考向51應用文寫作之祝賀信和報道類寫作祝賀信【寫作示例】假定你是李華,得知你的外國筆友Peter獲得了“漢語橋”中文演講比賽一等獎。你為他感到驕傲,并給他寫一封祝賀信,要點如下:1.天天練習講漢語,從不會到流利,終于成功;2.繼續(xù)努力,有機會來中國留學;3.希望見面和交流。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右。2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:“漢語橋”中文演講比賽“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest【考場審題】Step1:精準審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱(I),第二人稱(you)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時;一般過去時段落布局:開頭點題:表達祝賀主體段落:成功的原因并進行鼓勵結尾:再次表達祝賀Step2:頭腦風暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:expressmycongratulations,opportunity,communicate(2)佳句:①Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.②GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點1:正如諺語所說:“成功屬于有準備的人”。一般表達:Thereisasayinggoinglikethis,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.句式升級(定語從句)Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.

要點2:如果你繼續(xù)努力學習漢語,你就會有機會來中國學習。一般表達:IfyougoonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.句式升級(分詞短語作狀語)GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.

Step4:銜接過渡斐然成篇【參考范文】DearPeter,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourreceivingthefirstprizeof“ChineseBridge”Chinesespeechcontest.IknowthatyouwerenotgoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpracticedspeakingChineseeveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Everythingcomestohimwhowaits”.Finally,yousucceeded!Inmymind,thismatchisverydifficultforaforeignstudent.SoI’msosurprisedthatyoubecomechampionofthiscompetition.GoingonstudyingChineseharder,youwillhavetheopportunitytostudyinChina.Atlast,Ihopetoseeyouandcommunicatewithyou.Sincerecongratulationstoyouagain!Yours,LiHua報道類【寫作示例】假定你是李華,上周日你校舉辦了5千米越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道,內容包括:1.參加人員;2.跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下;3.活動反響。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右;2.請按如下格式作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace【考場審題】Step1:精準審題謀篇布局人稱we時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時,現(xiàn)在完成時段落布局開頭點題:點明越野賽的時間、參與人員和目的主體段落:越野賽的過程結尾:表達參加越野賽的收獲Step2:頭腦風暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:inspiresb.todosth.,ontheway,fallbehind,keeprunning,buildup,beofgreatimportance(2)佳句:①ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.②Notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.Step3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點1:參賽者是我們高三全體學生。一般表達:AllthestudentsinSenior3tookpartinit.

句式升級(強調句式,高級詞匯)ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.

要點2:我們不僅意識到了鍛煉身體很重要,還對“堅持就是勝利”體會更深了。一般表達:Wehaverealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,andwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.

句式升級(倒裝結構)Notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.

Step4:銜接過渡斐然成篇【參考范文】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSunday,ourschoolheldafive-kilometercross-countryrunningrace.ItwasallthestudentsinSenior3whoparticipatedinit.Thepurposeofthisracewastoinspireusstudentstopaymoreattentiontophysicalexercise.At7a.m.wesetoffattheschoolgate.AndthenweranallthewaytothefootofSouthHill.Ontheway,althoughsomestudentsfellbehind,theykeptrunninguntilthefinishingline.Fromthisactivity,notonlyhavewerealizedthatbuildingupourbodyisofgreatimportance,butwehavealsolearnedmoreabout“persistenceleadstosuccess”.【檢測訓練】1．假如你是李華，得知美國好友Eric已成功申請耶魯大學（YaleUniversity），現(xiàn)請你用英文給他寫封電子郵件向他表示祝賀，內容要點包括：1.成功的祝賀；2.努力的肯定；3.未來的祝愿。注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右；2、可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李華，你觀看了英國好朋友Leslie參加的學校演講比賽直播，他的演講“SuccesscomesfromHardWork”獲得了一等獎。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，內容包括：1.表示祝賀。2.評論及贊賞。3.表達祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當添加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是李華，你的堂兄李國強在美國留學，后來去蘋果公司實習，最后婉拒公司的挽留，決定去華為技術有限公司（HuaweiTechnologiesCo.LTD）就職。請你根據(jù)下面提示給他寫封郵件表示祝賀。1.祝賀他學成回國；2.華為在信息與通信技術（ICT）領域的地位；3.你的感想。Dearcousin,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,Lihua4．你校的體育節(jié)剛剛結束。請給學校英語報寫一篇報道，報道體育節(jié)的主要活動、精彩瞬間及意義。注意1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.可以通當增加細節(jié)，使文連貫；3.報道的開頭已為你寫好，不入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:開幕式openingceremony項目item______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是校英語報的記者李華，上周日，你和班里的同學去參觀了杭州科技館，請寫一則新聞報道報道,內容包括以下要點：1.活動內容(至少兩項）；2.簡短評論。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________