專(zhuān)題26書(shū)面表達(dá)書(shū)信類(lèi)2024年Writing1【2024新課標(biāo)Ⅰ&II卷】假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫(xiě)一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作。要求考生給Chris寫(xiě)一封信,分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累決定：decide→determine整個(gè)的：entire→whole提供：offer→provide總之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.(that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.(as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)Writing2【2024北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的外國(guó)好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報(bào)的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國(guó)成立75周年，他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)建議投稿內(nèi)容；(2)就以上建議簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourarticle.Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.Inaddition,youcanalsomentionChina’sroleinhelpingsolvingglobalissuessuchastheglobalwarming,offeringamorecomprehensiveview.Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle!Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)。外國(guó)好友Jim準(zhǔn)備給其校報(bào)的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國(guó)成立75周年，他打算重點(diǎn)介紹中國(guó)的發(fā)展成就，要求考生給他回復(fù)郵件，就此給予他建議?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累很好的：great→wonderful成就：achievement→accomplishment建議：suggestion→advice此外：Inaddition→what’smore2.句式拓展句式變換原句：It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.拓展句：It’sgreattohearwhatyou’replanningtowriteaboutisChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.（運(yùn)用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）2023年Writing1【2023?新高考I&II卷】假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括；1.說(shuō)明問(wèn)題；2.提出建議注意:1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右：2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan, I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，要求考生給外教寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題。【詳解】1.詞匯積累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建議：suggestion→advice選擇：choose→select2句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Writing2【2023年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，他發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：(1)活動(dòng)形式；(2)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。注意：(1)詞數(shù)100左右；(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【答案】DearJimHearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給好友Jim策劃的“綠色北京”社團(tuán)活動(dòng)給出一些建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→tip提供：offer→provide開(kāi)展：carryout→conduct主題：theme→topic2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmydhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.2022年Writing1【2022新高考I&II卷】假定你是校廣播站英語(yǔ)節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫(xiě)郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：1.節(jié)目介紹；2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意：1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearCaroline,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyoutoattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’dappreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定你是校廣播站“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫(xiě)郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建立：establish→setup了不起的：amazing→fabulous幫助：aid→assistance許多：plentyof→alotof2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youraidcanhelpusalot.拓展句：Youareourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,whoseaidcanhelpusalot.Writing2【2022年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你打算邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)好友Jim為你們班做一次關(guān)于英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的線上經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1．建議交流的具體內(nèi)容及其原因；2．交流時(shí)間和其他相關(guān)事項(xiàng)。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【范文】DearJim,How’severything?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutogiveusanonlinetalkonEnglishwriting.Ourclassmatesseemtobeweakinorganisation.Wouldyoupleasegiveussomesuggestionsonhowtoconnectsentenceslogically,howtodevelopaparagraph,andhowtostructureanessay?Thetalkwilllastaboutanhour,andyoucandecideonadateatyourconvenience.Pleaseletmeknowwhichplatformyou’lluse.Itwouldbegreatifwecouldhavea10-minutequestionandanswersessionattheendofyourtalk.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解題導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)一份電子郵件，邀請(qǐng)英國(guó)好友Jim為班級(jí)做一次關(guān)于英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的線上經(jīng)驗(yàn)交流Writing3【2022年浙江1月】假定你是李華，在“中國(guó)-愛(ài)爾蘭文化節(jié)”活動(dòng)中結(jié)識(shí)了愛(ài)爾蘭朋友Chris，現(xiàn)在他已回國(guó)，請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.回憶活動(dòng)經(jīng)歷；2.分享個(gè)人收獲；3.希望保持聯(lián)系。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。答案：DearChris,Howareyoudoingthesedays?IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.IstillremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.Wereallyenjoyedourselvesthere.What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,Iampleasedtoknowyouareleadingahappylifeinyourhometown.Ihopewecankeepintouchoften.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給在文化節(jié)上結(jié)識(shí)的外國(guó)朋友寫(xiě)一封信敘舊?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累返回：comebackto→returnto思念：miss→yearn分享：share→exchange玩得開(kāi)心：enjoyoneself→haveagoodtime→havefun開(kāi)心的：pleased→happy→delight→content過(guò)著快樂(lè)的生活：leadahappylife→liveahappylife2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.Imissyousomuch.拓展句：IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIrelandandImissyousomuch.Writing4【2022年浙江卷6月】假定你是李華，你校圖書(shū)館新開(kāi)設(shè)“小組學(xué)習(xí)室”，請(qǐng)你給你的留學(xué)生同學(xué)Michael寫(xiě)一封信，邀請(qǐng)他一同體驗(yàn)，內(nèi)容包括：1.位置與開(kāi)放時(shí)間；2.室內(nèi)設(shè)施和功能。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearMichael,Goodnews!Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,consistingofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.Locatedonthethirdfloorbesidetheonlinereadingrooms,itcanbeaccessiblefrom8amtill9pmthroughouttheweekdays.Thoseroomsareequippedwithmodernelectronicfacilities,allofwhicharelinkedtotheInternet.It’sreallyconvenientforustodosomegroupprojects.Whynotaskourgroupmemberstogoandexperienceit?Earlyreplyandwecanreserveoneroomforourproject.Yours,LiHua【解題導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假定考生是李華，你校圖書(shū)館新開(kāi)設(shè)“小組學(xué)習(xí)室”，請(qǐng)你給你的留學(xué)生同學(xué)Michael寫(xiě)一封信，邀請(qǐng)他一同體驗(yàn)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累由……組成：consistof→bemadeupof位于：belocatedon→besituatedon與……相連接：belinkedto→beconnectedto預(yù)定：reserve→book2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,consistingofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopentousstudentsinourschoollibrary.拓展句：Recently,anewly-furnishedsection,whichconsistsofeightGroupLearningRooms,hasbeenopen2021年Writing1【2021年全國(guó)甲卷】假定你是李華。你校計(jì)劃舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì)，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件給外國(guó)朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.闡明寫(xiě)信事由；2.征求建議；3.表示感謝。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,WordcamethatourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeetingwhosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.BecausethisactivitywillbepresentedontheEnglishwebsite,Isincerelywantyoutooffermesomeadvice.Asfarasweknow,thereisahugeculturaldifferencebetweenChinaandthewesterncountries.Inordertogetmoreclicks,you’dbettertellmewhichChinesecultureyouwesternersprefer.What’smore,ifIwanttodecoratemywebsitewithsomeChineseelements,whatshouldIdo?KnowingyouareinterestedinChina,Idobelieveyoucanhelpmesolvethesepuzzles.Ifpossible,youcanreplytomeassoonaspossible.Iwilltakeyouradviceintoconsideration.Ireallyappreciateyourhelp.Yours,LiHuaWriting2【2021年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國(guó)好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)你用英文給他寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)歉意并說(shuō)明原因；2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國(guó)好友Jim寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，就因故不能赴約而致歉并建議再約。【詳解】1.詞匯積累通知：tell→inform麻煩：problem→trouble怎么樣：whatabout→howabout適合：fit→suit2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.拓展句：IshouldbeavailableanytimenextweekendsothatIcangooutwithyouandhaveagoodtime.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthis

