2021年甘肅省嘉峪關市大學英語6級大學

英語六級模擬考試（含答案）

學校:班級:姓名:考號:

一、l.Writing（10題）

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay

entitledOnFoodSafetyIssues.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelow:

1.食品安全的現(xiàn)狀

2.造成食品安全問題的原因

3.我們應該如何應對

OnFoodSafetyIssues

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledSelf-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents.Youshouldwriteatleast150

wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.大學生出去旅行經(jīng)常會選擇“自助游”

2.分析大學生選擇“自助游”的原因

3.我的看法

Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledPositiveandNegativeEffectsofInternet.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.英特網(wǎng)的積極影響。

2.英特網(wǎng)的消極影響。

3.你的看法。

PositiveandNegativeEffectsofInternet

4.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthe

topic"TheLimitationsofBookKnowledge".Youshouldwritenolessthan

150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(givenin

Chinese)below:

1.書本是知識的重要來源。

2.但書本知識具有局限性。

3.因此..

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledCanDonationChangePeople'sLifeinUnderdevelopedAreas?You

shouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.現(xiàn)在許多民間組織和政府機構鼓勵民眾通過捐贈來幫助落后地區(qū)

2.捐贈的確能夠?qū)β浜蟮貐^(qū)的發(fā)展帶來幫助

3.在我看來，真正能夠幫助落后地區(qū)的還是……

CanDonationChangePeople'sLifeinUnderdevelopedAreas?

6.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled

ShouldRetirementAgeBeRaised?Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.有人贊成提高退休年齡

2.有人則反對

3.你的看法

ShouldRetirementAgeBeRaised?

7.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayonthetopic

ofShouldEnterprisesHoldanAnnualMeeting?.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

現(xiàn)在有不少單位熱衷于組織年會

1.對這種做法有人表示支持

2.有人并不贊成

3.我認為……

ShouldEnterprisesHoldanAnnualMeeting?

8.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteaCampaign

Speech.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

L你認為自己具備了什么條件（能力、性格、愛好等）可以勝任學生會主

席的工作。

2.如果當選，你將為本校同學做些什么。

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledOnPrivateTutoring.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowing

theoutlinegivenbelow.

1.為孩子聘請家教目前非常普遍

2.有人認為這對孩子有幫助，有人則不以為然

3.我的看法

OnPrivateTutoring

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledShouldHighSchoolStudentsStudyAbroad?Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

?中學生要不要出國留學］

1.上圖為x市市民對中學生出國留學看法的統(tǒng)計，請簡單描述該圖

2.請說明兩種觀點可能的論述理由

3.你對出國留學的看法，并為人們的顧慮提供可能的解決方法

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

Thescaleusedtomeasureacidrainiscalled.

12.

Consumersareencouragedtobuylow-fatmilkratherthan.

13.

Accordingtothepassage,unlikeluckypeople,unluckypeople.

A.alwaysthinkinapositiveway

B.alwaystendtopointtothemessage

C.alwaysspendlesstimeontheexercise

D.alwaysseewhatthey'relookingfor

14.

Whyareapplicationsincreasing?Answer:.

15.

TheLAMVis18feetlong,10feetwide,and6feethighand2,200pounds

andcanhold4passengers.

A.YB.NC.NG

16.

ThepracticeatImperialCollege,Londonprovesthatsomescientists'fearsof

focusingtoomuchcommunicationare.

17.

DaVinciwasthefirstroboticsystemtobeappliedandapprovedbytheFood

andDrugAdministration.

A.YB.NC.NG

18.

TheGladstonefamilymadeagreatfortuneby.

19.

Bothmother-to-childtransmissionandpartner-to-partnertransmissioncanbe

preventedorprotectedeffectivelybydrugsfor.

20.

OneoftheadvantagesofrecordingCDoneselfisthatonehastotalcontrolof

hisownmusic.

A.YB.NC.NG

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.(41)

22.(13)

A.Aliceisnowinaverybadtemper.

B.Aliceisnowpreparingforthetest.

C.Aliceisnowveryhappy.

D.Aliceisnowill.

23.[B8]

24.

[B8]

25.(28)

A.Itmustbetrainedsoitwon'tbite

B.Itneedsmoreloveandcare.

