目錄一、讀后續(xù)寫題型概述.......................................................................................................................P1二、讀后續(xù)寫真題統(tǒng)計......................................................................................................................P2三、讀后續(xù)寫寫作原則......................................................................................................................P2四、讀后續(xù)寫評分標準......................................................................................................................P3五、讀后續(xù)寫人物塑造策略..............................................................................................................P4六、讀后續(xù)寫語言優(yōu)化方法............................................................................................................P14七、讀后續(xù)寫高考真題示例與解析................................................................................................P20一、讀后續(xù)寫題型概述定義：讀后續(xù)寫是一種高考英語題型，分值通常為25分，在新高考地區(qū)的英語作文中占比較大。它要求考生先閱讀一篇350詞左右的短文，然后根據(jù)所給的兩個段首句續(xù)寫文章。續(xù)寫部分一般150詞左右，與原文在情節(jié)、結構和語言風格等方面要連貫。主要考查考生的閱讀理解能力，能把握原文的關鍵信息、情節(jié)發(fā)展脈絡、人物特點等。同時也考察創(chuàng)造性思維，因為考生要合理構思情節(jié)延續(xù)故事。另外，語言表達能力也很重要，續(xù)寫內(nèi)容的語法準確性、詞匯豐富度和句子結構合理性都是考查要點?？疾炷康模洪喿x理解能力：考生需要透徹理解原文的主題、情節(jié)、人物關系和情感等諸多要素，這能反映出他們是否能夠把握文本的關鍵內(nèi)容。邏輯思維能力：要設計出與原文連貫的情節(jié)發(fā)展，包括事件的先后順序、因果關系等。創(chuàng)造性寫作能力：鼓勵考生發(fā)揮想象，在遵循原文風格的基礎上，創(chuàng)造出有意思的情節(jié)和細節(jié)，讓故事生動豐富。語言運用能力：考察考生對詞匯、語法、句型等的掌握程度，要求能夠準確、流暢、多樣地使用語言來表達想法，使續(xù)寫部分和原文的語言風格相匹配。命題專家談讀后續(xù)寫1.高考讀后續(xù)寫以學科素養(yǎng)為導向,突出綜合性和創(chuàng)新性,倡導讀寫融合。2.語篇文體為記敘文,文章結構簡單,時間、地點明確,語言生動,但難度不大。3.段落的開頭語提供了明確的信息。段落的開頭語規(guī)劃了寫作思路和框架,寫作內(nèi)容基本明確。4.話題積極向上,傳播正能量,倡導人與自然的和諧共處。5.方向和努力一樣重要。研透題型特點,明確考查的各項能力,加強針對性訓練。6.變的是語篇,不變的是思路。高考中的文本材料通常為記敘文,要根據(jù)記敘文的要素來理清文本的主要內(nèi)容和故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展脈絡,從而進行合理的續(xù)寫。7.千里之行,始于足下。要想快速提煉出故事梗概,弄清人物特點,理清故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展脈絡,就要加大日常詞匯背誦,大量閱讀記敘文材料,總結歸納其寫作特點。8.整體布局,科學規(guī)劃。讀后續(xù)寫是一個寫作大工程,除了要有厚實的閱讀基礎外,還要對讀后續(xù)寫的思路進行整體布局,并對整個寫作訓練的過程進行科學規(guī)劃。除了加大詞匯量外,還要系統(tǒng)地梳理各種情景描寫、人物刻畫、情節(jié)發(fā)展、故事結局與啟示的高級語句與段落,并在寫作中嘗試使用。只有從大局出發(fā),整篇布局并進行相應的訓練,才能寫出高分佳作。9.走出一條屬于自己的路,享受讀寫的快樂。二輪復習時間短,一篇完整的讀后續(xù)寫用時多,因此在課堂上練習的時間比較有限。但是,讀后續(xù)寫分值較高,這就要求我們有自己的復習計劃和節(jié)奏,合理安排閱讀和寫作的練習。小段的時間可以進行小語段、小情節(jié)的微寫作;大段的時間就可以進行整篇的續(xù)寫,養(yǎng)成提筆能寫、見情景能表達的寫作習慣,走出一條屬于自己的路,享受讀寫的快樂。二、讀后續(xù)寫真題統(tǒng)計20212024年高考讀后續(xù)寫考情統(tǒng)計表（一）年份卷別主題話題類型2024新高考I&II卷人與社會車站履行承諾還錢給出租車司機助人為樂類浙江1月卷人與自我利用腦圖來確定方位找到教學樓個人成長類九省聯(lián)考卷人與自然志愿者訓練意外發(fā)現(xiàn)海豚的秘密人與動物類2023新高考I&II卷人與自我老師鼓勵參加作文比賽終獲大獎個人成長類浙江1月卷人與自然作者兩次與蜂鳥的神奇邂逅感悟人與動物類2022新高考I&II卷人與自我鼓勵身殘志堅男孩參加校越野賽個人成長類浙江6月卷人與社會為社區(qū)無家可歸的人們發(fā)放食物助人為樂類浙江1月卷人與社會與“最不合拍”搭檔終成為好朋友生活故事類2021新高考I&II卷人與社會孩子母親節(jié)給媽媽做早餐送驚喜親情關愛類浙江6月卷人與自我作者上學時一次打工掙錢的經(jīng)歷個人成長類浙江1月卷人與社會少年頭意外卡在南瓜中爆紅網(wǎng)絡生活故事類20212024年高考讀后續(xù)寫考情統(tǒng)計表（二）項目內(nèi)容選材特點1.選材以情節(jié)曲折、線索明晰的記敘文為主。2.主題有一定的背景，材料有趣味性，內(nèi)容能延伸，話題正向且為考生所熟悉，能激發(fā)考生的想象力和續(xù)寫動力。3.