純干貨一一驚險類讀后續(xù)寫精彩表達積累+專題提升訓(xùn)練

學習目標：

1.學習積累表達“恐懼”“緊張”情感、氛圍、動作細節(jié)的精彩語句；

2.在驚險類讀后續(xù)寫情境中提升運用相關(guān)的表達能力

本專題包括：

第一部分：輸入一一夯實基礎(chǔ)

（-）“恐懼”情感的精彩描寫

（二）烘托“恐懼”氛圍的環(huán)境描寫

（三）體現(xiàn)“恐懼”的動作描寫

第二部分：操練一一熟能生巧

1.單句操練

2.提升表達----句多譯

第三部分：語篇輸出一一學以致用

步驟：

StepI語料輸入一一夯實基礎(chǔ)

（-）關(guān)于"恐懼""緊張"情感的精彩描寫你掌握多少？

1.英譯漢2.根據(jù)漢語意思默寫英語短語

①beseizedwithpanic________1）不知所措_________

②beseizedbyfear___________2）感到害怕—

(3)behalfdeadwithfear3）從心底感到害怕

④inpanic__________________4）驚慌___________________

⑤interror__________________5）充滿了恐懼_______

⑥fearcreepsoversomebody___6）嚇得半死—

⑦afloodoffearwellsupinsomebody7）害怕地—

⑧ataloss__________________8）恐懼地_________________

（二）烘托“恐懼”氛圍的環(huán)境描寫你會多少？

1.英譯漢2.根據(jù)漢語意思默寫英語短語

①astormynight_______________2)深埋在雪中—

②beburiedinsnow____________3)難以忍受的熱______

③unbearablyhot______________4)夜幕降臨__________________

④Thenightsettledin__________5)暴風舌的正猛______________

⑤Thestormisatitsheight______6)空氣寒冷刺骨______________

⑥Thereisanipintheair________7)一個偏僻的小村子__________

⑦asmallvillageoffthemap______8)人煙稀少的農(nóng)村地區(qū)—

⑧thethinlypopulatedruralarea____

（三）體現(xiàn)“恐懼”的動作描寫你會多少？

1）暴風雨之夜_________________

1.英譯漢2.根據(jù)漢語意思默寫英語短語

①heartbeatviolently______________1)心跳得厲害_______________________

②takeadeepbreath_______________2)深吸一口氣______________________

③comeassomethingofasurprise___3)有點驚訝_________________________

④bechokedbyfear_______________4)嚇得透不過氣來___________________

⑤tremblefromheadtotoe_________5)全身顫抖__________________________

⑥shakewithfear/terror____________6)因害怕/恐懼而發(fā)抖________________

⑦chokewithfear________________7)因為害怕而哽咽___________________

⑧faceturnspale_________________8)臉色變白__________________________

⑨jump/springtoone'sfeet_________9)一躍而起_________________________

⑩struggletoone'sfeet____________10)掙扎著站起來______________________

StepII句子操練

1.單句操練

1）我轉(zhuǎn)向他，眼里充滿了恐懼。

2）我嚇得睜大了眼睛。

3）我的心怦怦跳。

4）我感到恐慌襲來。

5）我雙膝發(fā)抖地走上樓梯。

6.那個聲音使我害怕。

7.我嚇得喘不過氣來。

8.一看見那條蛇，我嚇壞了。

9.突如其來的變故使我不知所措。

10.我渾身發(fā)抖，感到坐立不安。

2.一句多譯一一提升單句表達力

（1）Atthesightofthesnake,thegirlfelt①（她的胸口發(fā)緊）

一看到那條蛇,那個女孩感到②（她的心臟狂跳）

③（她后背一陣寒意）

2）我完全被恐懼控制，寸步難行了。

①,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

②,unabletomoveaninch.

（3）,Icouldhardlymoveaninch.

3）站在懸崖邊上，我害怕極了。

①Standingattheedgeofthecliff,___________________________________________________

②Standingattheedgeofthecliff,___________________________________________________

③Istoodattheedgeofthecliff_____________________________________________________

StepIII語篇輸出

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

（2021?湖北省七市（州）教科研協(xié)作體高三3月聯(lián)考）

Gradyandhisfamilygocampingeverysummer.Asitwasbecominghotter,herecamethe

campingtime.

Havingplannedthecamplong,thefamilyfinallydecidedthedestination-theGreatNational

Forest.Withfood,necessityandcookersloadedontothecar,thefamilysqueezedintothecar.The

cardoorclosed,heatwasshutoutside.

Inthecar,Jared,Grady'syoungerbrotherwasplayingwithatoydinosaur,makinggreatnoise.

Grady'smothertalkedexcitedlywithhisfather.Onsettlinginthecar,Gradyputontheearphone

andturnedonthemusic.Heneitherwantedtojoinhisbrothernorjoinedanytalk.Afterwhat

seemedtobehours,thecarstoppedwheretheyheaded.Gradythrewdownhisbackpackand

slammedthecardoor.