C.Itdemandsmorefoodandspace.

D.Itmustbelookedaftercarefully.

26.(18)

A.Thetwospeakerswillcontinuetalkingandbecomefriends.

B.Thetwospeakerswillspendtheirvacationtogether.

C.Thewomanisnotinterestedinthetalk.

D.Themanwilltellthewomanisbusinessmajor.

27.(16)

A.Turndownthevolumeofthemusic.

B.Turnthemusicoff.

C.Playadifferentstyle,ofmusic.

D.Listentomusicinadifferentroom.

28.

[BIO]

29.聽力原文：W:Oh,hi,Daniel.(19)Areyougoingtothein-servicegaining

today?

M:Youbet.Imissedthetrainingsessionlastmonth,soIhavetobesureto

makethisone.Aren'tyouexcitedabouttheprogram?

W:Notreally.(19)(20)BeforeIbecameanurseIdroveanambulanceand

hadalotofemergencymedicaltraining.Practicingbasicfirstaidtechniques

isakindofboringforme.

M:WellIcanunderstandthat.Butyouknow,it'samazinghowquicklyyou

getoutofpractice.(21)Asnursesinahospital,wehaveallthefancy

equipmentformedicalemergencies-andplentyofdoctorsaround,sowe

hardlyevergetachancetopracticebasictechniques.They'rereallyeasyto

forget.Andyouknowthatpracticemakesperfect.

W:Icanseeyourpoint,anditneverhurtstoreviewwhatyou'realready

supposedtoknow.Bytheway,who'steachingtheclassthistime?

M:Dr.Huston.She'sthenewemergencyroomphysician.

W:Well,shecertainlyoughttoknowwhatshe'stalkingabout.I'veheardshe's

areallygoodsurgeon.

M:That'sright.I'vebeentakingcareofsomeofthepatientssheworkedon,

andtheyallthinkhighlyofher.

W:Whenareyougoingtoheadovertotheclassroom?

M:Immediately.I'mjustonmywaythere.Doyouwanttowalkovertogether?

W:Thatsoundsgoodtome.Let'sgoandprepareforthetraining.

(20)'」

A.Atadentistoffice.

B.Inaschool.

C.Inanambulance.

D.Atahospital.

30.(32)

A.Togetinformation.

B.Toknowtherelatedareas.

C.Toknowthelatestnews.

D.Tomakefriends.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)

31.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,thereisashortpassagewith5questionsor

incompletestatements.Readthepassagecarefully.Thenanswerthequestions

orcompletethestatementsinthefewestpossiblewords.

Betta,alsoknownastheSiamesefightingfish,commonnameofasmall

freshwaterfishnativetoSoutheastAsia.Cultivatedbettasmaybeofanycolor

butmostcommonlyarered,blue,orturquoise.Thecolorinmalesbecomes

morevividwhenthefishiscourtingorotherwisearoused.Theadultmeasures

3.8to6.4cm(1.5to2.5in.)inlength.Likeseveralrelatedspecies,including

thegouramiandclimbingperch,thebettadoesnotobtainitsentireoxygen

supplyfromwaterbutmustperiodicallyrisetothesurfaceforair.Acavity

aboveeachgillchambercontainsaspecialorgan,thelabyrinth,usedin

breathingair.Itenablesthefishtoinhabitoxygen-deficientwaterthatcould

notbetoleratedotherwise.Themalebuildsanestfortheeggsbyblowing

stickybubblesofairthatcollectasafrothatthewater'ssurface.Themale

fertilizesintothisfrothandalsobrieflyguardsthehatchedyoung.

MalefightingfisharebredinThailandforthepurposeofcompetitivecombat,

andpeoplegambleontheoutcomeofthematches.Malebettasareaggressive

andevenattacktheirownreflectionsinamirror.Fightsbetweenmalebettas

arebegunbyplacingtwoevenlymatchedfishinadjacentglasscontainers.

Whenthefishmakeattemptsatattackingeachother,theyareremovedfrom

theseparatecontainersandplacedinasinglelargercontainer.Whentheyhave

recoveredfrombeingtransferred,theytakeupaside-by-sidepositionand

beginalongseriesofswiftattackingmovements.Becausetheirteethare

small,theynibbleratherthanbite,concentratingtheirattacksonthefins.