材料貼近考生生活，且有助于引導其關注生活,關注自然。命題形式1.閱讀材料篇幅在320詞左右，難度適當，易于理解和模仿。2.試題兼顧引導和限制,所給的段落提示句均是故事情節(jié)發(fā)展的過渡句,對續(xù)寫故事的發(fā)展有提示、銜接、引導和一定程度的限制作用。命題熱點1.閱讀材料以育人、成長、歷險、趣事和自然為主。2.注重考查考生構思文章內(nèi)容及銜接故事情節(jié)的創(chuàng)造性思維。三、讀后續(xù)寫寫作原則與原文協(xié)同：主題一致風格統(tǒng)一情節(jié)連貫寫作要點：一個中心：傳遞正能量弘揚價值觀五大法寶：獨立主格結構簡兩條主線：故事發(fā)展情節(jié)線簡并復交替運用人物動作心理線倒裝句倒出精彩三個不要：不要盲目增加人物無靈主語出奇兵不要突破所給行數(shù)動作鏈烘托氣氛不要忽略段首銜接六大主題：生活故事類四個環(huán)節(jié)：研讀材料畫詞匯個人成長類研讀首句畫導圖助人為樂類細思斟酌慢成文遇困脫險類研讀答案背靚點親情關愛類人與動物類四、讀后續(xù)寫評分標準一、評卷要求1、本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分，每個檔次5分。評分時先根據(jù)作答的具體情況初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來綜合衡量、確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去2分。2、評分時，從故事內(nèi)容，詞匯語法和篇章結構三個方面考慮，具體為：（1）創(chuàng)造內(nèi)容的質(zhì)量，續(xù)寫的完整性以及與原文情境的融洽度。（2）使用詞匯和語法結構的準確性，恰當性和多樣性。（3）上下文的銜接和全文的連貫性。閱卷應整體評分，從主題是否明確、內(nèi)容是否完整、內(nèi)容和原文銜接度高不高、語言是否符合原文風格、語言使用是否正確等方面綜合考慮檔次。先確定檔次，再具體給分。3、續(xù)寫內(nèi)容必須符合故事主線。不符合的一律不及格（15分以下）。抄襲原文或不相干的內(nèi)容達到1/3的（連著抄，間隔著抄都算）、充滿負能量或不道德的內(nèi)容，均判零分。4、閱讀材料的語言：主要以第一人稱敘事為主，因此續(xù)寫部分的語言也應是敘事風格，否則分數(shù)降低一個檔次或扣5分。5、語法：文章時態(tài)為一般過去時。使用時態(tài)錯誤，扣3分。詞匯、語法錯誤：一般大錯扣1分，如出現(xiàn)1個小錯，從總分中減去半分。相同的錯誤不重復扣分。如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。注意事項：續(xù)寫部分應該以第一人稱講述故事，主要用過去時（如果人稱或者時態(tài)用錯，降一檔）；與原材料的語言風格保持一致，否則分數(shù)降低一個檔次。二、評分標準第五檔（21~25分）1.創(chuàng)造了豐富合理的內(nèi)容，富有邏輯性，續(xù)寫完整與原文情境融洽度高。2.使用了多樣并且恰當?shù)脑~匯和語法結構，可能有個別小錯，但完全不影響理解。3.有效地使用了語句間的銜接手段。全文結構清晰，意義連貫。第四檔（16~20分）1.創(chuàng)造了比較豐富合理的內(nèi)容，比較有邏輯性，續(xù)寫比較完整，與原文情境融洽度高。2.使用了比較多樣并且恰當?shù)脑~匯和語法結構?？赡苡行┰S錯誤，但不影響理解。3.比較有效地使用了語句間的銜接手段，全文結構比較清晰，意義比較連貫。第三檔（11~15分）1.創(chuàng)造了基本合理的內(nèi)容，有一定的邏輯性，續(xù)寫基本完整，與原文情境相關。2.使用了簡單的詞匯和語法結構，有一些錯誤或不恰當之處，但基本不影響理解。3.基本有效地使用了語句間銜接手段，全文結構基本清晰，意義基本連貫。第二檔（6~10分）1.內(nèi)容或邏輯上有一些重大問題，續(xù)寫不夠完整，與原文情境有一定程度脫節(jié)。2.所使用的詞匯有限，語法結構單調(diào)，錯誤較多，影響理解。3.未能有效地使用語句間的銜接手段，全文結構不夠清晰，意義不夠連貫。第一檔（1~5分）1.內(nèi)容或邏輯上有較多重大問題，或有部分內(nèi)容抄自原文，續(xù)寫不完整，與原文情境基本脫節(jié)。2.所使用的詞匯有限，語法結構單調(diào)，錯誤很多，嚴重影響理解。3.幾乎沒有使用語句間的銜接手段，全文結構不清晰，意不連貫。零分：未作答，所寫內(nèi)容太少或無法看清，以致無法評判。所寫內(nèi)容全部抄自原文或與題目要求完全不相關。五、讀后續(xù)寫人物塑造策略一、語言描寫必備單詞各種各樣的說第1類：輕聲說Whisper低聲說出（常指耳語、竊竊私語）Murmur/Mutter喃喃自語（多指別人不易聽到的低語）Gossip八卦Moan/plain/grumble抱怨著說Mumble/grunt咕噥fort安慰說第2類：大聲說Cry叫喊Shout呼喊Scream驚嚇地尖叫Yell喊叫著說Roar咆哮Exclaim驚叫第3類：建議說Advise/propose/suggest/offer/remend建議Argue認為Caution/Warn警告第4類：權威說Announce/declare宣布Claim/state聲稱Order命令第5類：問與答Ask/inquire/enquire詢問Reply/answer/respond回答第6類：結巴地說Stammer/stumble結結巴巴地說其他“說”add補充說道=continue繼續(xù)說道retort反駁道explain解釋道state陳述道protest抗議道sob哭訴道agree同意地說promise承諾道assure保證道insist堅持說repeat重復地說gasp氣喘吁吁地說groan呻吟著說高級詞塊withasmile笑著withgreatseriousness特別嚴肅地insurprise驚奇地withsuddenresolution突然堅決地speakwithpassion充滿激情地說inalowtone/voice低聲地inasoft/gentle/mildtone用溫柔的語氣說inasoftvoice以溫柔的口吻inanexcited/angryvoice以興奮/生氣的口吻inawhisper低聲說letoutascreamofhorror發(fā)出恐懼的尖叫withabsolutecertainty斬釘截鐵地utteracryofjoy/grief發(fā)出快樂/悲痛的叫聲句子賞析1.Hearingthis,thetreesmiledwithrelief,adding:“Mydyingtrunkistherightoneforyou.Pleaseehereandhaveaseat.”2.Omar

