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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文Itwasacold,sunnyDecemberdaywhenIsetoutforaruninMoab,Utah,withmydogTaz.Ioftenwentfortrainingrunsbymyselfandhaddonethisparticularroutebefore.Aboutanhourintomyrunalongaremotecanyon(峽谷)trail,Ihitapatchofblackiceandthenfell60feetintothecanyon,landingonaledge(巖脊)aboveasheer(陡峭的)drop.Iwasn’tparalyzed,butIwasingreatpain.Tazhadmanagedtofindhiswaybacktome,sotheremustbeawayoutofthecanyon,butIcouldn’tstandorevencrawl.Ishoutedforhelpandwasintentondraggingmyselftothebottomofthecanyon.Everyinchwasaneffort.Ittookmefivehourstogoaquarterofamile.Eventually,itgotsodarkthatIhadtostaywhereIwasforthenight,nexttoapuddleofwater,Atnightthetemperaturedroppedbelowfreezing.Tazstayedwithme,providingsomewarmth.Thenextmorning,Icouldn’tmoveatall.triedtostaypositive.Iwassuresomebodywouldhearmescreamingforhelp.Thesecondnightinthecanyonseemedevenlongerandcolder.Thepuddleturnedtoice,andIhadtocrackthroughittogetwater.Onthethirdday,Ifeltmyselfgrowingweaker,IwasingtotermswiththefactthatImightdie.Inalastditcheffort,IcalledTazoverandtoldhimtogoandgethelp.TaztookoffthroughthecanyonandIlaytherethinkingaboutmyfamilyandfriends.Therewasmorethatwantedfromlife.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Tazreturned,alone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:“我”在猶他州莫阿布的峽谷跑步時,因踩到黑冰墜入峽谷,落在巖脊上受傷無法行動?!拔摇痹噲D自救但進(jìn)展艱難,在峽谷度過寒冷的兩晚后,讓狗Taz去尋求幫助,此時“我”身體已極度虛弱并開始接受可能死亡的現(xiàn)實(shí)。伏筆與回應(yīng):伏筆:Taz之前能找到回“我”身邊的路,暗示它可能有能力出去求救。回應(yīng):Taz確實(shí)獨(dú)自離開去嘗試尋找救援,但未成功帶回救援人員。伏筆:“我”確定有人會聽到求救聲,與后文長時間無人救援形成對比,突出困境?;貞?yīng):多日無人前來救援,“我”陷入絕望。伏筆:“我”在峽谷的艱難處境,如受傷無法行動、寒冷、缺水等,為后文身體極度虛弱及對死亡的恐懼做鋪墊?;貞?yīng):第三天“我”已非常虛弱并做好死亡準(zhǔn)備。伏筆:讓Taz去求救,為后文它回來以及最終救援到來埋下伏筆?;貞?yīng):Taz回來雖未帶回救援,但它的出現(xiàn)給了“我”希望,最終救援人員也因它而找到“我”。伏筆:提到“我”對家庭和朋友的思念以及對生活還有更多期待,為后文劫后余生的感悟做準(zhǔn)備?;貞?yīng):經(jīng)歷此事后“我”更加珍惜生命與身邊人。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):情感線:從Taz獨(dú)自回來時的失望與絕望,到獲救出院后的感恩與珍惜,情感經(jīng)歷巨大轉(zhuǎn)變并得到升華。故事線:Taz獨(dú)自返回,“我”陷入絕望;后來被救援人員救起送往醫(yī)院,出院后經(jīng)歷三個月輪椅生活,在此期間對生命有了新感悟并感恩所有。主旨升華句:“Inthefaceofadversity,hopeisthelightthatneverextinguishes.”(在逆境面前,希望是永不熄滅的光。)“Eveninthedarkesthour,thebondwithaloyalfriendcanbeasourceofstrength.”(即使在最黑暗的時刻,與忠誠朋友的紐帶也能成為力量的源泉。)“Survivinganeardeathexperiencemakesonecherisheverypreciousmomentoflife.”(經(jīng)歷瀕死體驗(yàn)讓人珍惜生命的每一個珍貴瞬間。)“Adversityrevealstheresiliencewithinusandthevalueoflife'sblessings.”(逆境揭示了我們內(nèi)心的韌性以及生命恩賜的價值。)“Whenlifepushesustotheedge,itistheloveandhopethatpullusback.”(當(dāng)生活把我們逼到絕境時,是愛與希望將我們拉回。)寫作示范一:
Tazreturned,alone.MyheartsankasIrealizedhehadn'tfoundanyone.Ifeltawaveofdespairwashoverme.ButTazdidn'tgiveup.Hestayedbymyside,lickingmyfaceasiftoencourageme.Hourslater,Iheardfaintvoices.Tazstartedbarkingfrantically.RescuershadfollowedTaz'stracksandfinallyfoundme.
Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Duringthattime,Ireflectedonmyexperience.IwasgratefultobealiveandtohaveTaz.IrealizedhowpreciouslifeisandhowmuchIhadtakenforgranted.Imadeavowtocherisheverymomentwithmylovedonesandtonevergiveuphope,nomatterhowtoughthesituation.寫作示范二:
Tazreturned,alone.Disappointmenthitmehard.Ithoughtthiswastheend.ButTaz'spresencestillgavemeaglimmerofhope.Hesnuggleduptome,andIheldontohimtightly.Then,miraculously,ahelicopterappearedinthesky.ItturnedoutthatTaz'sbarkinghadalertedsomehikersinthedistance,whocalledforhelp.
Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Iusedthistimetohealbothphysicallyandmentally.Ilearnedthateveninthemostdirecircumstances,thereisalwaysachance.Ibecamemoreappreciativeofthesimplethingsinlifeandtheloyaltyofmyfurryfriend.Thisexperiencetrulytaughtmethevalueofperseveranceandthebeautyoflife.參考答案Tazreturned,alone.Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Thephysicaltherapywastough,butIwasdrivenbythememoryofTaz’sunwaveringloyaltyandmyowndesiretolive.Mylegsslowlyregainedstrength,andIlearnedtowalkagain.Tazwasalwaysbymyside,cheeringmeonwithhiswaggingtailandlovingeyes.Ourbondhaddeepenedthroughadversity,andIowedmylifetohim.Fromthatdayon,Icherishedeverymoment,knowingthatlifewaspreciousandthatlovehadthepowertoconquereventhedarkestvalleys.Afterleavingthehospital,Iwasinawheelchairforthreemonths.Itwasalongandarduousrecovery,butitalsogavemeampletimetothink.Irealizedhowfragilelifeisandhowasinglemisstepcanchangeeverything.Iwasnolongertakingmydailylifeforgranted.Istartedtoreachoutmoretomyfamilyandfriends,expressingmyloveandgratitude.Ialsobec
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