Fightsaresometimesinterruptedwhilethefishswimtothesurfaceto

replenishtheirsupplyofoxygen.Althoughinjuriestofinsandscales

sustainedduringbattleareusuallyextensive,fightingfishgenerallyrecover

completelyinafewweeks.

Inwhatcasedobettasassumevariouscolors?

32.

Accordingtothepassage,the"discipline"valuesandthe"enjoyyourself

are.

A.contradictoryneedsfromtheconsumers

B.mutuallycorrespondingpsychologicaldemandsontheconsumers

C.forgoodworkerswholeadorderly,law-abidinglives

D.messagestogetpeopletobegoodconsumers

33.

Someeducatorsbegintoteachgirlsandboysseparatelybecause.

A.someresearchessuggestthatboysandgirlsdonotstudyinthesameway

B.theyareinspiredbythesuccessofYoungWomen'sLeadershipSchool

C.researchesinsingle-sexclassprovethatitworksbetterforeducation

D.problemsincoeducationshowthatasingle-sexschoolmightbeabetter

choice

五、5.ErrorCorrection（3題）

34.

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35.

[S2]

36.

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六、6.ErrorCorrection（3題）

37.

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38.

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39.

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參考答案

l.OnFoodSafetyIssuesWhileitistruethatthereisadeclineinthenumber

ofcasesrelatedtofakefoodsandfoodsofpoorqualitythesafetyoffood

remainsaseriousprobleminthisindustry.Food-bornOnFoodSafetyIssues

Whileitistruethatthereisadeclineinthenumberofcasesrelatedtofake

foodsandfoodsofpoorquality,thesafetyoffoodremainsaseriousproblem

inthisindustry.Food-bom解析：本文要求就食品安全問題展開討論。根

據(jù)提綱，第一段陳述目前食品安全的現(xiàn)狀，及其對人民身體健康的危害；

第二段分析造成食品安全問題的原因；第三段針對食品安全問題提出應

對的措施。

2.Self-helpTravelingofCollegeStudents[1]Whencollegestudentsplana

journeytheyusuallypreferself-helptravelingtothetourarrangedbyatravel

agency.[2]TherearesomereasonsforcollegestudentschoosingSelf-help

TravelingofCollegeStudents[1]Whencollegestudentsplanajourney,they

usuallypreferself-helptravelingtothetourarrangedbyatravelagency.[2]

Therearesomereasonsforcollegestudentschoosing解析：本文是“現(xiàn)象-

原因分析-自己的看法”類作文。對于大學生自助游的原因分析是本作文

的難點。范文給出廠三個方面的原因：自助游省錢；更有趣；更自由。

對于每一個原因，范文也都戶以擴展，都是“主題+擴展”的結構。讀者在

自己寫作時重點也是要訓練自己分析問題的能力。大學生選擇自助游，

還有別的原因嗎?如何用英語表達出來?比如：自助游更有挑戰(zhàn)性;通過

自助游，可以培養(yǎng)學生自己的策劃能力；可以擁有個性化的旅游線路，

得到其他游客沒有過的經(jīng)歷；等等。說到“我的看法”，可以表示支持,

也町以表示部分支持，甚至可以表示反對。無論是什么態(tài)度和看法，都

應該給出理由——即使是對第二段提到的理由總結一下也可以。

［1］介紹現(xiàn)象，以outline第1點為依據(jù)。

［2］用以引出原因的常用句型。

［3］［5］［7］onereason...anotherreason...thethirdreason...層次分明。

［4］對［3］加以擴展，［6］對［5］加以擴展。［4］和⑹使用不同的句子結構，

使句式富于變化。

［7］同樣是prefer,本句用prefer...ratherthan,與［1］的pre色r...to有同有

異。

［8］提出自助游是goodchoice的看法。

［9］對網(wǎng)給予支持，也是前面一段話的小結。

3.PositiveandNegativeEffectsoftheInternetTheInternetisamiraclein

humansocietyforitintroducesnewconceptsandlivingstylesintoourlife.