groanedwithpain

andopenedhiseyes,

“What’sthematter,son?”3.Omarmoistenedhislipsand

shoutedinacrackedvoice,

“Help!Help!I’mdownhere.”4.Shetiptoedintotheroomandwhisperedtome,“IlookedateveryplantandIknowIgotthebestone!”5.“Nobodycouldunderstandme!”Andysobbed,buryinghisfaceinhishands.6.ShegreetedJamesand

inquired,

“Areyoureadyforourfieldtrip?”

Jamesdidn’t

respond.7.Next,heturnedtoMikeand

yelled,“Givemearock!”8.Ayoungmancametothepolicestation,surroundedbyagroupofjournalists,

declaring

thathehadspottedthemurderer.9.

“Hi,Landy.I’msorryaboutthespaghettithing.”Catherinemurmuredanapology,herfacereddening.對話標簽＋語氣（tone）①ina/an+形容詞+tone②inatoneof+名詞1）“YoumustbeAnnie,”hesaidinafriendlytone.“NoIdidn't.”hesaidinalowtone.33）“Idon'twantto.”saidEmilyinatoneofimpatience.4）“Iwouldloveto.”saidEmilyinapleasanttone.對話標簽＋嗓音（voice）ina/an+形容詞+voice“Ididn’tmeanto,”shemurmuredinalowvoice.2）Hecalledoutinaloudvoice.“Idon'tknowwhatyoumean,”saidFraninaquaveringvoice.對話標簽＋介詞短語/副詞介詞短語in:insurprise/shock/sorrow/horror/angerwith:withdelight/excitement/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/patience/certainty副詞firmly/excitedly/seriously/sincerely/slowly/regretfully“We’renotintrouble!”Ishoutedwithjoy.2）“Ihateyou!”shescreamedinanger.3）“Isittrue?”hewhisperedwithastonishment.4）“I'vebeenwaitingforyou,”shesaidwithasmile.5）“Itisn’tfair!”heexclaimedangrily.對話標簽＋伴隨動作1）Thewomaninthecarjumpedout,screaming,“Youidiot!Whydidn'tyoulookwhereyouweregoing?”2）Thefarmerpickedupthedog,kneltdownandsaidinasoftvoice,“It’syoursnow.”3）Withherheaddown/Withtearsinhereyes,shesaid,“Sorry.”4）“Wanttotryoneon?”Isaid,touchingMarina'shand.5）“Look!”Rosepointedoutthewindowandcriedingreatexcitement.在對話標簽中加入語氣，嗓音，情感以及伴隨動作，讓你的描寫更生動傳神。二、動作描寫動作描寫之“動作鏈”：在描寫動作時，要學會細化動作，把動作過程分解成一連串細微的動作（23個動作）形成動作鏈，寫出動作的連貫性，使描寫具有畫面感，使人物更立體。動作的邏輯主語一致時：（動作由同一個人發(fā)出）1）動作三連結構：主語+謂語A,謂語Band謂語C2）非謂語結構：主要動作作謂語，次要動作作非謂語“and”連接多個并列謂語動詞Shewalkedtothecashregisterandpaidthemoney.她走到收銀機前，付了錢。2）Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhats,andgrabbedthecottonone.我匆匆趕回家，翻遍了我收藏的帽子，抓起了那頂棉帽。3）Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”他叫停了出租車，拿著行李箱跳上車，對司機說：“請去警察局。”多個動作同時且主動發(fā)生：主+謂,doingsth.或Doingsth，主＋謂The

old

man

sat

under

the

sunset,

reading

the

newspaper

and

listening

to

the

radio.老人坐在夕陽下，讀報紙，聽收音機。2）Hedoveintothewater,kickinghislegsandstretchinghisarmsasfarashecould.他跳入水中，用腳踢水，盡可能地伸展雙臂。3）Walkingtothedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.走到門口，珍妮深吸了一口氣。多個動作有先后關系：先發(fā)生的動作非謂語用完成時態(tài)：Havingdonesth,主+謂Having

