研讀近十年高考英語滿分書面表達聚焦2023高考Part1應用文寫作文（十三）1．（2013·陜西卷）假定你是李華。請根據(jù)寫作要點用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務的一次經歷。寫作要點：1.做家務的理由；2.做家務的過程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文詞數(shù)不少于100；2.開頭部分已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。Iaman18-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iaman18-yearoldmiddleschoolstudent.Ihavebeenbusywithmystudyandseldomhelpedmyparentswiththehousework.Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshopping,Isuddenlygotanidea:whynotgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning?FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.Atthisverymoment,myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprisedtoseealltheroomstidyandfloorsshining.MymothergavemeahugandIcouldseesatisfactioninhereyes.TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生根據(jù)寫作要點用英語寫一篇周記，記述你周末幫助家人做家務的一次經歷。【詳解】1.詞匯積累很少：seldom→rarely開始：begin→start徹底的：thorough→complete驚訝的：surprised→astonished2.句式拓展句式轉換原句：TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.拓展句：ThoughIwastired,Ineverfeltsohappy.【點睛】[高分句型1]Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）[高分句型2]TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.（運用了部分倒裝結構）2．（2013·江西卷）星光中學（XingguangHighSchool）近期舉行了一次登山活動。假定你是學校英語報記者，請寫一篇短文，報道此次活動。內容包括：1．時間與地點：4月10日，大青山（DaqingMountain）；2．活動的過程；3．你對于這次活動的評論。注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右。2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMountainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!【詳解】試題分析：本文要求寫一篇報道。報道一次登山活動。故時態(tài)使用一般過去時，人稱用第一人稱。首先寫清寫作目的，然后是時間，地點，人物，過程，包括如出發(fā)，途中，到達目的地等情況的介紹。最后寫活動的意義，即對于這次活動的評論(感受)。文章比較容易入題?？蛇m當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！军c睛】①高級句型結構的運用，如感嘆句Whatawonderfultime及倒裝結構notonly...butalso的運用。②好的短語：setoutfor出發(fā),動身，著手做某事inhighspirits情緒高昂fallbehind落后③非謂語動詞的運用句式賦予變化，如：Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.考點：考查應用文的寫作。3．（2013·江蘇卷）請根據(jù)你對以下兩幅圖的理解，以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”為題，用英語寫一篇作文。參考詞：banner(橫幅)stump(樹樁)你的作文應包括以下內容:1.簡要描述兩幅圖的內容；2.概述你對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解；3.舉例說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。注意：1.可參照圖片適當發(fā)揮；2.作文詞數(shù)150左右；3.作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ActionsSpeakLouderthanWordsPeoplecelebrateEarthDaydifferently.InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.Themessageconveyedhereisclear:“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”O(jiān)urearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejustpaylipserviceortakepracticalmeasurestoprotectit?Theanswerisdefinitelythelatter.Immediateactionsshouldbetaken,likestoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.Actionsareimportantinotherfields,too.Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.Weshouldstrictlyandvoluntarilyfollowtrafficrules,stoppingattheredlightratherthancomplainingabouttrafficjams.Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖畫類作文。要求考生以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”為題，簡要描述兩幅圖，概述對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解，并舉例說明圖片給予自己的啟示?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累傳達：convey→transmit肯定地：definitely→certainly改善：better→improve遵守：follow→observe2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.拓展句：Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildrenwhoareinneed.【點睛】【高分句型1】InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.（運用了while連接并列句，表示對比）【高分句型2】Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.（運用了“only+狀語從句”置于句首的部分倒裝結構，whatever引導賓語從句）4．（2013·福建卷）孩子的成長和教育是社會熱議的話題，現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴重。請閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英文寫一篇短文。內容要求：1.描述漫畫內容；2.分析漫畫所揭示的問題；3.提出你的看法。注意：1.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.考生可適當發(fā)揮，使文章內容充實、連貫；3.詞數(shù)120左右;4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。參考詞匯:pavethewayFromthepicture,wecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentoovercomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.【導語】這是一篇圖畫作文?！驹斀狻窟@篇書面表達以漫畫的形式講述"以孩子為中心的三口之家，孩子是小皇帝，父母是臣仆"這一社會現(xiàn)象，發(fā)人深省。漫畫式作文就是通過漫畫提供的圖像信息寫一篇短文，漫畫作文就內容而言，可以寫觀察到的內容，也可以根據(jù)合理想象適當進行發(fā)揮來補充一些內容；就表達方式而言，可以單純地理解、說明，也可以在說明中加以描寫、敘述。