TheimaginedworldcreatedbytheInternetoffersusawindowtoexchange

ideasexploreinformationandentertainourselvesatourownpace.Our

traditionalwayofcommunicationisundergoingarevolutionarychangewith

newformsofcommunicationlikeBBSe-mailsandonlinechattingbecoming

prevailing.Andinformationisatourfinger'stipstheinstantweareonline

whichfacilitatesthesharingandutilizingofinformationtothegreatestextent.

ThecomingE-commerceboomwillturne-lifeintoareality.TheInternet

thoughinvisibleandintangiblehasbecomeanindispensablepartofourlife.

MeanwhilenegativeeffectsoftheInternethaveposedabigproblemtous.

TheInternetcanbeaddictiveasalcoholandthreatenpeople'spsychological

well-being.LikeakaleidoscopetheInternetpresentsaworldoffantasies.If

peopleliveinfantasiesfortoolongtheymaybecomeanti-socialandalienated

fromtherealworld.AndtheInternetcanbeabreedinggroundofcrimes.

Hackersaimatattackingandparalyzingsites.Vulgarrubbishanderoticsites

maycorruptkids-mind.InmyopiniontheinventionoftheInternetisa

technologicalbreakthroughwhichhasbroughtincomparableconveniences

andchangestohumanbeings.ThoughinevitablytheInternethasgivenrise

tonewsocialproblemsitshouldnotbethetargetofcriticismbecauseitisnot

thefaultoftheNetbutthefaultofthosewhoabuseit.PositiveandNegative

EffectsoftheInternetTheInternetisamiracleinhumansocietyforit

introducesnewconceptsandlivingstylesintoourlife.Theimaginedworld

createdbytheInternetoffersusawindowtoexchangeideas,explore

informationandentertainourselvesatourownpace.Ourtraditionalwayof

communicationisundergoingarevolutionarychangewithnewformsof

communicationlikeBBS,e-mailsandonlinechattingbecomingprevailing.

Andinformationisatourfinger'stipstheinstantweareonline,which

facilitatesthesharingandutilizingofinformationtothegreatestextent.The

comingE-commerceboomwillturne-lifeintoareality.TheInternet,though

invisibleandintangible,hasbecomeanindispensablepartofourlife.

Meanwhile,negativeeffectsoftheInternethaveposedabigproblemtous.

TheInternetcanbeaddictiveasalcoholandthreatenpeople'spsychological

well-being.Likeakaleidoscope,theInternetpresentsaworldoffantasies.If

peopleliveinfantasiesfortoolong,theymaybecomeanti-socialand

alienatedfromtherealworld.AndtheInternetcanbeabreedinggroundof

crimes.Hackersaimatattackingandparalyzingsites.Vulgarrubbishand

eroticsitesmaycorruptkids-mind.Inmyopinion,theinventionofthe

Internetisatechnologicalbreakthroughwhichhasbroughtincomparable

conveniencesandchangestohumanbeings.ThoughinevitablytheInternet

hasgivenrisetonewsocialproblems,itshouldnotbethetargetofcriticism

becauseitisnotthefaultoftheNetbutthefaultofthosewhoabuseit.

4.TheLimitationsofBookKnowledgePeoplemaythinkthatthemost

importanttaskofacollegestudentistostudynaturalorsocialscienceswhich

aretaughtinbooksbecausebooksarethemainsourcesofhumanknowledge

aTheLimitationsofBookKnowledgePeoplemaythinkthatthemost

importanttaskofacollegestudentistostudynaturalorsocialscienceswhich

aretaughtinbooks,becausebooksarethemainsourcesofhumanknowledge,

a

5.CanDonationChangePeople'sLifeinUnderdevelopedAreas?Peopleare

nowmoreandmoreencouragedbybothnon-governmentalandgovernmental

organizationstohelpthepeopleinunderdevelopedareasbydonations.

Donationsinformsofbothmoneyandmaterialsarecalledonespeciallyin

timeofdisastersoremergencyintheunderdevelopedareas.Itisobviousthat

variousdonationsgoingtotheunderdevelopedareasdoimprovethe

conditionsoftheseareastosomeextent.Firstlythesedonationscanbeused

toresolvesomepracticalproblemsintheseareasbyworkingasasourceof

fundsforconstructionforexample.Secondlydonationalsoofferssome

opportunitiesforthedevelopmentofeducationinunderdevelopedareas.