queued

for

3hours,he

was

told

that

the

ticket

had

been

sold

out.Havingdonehishomework,Tomwentouttoplayfootball.Havingdonetheexperimentsuccessfully,thescientistswereveryexcited.次要動作與主語為被動關系：Donesth,主+謂Deeply

moved

by

the

story,

the

children

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cry.Surprisedbythebeautifulscenery,westoppedtotakepictures.Inspiredbythelocalculture，shedecidedtostaylongerandlearnmoreaboutit.獨立主格結構（動作由不同主語發(fā)出時）：主語1+非謂語(次要動作），主語2+謂語(主要動作)動作描寫之“動動頭”高級詞塊1.shakeone'shead搖頭2.nodone'shead點頭3.drop/lower/bend/bow/hangone'shead低頭4.headfor/towards朝……走去5.lift/raiseone'shead抬頭6.turn/twistone'shead轉(zhuǎn)頭7.buryone'sheadinone'shands手捂著臉8.stickone'sheadout探頭9.restone'sheadonhands以手托頭10.clutchone'shead（痛苦地)以手抓頭11.clearone'shead清醒頭腦12.patone'shead拍一拍頭13.scratchone'shead撓了撓頭句子賞析1.Shehungherhead,notsurehowtoreply.她垂下頭，不知該如何回答。2.Theynoddedtheirheadsinagreement.他們點頭同意。3."That'sincredible!"hesaid,shakinghisheadindisbelief.“簡直難以置信！”他一邊說，一邊不相信地搖著頭。4.Hescratchedhishead,notunderstandingaword.他撓了撓頭，一個字也不懂。5.Sheburiedherheadinthepillow.她用枕頭捂住腦袋。6.Hepattedmyheadaffectionately.他慈愛地拍了拍我的頭。7.Idecidedtogoforawalktoclearmyhead.我決定出去走走，清醒下頭腦。8.Sheliftedherheadtogazeathim.她抬頭注視著他。9.Heheldhisheadinhishands,greatlyannoyed.他雙手抱頭，苦惱不已。高級詞塊1.gazeat凝視2.stareat凝視3.watch/observe/spot/notice看到4.glareatsb怒視著…5.peekatsb偷看…6.glance/glimpseatsb看了…一眼7.catch/losesightof看見/看不見8.atthesightof一看見9.fix/focusone'seyeson盯著10.lower/dropone'seyes垂下眼睛11.raise/liftone'seyes抬起眼睛12.keepaneyeon注視13.looksb.straightintheeye直視某人的眼睛14.eyesfallon目光落在15.exchangeaglance交換眼色16.shutone'seyes閉上眼睛17.castalookatsb朝…看了一眼18.castarapidglancearound迅速一瞥四周19.stareatsbupanddown上下打量某人句子賞析1.Shestaredathimindisbelief,shakingherhead.她搖著頭，狐疑地看著他。2.Whenhefinished,heraised/liftedhiseyesandlookedoutthewindow.說罷，他抬起眼睛并望向窗外。3.Weallgatheredinfrontofthetelevision,hopingtocatchaglance/glimpseofhisface.我們都聚在電視機前，希望能看一眼他的臉。4.Myfatherlookedatmestraightintheeyeandholdfasttomyhands.我父親直勾勾地盯著我的眼睛并且牢牢抓住我的雙手。5.Welostsightoftheboatinthefog.由于大霧我們看不見那條船了。6.Thestudentwhohadjustbeenreprimandedbytheteacherglaredathisteacher.那位剛剛被老師訓斥的學生狠狠瞪著他的老師。7.Abigleafytreecameintoviewatsomedistance.遠處有一棵枝繁葉茂的大樹映入眼簾。8.Withhereyesgluedtothephone,itwasnotuntiltheteacherpattedonhershoulderthatsherealizedteacherstoodinfrontofher.她一直盯著，直到老師拍了拍他的肩膀她才意識到老師正站在他面前。9.Whenthestudentssteppedoffthebus,James’seyeswidenedinsurprise.當學生們走下公共汽車時，詹姆斯驚訝地瞪大了眼睛。10.Hereyesfellonthephotosofherandmeatmyfourthbirthdayparty.她的目光落在我和她四歲生日聚會上的照片上。動作描寫之“動動手”動作描寫之“動動眼”動作描寫之“動動手”動作描寫之“動動眼”必背單詞carry提,拿fetch拿來,取回hold握著catch接hug/embrace抱wave揮throw

