應(yīng)用文---博物館默寫鞏固版Para1背景：自我介紹(提及博物館的參觀經(jīng)歷)+目的：購買后書籍發(fā)現(xiàn)英文介紹錯(cuò)誤我是李華，一個(gè)前兩天參觀過你博物館的中國(guó)人。我寫這封信為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你書中介紹你博物館文物的錯(cuò)誤的抱怨。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我寫信提請(qǐng)您注意一個(gè)我在最近參觀您尊敬的博物館時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)的令人痛心的問題。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我寫信表達(dá)我對(duì)在您博物館展出的一些中國(guó)文物的英文描述的關(guān)切。___________________________________________________________________________________________________我寫信表達(dá)對(duì)我購于你博物館的書籍《文物全集》中的不準(zhǔn)確之處的關(guān)切。___________________________________________________________________________________________________我寫這封信是為了提請(qǐng)您注意我在最近參觀您尊敬的博物館時(shí)購買的《AGlimpseintoOurCollection》一書中遇到的一些差異。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2具體問題+影響title這種書法作品翻譯中的差異改變了它原來的詩意含義。___________________________________________________________________________________________________這本書錯(cuò)誤地標(biāo)注了一組宋代陶瓷，這對(duì)于研究中國(guó)藝術(shù)歷史的人來說是一個(gè)重大的錯(cuò)誤。___________________________________________________________________________________________________author標(biāo)在一些文物上的作者與事實(shí)有出入，肯定會(huì)毀了你博物館的聲譽(yù)。___________________________________________________________________________________________________一副明代畫作的描述錯(cuò)誤地將其歸屬于另一個(gè)藝術(shù)家。___________________________________________________________________________________________________date這只玉壺事實(shí)上源自漢代，與書中所說的現(xiàn)代手工藝相反。___________________________________________________________________________________________________這本書錯(cuò)誤地將一只唐代花瓶識(shí)別為明代的。這是一個(gè)明顯的歷史錯(cuò)誤，會(huì)誤導(dǎo)讀者。___________________________________________________________________________________________________這本書弄錯(cuò)了一組宋代瓷器的日期，將其歸因于較晚的時(shí)期。___________________________________________________________________________________________________origin此外，一塊清代玉雕的歷史背景被錯(cuò)誤地呈現(xiàn)，這會(huì)導(dǎo)致對(duì)其文化價(jià)值的誤解。___________________________________________________________________________________________________一副清代繪畫的歷史背景并不完整，遺漏了關(guān)鍵的附注。___________________________________________________________________________________________________content/feature此外，這件被誤認(rèn)為是日本皇室服裝的紫羅蘭色絲綢禮服，實(shí)際上是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的漢服。___________________________________________________________________________________________________唐代花瓶上的銘文被誤譯，改變了其原意和歷史背景。___________________________________________________________________________________________________use/function對(duì)清代瓷瓶的描述（第58頁）錯(cuò)誤地指出它是用來儲(chǔ)存葡萄酒的，事實(shí)上，這種類型的花瓶主要用于裝飾的目的。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________影響誤導(dǎo)游客________________________扭曲文物的重要性_________________________________________不尊重中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)遺產(chǎn)____________________________________________________________逐漸削弱你博物館的信譽(yù)________________________________________________________________________Para3改進(jìn)建議+改進(jìn)的意義好處+表達(dá)期待為了提高展品的真實(shí)性和教育價(jià)值,我友好地建議你們讓中國(guó)歷史文化方面的專家來檢查和糾正這些表述。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我推薦你們和中國(guó)文化專家合作，驗(yàn)證和修改現(xiàn)有描述，確保翻譯的準(zhǔn)確性。___________________________________________________________________________________________________我提議你們爭(zhēng)取漢學(xué)家來檢查并修正現(xiàn)在的翻譯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________讓學(xué)者或?qū)I(yè)人士參與編輯過程可以提高描述的準(zhǔn)確性，并促進(jìn)對(duì)這些有價(jià)值的文物的更好理解.___________________________________________________________________________________________________用準(zhǔn)確的表述更新這本圖書是有好處的，能維護(hù)博物館的學(xué)術(shù)誠(chéng)信聲譽(yù)。___________________________________________________________________________________________________提供數(shù)字資源或在線向?qū)怯袔椭?，這樣能夠?qū)鸬窖a(bǔ)充的作用，并且可以輕松隨著最新研究發(fā)現(xiàn)而更新。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考慮到提供互動(dòng)性的教學(xué)工具，例如可以用二維碼鏈接準(zhǔn)確的歷史描述，來豐富參觀者的理解。___________________________________________________________________________________________________我建議為參觀者提供反饋機(jī)制，讓他們報(bào)告他們?cè)诓┪镳^材料中發(fā)現(xiàn)的任何不準(zhǔn)確之處。___________________________________________________________________________________________________改進(jìn)的意義好處+表達(dá)期待我相信有了這些改進(jìn)措施，你的博物館將會(huì)給來自世界各地的參觀者們提供一個(gè)更加豐富的體驗(yàn)。___________________________________________________________________________________________________我相信這些舉措不僅提高展品的準(zhǔn)確性，而且反應(yīng)出你博物館對(duì)文化真實(shí)性和教育性的承諾。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我相信，通過采取這些措施，博物館可以保持其作為領(lǐng)先文化機(jī)構(gòu)的聲譽(yù)，并為參觀者提供更準(zhǔn)確和豐富的體驗(yàn)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我相信你博物館重視展品的誠(chéng)信和對(duì)參觀者的教育。我期待看到這些改變得到貫徹執(zhí)行，來維護(hù)你們博物館所代表的文化遺產(chǎn)。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文：假定你是李華，在美國(guó)某博物館參觀時(shí)，購買了一本介紹該館所收藏文物的書籍，閱讀后發(fā)現(xiàn)書中對(duì)一些中國(guó)文物artifacts的英文介紹有誤。請(qǐng)你就此向博物館寫一封信，內(nèi)容：1.投訴問題；2.提出建議。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________