Moneybooksandvariousdevicesandeducationalequipmentsdonatedto

theseareasareusefulfortheirculturalandeducationaldevelopment.Inthe

thirdplacedonationisreallyanefficientwayofpullingpeoplethrough

temporarybutoverwhelmingdifficultiesandhardships.Howeveritdocsnot

followthatdonationcanreplacegovernmentalbehavior.Infactthelatteris

theveryapproachtoathoroughdevelopmentoftheunderdevelopedareas.

Ononehanddonationisonashorttermbasisandisonlyhelpfulinsolving

sometemporaryproblemswhilegovernmentalbehaviorisonalong-term

basisandcanbedependeduponinsolvingsomeradicalproblems.Onthe

otherhanddonationisusuallyaimedatcertainplacesinsteadofallthe

underdevelopedareasandthuscannotsolvetheproblemsofalltheseareas

whilegovernmentalbehaviorisdirectedatalltheunderdevelopedareas.

Thereforeinordertopromptaradicalimprovementoftheunderdeveloped

areasgovernmentalbehaviorwillbethedominantforceinthelongrun.Can

DonationChangePeople'sLifeinUnderdevelopedAreas?Peoplearenow

moreandmoreencouragedbybothnon-governmentalandgovernmental

organizationstohelpthepeopleinunderdevelopedareasbydonations.

Donations,informsofbothmoneyandmaterials,arecalledonespeciallyin

timeofdisastersoremergencyintheunderdevelopedareas.Itisobviousthat

variousdonationsgoingtotheunderdevelopedareasdoimprovethe

conditionsoftheseareastosomeextent.Firstly,thesedonationscanbeused

toresolvesomepracticalproblemsintheseareasbyworkingasasourceof

fundsforconstruction,forexample.Secondly,donationalsoofferssome

opportunitiesforthedevelopmentofeducationinunderdevelopedareas.

Money,books,andvariousdevicesandeducationalequipmentsdonatedto

theseareasareusefulfortheirculturalandeducationaldevelopment.Inthe

thirdplace,donationisreallyanefficientwayofpullingpeoplethrough

temporarybutoverwhelmingdifficultiesandhardships.However,itdocsnot

followthatdonationcanreplacegovernmentalbehavior.Infact,thelatteris

theveryapproachtoathoroughdevelopmentoftheunderdevelopedareas.

Ononehand,donationisonashorttermbasisandisonlyhelpfulinsolving

sometemporaryproblems,whilegovernmentalbehavior,isonalong-term

basisandcanbedependeduponinsolvingsomeradicalproblems.Onthe

otherhand,donationisusuallyaimedatcertainplacesinsteadofallthe

underdevelopedareasandthuscannotsolvetheproblemsofalltheseareas,

whilegovernmentalbehavior,isdirectedatalltheunderdevelopedareas.

Therefore,inordertopromptaradicalimprovementoftheunderdeveloped

areas,governmentalbehavior,willbethedominantforceinthelongrun.