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cast扔hand遞給point（at）指，指向dig挖，挖掘drag/pull拖，拉，拽push推，擠fold包，裹，折疊hit/beat擊，打knock敲clap/applaud/applause鼓掌lift/raise舉press按，壓scratch擦b梳，梳理slap拍，打；掌摑touch碰，觸摸wipe擦，拭tear撕open打開rub擦；揉搓pat拍reachout/for/into伸出/向/進grasp/seize/grip/grab抓住，抓緊高級詞塊holdone'shand抓住某人的手shakehandswith與…握手handinhand手拉手raise/putupone'shand舉手holdoutone'shand伸出手takeone'shand牽某人的手rubone'shands搓著手waveone'sarms揮動雙臂foldone'sarms某人雙臂交叉catch/grabone'sarm抓住某人的胳膊gathersb.inone'sarms把某人抱在懷中withcrossedarms雙臂交叉arminarm臂挽臂lift/holdawarningfinger伸出一根手指警告pointanaccusingfingeratsb指責某人,怪罪某人句子賞析Thestudentraisedhishandhigh,eagertoanswertheteacher'squestion.學生高高地舉起手，急于回答老師的問題。Heshookhandsfirmlywithhisopponentafterthegame,showingrespect.賽后，他與對手堅定地握手，表示敬意。3.Shesmiledandheldout/reachedoutahandinwele.她微笑著伸出手來。4.Heslidhishandsintohispocketsandpulloutsomechange.他把手伸進口袋，掏出一些零錢。5.WhenIgottothecafe,IwasseeingBobwavinghisarmstowardsme.當我到咖啡館時，正看到鮑勃在向我打招呼6.Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintoherarms.說不出話來，她燦爛地笑著，把兒子抱在懷里。7.Jackstoodsilentlywithhisarmsfolded/crossed.杰克雙手交叉，一聲不吭地站著。8.Hefoldedhishandsbehindhisback,strollingleisurelyinthepark.他雙手交叉放在背后，在公園里悠閑地散步。9.Shegraspedtheropetightlyandstartedtoclimbupthetreehouse.她緊緊地抓住繩子，開始爬上樹屋。必備單詞walk走run跑crawl爬行creep匍匐爬行scramble攀登climb攀登march行走，快步走sneak偷偷地走jump跳tread踩,踏stagger/stumble蹣跚limp跛行tiptoe用腳尖走pace來回踱步wander漫步；閑逛leap/skip/spring跳躍slip溜走,滑倒hop單腳跳dash猛沖；急奔chase追逐race快速奔跑rush急速行進gallop飛奔charge猛沖thunder轟隆隆地快速移動step邁步；踩，踏kick踢flee逃走高級詞塊makeone'swayto前往=headtofeelone'sway摸索著前進windone'sway蜿蜒前行rise/gettoone'sfeet站起來jump/leaptoone'sfeet跳起來dragone'sfeet拖著腳步tap/stampone'sfeet跺腳shaky/tremblinglegs顫抖的雙腿crossone'slegs盤腿dragone'sheavylegs拖著沉重的雙腿句子賞析1.Hesprangtohisfeetandrushedtogivemeabearhug.他突然跳起來，沖過來給了我一個熊抱。2.Hewaiteduntilhisdaughterwasasleep,thentiptoedquietlyoutoftheroom.他等女兒睡著后才躡手躡腳地悄悄走出房間。3.Theburglarsneakedintothekitchenandstoleadozeneggs.竊賊潛入廚房并偷走了一打雞蛋。4.Hestruggledtoruntowardsthefinishingline,withhismouthdryandhislegstrembling.他繼續(xù)努力向終點跑去,他嘴巴干澀,雙腿顫抖。5.ThenhereyeswidenedinsurpriseasshesawHelenrisetohisfeet.當她看到海倫站起來時，驚訝地睜大了眼睛。6.Wewerestumblingaroundinthedarklookingforacandle.我在黑暗中跌跌撞撞，四處尋找蠟燭。7.Shejumpedtoherfeetwhensheheardthisamazingnews.當她聽到這個驚人的消息，她突然跳起來。8.Whenthemotherchattinghappilywithhercustomer,herdaughterisstamping/tappingherfeetimpatientlytoimplyit’stimetogo.當母親高興地和顧客聊天時，她的女兒不耐煩地跺腳，暗示該走了。9.Shedraggedherfeetasshereluctantlyfollowedherparents.她緩慢地移動著她的腳步，因為她不情愿地跟著她父母。動作描寫之“動動腳”動作描寫之“動動腳”必備單詞adj.happy,glad,pleased,delighted,cheerful,overjoyed,lighthearted,enjoyable,pleasantadv.happily,merrily,gladly,joyfully,cheerfullyn.pleasure,delight,enjoyment,joy,happiness高級詞塊toone'sdelight/joy/entertainment令某人開心的是beseizedbyjoy/beoverewithhappiness非常高興bewildwithjoy/delight欣喜若狂inagoodmood心情很好incheerful/highspirits心情愉快bedelightedat對...很高興bejoyfulover/about因...而高興onthetopoftheworld心滿意足brightenone'sheart使某人心情愉快beassweetashoney像蜜一樣甜grinfromeartoear滿面笑容inseventhheaven極為高興beamwithpleasure喜不自勝句子賞析Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣激動聲穿過他們。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里縈繞。Awidegrinspreadacrosshisfacelikesunshinebreakingthroughclouds,eyestwinklingwithdelightashereadtheacceptanceletter.他臉上綻放出燦爛的笑容，就像陽光穿透云層一樣，當他讀到錄取通知書時，眼睛里閃爍著喜悅的光芒。Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。Hestoodbythedoor,withjoybeamingfromhiseyes.他站在門邊，眼睛里放出喜悅的光彩。7.Hereyessparkledlikediamonds,abroadsmilestretchingfromeartoearwhenshesawherlonglostpetagain.8.Sheshedtearsofjoy.她高興得流下了眼淚。9.Theteammembershuggedtightly,jumpingupanddown,theirfaceslitupwithunbridledjoyafterthevictory.隊員們緊緊地擁抱在一起，跳上跳下，臉上洋溢著勝利的喜悅。情緒情緒描寫之“喜樂”情緒描寫之“激動”必備情緒描寫之“激動”單詞形容詞：excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling副詞：excitedly名詞：excitement,thrill動詞：excite，thrill高級詞塊toone'sexcitement/thrill令某人激動的是with/inexcitement激動地flushwithexcitement激動得滿臉通紅containone'sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動conceal/hideone'sexcitement難掩激動aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮ascreamofthrill/excitement激動的尖叫聲cheerup振奮起來句子賞析☆Theboystopped,hisheartthumpingwithexcitementandanticipation.男孩停住了腳步,他的心怦怦直跳,充滿了興奮和期待?！頗erfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)?！預rippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們?！預shiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個消息,一陣激動的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里?！頗erflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動而發(fā)亮?！頓adsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒?！頗isfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動而放出光彩?！頤nabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement，hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,dearmum.”不能抑制住他的高興和激動，他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道：媽媽，辛苦了。☆Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵溫暖著他的心,他感到一陣興奮?！頦henthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.當主持人宣布她獲獎時,她興奮得不能自已。情緒描寫之“悲傷”情緒描寫之“悲傷”必備單詞sadadj.難過的sadlyadv.悲痛地sadnessn.悲哀sadden