“Thiswillbealengthyweek“hesaidunhappilytonooneinparticular.Helookedaroundthe

campground.Hundredsoftallandgreenfirtrees,someastallaschurchtowers,coveredthe

mountainsidelikeagreencarpet.Thesunwouldbesettingsoon.Gradythoughtmaybetheheat

wouldn'tbeunbearable.Butactuallynowinthemountain,thehotstickinessofJulywasclosely

attachedtohim.

Gradyhatedcamping,butitwassomethinghisfamilystucktoeverysummer.Hisfatherliked

cookingoveranopenair,tellingstoriesabouthowtosurvivethingslikebearattacksandbitesof

bees.HismotherandJaredlikedtohikeandtakepicturesofanimals.Jaredhadacollectionofbug

picturesthathehadpinnedtothewallsinhishalfoftheirroom.Gradythoughttheywerejust

scaryandproofthatJaredwasastrangekid.

Theysetupcamp-twotents,oneforhisparentsandoneforhimselfandJared.Whileeveryone

elsestartedpreparingdinner,Grady,lookingforsomeplacetocooldown,setoffforthenearby

stream,whichwasdeepenoughtoswimin.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。

AsGradygotclosetothestream,anadorablebearcubcaughthiseye..

Turningaround,hesawanangrybearmovingswiftlytowardshim

“四步”搞定讀后續(xù)寫：

1.讀懂材料

2.理清人物事件(6W-who?What?WhenandWhere?How?Why?)

3.根據(jù)已給兩個段首句，確定兩段的續(xù)寫內(nèi)容：

第一段：______________________________________________________________________

第二段：

4.潤色提升，完成故事續(xù)寫，認真善寫到作文本上

純干貨一驚險類讀后續(xù)寫精彩表達積累+專題提升訓(xùn)練答案

StepI語料輸入一一夯實基礎(chǔ)

（-）關(guān)于“恐懼"''緊張'情感的精彩描寫你掌握多少？

1.英譯漢2.根據(jù)漢語意思默寫英語短語

①驚慌失措1)ataloss

②充滿了恐懼2)beseizedbyfear

③嚇得半死3)afloodoffearwellsupinsomebody

④害怕地4)beseizedwithpanic

⑤恐懼地5)fearcreepsoversomebody

⑥感到害怕6)behalfdeadwithfear

⑦從心底感到害怕7)inpanic

⑧不知所措8)interror

（二）烘托“恐懼”氛圍的環(huán)境描寫你會多少?

1.英譯漢2.根據(jù)漢語意思默寫英語短語

①暴風雨之夜1)astormynight

②深埋在雪中2)beburiedinsnow

③難以忍受的熱3)unbearablyhot

④夜幕降臨4)Thenightsettledin

⑤暴風刮的正猛5)Thestormisatitsheight

⑥空氣寒冷刺骨6)Thereisanipintheair

⑦一個偏僻的小村子7)asmallvillageoffthemap

⑧人煙稀少的農(nóng)村地區(qū)8)thethinlypopulatedruralarea

（三）體現(xiàn)“恐懼”的動作描寫你會多少？

1.英譯漢2.根據(jù)漢語意思默寫英語短語

①

心跳得厲害9)jump/springtoone'sfeet

②

深吸一口氣

③10)struggletoone'sfeet

有點驚訝

④

⑤嚇得透不過氣來

⑥全身顫抖

⑦因害怕/恐懼而發(fā)抖

⑧因為害怕而哽咽

⑨臉色變白

⑩一躍而起

掙扎著站起來

1)heartbeatviolently

2)takeadeepbreath

3)comeassomethingofasurprise

4)bechokedbyfear

5)tremblefromheadtotoe

6)shakewithfear/terror

7)chokewithfear

8)faceturnspale

StepII句子操練

1

■單句操練

1\

/!Iturnedtohim,withhiseyesfulloffear.

2\

/!Myeyeswerewidewithhorror.

3\

—

4/Myheartwasbeatinghard.

5Awaveofpanicflooded/sweptoverme.Thesoundthrewmeintoapanic.

)\

6/Iwalkedupthestairswithmykneestrembling.

D\

7/Thesoundthrewmeintoapanic.

-\

/Iwasoutofbreathwithfear.

8\

9—/Iwasfrightenedatthesightofthesnake.

\

—/Theunexpectedandsuddenchangemademeataloss.

10)Ishookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

2.一句多譯一一提升單句表達力

(1)Atthesightofthesnake,thegirlfelt①herchesttightenedwithfear.

②herheartracedwildlyinherchest.

③acoldwentupherback.

2)①Aburstofhorrorseizedmetotally,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.

②Iwastotallyheldbyhorror,unabletomoveaninch.

③Overwhelmed/Heldcompletelybyhorror,Icouldhardlymoveaninch.

3)①Standingattheedgeofthecliff,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomove.

②Standingattheedgeofthecliff」feltbutterfliesinmystomachandmykneesfeltweak.

③Istoodattheedgeofthecliffwithmyheartinthroatandmypalmssweating.

StepIII語篇輸出

學生佳作賞析：

AsGradygot