6.ShouldRetirementAgeBeRaised?Whethertoraisetheretirementagehas

becomeahottopicnowadays.Manypeopleseeincreasingtheretirementage

asawaytohelpaddressthefinancialchallengesinthesocialsecurity

fund.Andtheysaytherearecompellingdemographicreasonsforsucha

change-increasedlifespansincreasedworkingcapabilitiesandastructural

demandforexperiencedlabor.Howevermanymorewereagainstraisingthe

retirementage.Theyarguethatthepensionfundhasasurplusnow.Besidesa

prolongedlifespandoesn'tnecessarilymeanthatpeopleareabletowork

longer.Moreimportantlyraisingtheretirementagewouldputmorestrainon

thealreadygraveemploymentsituation.Addingworkingyearsforthosenow

employedwouldmeanfeweropeningsforthenewjobseekerswhoare

youngerandhealthier.PersonallyIthinkthegovernmentshouldraisethe

retirementageonlywhenthereisseverelaborshortagerelativelyhigh

pensionpaymentsorthegovernmentisinafiscalcrisis.Howeverit'sapparent

thatourcountrynowhasnoneofthesethreescenarios.ThereforeIdon'tthink

itnecessarytoraisetheofficialretirementageatpresent.ShouldRetirement

AgeBeRaised?Whethertoraisetheretirementagehasbecomeahottopic

nowadays.Manypeopleseeincreasingtheretirementageasawaytohelp

addressthefinancialchallengesinthesocialsecurityfund.And,theysay,

therearecompellingdemographicreasonsforsuchachange-increasedlife

spans,increasedworkingcapabilities,andastructuraldemandfor

experiencedlabor.However,manymorewereagainstraisingtheretirement

age.Theyarguethatthepensionfundhasasurplusnow.Besides,aprolonged

lifespandoesn'tnecessarilymeanthatpeopleareabletoworklonger.More

importantly,raisingtheretirementagewouldputmorestrainonthealready

graveemploymentsituation.Addingworkingyearsforthosenowemployed

wouldmeanfeweropeningsforthenewjobseekerswhoareyoungerand

healthier.Personally,Ithinkthegovernmentshouldraisetheretirementage

onlywhenthereisseverelaborshortage,relativelyhighpensionpaymentsor

thegovernmentisinafiscalcrisis.However,it'sapparentthatourcountry

nowhasnoneofthesethreescenarios.Therefore,Idon'tthinkitnecessaryto

raisetheofficialretirementageatpresent.

7.ShouldEnterprisesHoldanAnnualMeeting?Inrecentyearsquiteafew

enterprisestendtoholdanannualmeetingattheendoftheyearasawayof

celebratingtheNewYear.Somepeopleareinfavorofthiskindofcelebration

andbelieveboththecompanyandtheemployeesbenefitfromit.Anannual

meetingifheldsuccessfullycanhelpcreateaharmoniousworking

environmentinthecompany.Howeverotherpeopleholdacompletely

oppositeopinion.Theyregarditasawasteofmoneytorenttheauditorium

topayforthehostesstoeatinluxuriousrestaurantsandsoon.Thiswould

contributetoaconsiderableportionofthefinancialexpenseofthecompany

whichinconsequencewouldlowertheamountofmoneythattheemployees

canget.Frommypointofviewtheadvantagesoftheannualmeetings

outweighthedisadvantages.Firstlytheemployeescanberefreshedafterthe

wholeyearofhardwork.Secondlyduringthewholecelebrationthe

colleagueshavechancestogetafurtherunderstandingofeachother.

Moreoverasuccessfulannualmeetingcanhelpcreateasenseofbelongingin

theheartofstaff.ShouldEnterprisesHoldanAnnualMeeting?Inrecentyears,

quiteafewenterprisestendtoholdanannualmeetingattheendoftheyear

asawayofcelebratingtheNewYear.Somepeopleareinfavorofthiskind

ofcelebrationandbelieveboththecompanyandtheemployeesbenefitfrom

it.Anannualmeeting,ifheldsuccessfully,canhelpcreateaharmonious

workingenvironmentinthecompany.However,otherpeopleholda

completelyoppositeopinion.Theyregarditasawasteofmoneytorentthe

auditorium,topayforthehostess,toeatinluxuriousrestaurantsandsoon.

Thiswouldcontributetoaconsiderableportionofthefinancialexpenseof

thecompany,which,inconsequence,wouldlowertheamountofmoneythat

theemployeescanget.Frommypointofview,theadvantagesoftheannual

meetingsoutweighthedisadvantages.Firstly,theemployeescanberefreshed

afterthewholeyearofhardwork.Secondly,duringthewholecelebration,the

colleagueshavechancestogetafurtherunderstandingofeachother.

Moreover,asuccessfulannualmeetingcanhelpcreateasenseofbelonging

intheheartofstaff.

8.Goodeveningladiesandgentlemen:Thankyouforcomingtothiselection

campaigntoday.WiththetrustandcompletesupportofmyteamIam

delightedtoannouncethatIamrunningforchairmanoftheStudentUnion.

AsadiligentmanwithpleasantpersonalityIhavebeenalwaysconsideredto

beagoodteammember.MeanwhileasabigfanofsportsIfullyrealizethe

importanceofteamworkandadvocatethespiritofbeingquickerandstronger.

