)寫：陽光下重生續(xù)寫原文及解析續(xù)寫原文（溫州三模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Haveyoueverbeensodepressedthatyoucan'tsleep?Youalsocan'teat.Youcan'tread.YouhavenofriendstocallupandnothingisgoodonTV.Soyousigh,pressyourfacedownharderintoyourpillow,andshedafewtears.Thiswasmylifetwoyearsago.Ihadjustturned14butalreadyfoundlifeastruggle.AsIlayinmybedoneSaturday,Mompeeked(瞄)intomyroomtomakeherregular"IsEmilystillalive"check.IknewthatifIspentmoretimelikethis,shewouldbegindustingme.AftersuggestingafewthingsformetodothatIimmediatelyrejected,Mommadehermove,“Emily!Getdressed!I'mtakingthedogoutforawalk,andyou'recomingwithme!""Why?"Iprotested."Becauseit'llmakeyoufeelbetter.”Thethoughtofmovingwasunbearable.Ifeltasifallofmybodypartswereweigheddownbytonsofbricks.Icouldn'trememberthelasttimeIhadgoneoutside.SomehowIfoundthestrengthtosliponapairofjeansandablacksweatshirt.Momwaswaitingatthedoor,leashinhandanddogatherside.Then,westeppedoutside.ItwasawarmMarchdayandithadbeenalongtimesincethewarmthofthesunhadtouchedmycheeks.Momledthedogandmedownsomedirtpaths,throughabigfieldandreachedHalseyPond.Butthesignsofspringhadyettoappearandthescenewasrathercolorlessthroughouttheentirejourney.“I'mtired!It'sboring,Mom!Whencanwegohome?""Notyet,"she'dsay.Momstoppedtosayhitoeveryjogger,dogwalker,runner,andbicyclistwhopassedus.Sometimesshewouldgetintoaconversation.Theywouldtalkaboutweather,dogs,andallsmalltalktopics.Sheseemedhappy,andwasliterallyglowing(容光煥發(fā)).Afterwalkingforwhatseemedanage,Momfinallysaiditwastimetogoback.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.原文解析Haveyoueverbeensodepressedthatyoucan’tsleep?Youalsocan’teat.Youcan’tread.YouhavenofriendstocallupandnothingisgoodonTV.Soyousigh,pressyourfacedownharderintoyourpillow,andshedafewtears.**主要矛盾：心情emo到失去生機(jī)，在床上網(wǎng)抑云。Thiswasmylifetwoyearsago.Ihadjustturned14butalreadyfoundlifeastruggle.AsIlayinmybedoneSaturday,Mompeeked(瞄)intomyroomtomakeherregular“IsEmilystillalive”check.IknewthatifIspentmoretimelikethis,shewouldbegindustingme.AftersuggestingafewthingsformetodothatIimmediatelyrejected,Mommadehermove,“Emily!Getdressed!I’mtakingthedogoutforawalk,andyou’recomingwithme!”“Why?”Iprotested.“Becauseit’llmakeyoufeelbetter.”**背景補(bǔ)充：14歲的學(xué)生，已然對生活失去興趣。主要矛盾解決方法：媽媽帶我出門遛狗可協(xié)同點：續(xù)寫段落我有所好轉(zhuǎn)之后，媽媽不再是“IsEmilystillalive”check，而可以安心地專注于自己的事情，同時也為我的好轉(zhuǎn)而欣喜。Thethoughtofmovingwasunbearable.Ifeltasifallofmybodypartswereweigheddownbytonsofbricks.Icouldn’trememberthelasttimeIhadgoneoutside.SomehowIfoundthestrengthtosliponapairofjeansandablacksweatshirt.Momwaswaitingatthedoor,leash(狗繩)inhandanddogatherside.**可協(xié)同點：后文要寫到我主動出去遛狗，可以復(fù)現(xiàn)此處leashinhand,dogatherside的動作。Then,westeppedoutside.ItwasawarmMarchdayandithadbeenalongtimesincethewarmthofthesunhadtouchedmycheeks.Momledthedogandmedownsomedirtpaths,throughabigfieldandreachedHalseyPond.Butthesignsofspringhadyettoappearandthescenewasrathercolorlessthroughouttheentirejourney.**欲揚(yáng)先抑：環(huán)境暫未擺脫冬天的陰翳，與后文溫暖的人與人的互動形成對比?！癐’mtired!It’sboring,Mom!Whencanwegohome?”“Notyet,”she’dsay.Momstoppedtosayhitoeveryjogger,dogwalker,runner,andbicyclistwhopassedus.Sometimesshewouldgetintoaconversation.Theywouldtalkaboutweather,dogs,andallsmalltalktopics.Sheseemedhappy,andwasliterallyglowing(容光煥發(fā)).Afterwalkingforwhatseemedlikeanage,Momfinallysaiditwastimetogoback.**可協(xié)同點：后文可復(fù)現(xiàn)此處與人交流、smalltalk的場景。注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.情節(jié)1:

具體如何有所好轉(zhuǎn)。情節(jié)2:Weekday在學(xué)校的生活（與第二段段首句AnewSaturday做好時間上的銜接與過渡。）

Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.情節(jié)3:

媽媽的回應(yīng)情節(jié)4:

遛狗的經(jīng)歷+感悟總結(jié)參考范文WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Themonotonyofmypreviousdayswasinterruptedbythesimpleactofwalking.Thefreshairandthegentleexercisehadstirredsomethingwithinme.Ifeltaslightshiftinmymood.Theworldoutside,whichIhadforgotteninmyisolation,hadremindedmethattherewasmoretolifethanthefourwallsofmyroom.Irealizedthatmymom'sinsistenceonthewalkwasnotjustaboutphysicalactivity,butawaytoreconnectwiththeworldaroundme.AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Thistime,itwasmyidea.Iwaseagertostepoutintothesunlightagain,tofeelthewarmthonmyskinandthebreezeinmyhair.AsIwalked,IbegantonoticethesubtlechangesinnaturethatIhadmissedbefore.Budswereformingontrees,andtheoncebarrengroundwasstartingtoshowsignsofnewlife.Thewalkwasn'tjustaphysicaljourney.Witheachstep,Ifeltalittlemorealive,alittlelesstrappedbymyownthoughts.Thedog'sjoyfulpresencealsoaddedtotheexperience.參考范文：ChatGPT版本W(wǎng)henIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.AsIsatonmybed,reflectingonthewalkwithmymomandthedog,Irealizedthatsomethinghadshiftedinsideme.Theheavinessthathadengulfedmybodyseemedtohavelightened,replacedbyafaintglimmerofhope.Forthefirsttimeinalongwhile,Ifeltasmallsparkofcuriosityabouttheworldoutsidemybedroom.Inspiredbymymom'sinfectioushappiness,Idecidedtoventureoutonmyown.Istartedbyopeningthecurtainsandallowingthesunlighttofloodmyroom.Itfeltlikeasmallvictory,asteptowardsembracinglifeagain.IpickedupabookthatIhadabandonedmonthsagoandbegantoread.Thewordsonthepages,oncemeaninglessanddull,nowtransportedmetodifferentworlds,ignitingmyimagination.AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Surprisedbymyrequest,sheagreed,asmilespreadingacrossherface.Withtheleashinmyhandandthedogexcitedlytrottingbesideme,Iembarkedonasoloadventure.Westrolledthroughthefamiliarpaths,butthistime,Inoticedthesubtlechanges.Springhadarrived,andvibrantcolorsburstforthfromthepreviouslycolorlesslandscape.Thecherryblossomsbloomed,sprinklingdelicatepetalsontheground,andthesoftbreezecarriedthesweetscentofflowers.AsIcontinuedwalking,Igreetedthejoggers,dogwalkers,runners,andcyclistsjustasmymomhaddonebefore.Engaginginbriefconversations,Idiscoveredthattheseencounters,howeverfleeting,couldbrightensomeone'sdayandcreateconnections.Thesimpleactofsayinghelloandsharingafewwordsbroughtasenseofwarmthandbelonging.BythetimeIreturnedhome,myspiritswerelifted,andanewfoundsenseofpurposecoursedthroughmyveins.Theworldoutsidewasnolongerdaunting;itheldendlesspossibilitiesandexperienceswaitingtobediscovered.Irealizedthateventhesmalleststepstowardsengagementandconnectioncouldhaveaprofoundimpactonmywell-being.Thatdaymarkedthebeginningofmyjourneytowardshealingandself-discovery.當(dāng)我回到家時，一種新的感覺似乎被喚醒了。當(dāng)我坐在床上，回想著與媽媽和狗狗一起散步的情景時，我意識到我的內(nèi)心發(fā)生了變化。籠罩著我身體的沉重似乎減輕了，取而代之的是一絲微弱的希望。很長一段時間以來，我第一次對臥室外的世界產(chǎn)生了一絲好奇。受到媽媽那種富有感染力的快樂的鼓舞，我決定自己去冒險。我拉開窗簾，讓陽光照進(jìn)房間。這感覺就像一個小小的勝利，朝著再次擁抱生活邁出了一步。我拿起一本我?guī)讉€月前丟棄的書，開始讀起來。書頁上的文字，曾經(jīng)毫無意義，枯燥乏味，現(xiàn)在卻把我?guī)У搅瞬煌氖澜?，點燃了我的想象力。一個新的星期六，我問媽媽我能不能帶狗出去。她被我的請求嚇了一跳，同意了，臉上綻開了笑容。我手里拿著皮帶，狗在我身邊興奮地小跑著，我開始了自己的冒險之旅。我們在熟悉的小路上漫步，但這一次，我注意到了細(xì)微的變化。春天來了，生機(jī)勃勃的色彩從先前毫無生氣的景色中迸發(fā)出來。櫻花開了，嬌嫩的花瓣灑在地上，柔和的微風(fēng)帶著花香。我一邊繼續(xù)走，一邊向慢跑者、遛狗者、跑步者和騎自行車的人打招呼，就像我媽媽以前做的那樣。通過簡短的交談，我發(fā)現(xiàn)這些相遇，無論多么短暫，都可以照亮一個人的一天，并建立聯(lián)系。簡單的打招呼和分享幾句話就能帶來溫暖和歸屬感。當(dāng)我回到家時，我的精神振奮起來，一種新的使命感在我的血管里流淌。外面的世界不再令人生畏;它有無限的可能性和經(jīng)驗等待被發(fā)現(xiàn)。我意識到，即使是朝著參與和聯(lián)系邁出的最小的一步，也會對我的幸福產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響。那一天標(biāo)志著我療傷和自我發(fā)現(xiàn)之旅的開始。參考范文：簡單版WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Inolongerfeltthecrushingweightofdespair,andtherewasastrangelightnesstomysteps.Atdinner,Ievenmanage