v.悲痛heartbrokenadj.極其傷心的brokenheartedadj.心碎的；傷心的sorrowfuladj.悲傷的sorrow

n.悲傷；傷心事distressingadj.使痛苦的；悲傷的blueadj.憂郁的，悲觀的miserableadj.悲慘的；痛苦的gloomy

adj.陰郁的;憂郁的gloomn.憂郁painn.痛苦painfuladj.痛苦的painfullyadv.痛苦地griefn.悲傷，悲痛grievev.悲傷，悲痛高級詞塊be/feelsad很難過feelblue情緒低落agloomyfeeling一種悲傷的情緒breakone'sheart傷心絕望inpain處于痛苦之中havetearsinone'seyes眼里含著淚水beclosetotears/beonthevergeoftears快要哭了havealumpinone'sthroat(因感動、悲傷而)哽咽，喉嚨哽住tearsroll/rundownone'scheeks淚水順著臉頰淌下來asense/waveofloneliness/sadness一陣孤獨/悲傷benumbwithsorrow/sadness難過得麻木beintears含淚，淚流滿面burstintotears放聲大哭，突然哭起來sob/weepwithone'sfacehiddeninone'shands掩面啜泣cryone'sheart/eyesout悲痛欲絕bedown/lowinspirits情緒低落inasorrowfultone/voice傷心地說beoverewithsorrow悲傷不已withaheavy/sinking/sorrowful/brokenheart懷著沉重/沮喪/難過的心withasinkingheart心情沉重sadnessesinwaves悲傷如潮涌anoceanofsadness悲傷的海洋句子賞析1.Iwasseizedwithsadness.我傷心欲絕。2.Aflashofgriefcameuponme.一陣悲傷襲身而來。3.Tearsrolleddownhercheeks.淚水從他的臉頰滑落。4.Charleswasoverewithgrief.Charles悲痛欲絕。5.Helookedmournful,evenneartotears.他看起來很悲傷，幾乎要流淚了。6.IfeltlikeIwerefloatinginanoceanofsadness,andwordscouldnotexpressmysorrow.我感覺正漂浮在悲傷的海洋里。言語無法表達我的哀傷。7.Janeturnedtomewithtearsinhereyes,andbeggedmetohelpher.Jane眼里含著淚水打轉(zhuǎn)，懇求我?guī)蛶退?.Herheartached.Shewasseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcrying/sobbingbitterly.她心好痛,她悲傷得忍不住哭泣。9.Henaggedandplained,andreducedLouisetotears.他嘮嘮叨叨，不停地抱怨，使Louise不禁流淚。10.Heshookhisheadmiserably/sadly,tearspouring/running/streaming/rollingdownhischeeks/face他難過地搖搖頭,潸然淚下。必備單詞動詞:fear害怕frighten害怕frown皺眉shake/tremble顫抖scare驚嚇、害怕horrify使感到恐怖名詞:panic驚恐dread恐懼fright害怕terror/horror恐怖concern擔心fear恐懼、擔心形容詞:pale蒼白的terrible可怕的；糟糕的horrifying令人恐懼的scared害怕的scary使人驚慌的horrible使人恐懼的panicked驚恐的afraid害怕的；擔心的alarmed驚恐的；憂慮的alarming使人驚恐的frightened害怕的；受驚的frightening令人恐懼的fearful恐懼的terrified害怕的terrifying令人害怕的panicstriken被驚恐襲擊的terrorstriken被恐懼襲擊的openmouthed張大嘴的frozen僵住的sweaty出汗的speechless無語的高級詞塊bestruckwithfear被恐懼擊中shake/tremblewithfear/terror嚇得發(fā)抖scare/frighten...todeath把……嚇死freeze/befrozenwithfear嚇呆/嚇傻standrootedtothespotwithfear嚇得呆若木雞beseizedwithpanic驚慌失措inpanic/terror害怕地、恐懼地fearcreepsoversb.感到害怕afloodoffearwellsupinsb.從心底感到害怕tremblefromheadtotoe全身顫抖faceturnspale臉色變白heartbeatviolently心跳得厲害句子賞析Afloodoffearwelledupinhim.他心中涌起一陣恐懼。2）Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中充滿恐懼。3）Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐懼慢慢地蔓延到她身上。4）Hewassofrightenedthathiskneesknockedtogether.他嚇得兩膝直哆嗦。5）Herhandswereshakingwithfear.她嚇得雙手顫抖。6）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.當看到那只兇惡的狼時,我嚇呆了,不敢動彈。7）Iwasseized/overwhelmedbyasenseofhorror.Itrembledalloverandmypalmsweresweating.我害怕極了，渾身發(fā)抖，手心都出汗了。8）Mylegswereshakingandmyheartwaspoundingrapidly.我的腿在顫抖，心在砰砰跳。9）Aburstofhorrorheldmetotallyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch.恐懼噴薄而出，將我緊緊包圍，我已經(jīng)寸步難行了。10）Ifeltthatthebloodinmybodycooled/frozerapidlybecauseoftheterriblesight.看到這可怕的景象,我感覺我的血液都凝固起來。情緒描寫之“憤怒”情緒描寫之“害怕”情緒描寫之“憤怒”情緒描寫之“害怕”必備單詞常見名詞:anger,rage,fury,annoyance,irritation,wrath,indignation常見形容詞/副詞:angry,furious,annoyed,mad,annoying,indignant,angrily 常見動詞:glare怒目而視roar/storm怒吼rage發(fā)怒，怒斥annoy使惱怒irritate使發(fā)怒高級詞塊flyintoafury勃然大怒tremblewithanger氣得發(fā)抖aburstofanger一股怒火flushwithanger氣紅了臉getmad/crossatsb.