分寫作限時滿分練(五)Ⅰ.短文改錯(2024四川德陽二模)LastSaturdaymorning,Iwonderedwhattodoontheweekendwhileliedonbed.Suddenly,IrememberMomhadpromisedtotakemysisterandmetothezoo,soIgotupandgotdressingveryquickly.Atthethoughtofgettingcloselytothelovelymonkeysthere,Ifeltveryexcited.Assoonasshearrivedatthezoo,wewenttothemonkey’shomedirect.WiththehelpofmysisterItooksomegoodpictureofthemformyscienceproject.MysistersaidIwasbigfanofmonkeys.Yes,thatshesaidwasright.AndIwasconfidentaboutthatIwouldgetan“A”intheproject.Ⅱ.書面表達(dá)(2024吉林長春三模)目前,全國許多中學(xué)都在課后開展陽光體育活動(sunshinesports)。請你給校英文報寫一篇短文共享你對中學(xué)開展陽光體育活動的看法。要點(diǎn)包括:1.陽光體育的內(nèi)容(gymnastics,taichi,runningexercises等);2.活動的好處;3.支持開展此活動。留意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié),以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________35分寫作限時滿分練(五)Ⅰ.第一句:lied→lying解析考查動詞的時態(tài)和省略。時間狀語從句中主語和主句的主語一樣,且從句中有be動詞時,可省略從句中的主語和be動詞。故將lied改為lying。其次句:remember→remembered解析考查動詞的時態(tài)。通篇時態(tài)是一般過去時,故將remember改為remembered。其次句:dressing→dressed解析考查形容詞。got后用過去分詞作表語,故將dressing改為dressed。第三句:closely→close解析考查固定短語。getcloseto是固定短語,意為“接近”,故將closely改為close。第四句:she→we解析考查代詞。由后面的“wewenttothemonkey’shome”和語境可知,是“我們一到動物園”,故將she改為we。第四句:direct→directly解析考查副詞。修飾動詞went應(yīng)用副詞directly,意為“干脆”,故將direct改為directly。第五句:picture→pictures解析考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。some后應(yīng)用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)pictures,故將picture改為pictures。第六句:在big前加a解析考查冠詞。fan是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)形式,且此處表泛指,前面需加不定冠詞,big是輔音音素開頭,因此不定冠詞用a,故在big前加a。第七句:that→what解析考查主語從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處是主語從句,從句中said為及物動詞,缺少賓語,因此應(yīng)用what引導(dǎo)主語從句,故將that改為what。第八句:去掉about解析考查賓語從句。beconfidentthat...是固定用法,意為“很有信念……”,that引導(dǎo)的是賓語從句,about是多余的。Ⅱ.Sunshinesportsusuallycovergymnastics,taichi,runningexercisesandsoon.Wecanbenefitalotfromsunshinesports.Firstofall,sunshinesportscanstrengthenourbodythatisthebasisofourlearning.Goodhealthisnotonlytheguaranteeforsuccessfulcompletionofstudyinschool,butalsothenecessityforhardworkaftergraduation.Secondly,sunshinesportscandevelopourgoodhabitofexercising.Atlast,whenwedogroupgymnastics,sunshinesportscanimproveourteamworkcapacity.Westudentsofseniorhigh