weekend.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型3]Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)2020年Writing1【2020·新課標(biāo)Ⅲ】假定你shi李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教MissEvans寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡(jiǎn)介；2.指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3.商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件，請(qǐng)求外教MissEvans對(duì)于《theSteamboat》改編短劇的支持。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法第一段說(shuō)明寫(xiě)這封郵件的目的；第二段詳細(xì)說(shuō)明英語(yǔ)戲劇的劇情介紹和指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題；第三段表達(dá)感謝，并期待早日得到回復(fù)。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：連詞成句根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤(rùn)色修改Writing2【2020年北京卷】第一節(jié)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)戲劇俱樂(lè)部外籍指導(dǎo)教師Jim因疫情滯留英國(guó)。復(fù)學(xué)在即，作為俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人，你給Jim寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)他推薦一名外籍指導(dǎo)教師，內(nèi)容包括：1.條件及要求；2.表示感謝并提醒注意防護(hù)。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,Howareyoudoing?Ihopeeverything'sOKwithyou.Ourschool'sdramaclubplanstostartpractising.Sinceyou'reawayinBritain,weneedadramateachertobeinyourplace.Wouldyoupleaserecommendoneforus?HeorsheshouldbeanativeEnglishspeaker,currentlyinBeijing,andexperiencedinbothdirectingandteaching.Thankyouforyourhelp.Pleasetakecareofyourself.Remembertowearamaskwhennecessary.Bestwishes,Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封書(shū)信?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們學(xué)校英語(yǔ)戲劇俱樂(lè)部外籍指導(dǎo)教師Jim因疫情滯留英國(guó)。復(fù)學(xué)在即，作為俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人，你給Jim寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)他推薦一名外籍指導(dǎo)教師，內(nèi)容包括：1.條件及要求；2.表示感謝并提醒注意防護(hù)。第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：dramaclub(戲劇俱樂(lè)部)；plantodosth.(計(jì)劃做某事)；inone'splace(代替某人)；recommend(推薦)；anativeEnglishspeaker(以英語(yǔ)為母語(yǔ)的人)；currently(目前)；experienced(熟練的)；both…and…(兩者都……)；takecareof(照顧)；wearamask(戴口罩)等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如Sinceyou'reawayinBritain,weneedadramateachertobeinyourplace.運(yùn)用原因狀語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。2019年Writing1【2019年全國(guó)卷Ⅰ】假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要?jiǎng)“嬷袊?guó)畫(huà)展。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫(xiě)信目的；2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；3.能做的事情。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I'mLiHua,anoutgoingboy,whoisstudyinginLondon.Iamwritingtoapplytobeavolunteerofyourteam,havingheardthataChinesePaintingExhibitionwillbeheldinthislocalcity.Ihavesomeadvantagesforthejob.Firstofall,havinglivedinChinaforsixteenyearsandhavinglearntEnglishsinceIwasachild,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialforintroducingChinesepaintings.Besides,havingagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintingsbecauseofmyfamiliaritywithChinesepaintingculture,Icangetforeignersandthelocalstoknowmoreaboutit.Lastbutnotleast，throughmyintroductionandefforts,Ibelieve,IcanstrengthenthefriendshipbetweenChinaandEngland.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.【語(yǔ)篇解讀】【分析】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。【詳解】1.審題立意本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在式。2.謀篇布局書(shū)信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫(xiě)信的目的，中間段寫(xiě)個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。3.關(guān)鍵詞根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯有：volunteer，aChinesePaintingExhibition，localcity，advantages，agoodcommandof，beneficialfor，familiaritywith，appreciate，takemyapplicationintoconsideration。通過(guò)詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫(xiě)完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫(xiě)或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過(guò)渡性的詞匯，如Firstofall,Besides,tobeginwith，moreover，asforme，Lastbutnotleast，等，使全文銜接自然，語(yǔ)義流暢。Writing2【2019年全國(guó)卷Ⅱ】假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)李華。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括:1.比賽信息；2.賽前準(zhǔn)備；3.表達(dá)期待。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtoletyouknowthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.ThematchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymontheafternoonofJuly4th.WewillplayagainsttheteamfromHongXingHighSchool.Inordertowinthematch,weshouldgetfullypreparedandpracticehard.Sofromtomorrow,weneedtotrainfortwohoursafterschooleveryday.Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.You’reanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthatwecanwinthegame.Let’stryhardtogether!Cheers,LiHua【解析】【分析】今年的書(shū)面表達(dá)沿襲近幾年的體裁，仍舊是應(yīng)用文。本次書(shū)面表達(dá)要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件告知隊(duì)友有關(guān)比賽的信息。【詳解】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一封告知信。首先要告知寫(xiě)信目的；然后簡(jiǎn)明扼要地告知排球比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及賽前的準(zhǔn)備事項(xiàng)，注意事件信息的三要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，要交代清楚；第三則要表達(dá)對(duì)隊(duì)友的期待和鼓勵(lì)。Writing3【2019年全國(guó)卷III】假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂(lè)節(jié)。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的英國(guó)朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括:1.時(shí)間；2.活動(dòng)安排；3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】DearAllen,DearAllen,How’severythinggoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheMusicFestival,whichwillbeheld