生某人的氣toone'sannoyance令某人生氣的是inanger憤怒地explodewithanger勃然大怒burstintoanger/annoyance勃然大怒resist/containone'sanger抑制怒火fuelone'sanger使某人更加憤怒stampone'sfeetinanger生氣地跺腳loseone'stemper發(fā)脾氣makesb’sbloodboil使某人憤怒betonguetiedwithanger氣得說不出話來handstremblingwithanger氣得手發(fā)抖beredcheekedwithanger氣得臉通紅stampone'sfootinanger某人氣得直跺腳beseized/overe/swallowedbyanger非常生氣beoverwhelmedbyanger/annoyance非常生氣feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury)感到―陣憤怒句子賞析☆Andthenthefierce,buriedangersurgedupintohisthroat.然后,埋藏在心頭的滿腔怒火直沖到他的喉嚨里來?！頢hecouldfeeltheangergrowing,bubblingupinsideher.她能感到她內(nèi)心的憤怒就像氣泡一樣慢慢變大。☆Angerengulfedhimlikeawildbeast.怒火如同野獸一般將他吞沒?！頕illedwithfury,Jimwasunabletoutterasingleword.Jim滿腔憤怒，一句話也說不出來?！頗elookedasifheweregoingtoburst.他看上去快要氣炸了?！預flushofangerspreadacrossMr.Murdstone'scheeks.一抹憤怒的紅暈掠過摩德斯通先生的面頰?！頗etrembledwithangerfromheadtofoot.他氣得渾身發(fā)抖?！頑oilingwithrage,Jimshookhisfistatme.Jim怒火中燒，朝我揮舞著拳頭。必備單詞常見名詞/動詞 shock,astonishment,astonish,surprise,amazement,amaze常見形容詞/副詞:astonished,amazed,surprised,shocked,stunned,startled,astonishing,amazing,surprising,shocking,surprisingly,amazingly其他形容詞：thunderstruck極其驚訝的astounding令人驚駭?shù)膕taggering令人大吃一驚的speechless（因驚愕)一時語塞的incredible難以置信的dumbfounded目瞪口呆的高級詞塊toone'sshock/astonishment/surprise/amazement令某人震驚/吃驚/驚訝的是inastonishment/surprise/shock/amazement/disbelief吃驚地/震驚地/驚訝地besurprised/amazed/astonished/shockedat/by...對感到驚訝itamazes/astonishesmethat...令我驚訝的是……Whatamazes/astonishesmemostisthat...最讓我吃驚的是…easashocktosb.…讓某人很震驚beyondone'sexpectations出乎意料raisetheeyebrows/frowninsurprise驚訝的皺眉widentheeyes/eyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment吃驚地睜大了眼睛freeze/standstill/stopdead/benumbwithshock驚得當場呆住了beshockedbeyondwords驚訝地說不出話來speechlesswithshock驚得說不出話來句子賞析☆Alookofsurprisespreadoverherface.驚愕的表情在她的臉上蔓延開來?！頢peechlesswithshock,weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasasixyearoldboy.我們靠近，發(fā)現(xiàn)車主是一個六歲男孩，目瞪口呆?！頗ewastoosurprisedtospeakoreventothink.他驚訝得說不出話來，甚至腦子都不靈了"☆MyjawdroppedinastonishmentwhenIsawthesizeoftheaudience.當我看到這么多觀眾時，我驚訝得目瞪口呆?！頗ejustgluedhiseyestome,utterlydumbfounded.他只是兩眼盯著我，完全傻掉了?！頗earingtheunexpectednews,Marywasnumbwithshock,asifrootedtotheground.聽到這個意外的消息，Mary呆住了，動彈不得?！頣hemomentIopenedthebox,myeyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment.我一打開盒子，就驚奇地睜大眼睛。情緒描寫之“緊張”情緒描寫之“情緒描寫之“緊張”情緒描寫之“驚訝”必備單詞形容詞:nervous緊張的；uneasy不安的；tense緊張的；anxious焦慮的；restless不安的名詞:nervousness,unease,tension,anxiety,restlessness高級詞塊takeadeepbreath深呼吸holdone'sbreath屏住呼吸pacebackandforth來回踱步heartsink心頭一沉onpinsandneedles如坐針氈aflood/waveoftension一陣緊張tremblewithanxiety焦慮不安losesleepoversth.為某事?lián)鷳nputsomebodyonedge讓某人感到緊張不安have/withbutterfliesinone'sstomach/one'sstomachbefullofbutterflies心里發(fā)慌hide/conceal/holdbackone'snervousness/anxiety掩飾緊張／焦慮withone'sheartinone'smouth提心吊膽地withuneasiness不安地=restlessanduneasy（形容詞做狀語）beburdened/beconsumed/seizedwithanxiety焦慮不安pound/beat/race/thump/hammerwildly/violently/loudly/hard/心怦怦直跳得厲害shiver/quiver/tremble/shakewithnervousness緊張得發(fā)抖murmurinatremblingvoice用顫抖的聲音小聲喃喃stammer/stutterunderone'sbreath結結巴巴地小聲說句子賞析Mylipsquivered,bigtearsrollingdowncheeks.