寫好漫畫作文的要求是：認真審圖，確立主題，提煉要點，展開聯(lián)想或發(fā)表感想，變點為句，連句成篇。要達到這些要求，我們就必須認真審圖，善于利用圖中人物間的關系、人物的對話、人物的活動及所處場所，以及圖（表）中的文字說明和標識來提煉要點；要圍繞主題展開合理的想象，切忌游離于主題展開不著邊際的聯(lián)想或感想。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化?！军c睛】文章思路清晰，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清晰。使用了較為高級的句式:Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.這句話里面是while引導的并列句。還有Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.這句話里面用了非謂語動詞，還有最后一句話Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.這句話用了倒裝句。高級句式的應用提升了寫作的檔次，整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達能力。5．（2013·重慶卷）Amothersaid,“Mysonisalwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwithhisfriends,orinhisroom.Heneverhastimetotalktome.”要求：1)就此材料發(fā)表你的看法；2)緊扣材料，有明確的觀點；3)詞數(shù)不少于60；4）在答題卡上作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors.Whattheydomaketheirparentsfeeldeepsadandlonely.Inmyopinion,nomatterhowbusywemaybe,weshouldtryourbesttospendmoretimetalkingwiththemandaccompanyingthem.Itisnotjustbecausetheyoncegaveussomuchselflesslove,butit’sourdutytolookafterthemwell.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于開放性作文。要求考生對于一段母親說的話“Mysonisalwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwithhisfriends,orinhisroom.Heneverhastimetotalktome.”就此材料發(fā)表你的看法，寫一篇作文?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累在我看來：Inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned照顧：lookafter→takecareof盡力做：tryourbesttodo→managetodo職責：duty→responsibility2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors.拓展句：Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors,whichisbecomeaseriousproblem.【點睛】【高分句型1】Whattheydomaketheirparentsfeeldeepsadandlonely.（運用了連接詞what引導的主語從句。）【高分句型2】Inmyopinion,nomatterhowbusywemaybe,weshouldtryourbesttospendmoretimetalkingwiththemandaccompanyingthem.（運用了nomatterhow引導的讓步狀語從句。）6．（2013·安徽卷）假設你校英語社團舉辦以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動，請你以“OntheWaytoSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文。內容主要包括：1.遵守交通法規(guī)；2.注意舉止文明。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關的信息；4.短文的題目已為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituationrequiresconsiderableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonthewaytoschool.Iwillkeeptrafficrulesinmindalltheway.IfIrideabicycle,I’llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I’llneverforgettousethepedestriancrossing.Meanwhile,I’llregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生以“OntheWaytoSchool”為題，寫一篇英語短文參加以“講求文明，從我做起”為主題的征文活動。【詳解】1.詞匯積累環(huán)境：environment→surroundings開始：start→begin責任：duty→responsibility同時：meanwhile→atthesametime2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.拓展句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,whichcauseseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.【點睛】【高分句型1】IfIrideabicycle,I’llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.（運用了if引導的條件狀語從句）【高分句型2】NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.（運用了部分倒裝結構）7．（2013·浙江卷）請以“onethingI’mproudof”為題，用英語寫一篇100—120個詞的短文，記述一件你自己認為得意的事情。要求如下：1.記述這件事2.簡要說明你感到得意的原因或從中得到的啟示注意：文章的標題已給出（不計詞數(shù)）.OneThingI’mProudof_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedbyhowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Iwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpracticinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”【導語】本篇書面表達屬于記敘文，要求考生以“onethingI’mproudof”為題記述一件自己認為得意的事情?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累驚奇：amazed→surprised實現(xiàn)：realize→achieve訓練：practice→train決心做：bedeterminedtodo=makeupone'smindtodo2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Amazedbyhowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.拓展句：IwassoamazedbyhowskillfultheywerethatIwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.【點睛】[高分句型1]IstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.(運用了how引導的賓語從句)[高分句型2]Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.(運用了because引導的原因狀語從句以及that引導的賓語從句)8．（2013·湖北卷）請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Weallknowthat“sticksandstonesmaybreakourbones”,butweshouldalsobeawarethatwordscanhurtpeople,too.注意：①無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；②除詩歌外，文體不限；③文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；④詞數(shù)為120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________