intheArtCenterof

ourschool

.Withtheaimofenrichourcampuslife,theMusicFestival

willstart

fromJuly5toJuly7,lasting3days.

InordertomakeusknowmoreaboutChinesetraditionalmusic,theperformanceswillfocusonsomeclassicalChinesemusicalforms,suchasfolksongs,Beijingoperasaswellasplayingsometraditionalinstruments.

Asyoucanimagine,whatgreatfuntherewillbe.Wouldyouliketocomeandenjoytheexcitementwithme?Please

dosomepractice

andgetreadytoplayyourfavoritemusicatthefestival.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

IamwritingtotellyouthatamusicfestivalwillbeheldinourschoolWecantakepartinthemusicfestivalintheschoolhallnextFridayafternoon.Inthemusicfestival，weinvitesomefamoussingersandpianisttoperform，whowillalsogivesomelessonstothestudents.Inaddition，somestudentscanhaveachancetocooperatewiththismusicians.Asamusicfan，youareboundtoparticipateinthefestival.Ifpossible，youareweIcometoperforminthefestival，whichwillbeagreatexperience.Hopefully，youcantakepartinitanddon'tmissthechance.【解析】今年的書(shū)面表達(dá)要求考生寫(xiě)郵件，告知英國(guó)朋友音樂(lè)節(jié)的情況?！驹斀狻渴紫却_定提綱。先介紹寫(xiě)作目的，之后介紹音樂(lè)節(jié)的時(shí)間、活動(dòng)安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。第二，根據(jù)提綱，確定關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)，如：Howiseverythinggoing?amusicfestival，intheschoolhall，Theopeningceremony等。第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)。Writing4【2019年浙江卷6月】假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國(guó)家。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.表示感謝；2.回顧Alex對(duì)你的幫助；3.臨別祝愿。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能選漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化.平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】DearChris,Iamsoregretfultoknowthatyouaregoingtoreturntoyourhomebeforelong.WegetalongwellduringyourstayinChinaandyouofferedmelotsofhelp.IwouldliketoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelpwithmyEnglish.WhilestudyinginChina,youalwaysspentyourfreetimeinhelpingmepolishupmyoralEnglish.ItisyouwhosharedmewithrichknowledgeofEnglishandEnglishculture.NeverwillIforgetyouandyourkindness.Itismyhopethatyoucanremembermeasoftenaspossible.Yours,LiHuaWriting5【2019年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim打算暑假期間來(lái)北京、天津和上海旅游，發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢問(wèn)相關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件，內(nèi)容包括:1.交通出行；2.必備衣物。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50；2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJim，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Your