高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)洗母雙手，開(kāi)啟求職與感恩之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Itwastimeforgraduatestohuntforjobs.Themajorityofthemdidn’thaveworkingexperiencefortheyhadspentmostoftheirtimeatschoolstudyingacademicsubjects.Itwasnotuntiltheygraduatedfromcollegethattheyrealizeditwasachallengeforthemtolandjobs.Jimmy,oneofthesejobhunters,wasayoungacademicallyexcellentperson.Oneday,aftermakinggoodpreparations,hewenttoapplyforamanagerialpositioninabigcompany.Inspiteoffiercecompetition,hemanagedtopassthefirstinterview.Whataluckydog!Jimmywasinformedtocomeforthenextroundinafewdays—thelastinterviewforthecompanytomakethefinaldecision.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Thebigdayfinallycame.Hedressedneatly,thegreytiematchingperfectlythedecentsuit.Bloodrushingtohisfaceandheartpoundingheavily,hetriedtocalmdown,andthentookafewdeepbreaths.Itwashisturn.Theinterviewer,anelegantlady,discoveredfromtheCVthattheyouth’sacademicachievementswereexcellentalltheway,fromthesecondaryschooluntilthepostgraduateresearch.Afterseveralroundsofquestionsrelatedtotheposition,sheasked,“Haveyoueverdoneanypart-timejobs?”“None.”Afterawhile,theintervieweraskedwhopaidforJimmy’sschoolfees.Theyouthansweredinalowvoice,“MyfatherpassedawaywhenIwasoneyearold,soitwasmymotherwhopaidforallmyschoolfees.”5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Shecontinued,“Whatdidyourmotherdo?”“Mymotherworkedasaclothescleaner.”Theladyrequestedtheyouthtoshowhishands.Theyouthshowedapairofhandsthatweresmoothandperfect.Theinterviewerpausedforasecond,leaningagainstthechair,“Haveyoueverhelpedyourmotherwashtheclothesbefore?”Ashamed,Jimmyreplied,“Never.Mymotheralwayswantedmetostudyandreadmorebooks.Furthermore,mymothercanwashclothesfasterthanme.”Shenodded,adding,“Ihavearequest.Whenyougobacktoday,goandcleanyourmother’shands,andthenseemebackheretomorrowmorning.”6段首句Paragraph1：Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.Paragraph2：Thenextmorning,Jimmywenttotheinterviewer’soffice.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9文章講述了畢業(yè)生求職季，缺乏工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)成為多數(shù)人的求職阻礙。學(xué)業(yè)優(yōu)異的吉米應(yīng)聘一家大公司的管理職位，成功通過(guò)初面。終面時(shí)，面試官詢問(wèn)吉米的兼職經(jīng)歷、學(xué)費(fèi)支付人及母親的工作。得知吉米從未幫洗衣工母親洗過(guò)衣服后，面試官要求他回家給母親洗手，第二天再來(lái)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:

Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.回到家后，吉米請(qǐng)求母親讓他幫她洗手。母親正在廚房忙碌，聽(tīng)到吉米的話，手上的動(dòng)作頓了一下，緩緩轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身，眼中滿是詫異。在吉米的再三請(qǐng)求下，母親放下手中的活兒，來(lái)到水槽邊。吉米小心翼翼地打開(kāi)水龍頭，將母親的手輕輕放入水中。當(dāng)他的手指觸碰到母親那滿是褶皺、粗糙干裂的雙手時(shí)，心中猛地一震。他看到母親手上一道道深淺不一的傷口，還有厚厚的老繭，這些都是母親多年辛苦勞作留下的痕跡。吉米的眼眶瞬間濕潤(rùn)了，眼淚止不住地流下來(lái)。他輕輕揉搓著母親的手，內(nèi)心充滿了愧疚，回想起自己這么多年竟從未關(guān)心過(guò)母親的艱辛。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Thenextmorning,Jimmywenttotheinterviewer’soffice.第二天早上，吉米來(lái)到面試官的辦公室。他的眼睛微微紅腫，顯然是昨晚情緒波動(dòng)留下的痕跡。面試官看到他的樣子，微微一笑，輕聲問(wèn)道：“昨天給母親洗手后，你有什么感受？”吉米深吸一口氣，努力平復(fù)心情，聲音略帶顫抖地說(shuō)：“我從未意識(shí)到母親為我付出了這么多。她的雙手承載著生活的重?fù)?dān)，而我卻一直忽略了她的辛苦。通過(guò)這次洗手，我不僅看到了母親的不易，也明白了責(zé)任和感恩的重要性?！泵嬖嚬俾?tīng)完，滿意地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭，說(shuō)道：“我們公司需要的不僅是有能力的人，更需要懂得感恩和珍惜的員工。恭喜你，你被錄用了?！奔准?dòng)得眼眶再次濕潤(rùn)，他知道，這次特殊的面試讓他收獲的遠(yuǎn)不止一份工作。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.Hismother,whowasbusyinthekitchen,frozeforamomentandthenslowlyturnedaround,hereyesfilledwithsurprise.AfterJimmy'srepeatedrequests,sheputdowntheworkinherhandsandcametothesink.Jimmycarefullyturnedonthetapandgentlyplacedhismother'shandsinthewater.Whenhisfingerstouchedhismother'swrinkled,roughandchappedhands,hewasshocked.Hesawthedeepandshallowcutsandthickcallusesonhismother'shands,whichwerethemarksleftbyyearsofhardwork.Jimmy'seyesinstantlywelledupwithtears,andtheycouldn'tstopflowing.Hegentlyrubbedhismother'shands,filledwithguilt.Lookingback,herealizedthathehadnevercaredabouthismother'shardshipsovertheyears.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,Jimmywenttotheinterviewer’soffice.Hiseyeswereslightlyred,clearlyasignoftheemotionalturmoilfromlastnight.Theinterviewersawhimandsmiledgently,askingsoftly,“Whatwasyourfeelingafterwashingyourmother'shandsyesterday?”Jimmytookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmhimselfdown.Hisvoicetrembledalittleashesaid,“Ineverrealizedhowmuchmymotherhadsacrificedforme.Herhandscarriedtheburdenoflife,andIhadalwaysignoredherhardwork.Throughthisexperience,Inotonlysawmymother'sdifficultiesbutalsounderstoodtheimportanceofresponsibilityandgratitude.”Theinterviewernoddedinsatisfactionafterlisteningandsaid,“Ourcompanyneedsnotonlycapablepeoplebutalsoemployeeswhoknowhowtobegratefulandcherish.Congratulations,youarehired.”Jimmy'seyeswelledupwithexcitementagain.Heknewthatthisspecialinterviewhadbroughthimfarmorethanjustajob.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.Hismother,engagedinkitchenchores,haltedmid-task,hereyeswideninginsurprise.Respondingtohisinsistentpleas,shemovedtothesink.AsJimmydelicatelyturnedonthefaucetandsubmergedherhands,ajoltofshockcoursedthroughhim.Herhands,wrinkled,rough,andmarredbyscarsandcalluses,boretestamenttoyearsoftoil.Overcomewithemotion,tearsstreameddownJimmy'scheeks.Gentlymassagingherhands,hewasconsumedbyguilt,reflectingonhislong-standingobliviousnesstoherstruggles.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenextmorning,Jimmyenteredtheinterviewer’soffice,hiseyesstilltingedwithredfromthenight'semotionalupheaval.Theinterviewer,observinghisstate,smiledkindlyandinquired,“Whatinsightsdidyougainfromwashingyourmother'shands?”Jimmytookadeepbreath,steadyinghisvoiceashereplied