Ipossessstrongdeterminationtotakefirmstepstowardachievingthe

objectivesofmyteam,inadditionmyworkingexperiencewiththeStudent

Unioninthepasttwoyearswillbeextremelyhelpfultomyfutureworkhere

ifIgetelected.Asignofareallystrongorganizationisthatitcanchangeits

leadershipwithouthinderingitsprogressandwithoutdamagingitsvalues.If

IamelectedIbelieveIhavethecapabilitytoleadtheUniontoadvanceinthe

rightdirection.IwillcooperatewellwithmyfellowmembersoftheUnion

andtakeinnovativemeasuresincludingestablishingastudent-information

centerformingateacher-student-friendshipassociationtomaketheUniona

trueassistancetostudents"studyandlifehereaswellasabridgeof

communicationbetweenteachersandstudents.Thankyouverymuch.Good

evening,ladiesandgentlemen:Thankyouforcomingtothiselection

campaigntoday.Withthetrustandcompletesupportofmyteam,Iam

delightedtoannouncethatIamrunningforchainnanoftheStudentUnion.

Asadiligentmanwithpleasantpersonality,Ihavebeenalwaysconsideredto

beagoodteammember.Meanwhile,asabigfanofsportsIfullyrealizethe

importanceofteamworkandadvocatethespiritofbeingquickerandstronger.

Ipossessstrongdeterminationtotakefinnstepstowardachievingthe

objectivesofmyteam,inaddition,myworkingexperiencewiththeStudent

Unioninthepasttwoyearswillbeextremelyhelpfultomyfutureworkhere

ifIgetelected.Asignofareallystrongorganizationisthatitcanchangeits

leadershipwithouthinderingitsprogressandwithoutdamagingitsvalues.If

Iamelected,IbelieveIhavethecapabilitytoleadtheUniontoadvancein

therightdirection.IwillcooperatewellwithmyfellowmembersoftheUnion

andtakeinnovativemeasures,includingestablishingastudent-information

center,formingateacher-student-friendshipassociation,tomaketheUniona

trueassistancetostudents"studyandlifehereaswellasabridgeof

communicationbetweenteachersandstudents.Thankyouverymuch.

9.[1]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheir

children.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildto

makerapidprogressinhisstudywhileothersholdoppositeviews.[3]Asfar

asIamcon[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutors

fortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulfor

achildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudy,whileothersholdoppositeviews.

[3]AsfarasIamcon解析：這篇作文要求討論“請家教”的問題。Outline

足“現(xiàn)象一正反兩種觀點-自己的觀點”模式。這種題目有兩種寫作思路。

第一種思路，把重點放在“不同的看法”上，然后略寫自己的觀點（支持其

中一個觀點，或者當“和事佬”，說具體問題具體分析）。這時，要重點考

慮：支持請家教的觀點有什么?（激發(fā)學生學習興趣、培養(yǎng)學生交際能力、

提高成績、充分利用時間，等等。）反對請家教，有什么理由?（沒有必要，

課堂上學好的話，不必請家教；作用不大，如果學生自己沒有主動性，

請廠家教也沒有用；占用過多學生自主學習、游玩的時間，不利于學生

的健康發(fā)展；等等。）

第二種思路是把寫作重點放在“我”的看法上。就如范文那樣，先簡要介

紹存在的不同看法，然后著重論述自己的觀點。當然，自己的觀點可以

是支持，也可以是反對，但總的說來，要言之成理，要有邏輯性，沿言

要銜接、連貫、自然。

Analysis

[1]對應outline的第1條，簡要說明現(xiàn)象

[2]對應outline的第2條，說明存在兩種不同的看法。

[3]對應outline的第3條，提出自己的看法。文章剩余部分就用來論證

自己的看法。

[4][6]是[3]的支持句。用first,second關聯(lián)。

[5][7]分別對兩個分論點予以展開；

[8]用inoneword總結自己的觀點。

10.ShouldHighSchoolStudentsStudyAbroad?Inthisglobalvillagemore

andmoreChinesearestudyingabroadandtheageofoverseasstudentsis

falling.Astowhetherhighschoolstudentsshouldjointh