我的嘴唇顫抖著，眼淚順著臉頰滾落。Hewaspacingnervouslyupanddowntheroom.他緊張地在房間里踱來踱去。Fullofanxiety，Ifeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles.我焦慮不安，坐立不安。Shecouldn’tfallasleep,tossingandturninginbedforawholenight.她在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側了一整夜無法入睡。SoanxiousdidIfeelthatmyheartalmostjumpedoutofmythroat.我太著急了，以至于我的心都快跳出來了。Whilewaiting,hisheartbeatwildlyandhispalmsweresweaty.等待的時候，他的心跳得很厲害，手心出汗。Myheartbegantoraceandmymindwentblank.我的心跳加速，頭腦一片空白。Herheartbeatwildlyandherlegstrembled.她的心劇烈跳動，腿打著顫。Hisfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretonguetied.他的臉色蒼白，站在那里說不出話。WhenIfinallywentonthestage,myheartwasinmymouth.當我終于走上舞臺時，我的心都提到嗓子眼兒了。情緒描寫之“羞愧”情緒描寫之“羞愧”情緒描寫之“羞愧”必備情緒描寫之“羞愧”情緒描寫之“羞愧”情緒描寫之“羞愧”單詞形容詞 embarrassed,awkward,ashamed,embarrassing,shameful名詞/動詞embarrassment,awkwardness,shame,embarrass高級詞塊in/withembarrassment尷尬地with/inshame羞愧地hideone'sembarrassment掩飾某人的尷尬blushwithembarrassment難為情得臉紅beincreasinglyembarrassed/awkwardabout...感到越來越尷尬one'sfaceflushed/burned/blushedwithembarrassment/shame因?qū)擂味鴿M臉通紅feelbloodrush/rushingtoone'sface感到臉陣陣發(fā)燙feellikesittingonpinsandneedles如坐針氈droopdown/duckdown/lowerdownone'sheadwithembarrassment/shame尷尬/羞愧地低下了頭Sbbeoverwhelmed/overe/seized/burdened/consumed/wildwithshame羞愧極了句子賞析Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.她感到非常羞愧，都能覺得血液涌上臉頰。Anexpressionofshamecrossedhisface.他臉上掠過一陣羞赧的神情?！癙leasedon'ttellmydadaboutthis”hesaid,blushingwithshame.“這件事請不要告訴我爸爸”，他不好意思地紅著臉說道。Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.她感到羞愧難當，臉上滾燙。Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears/shewasonthevergeoftears.她羞愧到快哭了。Standingintheclassroom,Ibecameincreasinglyembarrassedandcouldfeelmyheartthumpingwildly,myfaceburningbadly.站在教室，我越來越尷尬，能聽見自己心跳加速的聲音，臉燒厲害。Hisfaceflushed/burnedwithembarrassment/shame.他因?qū)擂味鴿M臉通紅。/他窘得臉都紅了。Hehung/dropped/loweredhisheadinshame.他羞愧地低下了頭。Tomyshame,Ineverdidhelpthem.我感到慚愧的是,我從來沒有幫助過他們Withmyfaceburning,Idon’tknowwheretostart.臉火辣辣地發(fā)燒，我不知道該從何說起。Soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereclumsily,feelingthebloodrushingtoherface.她到很尷尬，笨拙地站在那里，感到血涌到了臉上。情緒描寫之“感動”情緒描寫之“感動”必背單詞名詞/動詞：gratitude感激appreciation感激warmth溫暖thank感激appreciate感激move感動touch感動形容詞/副詞：grateful/gratefully感激的/感激地thankful;thankfully;感謝的/感謝地moving;moved令人感動的/被感動的touching;touched令人感動的/被感動的deeply深深地profoundly深遠地高級詞塊shedtearsofgratitude流下感激的淚水bemovedtotears感動得落淚haveadeepgratitudetowards對……深懷感激withgratitude/appreciation感激地bedeeplymoved/touchedby...被…深深感動betouchedbeyondwords被感動得說不出話來meltone'sheart融化某人的心appreciatesbforsth因某事感激某人thanksbfromthebottomofone'sheart從心底感謝某人can’tthanksbmore/enoughfordoingsth對某人做了某事感激不盡beoverwhelmedwithexcitementandgratitude感激萬分awarmcurrentriseinone'sheart一股暖流涌上心頭expressone'sthanks/gratitude/appreciationto表達......的感激句子賞析Touchedimmensely,wefailedtoutterasingleword,tearsblurringoureyes.感動無比，我們一句話也說不出來，淚水模糊了雙眼。Albertwastouchedbythewarmthoftheirwele.阿爾伯特被他們的熱烈歡迎而感動。Deeplymoved,Ithankedhimagai